Love Will Find Its Way-Maaneet FF.. Note pg58 18/4 - Page 14

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Posted: 13 years ago

Heart breaking update

Feeling so sad for Maaneet, they both lost their father
I think that Maan will change to angry young maan
Thanks for the Pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
AFTER SUCH A BEAUTIFUL BIRTHDAY, THIS IS THE WORST NEWS ONE CAN GET
FEEL SAD FOR BOTH OF THEM AS THIS WILL CHANGE BOTH THEIR LIVES
BUT LOVED THE FRIENDSHIP BETWEEN THEM
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG they both losr their fathers
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
poor Maaneet.. lost their fathers on the same day.. hope they r back to normal soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
oye author..you sure made me cry this time!

you better make up for this with equally happy updates :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Updating Tonight... may b in about another one hour...
But the updates will be sad ones for sometime...
The initial updates were the happy ones but then sad times are a part of life...
Good days will be back trust me...
Just a bad phase in their lives...
Thanks for ur comments and likes...
Now the next update in process...
Love
Sakshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 9

Maan holds the things of his role models in his hands and comes out... Still not able to get the fact that his father and father like uncle are no more... He and Geet have been left alone by their fathers, their heroes... Maan comes to Rano and Daadi ma to give them the sad news...

On the other side, Geet was still sitting with her father on his bed holding his hands and remembering her last moments she had shared with her dad...

A few moments ago when Geet entered her father's room, she was in utter shock to see a person who has been full of energy, carrying her around, making her chase him in the entire house after being a part of some prank, a complete workalcoholic always surrounded by files and laptop or else replying or sending mails, making calls using his blackberry, all lying on his bed attached to hundreds of tubes and machines waiting to see the love of his life, his daughter, his dream for the one last time... Being in so much pain he was actually waiting for this moment with his daughter... He pats on the bed near to him asking her to sit down besides him...

Mohinder: Hey princess... Come and sit here... I want to talk to u...

Geet (holding her dad's hand): Dad... What has happened??? Ye kaise hua??? Aap please rest karo... We'll talk later... Aap ghar wapas aa jaaiye and then we will talk for hours like we used to do...

Mohinder: Shhh... Geet... I am not coming back to home now... I don't have much time... You got to listen to me now...

Geet: Dad please aisa mat kahiye... U will be fine soon... U r the strongest... U have to win this battle for me, for mom... U r the world for us... Please dad fight it out...

Mohinder: I have already lost this battle my princess... I want to rest now... So I just want to tell you a few things before I go back to rest and the place where I came from... And now u r just going to listen to me without interrupting...

Geet just nods her head yes and tears start falling from her eyes... She is just unable to see her father in such a state...

Mohinder: Geet now that I wont be there...

Geet: Dad please aisa...

Mohinder (interrupts): Shhh...Shhh... Listen to me... No interruptions... Geet now that I wont be there, u have to take up my place in the family... You have to complete ur studies and fulfil all ur dreams because ur dreams have been in my eyes since the day u were born... U have to be the moral support ur mom needs... She will not be able to take this loss... But u have to give her strength Geet... You have to be her guiding light... I want u to be happy... I want to see my princess smiling always... If u r smiling, I will be satisfied somewhere that I could give u the life and conditions to make u smile... Ur smile will forever make my world happy... Ur mom and I have always prayed for ur happiness... Nothing else matters to us dear... (Mohinder breathes heavily)... I might not be with u physically but I am always watching my little angel... U had been my guiding light and inspiration to work and succeed... But now U have to fulfil my dream... U have to buid up a happy life for urself and ur mom... U will be her support... U have my blessings forever my princess and I wish u get all that u desire for in ur life... Lastly, I am sure Maan will be with u forever... U can look upto him for everything u want... I know him and I trust him to support u as always... Anytime u need someone to look upto, he is always there for u... Now I will sleep for sometime... Tum jaao and take care of ur mom... Tell her I loved her but a little less than I loved u... Take care of my princess too...

Geet (finally speaks): Dad I love u... And I cant live without u...

Mohinder: You have to my princess... And I am sure u will be able to... Because I am always there with u...

Geet holds his hand and hugs him... Mohinder passes away with a slight smile on his face because his princess was close to him when he breath his last... Geet was still sitting with her father holding his hands... Silent tears drop from her eyes... She has lost him physically... And she had to accept this fact...

On the other hand, Maan comes to Rano and Daadima to give them the news that will change the entire course of their lives... The sweet happiest family they were together but now the family had lost their two important pillars of support... The pillars who were the strength to the family member especially their teenage kids...

Maan (still holding his father's and Mohinder's belongings in a packet in his hand): Rano Maa... Daadima... Please aap yahan aakar baith jaaiye... I want to talk to both of u...

Rano and Daadi sit down in front of Maan whereas he kneels down on his knees in front of them still deciding the way he should break the terrible news in front of them... As soon as they were seated, Rano suddenly started to panic...

