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Samra

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: ritzy09
Samra where r you...

sorry for late response but great part...absolutely wonderful

Waitig now for past to unravel

well i m back sorry for delays

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Samra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#392

hey all i m extremely sorry for the delay
will be updating soon.😊
plz plz plz forgive me for the delay😭

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Samra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#393

thankyou all for your support
here is the update hope you enjoy dont forget to comment
i dont have much time so wont be edditing it plz forgive me for mistakes i m just typing whatever s coming in mind.

PART 10:
MAAN'S VIEW
it was only an 8 hour flight but for me it was like eternity. i was doing my favorite thing yet i could not enjoy it. i smiled sadly. how ironic. it was her favorite thing. how unknowingly her every thought her every passion her every dream became mine. no its not like i have stopped dreaming . how can i stop dreaming. ye bhi to usi ne sikhaya tha.khawab daikho. how can i forget that. yes i still dream its just that lately actually for quite some years i had only one dream . her happiness.
i cringed at the word. how even in my thoughts it hurts me when i think that it was me. mere wajah se sab hua. she wd have faced everything she was so strong. per mujhe use chorna para.i left her for her benefit. but i never realized she was nothing without me. me ne khud apne hatho se hi us ki khushiya uski life us se cheeni. i will never be able to forgive myself for this.. the voices coming from the speaker broke my revive. . i took a deep breath and responded back..
yes this rhk 13.
you are ready to land sir.and then park on the hanger no 4
yes. was the short reply. i landed the plane . but i was so engrossed in my thoughts that i never realized how it came to a complete stop at my designated hanger.
i took my stuff and pressed the button.
the few seconds that the door took to open were enough for me to compose my thoughts
i closed my eyes and like always her face came in front of me i smiled automatically as if suddenly her face had relieved me of all the pain.
as i had instructed there was no media no body knew it was a total secret affair. of course i had to pay heavily for this but for her i cd do anything.
it was a two hr drive but aadi was good behind the wheel he pulled it in just nick of the time i only had time to sneak inside the mansion when rathore entered from front.
aadi rushed to his room to start his packing.i half heatedly went to the main hall to meet the not so welcomed guest.
i stopped at the stairs. composing my face . i cd not let him know anything not now when i i corrected myself we were so near to our destination.
hey Mr rathore. how are you?
armaan baita. he smiled and stepped forward opening his hands wide to hug me.
i reciprocated. but i cd not manage the smile no matter how hard i tried.
arman tum apni sehat ka bilkul khayal nhai rakh re.versha tumhai aise daikh k kabhi khush nahi hogi.
i smiled surprising myself. its cuz of you bas***d that i can never see my mom or dad and you still have the odasity to name them.
i m fine uncle infact never better. i said thinking of her.
its good. so aur kia chal ra hai when are you coming back to india.or kitne saal me akela hi tum sab k shares ka dhayan rakho.
thats what you wanted did nt you. i screamed inside my head but ofcourse said nothing.
i m not coming back.
geet bhi apne shares nahi laina chahti yaha tum bhi mana ker re ho
i cringed at her name. how dare he took her name
he took it as my hatred . and smiled with satisfaction.
i m sorry i should not have brought her name.
thats k. ab aye hai to kuch din yahi rahiye
nahi baita phir kabhi me to yaha apni aik meeting k liye aya tha to socha tumse bhi milta chalo.tumhara business kaisa chal ra hai. i went to your office wahi se pata chala you are at home today .
i looked at him . budha abhi tak jhoot bolna band nahi krta office mujh se milne gya tha ya jasosi krne k me regularly office jata ho k nahi. despite my self i smiled. you can never catch us.
infact me jab pohancha tab tum office se nikal re thy i saw you .
oh i m sorry mujhe pata nahi chala. i made a mental note of thanking aadi and giving him a bonus in his pay for hiring body double for me.a few more mintes of torture. yes torture for me to see his face passed by finally and he took my leave.as he had to catch a flight.
i hurried back too. aadi was already in car with his luggage.
yash was right nervous geek.
i sat in and nodded it had gone as perfect as we had imagined.
i closed my eyes and surprisingly slept . aadi didn't wake me up till it was time for us to go into our plane.
our ride back was really tiring. first cuz i was extremely sleepy and tired.
and aadi was going crazy while sitting right next to me.. he was so excited to sit in co pilot's seat. i wished if he was an actual co pilot so that i cd sleep but it was impossible. then his never ending questions about plane were annoying me to hell but i was keeping my patience cuz it was his performance tomorrow. so i silently prayed that he goes to sleep.. and he did. i was about to offer my thanks in prayer but i changed my mind his snoring was even worse.

PRECAP:
i stood there at the gate looking at him.and then i dont know how or why i found myself hugging him
note: form now on eclipse update will be in maan's view and geet's view. hope you like it