VirMaan SS - Was This The Start Of Something New?

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Intro & Part 1 - Page 1
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Part 2 - Page 13
Part 3 - Page 18

Hi Everyone,
I'm new to this. I had my account made from ages but never got a chance to actually come and look at everything untill the show 'Ek Hazaaron Mein Meir Behna Hai' came on. I just came on here to watch the episodes that I had missed. Untill I found these OS/FF/SSs about the show. I don't really know what these but yes that iss what I started coming on here to do. I personally love Viraat & Maanvi (Virmaan) as a couple but then again both couples are amazing and their personalities match. Anyway I didn't know how to start my first ever post/update on here untill I came across https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-hazaaron-mein-meri-behna-hain/2186544/diary-of-a-great-show . I was going to write a really short comment on here but then it turned out to be a whole essay. So then thought that my first post could be on this. I might just make this my only post on this and not update this but if I get positive comments and likes; I may write about Viraat's side of this of this.
Please read this and comment; giving any positive feedback, negative feedback, improvements and anything else you would want to say. If you like this then please hit the like button :)
Please keep this in mind that I'm not from the 'Hindu' religion so if in the rituals or what I have said at the end is wrong then please comment and tell me. So if I update, I'll make that improvement. Also I didn't know what the 'Choori Ritual' is actually called. Tried searching but didn't find anything so please tell me what is aswell, if anyone knows. Also I have just said 'Choori Ritual' wherever I have mentioned this.
Would love to read your comments and what you think about my first post. 😊
Also, tell me if you want to know Viraat's side of this story.
I think I'm probably loosing you guys already so I'm just going to go ahead and put my story forward. 😳
I would like to thank everyone who's OS/FF/SSs I have read but most importantly I would like to thank 'Brklyn_gal'. This person has been my inspiration till now. She writes so well even though I think she hasn't been told enough times by me but yes if she wasn't here, I may have not built up the courage to write this. Thank You SO Much 😳

Maanvi's Side of This

Today was Jeevika Di's 'Choori Ritual'. I can't believe I wasn't there; I could see her eyes searching for only me. I knew I should have been there; she wanted to shake her chooris on my head to see if I would be the next one to get merried. But I was under Beeji's oath; the promise that I'd given to her that I would not attend any ritual in which Di's in-laws were present in.

Viraat that Chep was there. I felt a sudden tingle throughout my body when I saw him. That feeling was wierd; I'd never felt it before. But why only for him? I don't know why but his eyes were searching for someone? I wished that I could go from there because I knew that if he was searching for me and found me here; crying while taking pictures, I wouldn't be able to face him. He'd keep asking me what's wrong but I wouldn't be able to tell him why I was like this. But at the same time, I wanted to be present to catch all those moments of happiness because in the end, I'd only have those left with me.

And then, the thing I was afraid of the most, happened. I turned to see Viraat standing there, looking at me. He looked at me and then suddenly I forgot about everything. I forgot that this was Jeevika Di's 'Choori Ritual'. It was almost as if, the whole world had stopped just for me and him. He looked so handsome in his creamy white sherwani, lightly embroidered with silver. I was mesmerised by him. Then that figure slowly came towards me but little did I notice that he was coming secretly so no-one saw him creeping out of the ritual to come and see if I was O.K.

I can't believe all this happened; I was lost in my own world. What was this feeling? I had never felt this before. His gentleman-like personality had casted some kind of spell on me. I hadn't even felt this when I saw him for the first time in Rishikesh. My feelings for him had gradually changed. He had become so close to me; just like Jeevika Di. Just thinking about her made my tears burst out

"Kahan kho gayi?" Viraat said while clicking his fingers in front of my eyes.
"Mujhyy pata hai larkiyan mujh par marti hain, laikin tum bhi Bandariya? Wah, lagta hai ke mera asr tum par bhi kaam kar gaya. Mein to hoon hi itna handsome, tum mujhyy aise na bhi dekhti, to bhi mujhyy pata chal jaata ke kuch to asr hua hai mera tum par"

"Tum par, mein latoo hoon gi? Aise hi Maanvi Chaudhary kissi par latoo nahin hoti? Tum to ho hi chep, Mein aise iss liye tumhe dekh rahi thi kyun ke tumhe signal deny ke koshish kar rahi thi ke yahan mat aana. Beeji aur tumaryy ghar waale dekh lein ge" I splattered out, trying to hide my feelings for him or atleast the feelings I was building for him.

"Waisyy tum ro kyun rahi ho? Ji, pata hai ke Jeevika Bhabi jo ke aapki behan pehle hain, tumhe chor kar jaa rahi hai laikin abhi unki bidaai mein bohat waqt hai. Fikr na karo, baad mein ro lena."