Rano: Maan, Geet kahan hai??? She is no where to b seen... Abhi tumhare uncle ko jaise hi hosh aayega wo use bulayenge aur pata nahi ye ladki kahan gayab hai... Maan puttar... Tu jaakar dekh na kahan gayi ye ladki...

Maan: Rano Maa, pehle aap meri baat sun lijiye... Geet mujhe pata hai kahan hai... Par aap meri baat suniye...

Rano: Par puttar tu use bhi bula le... Tumhare uncle use bulane waale hi honge...

Maan: Maa, Geet uncle k saath hi hai... Aap Geet ki chinta mat kijiye... But please promise me aap meri baat sunengi and then u would take of urself... Aapke saath hum sab hain... Geet aur main aapke saath hamesha hain... (turning towards Daadi)... Daadima, aap to bahut strong ho naa... Aap ko ye strength hum sabko dena hai... Whatever happens we will face it together...

Savitri Devi noticed the way her grandson was talking to her and this made her realise that the thing which they never ever in the wildest of dreams thought to happen had actually happened... She could see the mask that Maan had put up for everybody so that they could be strong to face the situation... She knew she had lost her only son... When she had lost her husband, her son Rajveer had put up the same mask on his face for his mother and here her grandson was doing the same... She knew she had lost him... Lost her son... Silent tears flow from her eyes too... She closed her eyes for once thinking if this was just a dream and would be over once she opens her eyes but then she had realised this wasn't a dream...

Maan: Maa and Daadima, doctors ne... bahuttt... koshish kari... (He was trying to look for words to say what he wanted to convey but didn't know how to express this)...

Rano: Bol na beta... I know unko bahut chot lagi hai... But he is a strong man... I am sure he will fight it out... Abhi Geet bhi unke saath hi hai, I am sure dono baithkar meri burayi kar rahe honge... Ye dono jab bhi saath hote hain mujhe pata hai bhool hi jaate hain...

Maan: Maa, kaash aisa hota... Geet to ab se aapka hi saath degi... Aap meri baat suniye... (He looks at his daadi and sees her tears and understood that she had got to know the truth, but then he had to tell Rano the same)... Maa... Aap meri please baat suniye...

Rano: Maan puttar, tu jaa Geet ko bula k lekar aa... Tere uncle ko rest chahiye aur ye ladki unko disturb kar rhi hogi...

At the same time Geet comes out..

Geet: Maa, papa humko chod kar chale gaye hain... Ab wo humare saath nahin hain...

Rano (shocked): Geet, tera dimaag kharab hai... Aisi kaisi baat kar rhi hai... Koi apne papa k liye aisa bolta hai kya... Sharam nahi aati...

Geet (comes and sits next to her): Maa meri baat samjho... Papa bahut dard mein the aur he wanted to be free from that pain... So he left us to be with babaji...

Rano: Maan, iss ladki ka dimaag sahi mein kharab ho gaya hai... Pata nhi kya kya bole jaa rahi hai... Tu samjha na isse ki aisa nhi bolte...

Maan: Maa Geet sahi keh rahi hai... Uncle aur papa dono ab iss duniya mein nahi rahe...

Rano (shouts): Tum dono pata nahi kya bole jaa rahe ho... (Stands to go inside)... Kitni baar samjhana padega ki aisa nahi bolte hain... Apne papa k baare mein to bilkul bhi nahi... Main ye baat maan hi nahi sakti... Wo mujhe chod kar kahin jaa hi nahi sakte...

Maan and Geet hold her and try to stop her... She gets angry and frustrated, still not ready to accept the fact and faints...

Hey friends...

So this is the next update of the "Love Will Find its way"... It's the sad phase of the life they are going through... But happy days will be there... I am sure all of u want to see happy updates... Give sometime for the story to get positive... But the best part is that Maaneet are together... So please thoda wait karo...

Now that we have the news of GHSP ending, all of us are heartbroken for sure... Please do as much as u can to save r favourite show... Comment on the starone official website because comments on ur favourite show count there... We can atleast do this for our favourite show... I can't even imagine my weekdays without watching GHSP... I have truly fallen completely in love with the show and especially Gurmeet and Drashti...

Lets wait for the final decision taken by the channel...

Meanwhile here's the update for u all...

Please hit the like button and give me comments on how u find it... Ur comments motivate me to write more... And yes if u want to receive pms for the updates please send me a buddy request... Its easier to add u to my pm list...

Thanks for ur love and support...

Love

Sakshi



Next Part: Part 10

Edited by zaqxsw - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
what a heart breaking update dear...but yes it is a phase in this FF and atlease Maaneet r together
Love the way you described their emotions...just fab
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sakshi04

so much sad i m because i know wt happen when the situation like this came i hope ki kisis ko bhi aisis situation ka samna na karna pade kisis ki bhi life main aisis situation na aaye



Seriously yaar... I hope the same... I pray to God that nuthing like this happens to anyone...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: awesomepooja

Very emotional.
Wat would b last wish of mohender?:-(



Its there in the next update I posted abhi...😊😭😭

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