IN LOVE WID MR. IMPERFECT New Note@ Pg 87/20th Jan - Page 10

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Hey Gals! thank u so much for ur overwhelming Love nd comments on d part 1 of my FF. i really cant believe dat i m able to make it up in d first update itself. thanx to u guys, u r my inspiration. keep suporting me like dis in future too. So without Wasting tym m going to update d Part 2 of my FF. hope u all r going to like it. Pls feel free to criticise if u all dnt like it

Part 2:

Pari:Di! Dats really unfair. I haven't expect dis from u

She said while pouting making Geet roll over her eyes seeing her drama

Geet: Pari nw wat had I done dat u r getting dis much dramatic?

Pari: wat u had done? Dnt u knw dat u r supposed to go shopping wid me today nd here u r all set to leave for office

She said while looking at Geet who was busy packing her stuff for office

Geet: Sorry Pari! Wo Prem Sir has suddenly called me. He need to discuss some designs wid me urgently for our Monsoon collection.

Pari: One you nd another one is Ur Prem Sir both never seems to get tired from work. I mean its Sunday yaar. Can't he spare u nd himself for today also?

Geet: Pari dnt forget he's Ur boss too. Nd it's just a matter of few hrs only. I'll be back soon

Pari: ya but mera to shopping ka plan spoil kar diya na aap dono ne. thanx to ur so called work.

"Pari! Hw much shopping will u do? I mean just a day before leaving to London u had bought so many stuffs nd nw u again need to do shopping" Geet said disbelievingly

Pari: Di, it's a tale of a week back. nw new week new stuffs u knw me rite. Pari always wants latest in her cupboard

Pari said wid full attitude while Geet just shakes her head in disbelief.

Geet: Pari u r impossible

Pari: Whatever, but u dnt try to change d topic. I thought dat today we both will have lots of fun as I missed u so much in dis 1 week but it seems ur work is more important den me

She said while making a pouting face again nd looked other side.

"Pari will u stop ur Drama for God sake" Geet said while rolling her eyes

"ya aapko to ye drama hi lagega. No one cares for true feeling." She said while making fake sad face.

Geet: Acha nw stop ur Drama. I'll go to shopping wid u

"Really! O Di u r d best" Pari said excitedly

Geet: let me finish first. I'll go to shopping wid u but after my work.

Pari: But Di……

Geet: Pari nw no more argument on dis. I'll do one thing I'll meet u in d mall after work. I dnt think it'll take much tym. I'll text u wen I'll be free from work nd den will meet u directly at d mall ok.

"Ok as u say" She said slowly knowing dat it's useless to argue wid her further.

Geet: Gud. Chalo nw m leaving. See u at d mall ok.

Pari: ok Di. Bye nd ya dnt forget ur promise

Geet: dnt worry I'll not. Nw if u permit den can I go

Pari: o ya! Ofcourse. Say my Hi to Prem Sir

Geet: Sure. Bye!

Pari: Bye Di!

She said nd Geet headed towards d office.

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"Geet, can u pls pass me dat file kept over dere" Prem said while working on laptop.

"Yes sir" Geet said nd handles him d file while still looking at her design file.

Prem opened d file to read d contents nd found dat Geet has handed him d wrong file. He looked at her who was immersed in her file. He just shakes his head in disbelief seeing her so engrossed in work.

"Dis girl can never be out from her work" he thought inwardly nd looked at her who seems to have forget the world around her.

Prem: Not Dis file Geet, I need that Blue one.

Geet raised up her head only to find dat she had handed wrong file to him nd d correct file is still lyieng near her.

"Oh! I m so sorry Prem Sir. Actually I was looking at d designs nd didn't realize dat I handed u the wrong file. Here take it." she said while handling him d correct file nd den again get back to her designs.

"Geet, its gud that u do work wid full dedication but dnt get too much engrossed in it dat u forget the world around you" Prem said wid a smile making Geet to look back at him again.

"U knw me Sir, I never compromise wid my work. So it doesn't matter to me whatever going around me until my work is finished." She said wid a slight smile nd again gets back to work.

Prem had nothing to say now; he knows dat Geet never converse between work infact she didn't converse at all until it is necessary. Only tym he sees her conversing freely wen Pari is wid her apart from dat he never saw her talking unnecessarily to any of the staff. Its been almost 4 nd a half year since Geet is working wid him nd her attitude is still d same. initially he use to think that may be she's not comfortable wid d environment of dis Big city all of a sudden but working wid her for whole of the 4 nd a half years made him realize dat dis is her nature. She believes in action rather den words.

