IPK ff- The ajeeb luv-CHAPTER 3l page 16

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The ajeeb love


short details- its about a strange love between the 2 main characters (not to be revealed now 😎)and the difficulties between the families of the lovers





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INDEX

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Edited by -Neloufer- - 13 years ago
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Character sketch

Main lead- Madhumathi gupta/will be jha
Known for her beauty AT this age...cant reveal more now
Parallel main lead-
shyam jha/babua

A two timer ..cant reveal anything..a stupid person
Their jodi




Miss kkg/khushi kumari gupta/ khushi raizada/sankadevi/parmeshwari etc




Arnav singh raizada/ASR/chottay



Mr. Bedi


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Edited by neloufer_IPKKND - 13 years ago
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CHAPTER 1-

Buaji, khushi and payal reach home at 10 pm..yes, it was quite late and everyone except buaji went to sleep.Buaji could help turning and tossing in her bed.she was tired but she could not sleep.She couldnt take that handsome man out of her mind , the one she met in the train😳.He was sitting jusst opposite to her in the train in the 2 days journey. Somehow , she fell asleep and woke up in the morning still feeling miserable😕.Could she ever see him again?? what will happen to her , if she cannot? woh to jeetay jee mar jayegi😭.
when payal saw buaji in such a miserable state, she quietly took bua to her room and asked-
Payal- Buaji, kya baat hain?? kya aap abhi bhi meri shaadi ke tootnay ko lekar pareshan hay ya khushi kay liye parehsan hain??
Buaji- kya meri zindagi sirf um log ho jiskay liye min pareshan rahoongi?🤢 main kisi aur baat se pareshan hoon.

Payal- ab toh main samajh gayi! Buaji , pension nahin milnay wali toh kya hua? khushi hay na, woh jo bhi kamayegi, woh hum dekh samajh kar kharch karenge.aap pareshan mat hona😊.
Buaji, who was blinking back tears , rn out of the room , her pallu flying wildly long with her hair..(tht thinn , loong choti of hers😆)
for two days she could not eat ANYTHING and so she lost 20 kg's and was 120 kg's after that much loss😭.
Just after 2 days , in the evening , when payal and kkg went out shopping, Buaji heard a knock on the door .She , though tired , went and opened the door... AND GUESS who was there??
yess ...the one and only MR. Bediii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bedi- dekhiye madhu , hum aapkay bagair nahin jee paa rahain hain...kripya karkay shaadi kay liye maan jaie naa!...😭--tht ws soo sadd and emotional--😛
Buaji- aap bas yahan se chale jaiyye, humain kisi aur say pyaar ho gaya hain😔.
saying that she slams the door and sits down there itself and starts cryin~EARTHQUAKE~.and just a moment later , someone knocks again and she,thinking its bedi ,opens the door and -
Bua- humay kahaan na! hum aapsay pyaar nahin kartay!! humain kisi aur se pyaar ho gaya hain!😡

JUST then she realizes, its not bedi , but its the sisters.kkg and payal!!😆..



CHAPTER 2 coming up...
Edited by neloufer_IPKKND - 13 years ago
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CHAPTER 2
KKG- buaji?! aap ? yeh sabb???😲

Payal...shockeddd😲


Buaji-- ab dekho bitiyan , jitni zyaada umar ho rahi hay, utnay sundar hum ho rahain hay..jahaan jaatay hay koi n koi humpar marta hai.toh humnay bhi soch liya! ab hum bhi kisi par chance marenge ...HUM bhi kisi par marengee!

kkg and payal- to kis par mar gyi aap?
bua-- starts biting her small finger'abhi nahin batayenge bitiya...baat aagay to badnay do...😳


KKG AND PAYAL-😲
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KKG and Payal are alone in a room
KKG- jiji, buaji ne apni zindagi main bahut kuch saha hay par ..PYAAR! iss umar main?? kam se kam pehle hota toh theek hota , par yeh umr bahut zyaada hay!

Payal- haan khushi , par hum ismay dakhal andazi nahin karenge, unhe jo karna hay woh wo kar sakti hain.😛
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Bua in her room--
can get that handsome out of her mind

bua (thinking)- kahaan ho tum ? kahan ho??? ab aur intezaar nahin hota! 130 kg se 129.9 kg ho gaya hay hamara weight!! ab to taras khao babua!😭

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next day-
kkg leaves for work, payal goes to the market

bua cooking and burns her hand and starts crying😭 = EARTHQUAKE=🤢
and to add mirch masala to the earthquake bedi uncle comes running in the house 😲
bedi- baby!!! aap theek ho??
BUA- BABYY!!! iss umr main humko baby!😡sharm nahin aati kya??

Bedi- maaf kar de , hum to bas aapko elephant ka baby bula rahe thay, no chance ki main aapko insaan ka baby is haalat main bulaunga!😳

Bua- haathi ka baccha bula te ho saale!!! ab dekho, tujhe main apni hone waali shaadi main bulakar break dance karwaungi! tu hoga special guest!😡


Bedi suddenly feels that his heart stopped beating..he turns red 💔..he holds his heart and limps out of the house crying😭


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Edited by -Neloufer- - 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: neloufer_IPKKND

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</div><font size="3">Main lead- Madhumathi gupta/will be jha
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Known for her beauty AT this age...cant reveal more now


Parallel main lead-

shyam jha/babua


A two timer ..cant reveal anything..a stupid person



Their jodi



UPDATING
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@ madiha..thx to u too!😳
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