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AASUS

@AASUS

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Oooh so nice Grace 😃 Thank you for sharing.

Nabz I'm so happy that we celebrated your b'day 🤗 Because of the special occasion we all get to enjoy your gift 😃

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OS is so much fun and interesting from beginning to end 😛 Loved all the characters. Preet screaming on phone was the funniest for me 😆 Cute Meher & Preet and their fight is fun forever!

To be honest even I didn't know Heer's expecting a baby until she said so 😲 🤔 But it was really nice to see every single thing was described in detail - from how the character looked , behaved and talked. Very easy to imagine all the scenes 👍🏼 It gave a feeling we're all watching it happening in front of us!

Dialogues were very cool too! Heer's surprise and then Prem's surprise breakfast both were fun.

Children's plates etc used in the surprised b'day party is an awesome thought. Heer's hinting Prem about their baby was written really well. Very smooth.

Pizza & crusts part was really funny 😆 It's true some ppl love the crusts.

Heer being impatient with food and Prem responded with understanding her state was really cute!

It was so awesome and I enjoyed it very much. Thank you.

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-Garima-

@-Garima-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Awww Grace, that was so beautiful! (:

Loved reading something on Premeer after such a long time. I miss your updates soo much! =/ but I know life gets busy so its all good. Once again you're stories are amazing as always, loved this one! Prem and Heer are adorable. Cant wait till you write more! (:

--Garima

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priya

@JugniPH

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

aww..grace suprb work...

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sowmya18

@sowmya18

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

loved the os...
do keep writing more and update ur ff soon..
eagerly waiting...

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shivangi2092

@shivangi2092

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

It's as usual awesome grace!!!!!!...

thoroughly loved it!!!!!!

thanxx for d pm!!!!!

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harshitideewani

@harshitideewani

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Thanks gracee for awesome and minblowing Os 👏

loved it soo much the way you started itt Hee😍r waiting for prem for dinner and then Prem calling her telling would be late today and then Heer gets call from juneja and we come to know it Prems birthday and Heer is waiting for Prem with birthday 🥳surprise dinneer and Prem comes home and find heer asleep waiting for him with his birthday prepartion and after that Heer wakes up Prem have dinner and next day Heer is trying to make Prem guess the birthday surprise that she is❤️ Pregnant and when prem come to know he his overjoyed and thank Heer and informs is parent anf theirr cute fight on girl or boy child😉 they are going to have and all making all their future plans for their child and enjoy and thanking God for making parents and alsoo expressing🤗 their love for eah otherr andd awaitingg for their special day in their lifeee awesomeee

wonderfull jobb ,👏 keep writinggg

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Neha

@Pumpkinn

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Awesome ...

It was soo beautiful ...

Loved it ...

Thnx for pm ...

Do write more of these kind ...

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Abigail (Abby)

@-Abigail-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

This was an AWESOME OS Grace! and it definately was a surprise! never saw this coming! anyway I love surprises! 😃 😆

okay now coming to the OS, I was really glad my premeer were living alone ... no interuptions! ☺️ 😍 🤣

It was very sweet of Heer to plan so much on Prem's birthday but oh man why did prem have to forget! , but what was even sweeter was that Heer understood him and wasn't mad! 😳

The mall scene was the best Grace! Prem is so stupid ... just like heer said he guessed everyone except for the obvious one! stupid stupid stupid prem! but How Heer made him guess and then how Heer told him by putting his hand on her stomach awww! so sweet! Loved it!

Preet and meher are always fun ... loved their little fights 😆

Lalit sometimes really is a pain but the scene transpired between lalit and prem on the phone was really nice grace ... the way prem told him that he was gonna be a dad! Amazing!

Nabz is really lucky to get this gift from you! ... and Hoping to see an update for the FF soon! but I do understand that you've got some important work to do now and you should get that done on time aswell! 😊

Thankx for the Pm 😳

-Abby

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Uswah

@uswah

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Grace totally luv it yr ...u write it so beautifully d bst thing with ur OS tht u always discribe everything in detail ...Heer birthday surprise is too cute with d best gift ever in d world
and Prem s such a cute papa how he decorate her baby grl room ...i can imagine it like its infront of my eyes ...luv it

and thier last dinner celebration with cookies is too good ...surely they gona bcom d best parents ...

tht is such a beautiful Birthday gift for Nabz...:D

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Vrushika

@Ms.Raizada

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

loved the update grace so cute..i knw really late to reply.. but really sory... was kind of.. not there on if..so could not reply..sorry short comment but lot pending work..hope u understand

take care

love ya

vrushika

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