He still remembers d day wen Geet has came to give her interview. Fortunately or unfortunately it was Prem only who was selecting candidate himself as his company has just started to get success nd he dnt want any kind of inefficient employee in his company. Unlike other candidates who were either nervous or busy drooling on him Geet had different spark nd confidence in her eyes nd words which forced him to choose her without any second choice. She had d same spark in her which he had wen he started his business. Her self-confidence nd self-esteem has make her reach to the place where she is nw. he wont hesitate to accept the fact that Geet has a major share in making his company a successful. A year later Pari too joined them. Though she tried her best to be just like Geet but always ends up in doing sum stupidity which Geet had to fix later on.

No Doubt she's totally perfect but still dere's sumthing about her which makes Prem to think dat she's hiding from whole world nd that is the silence in her eyes. It seems dat her eyes nd heart are devoid of any emotions. She may be d rude, arrogant nd ruthless employee for rest of d staff who never mingles wid anyone but sumwhere he feels dat she's not like dat from inside but again she never opens up in front of anyone. He truly admires her hard work nd dedication towards her job but still he couldn't understand y she's like dat. girls of her age use to busy in gossiping nd fashion; even in his own office dere r numerous girls like dat but Geet is indeed an exceptional case who just gets engrossed in her work.

He wished dat one day his brother be also gets perfect like her whose chances are very less for now but may be God can show any miracle nd he learns to be responsible like Geet.

"Prem Sir! Prem Sir!" Geet called him again nd again seeing him lost in his thoughts.

"Huh.. ya Geet any problem" he said while coming back from his reverie wen he realize her calling me continuously

Geet: wat happen sir? U seem to be lost in sum deep thought

Prem: Ah nothing. Just like dat. By the way, u r saying sumthing.

Geet: ya, I just wanted u to check these designs once so that if dere are any modifications required den I can do dat.

"Geet u had made it na den it would be perfect. Dere's no need of me to check it." he said while putting d designs aside

"Sir Pls I insist. Check it once. I dnt want any complications later" she said while handling him the file once again

"Geet, sometimes I use to wonder dat whether I am Ur boss or u r my boss. U always make me agree" He said while taking the designs nd laughed at his own statement to which Geet just smiles

He goes through the designs nd as expected they are perfected. He don't need to check dem twice but due to Geet's insistence he had to check it once again.

"Perfect! Dere's not a single flaw in it" he said cheerfully while looking at her

Geet: U like it?

"Like it? I love it. I told u dat dere's no need of me to check it again. U always do perfect Job Geet. U knw I can blindly trust you nd can totally rely on u" Prem said to boost up her self-confidence

"Never trust anyone Blindly Prem Sir. U never know wen someone just broke ur trust nd tear u apart" Geet said rather painfully making Prem to find d hidden meaning behind dose words

Again something unexpected. Dis Girl never fails to surprise him. Once again there was something in her words which seems a mystery to him. Actually Geet herself is a mystery to him. He knows the Psychology of each nd every employee of his office except Geet. He was working wid her from 4 nd a half year yet couldn't understand her nd d hidden meaning behind her words.

"Geet is everything ok?" he asked worriedly although he knows it's useless to ask as she'll never tell him or any other.

Geet: Ya everything is fine. Its just d line came into my mind nd I said it to u. Anyways my work is finish so can I go nw. Pari must be waiting for me in shopping mall.

"Ya sure. U may go now" he said while smiling inwardly seeing her diverting the topic, as expected.

Geet: Bye Sir. See u tomorrow

She said nd turned to leave. She was about the open the door wen someone enters in d cabin almost colliding wid her.

Person: Hey I m so sorry. I didn't know dat u are near to the door. hope u didn't got hurt?

Geet: not at all Heer Ma'am. I m perfectly fine. Hw are you

Heer: I m fine too. Just came to check whether my Loving husband got freed from his first love?

"First Love?" Geet asked while knotting her brows in confusion.

"Ya, his company nd work. U knw Geet I m damn sure nw dat I m his second wife for whom he didn't have tym" she said while smiling nd looking at Prem.

"If Ur complaint session about me wid Geet is over den would u bother to cum inside?" Prem said wid a smile.

Heer: ofcourse Mr. Prem Juneja. By the way I came here to remind u that today we are going to live concert of Atif Aslam. Hope u remember?

Prem: ofcourse jaan! Is dere anything related to you that I had forgotten till nw

Heer: ya nothing except my B'days nd our Marriage anniversary. Right Geet?

She said while winking at her who was just standing dere admiring d love between d couple

Geet: Well, I guess Ma'am is right Prem Sir. Anyways I think I should leave nw. Afterall u guys need sum privacy too.

She said nd turned to leave wen Heer stops her

Heer: Hey Geet wait

She instantly stops nd looked at her

Heer: y don't u too join us in d concert. Trust me u r going to have lots of fun over dere.

Geet: I would Love to Ma'am but I had already committed to Pari for shopping so may be next tym.

"Nd dat next tym will never cum" Prem thought knowing very well Geet's nature.

