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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sanyogitaprc

awesome updates...

i am happy that nandini is fine & finally angad has found out prithvi...so now there r hopes for PriNi reunion ...hope prithvi will find nandini before she falls in hands of bhima or abhi...

plz clear all misunderstandings now...PriNi have been away from each other for long time...& both r suffering...now it is time for some happiness to come in their life...

plz plz plz update soon...cant wait more...

Hey Thanks for your lovely comments...will update soon 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 29


Richa couldn't resist her anger and asked Prithvi "so Prithvi...where is Nandini ???"


Prithvi started getting angry "i don't know..." and got up from his chair while Angad asked him not to get angry "please Prithvi...it was just a casual question"


Prithvi "what did I tell you the last time...i don't want to hear this name again" he said angrily


Richa got more angry and blasted at him "why??? why not?...tell me Prithvi??"


Prithvi "Richa just stop it...i don't want to hear anything about her"


Angad tried to calm Richa and Prithvi


Richa " do you even know she loved you so much..."


Prithvi "will you stop that...or do you want me to leave"


Richa "she lied to you Prithvi , in front of that Abhishek...she never love that bas***d...she only loved you...Abhishek kidnapped her Father...or I should say not her Father...he came that night when she went missing and forcefully picked her up"


Prithvi looked shockingly at Richa "what???"


Richa "yes Prithvi, she lied to save her Father...but it was Abhishek and her Father's plan to trap her...he only wanted Nandini's property and Abhishek wanted Nandini...both played a game with her...she forced you to get out of her life..."


Prithvi "i don't believe this...what are you telling me ???"


Richa "fine...do you want to listen how much has she suffered because of you.???"


Prithvi "me????" said angrily


Richa "yes you...you loved her so much...then why didn't you trust her...and believed what she said in front of that Abhishek...and not even that...you made her pregnant..."


Prithvi was shell shocked


Richa "yes Prithvi...she was pregnant with your child and even had a miscarriage...Abhishek had kept him in an isolated place for one year...she did not marry him...she didn't let him touch her.." Richa couldn't control and started crying


Angad "please Richa..."


Richa "no Angad ...Prithvi should know what he has done to Nandini...how could he just leave her..." ' "Prithvi she's suffering every minute and there isn't anyone to save her"


Prithvi felt guilty of himself...he thought he was responsible for everything that happened with Nandini.


Richa "somehow she managed to get out of Abhishek's prison and called me...she was sounding ill...while she was still talking to me Abhishek grabbed her and I could only hear her screaming..." Angad asked her to drink some water as Richa was crying "after that I never heard back from her..." she looked up at Prithvi "if anything happens to her...you will be responsible Prithvi"


Prithvi felt in affective state in which he experienced conflict at having done something that one believes one should not have done. He felt guilty of not protecting Nandini, not believing in her love, leaving her in a terrible situation and mostly making her pregnant and giving her the pain. For sometime his brain stopped working and he couldn't feel the world around him.


Angad saw one tear from Prithvi's right eye, for the first time in his life he felt so miserable and terrible at what he had done. He got emotional and said "i am sorry Nandini...i don't deserve you"


Angad "Prithvi don't say that...it was all a misunderstanding...you both are made for each other"


Prithvi went towards the rest room. Angad thought it would be better to give him some space and he sympathized with Richa.


Prithvi opened the tap and splashed the water on his face. Few minutes he just looked at himself realizing about the terrible mistake he did two years back, he won't sit quietly unless he finds Nandini. He looked into the mirror, his eyes were red filled with anger and revenge "your death is coming near Abhishek"


Outside in the cafe...


Angad "Richa please, don't cry...now everything will be alright

Richa "i just hope so, I want Nandini to be safe"

Angad "Prithvi won't let anything happen to her, I am sure he's regretting what he has done."



After some time...


Angad "do call me, I have kept your card."


Prithvi "i will" and thankfully nodded at Richa and consoled her "i won't let anything happen to her"


Angad "i will call you once we reach Delhi"


After waving good bye to Angad and Richa


Prithvi called Angel "book my first ticket to Delhi, India"


__***************


Parvati "we don't have enough money and if we get this good offer, why don't you accept it"


Bhola "how could you even think of that?? how can we cheat anyone?"


Parvati "Bhima is ready to give us lots of money and she's not our real daughter"


Bhola "so what? She trusts us and how can you break her trust?"

Parvati "i don't want to listen to your crap, do as I say"


Bhola still didn't wanted to hand over Nandini to Bhima but he was forced to do by his wife.


Parvati thought there was nothing wrong in selling this girl to Bhima as they can have enough money to buy nice things, and this girl has stayed with them for such a long time, she should make money out of her now.


Bhola was still thinking over...


