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"what the hell does he think ? i can easily go in this haunted house !!" said a determined pia . though she was scared inside coz she has not been in any haunted house before n had not even watched a horror movie alone !! well the haunted house wasn't scary but for her it was the spookiest place !! she walked gathering some courage n reminding herself if she does it then abhay will have to do what she says for whole 3 days n this chance was no way gonna out of her hand !! as she entered inside it was very dark . few eyes were shining in red colour . she thought "i never felt scared being wid a vampire but these fake things r really scary !!" her face was looking like the next step was coming out of the tears from her eyes . she looked very tensed when suddenly a vampire , fake of course !!
finally she accepted that she can't stand infront of them widout abhay . she ran back to the entrance gate but she almost got a heart-attack when she discovered that it was locked from outside n there was no other way to go back !! she started crying by now . all the worst ideas started cuming inside her mind . she sat down but it was again a surprise that there were pecies of glasses surrounding her in the shape of triangle . now she wished she had trusted abhay n not came by herself at this time . she however came out of that trap n thought to move further . as she proceeded the darkness grew more . now the shining red eyes were more . pia's heartbeat got almost stopped when she saw a zombie cuming towards her . now she was about to faint when she reached at her place , in abhay's arms .
abhay - m sorry
pia hugged him tightly . abhay was now wondering that if she learns the truth she is surely gonna kill him .
pia realized that door was closed then how was abhay suddenly here when she recalled the moment when abhay told that if she cries there she will do whatever he says for 3 days !! she parted away making an angry face .
"how could u ?" she shouted at him
"m sorry i didn't know u r so scared " he said
"don't u dare talk to me now " she shouted angrily n left
abhay knew he was in a big mess now .

abhay opened the gate of pia's room n went inside it . she was standing there making her bed ready . anger was still visible on her face .
abhay - pia ..
pia - whats the order ?
abhay - order (he asked confusingly )
pia - u won the bet na
abhay - i just want few kisses from u
hearing this statement pia blushed .
he came closer n wrapped his arms around her waist n resting his chin on her shoulder.
pia realized that she was again getting into his trap . she moved away leaving him confused .
pia - i don't wanna talk to u
abhay - but i just want few kisses
pia - i don't know anything so just go to ur room
abhay - really ?
he came forward making her fall on the bed . pia was on the bed now n he was on her top . he started kissing her neckline then kissed her chin . pia was losing her senses now . she finally surrendered herself to him . abhay moved away the strap from her shoulder . abhay moved away a strand of hairs behind her ears. pia started opening the buttons one by one now . he finally placed his lips on her lips n started kissing her passionately . they both were getting wild now . pia pulled him closer to herself .
her hands now started playing wid his silky hairs . abhay was enjoying kissing pia .
now they turned n pia was on top of him . when they moved their lips away from each other they felt they will die widout kissing each other . pia cupped his face n looked in his eyes . she took a blanket n covered them both wid it not coz she wanted to cover herself but coz she wanted to get more closer to him . her curls were touching his cheeks n then teasing him to kiss her back . abhay brought his hands at the back of her n brought her more closer to him . pia was trying hard to keep away from him but then couldn't control as his lips were like magnet for her!! they kept on kissing that night n slept in the morning embracing each other .

itna kafi hai 😆well i was getting bored so i had to update 😳 don't know if it is good or not !! but if u liked it then plz hit the like button n leave ur comments 😳 n ya m sorry i didn't reply to everyone on the previous besharmi post actually m getting more lazy day by day😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb romantic deepa . pata nahi kaha se idea ata hai tere dimage mein woh b itne romantic . i love it yr why r u stop age kon likhaga hn .deepa its lovely u r superb
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@soni - how is ur arm now ? well thanks n abhiya can change anyone !! if they can change a girl like me who finds ghosts more cute than boys then m sure abhiya can bring anyone 's besharmi part infront!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi!, These posts are definetely not besharmi, but romantic. Wish we could get to see some of them in the show. But thanks for making the posts and entertaining us.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice concept 😊
btw its nt dat besharam 😛😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats. You are now number 1 at besharmi again😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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di still m wondering...where u d one who said ghosts r cute...n who is not interested in romantic novels.😲😕..that was so romantic...omg!!omg!!..abhay has become so naughty...i so luv this..😛.😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Seriously deepa,u r too inovative in writing these romantic updates.loved it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome Post Deepa.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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deepa ji ki jai ho kya besharam romance likha hai 😛

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