Geet: ok I m leaving nw. he's waiting for u.

She said while gesturing towards Prem nd left after bidding dem bye.

"Y she's always so unexpected nd weird. I mean wenever we ask her to come out wid us she always makes an excuse" Heer said getting amused at her behaviour

Prem: She's like dat only. Anyways where's ur Best friend Maan? Still sleeping?

Heer: no he had gone to meet some of his friends.

Prem: As expected.

Heer: C'mon Prem. Y u r always after him? he said na dat he'll join office from tomorrow. Give him a chance

Prem: Lets see, hw much ur best friend stands on his words.

Heer: excuse me! He's ur brother too. Atleast have sum faith on him.

"Dat we'll cum to knw tomorrow only. Anyways lets go or else we'll get late." He said while changing the topic not wanting another heating discussion between him nd his wife regarding Maan

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Geet reaches the shopping Mall nd called Pari who asked her to cum to xyz shop as she was trying some outfits. She just shakes her head nd goes towards d shop told by Pari. On her way to shop she got a call nd she gets irritated wen she look at the caller. It is from her home

"Another round of emotional blackmailing" she thought as she takes up d call only to find her mother on d other side

Rano: Hello Geet!

Geet: Haan Maa! Hws u?

Rano: I m fine beta. Tu kaisi hai?

Geet: I m fine too Maa. Hws papa?

Rano: he's fine too. Beta ek baat karni thi tujhse.

Geet: Maa, if u r again going to talk about my Marriage again den let me tell u dat m not at all interested.

Rano: but beta, just meet him once. I m sure u'll definitely like him. He's handling his family business very well nd is perfect in all sense. Just like the way u are. Just meet him once

Geet: Maa, hw many tymes do I need to tell u dat I dnt want to get married? Y u always pesters me for marriage?

Rano: I knw the reason behind ur denial beta but I just wanted to say that meet him once. U'll definitely feel that he's the one for u. moreover Daarji also knows his family from long nd dey demselves came to ask ur hand so dere's no chance of any kind of misconception in future.

Geet: If Daarji knows dem den to I definitely dnt want to marry dat guy. Tell Daarji dat he dnt have to worry for me. I m happy in my lyf.

Rano: Beta kab tak purani baaton ko leke baithi rahogi? Y dnt u just forget everything? Daarji is regretting his mistake nd really wants Ur well-being.

Geet: Maa, do u have anything else to talk or should I hang up?

Rano: no, wo Daarji wants me to tell u about dis proposal as he knows dat u'll never accept his call.

Geet: nd he was right. Anyways if u dnt have anything else to talk den I m hanging up. nd one more thing Maa if once again u'll call me regarding my marriage den I swear I'll change my contact number nd address nd will never let u all knw about it. so just stop thinking about my Marriage as I m not at all interested in it. Keh dijiyega us Mr. Perfect se dat he can find another match for him.

She said nd hangs up d call without giving her mother a chance to speak further. Rano sighed at her Daughter's behaviour nd puts d receiver back nd looks at her husband who was standing nearby

Mohinder: Mana kar diya na? I already told u dat she'll not agree but u didn't listen to me

Rano: but aisa kab tak chalega? She had to marry sumday. Y is she not understanding d fact dat she cant spend her whole lyf alone

Mohinder: she'll understand Rano just give her sumtym. Afterall wat happened wid her it's not easy to take d decision so easily

Rano: hw much tym? 5 saal ho gaye hai nd she's still over dere. Y cant she just move on? Girls of her age are happily married nd happy in her world but she just prefers to stay alone.

Mohinder: Rano girls of her age didn't faced wat she has faced. Dnt worry about her. Babaji has definitely made a perfect match for her. Just leave everything on him.

Rano: whatever u say. I can never win in argument from u nd Ur daughter

She said moved towards kitchen irritated wid d behaviour of father nd daughter.

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Geet was in a very foul mood after d call from her Maa. She just wanted to throw her cell phone somewhere. Y cant she understand dat she's happy in her lyf being alone. Nd Daarji she dnt need any kind of concern from him. nw nothing can be done to mend d damage caused by him. But still he keeps on trying by making Maa or papa call her nd asking her to come back home. Is dat so easy?

Lost in her thoughts she was moving towards d shop wen suddenly she felt something or rather someone bump into her causing her to lose her balance nd before she could understand anything she fall on d ground wid him on d top.

Maan was going towards d Men's shop to buy a present for his angry brother Prem wen he recd. D call from one of his friend. He was so engrossed in talking to his friend dat he didn't realize dat he bumped into someone nd wen he realize it was too late nd he felt dat person falling on d ground wid him on top of her.

