IPK ff- The ajeeb luv-CHAPTER 3l page 16

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: _mahi_
add me to your pm list gurl😆

thx mahi darling!!😃

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Mano

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

when will you update...im eagerly waiting for this ajeeb love to happen...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

heylo everyone...gonna work on it in this weekend :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: spring_breeze05
when will you update...im eagerly waiting for this ajeeb love to happen...

lol...ya this weekend

thnks for linking it😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Chapter 3

Bua -acha to ladkiyon , hum baazaar hokar aate hay, nandkishore ke liye koi dhamaaka mat karna.

Khushi- hum kahaan dhamake karte hay bua ji!

Bua- achcha? To kal meri chaddar main who kaale aur motay se choohe kisnay daal diye? Mujhe unhe dekhkar bedi ki yaad aagayi!

Khushi 'arre buaji, bhool jaayie na iss buddhe ko, yeh pyaar aapko sirf dard dega!

Bua- eh? Kaaheka pyaar sanka devi!? Tumne kabhi phool ko haathi se pyaar karte dekha hay kya?

Khushi ( thinking) ' iss love story main toh dono bhi haathi hay, yeh phool kahaan se aagaya?

Bua- achcha toh abhi hum chalte hain sanka devi, agar who bedi fir se aaye toh usse kachre ke dabba par baitha kar belt se maarna!

Khushi (wondering)- hum maarein?

@ the market

Vegetable vendor-

Sabzi waala- kitnay baingan chahiye aunty ji

Bua- aunty hoga tera baap!

Sabzi waala- aunty toh lady hoti hay, mera baap man hay unfortunately daadiji!

Bua- agar who yahaan hota toh tumhe itna maarta ki tumhe apni aunty ki yaad aa jayegi

Sabzi waala- kaun maarega mujhe?

*** Shyam enters***

Shyamlie- main maaronga!((dabanng style))

Bua- tum , babua! Akhir tum hamain mil hi gaye!

Shyam- haan! Aur ab humain pyaar karne se koi nahin rok sakta!

Bua- runs toward him holding her skirt (or whatever it is ) and runs towards him and hugs him so tightly that people around thought it was PUBLIC MURDER.

Shyam- arrey aunty ji , yeh aap kya kar rahe ho?main aapko iss kamine se bacha rahaan hoon aur aap mere gale lag rahi ho!😲

Bua- (still hugging)- Aunty ji?! 😭-she looks up-- and is surprised to see its not her love shyam , its someone else😲

Updating ch-3

Edited by -Neloufer- - 13 years ago

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Mano

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

PUBLIC MURDER...🤣
that just cracked me up...Wonder what would be shamyu reaction to such dhamakedar love...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: spring_breeze05
PUBLIC MURDER...🤣
that just cracked me up...Wonder what would be shamyu reaction to such dhamakedar love...

arre yaar , i was so busy with ma other FF that totally dint get any ideas fr this one..

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2567187

i will update ch - 3 and soon pm u (of this ff) hope u like it😃

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Asiya Karim

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Posted: 13 years ago

#89

add me to your pm list this is hilarious🤣and public murder and the part when she was running holding her skirt i was laughing like crazy🤣pls cont👏

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Sodapop313

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Posted: 13 years ago

#90

Public Murder! That is so funny 🤣
Really this is one hilarious story. I just can't stop laughing. Please do add me to the PM list. Waiting for the next update and eagerly waiting to see how this story plays out