OS | The Surprise (B-Day Special) - Page 3

Originally posted by: Oblivious

Wow ...awesome OS...👏

really love the way how you write...

thanks for the pm ...

and please keep writing more ...

Originally posted by: kiran_28

such a beautiful OS grace
i really luvd it really!
thanx 4 PM

Originally posted by: maryaa8688

lovely os Gracie..beautifully written.its always nice to read ur story.cant get enough of prem heer.keep writing more.thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: repunzell

it was superrbbb graceee👏👏!!!!

loved it to the endd!!!!

what a birthday man seriouslllyyy😃!!!!1

loved awl their scenesss...wowwwooo!!!!!

please do write more OS...😳!!!

P.S: update ur FF n SS also...v're waiting!!!!

Originally posted by: zigzagway_sadi

That was a fabulous update!!!!

loved the story!!!

prem heer's care for each other..

the phone conversation with prem and meher loved them all..

prem and heer as always..

Thanks for the pm'

Originally posted by: annokhi

good work grace.👏

Originally posted by: Crazy4KaSh

Beautiful !!! 👍🏼
Thank you so much for taking the time to comment. I'm so glad you enjoyed the OS. I'll do my best to continue writing 😃

Originally posted by: AASUS

Oooh so nice Grace 😃 Thank you for sharing.

Nabz I'm so happy that we celebrated your b'day 🤗 Because of the special occasion we all get to enjoy your gift 😃

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OS is so much fun and interesting from beginning to end 😛 Loved all the characters. Preet screaming on phone was the funniest for me 😆 Cute Meher & Preet and their fight is fun forever!

To be honest even I didn't know Heer's expecting a baby until she said so 😲 🤔 But it was really nice to see every single thing was described in detail - from how the character looked , behaved and talked. Very easy to imagine all the scenes 👍🏼 It gave a feeling we're all watching it happening in front of us!

Dialogues were very cool too! Heer's surprise and then Prem's surprise breakfast both were fun.

Children's plates etc used in the surprised b'day party is an awesome thought. Heer's hinting Prem about their baby was written really well. Very smooth.

Pizza & crusts part was really funny 😆 It's true some ppl love the crusts.

Heer being impatient with food and Prem responded with understanding her state was really cute!

It was so awesome and I enjoyed it very much. Thank you.

Originally posted by: HARSHITI12

awsome...

Originally posted by: -Garima-

Awww Grace, that was so beautiful! (:

Loved reading something on Premeer after such a long time. I miss your updates soo much! =/ but I know life gets busy so its all good. Once again you're stories are amazing as always, loved this one! Prem and Heer are adorable. Cant wait till you write more! (:

--Garima

Originally posted by: priyahmt

aww..grace suprb work...

Originally posted by: sowmya18

loved the os...
do keep writing more and update ur ff soon..
eagerly waiting...

Originally posted by: shivangi2092

It's as usual awesome grace!!!!!!...

thoroughly loved it!!!!!!

thanxx for d pm!!!!!

Originally posted by: harshitideewani

Thanks gracee for awesome and minblowing Os 👏

loved it soo much the way you started itt Hee😍r waiting for prem for dinner and then Prem calling her telling would be late today and then Heer gets call from juneja and we come to know it Prems birthday and Heer is waiting for Prem with birthday 🥳surprise dinneer and Prem comes home and find heer asleep waiting for him with his birthday prepartion and after that Heer wakes up Prem have dinner and next day Heer is trying to make Prem guess the birthday surprise that she is❤️ Pregnant and when prem come to know he his overjoyed and thank Heer and informs is parent anf theirr cute fight on girl or boy child😉 they are going to have and all making all their future plans for their child and enjoy and thanking God for making parents and alsoo expressing🤗 their love for eah otherr andd awaitingg for their special day in their lifeee awesomeee

wonderfull jobb ,👏 keep writinggg

Originally posted by: Pumpkinn

Awesome ...

It was soo beautiful ...

Loved it ...

Thnx for pm ...

Do write more of these kind ...

Originally posted by: -Abigail-

This was an AWESOME OS Grace! and it definately was a surprise! never saw this coming! anyway I love surprises! 😃 😆

okay now coming to the OS, I was really glad my premeer were living alone ... no interuptions! ☺️ 😍 🤣

It was very sweet of Heer to plan so much on Prem's birthday but oh man why did prem have to forget! , but what was even sweeter was that Heer understood him and wasn't mad! 😳

The mall scene was the best Grace! Prem is so stupid ... just like heer said he guessed everyone except for the obvious one! stupid stupid stupid prem! but How Heer made him guess and then how Heer told him by putting his hand on her stomach awww! so sweet! Loved it!

Preet and meher are always fun ... loved their little fights 😆

Lalit sometimes really is a pain but the scene transpired between lalit and prem on the phone was really nice grace ... the way prem told him that he was gonna be a dad! Amazing!

Nabz is really lucky to get this gift from you! ... and Hoping to see an update for the FF soon! but I do understand that you've got some important work to do now and you should get that done on time aswell! 😊

Thankx for the Pm 😳

-Abby

Originally posted by: uswah

Grace totally luv it yr ...u write it so beautifully d bst thing with ur OS tht u always discribe everything in detail ...Heer birthday surprise is too cute with d best gift ever in d world

and Prem s such a cute papa how he decorate her baby grl room ...i can imagine it like its infront of my eyes ...luv it

and thier last dinner celebration with cookies is too good ...surely they gona bcom d best parents ...

tht is such a beautiful Birthday gift for Nabz...:D

Originally posted by: vrushika

loved the update grace so cute..i knw really late to reply.. but really sory... was kind of.. not there on if..so could not reply..sorry short comment but lot pending work..hope u understand

take care

love ya

vrushika

beautiull os.

really luved it.😊

Originally posted by: NIMMY

loved this os...

Originally posted by: deshdeewani

beautiull os.

really luved it.😊

premeer scenes was so nice.specially shoping scene was so funny and cute.😊

u write it perfectly.great job👏⭐️

thanks fr the pm.😊

Originally posted by: divya4salmanyk

LUved d suprise! sorry for commentin late *holdin ears*

Aw Premeer goin 2 b parents! Boy or a girl??? i hope its twins! no fightin! hehehehe!

luved each and evry part of ur update di...d way u explained!

thnx a ton for d pm also!