Originally posted by: Jhinka_Roy
Although Mannu's kuchh kuchh feelings about Viraat are not really similar to what has been going on in the actual show but I'd have really loved to see such scenes there! š
Ohhh..that scene you wrote about the kaliren falling bot on them, just reading that my heart stopped a few beats!š
Although it's become a familiar feeling now with a few of the awesome pieces written on VirMan n some scenes with them shown on the show itself..sometimes my heart races seeing n reading those n other times I feel literally breathless!ā¤ļø
Now waiting for his PoV, especially what is he gonna think when it falls on their heads at the same time!
Thank You for the feedback š³
Ermm. Well that was kind of what I tried to do, because the kaliren didn't fall on her either especially not on both of them. So I wanted to make her character a bit different. Two-sided really; she's happy about him, how he is and what happened but at the same time confused about what has happened and doesn't like him either...
Lol, I just read it again and I actually can't believe that this is my writing! Even though it was mine, I felt my heart skip a few beats as well. Lol. Don't think this has happened with anyone before but yeh.
Before I get to that, I'm going to write about what happened next. I didn't write in this update/post because I wanted to leave it at that so that people could start thinking of what would happen. Leave it at a cliffhanger. But I'll write that and then in the same post I'll write Viraat's feelings about this. so because he is a complex character, it'll take time so please bear with me :)
Edited by shehroon_riaz - 13 years ago
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