Wen she raised his head to look at d person he found d most beautiful face in front of him. she was a girl who had her eyes closed due to sudden trail of incidents nd wen she opened her eyes to look at him Maan's heart skipped several beats by looking into those big hazel eyes who were looking angrily at him. at that moment he just wished tym to stood still nd he just keep on looking at her lyk dis only

Geet opened her eyes only to find a stranger looking intently at her. she looked around her nd saw many people were seeing dem in a amused way. Den she again looked back at him nd found him still staring at her without moving an inch. She tried to push him away but he was way too strong for her.

Maan felt her wriggling under him but as if his heart nd mind refused to get up from her. He felt her saying sumthing but he didn't register a word as his gaze was busy in observing d movement of her lips. He wondered hw dey felt against his. he whacked himself mentally for having such a thought dat too for a girl of whom he didn't even know her name. Her eyes had so much anger in dem yet dere was some magic in dem dat held him into dem. finally he came into senses we she raised her voice.

Geet was feeling awkward wid dere current position nd more den awkward she was getting irritated seeing him staring at her like dat. here she was crushing under his weight nd he rather den getting up was staring at her like she was a 7th wonder. Finally her patience gave up nd she yelled at him

Geet: Would u mind getting up from me or u want to spend whole of ur lyf lyieng on me.

Her words brought him back to his senses nd he realized wat he was doing. He removes his gaze away from her eyes nd instantly gets up from her extending his hand towards her for help but she instead of taking his help gets up by herself rubbing her back wid her hand. She looked at him angrily who was looking other way to find any excuse to justify his actions

Geet: Wat the hell is ur Problem? Dnt u have eyes dat u cant see a person cuming from front?

Maan: well I had but its not my mistake if u r so beautiful dat anyone can lose dere sense of seeing

Geet: Excuse Me!

Maan: Excused u. By the way same allegation goes for u too. I mean I agree dat m not looking forward but u were looking forward right den cant u just move aside rather den bumping to me

Geet was getting irritated by every passing minute. The nerve of dis guy, rather den apologizing to her he's mocking at her.

"Listen u Mr. whoever u r just dnt try to mess wid me" she said while pointing her finger towards him

"Listen u Ms. Oh-I-am-so-Perfect I m already in a great mess because of u. u see my darling Phone has been broken into pieces counting his last breath. It would be safe if only I don't bump wid u" he said while retorting back pointing his finger towards him

Geet: Oh! so u mean to say it's my mistake

Maan: Well I haven't said dat but since u agree to admit it den I dnt have any problem. Its ok aisa hota rehta hai. Waise I dnt mind it as it gave me chance to meet a beautiful girl like u.

Geet: Listen Mr. Dnt try to act smart wid me. I knw d guys like u very well. Dose r other girls who can fall for ur charm but dis tym u r approaching a wrong girl. Got it!

Maan: Well atleast u admitted dat I had charm. Thanx anyways.

He said while winking at her making her more angry

"Listen u Mr………. " she couldn't say further as she heard her cell phone ringing. She looks at d caller nd found Pari calling her

Geet: Ya Pari!

Pari: Di where are u? I have been waiting for u since last 25 mins.

Geet: ya Pari I'll be dere in 5 mins. ok bye!

She said nd cuts d call nd looked at Maan angrily.

Geet: ur luck is good dat I had to go urgently or else only god can spare u. nd one more thing just pray to God dat u never cross my path because I dnt know whether I would be able to tolerate u again or not. Good Bye!

She said nd moves towards d shop across him. Maan turned to look at her only to find her retreating figure. He smiles nd shakes his head at her attitude

Maan: No Byes! Ms. Perfect ye Duniya bahut choti hai nd my instincts says dat we'll meet once again. Right Dude?

(Dialogue Courtesy: Hum Tum😉)

He said while looking upwards nd headed towards his destination


Phew! finally dis one done too nd i m totally exhausted nw. Ok so dis is it guys. hope u all r going to like dis part. pls feel free to criticise if u all dnt like it. i spend my whole day in just writing d updates for u all so i better want long comments Pls Pls Pls hit d like button if u all like it. nd do Leave ur Comment/Criticism. its necessary


Luv Aakriti😊



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haila...me became first to comment...
and second too...
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awesome dear 😊

maan is totally opposite to the serial 😛


ks time for me to go to bed


🥱gud nite 🥱

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hey Rabz hws u dear...
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awesome update
yaar
aaj to hattrik ho gayi
continue soon
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Maaneet's first meeting and so cute n adorable nok jhonk preem n heer are sweethearts
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Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome update
yaar
aaj to hattrik ho gayi
continue soon



Yup aaj main totally pagal ho gayi hoon😆... nw no strength left to write d update of Ehsaas... thanx a ton for ur comment sweety
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me fine dear... hows you...?
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interesting.
Serious Geet n flirty Maan.
Great combo.

Thanks for the pm.

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