"Mein ro nahin rahi. Ye khushi ke aansoon hain. Mein apni Di ko dekh ke bohat khush hoon ke unko Viren Jiju pati ke roop mein milein."

Pfft. 'Baad mein ro lena'? How do you know Viraat, I'm not going to be there with her to cry then. For me, I'm bidding her farewell now. I'm not going to be there when she will do the 'Saath Phere' with Viren Jiju, while witnessing the sacred fire and be bonded into such a sacred and purified relationship. I won't be there when Viren Jiju will fill her 'maang' with sindoor. I won't be there when he will put the mangalsutra around her neck. And neither will I be there with everyone while she will be bidding farewell to be welcomed into a new house with Viren Jiju.

"Khushi ke aansoon? My foot! Aur aik to ye bandariya pata nahin kahan kho jaati ho. Kahin tumhe iss baat ka dukh to nahin hai ke Jeevika Di ke saath saath mujhse bhi door chali jao gi? Waise mere saath zyaada der waqt bitaane se aksar larkiyon pe ye bhi side effect aa jaata hai" He said with a smirk on his face.

"Kitni baar kahun mein? Mujhyy ye naam bilkul nahin psand. Chep ho kya? Aur waise bhi tumse door hone se mujhyy khushi zyaada ho rahi hai. Tumhaare saath aur rahi to mein bhi pagal ho jaoon gi."

I don't know why but when I said that last bit, my heart felt as if it was sinking. I wanted to tell him that I didn't want anyone to leave. These last few days brought so much happiness in my life; I didn't want it all to go.
"What are you saying Maanvi? Since when did you start liking that Chep? Since when did he become everything for you? Since when did you want him to stay back? Stop creating these feelings within you." A voice called out within me.

I quickly got out of my dilemma when he said,
"Chalo, Saari rasmein khatam ho jaein gi aur tumhaare chakar mein, mujhyy bhi dekhne ko nahin mile ga ke kiss ke sar pe choori girti hai. Waise ye batao, tum wahan kyun nahin bethi? Tumne shaadi nahin karni kya? Aakhir iss bandariya ki bhi shaadi hoye aur phir mein bhi iss ke 'hone waale' ko bataoon ke ye kya cheez hai. Kitni mastiyan karti hai. Aur sab se pehle to mein ye bataoon ga ke tumhaara naam bandariya hai, Maanvi nahin 😛"

"Mein nahin aa sakti kyun ke mein..." I nearly spilled everything out.
"Kuch nahin, mera dil nahin kar raha aane ke liye. Mein yahin theek hun apne khyaalon mein gum"

"Theek hai zyaada der tak nahin. Sirf is 'Choori girne' ki rasm mein aa jao. Phir waapis aa jaana."

"Nahin Viraat! Mein ne keh diya na ke nahin aana to nahin aana mein ne"

"Acha? To agar tum ziddi ho to mein tumse double ziddi hun. Tum chalo gi. Issi waqt chalo gi"

He forced me to where everyone was. He forced me to sit down where Jeevika Di was doing the ritual of the 'Choori dropping'. Beeji was there. Thank God, Suwamini Bua wasn't there. If she was there, I wouldn't be able to face Beeji after this ritual.

Beeji glared at me; I knew what she was thinking. She was probably ashamed to have a grand-daughter like me, who even after her oath had the courage to come into the ritual to ruin her sister's life. But then again, Suwamini Bua wasn't there so it wasn't a big problem. Either way, I had fallen down in Beeji's eyes.

Suddenly, while I was lost in that thought, Viraat come close to me and whispered in my ear,
"Jeevika Bhabi yahan aane lagi hain aur agar unke choori hilaane se tum par koi choori giri to phir tumhaari shaadi bohat jald ho gi. Wah ji Wah, bandariya ki bhi shaadi ho gi."

Just then I heard Beeji saying,
"Jeevika beti, ruk jao! Viraat peeche hoye ga to phir chooriyan hilaana!"

But it was too late!
Di had already shaken her chooris; they had dropped aswell but not only on me!
On both, me and Viraat!

I could hear all the guests talking, making up stories, for which they had no proof that would come true. Only a choori dropped on both of us, nothing could happen. The meaning didn't necessarily have to be true. But for some strange reason, I felt a sudden spark of happiness urging inside me. I felt as if, this was the moment me and Viraat had been waiting, well atleast I had been waiting for this.

The meaning couldn't possibly come true or could it?
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Thanks for reading, if you stayed with me till now.
However, my next update might be late but I don't know yet.
But I will try my best to update as soon as and that is only if I receive positive
comments because I have a feeling that not many people will like this.
Maybe it is because I'm new here and don't really know how to write these OSs.
But then again you should never predict, so I'm going to go ahead and post this in wait for your comments 😳