_____**************


Bhima spoke to his master Gani "sir she's so beautiful, you won't find this kind in the whole market, I will charge a lot"

Gani "if she's beautiful and fresh then I will give you as much money you want. You have to bring her to Delhi"

Bhima "it will take me some days to get there"

Gani "i have a sheikh coming from Dubai next month, and if he likes this girl then we will be double rich"


____**********


Next Day


Parvati "Nandini you asked me once that you want to go to Delhi?"

Nandini "yes, but I don't have enough money to go and"

Parvati "well Bhima is going to Delhi next week and he can take you where ever you wish to go"

Nandini thought if she somehow reached Delhi, she could contact him in some or the other way, and it was a good idea if she was going with someone as she could never go alone, she said yes.

Parvati was happy to hear this "well I will arrange some food and other stuff for you."

Nandini smiled at her and thanked Parvati for helping her.


___***********


Abhishek was fully drunk and talking to Nandini's photograph "you left me alone, but I will always love you" suddenly he heard some noise outside

he got up from his chair and opened the door, a tight punch lifted him off and he was on the ground.

With his blurred vision he saw some man nearing him with a gun in his hand accompanied by some other men. He rubbed his eyes and looked again, this time he could make out, he got scared "Prithvi, you???"

Prithvi pulled his hair and hold the gun straight to his head "where is Nandini ??"


Abhishek terribly scared and sweated at the gun point and glanced around, atleast ten people were surrounding him, he couldn't run anywhere, no he can't even think of running.


He said in trembling voice "i...i...don't know"

Prithvi "one last chance, and you are dead" he said angrily

Abhishek "i am searching for her since last nine months" his lips got dried

"Sir we found this lady" one of Prtihvi's men said while bringing Pratima

Pratima gazed at the handsome man and his angry looks "so you are Prithvi?"

Prithvi turned towards her "where is Nandini ??"

Pratima "i always told Nandini that one day she will definitely meet her Prithvi"


Prithvi looked at her for an answer Pratima continued "i told Abhishek so many time to let her go but he never listened to me, I am happy you came, but its too late now"


Prithvi "what do you mean??" he said raging towards her


Pratima "Abhishek wanted to force himself on her, she didn't let him touch herself and jumped into a huge river. Abhishek tried to look for her but assumed she was drowned, this happened nine months back."


Prithvi startled by Pratima's words and glared violently at Abhishek...


_____*****************

Edited by Dhanvi83 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sooo gud..finally prithvi knw his mistake...nd knw abt nandini...oh richa thanx to say whole things to prithvi...nw abhishek u dead...bt wht is this...hw can parvati do this? No way not another crap...why it happn only with her...prithvi do something really fast...update soon dear...luv u...nd luv this banner
Edited by Rukmini13 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
...wowww our hero is back in action...finally he realised his mistake...but my nanduu is suffering so much...😔...n that parvati..how could she do this to such a sweet girl...plzzz dhanvi send prithvi asap to nandu... m really feeling sad for my nandu...
... thanxx for update ...looov u 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww...just saw your creation ...its sooo beautiful...grttt 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part...👏
how can parvati do this with poor nandu...she already suffered a lot...n now this...this parvati is such a...😡
how can anyone be so selfish...
richa u did a good job...i m proud of u...
n finally prithvi get the truth n realises his mistake...
n abhishek got a punchgood very good prithvi...give some more to that idiot...
prithvi find ur nandu soon...she is in trouble...
ur r in state of loosing her...forever...
do something soon...to get back her...

n u creation is too beautiful...😛
waiting for next...
update it soon...
luv u...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks god & thanks to richa...now prithvi knows everything...he is guilty & he is back in action...good...

abhishek got what he deserved...

but nandini...one more problem in her way...hope prithvi will find her before she suffers more...

👏loved ur creation...its beautiful...

plz plz update soon...eagerly waiting...

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update di😛😊😊😊
great 😃😃
misunderstanding is cleared👏thnks to richa😃😃
prithvi punched abhishek😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😃😃😃😃😃also give him some more punch and beat him black n blue prithvi , one punch is not enough in comparison to the pain he caused to nandini😡what has parvati donedi plz let prithvi save her from those ugly n thirsty wrenches before they do anything to her😔
update soon😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
so finally Prithvi knows the truth n is regretting
Thank God! Now that the mu is clear I hope he finds her soon
Oh no! Not again. How much more trouble the poor girl has 2 face?
but 1 thing is gud Prithvi is going 2 Delhi n these people r taking Nandini 2 Delhi 2.
Haye kya rocking entry maari apne hero ne!
Aargh! This Abhishek is seriously a psychopath! I want prithvi 2 beat him black n blue. infact just kill him. Every problem will solve automatically.
Really lukng forward 2 priNan's meeting.
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
luv u so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!😃
finally prithvi knows that nandini is suffering.
and the way he stormed into abhishek's house was so like my brave prithvi. luved that part👏
so nandini is going to delhi too.
i hope he'll find her soon. plz keep updating regularly. thank u so much for this.⭐️

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