VirMaan SS - Was This The Start Of Something New? - Page 10

Originally posted by: -Saruu-

oyeee

our mocks finished noww:P

UPDATEEE😉

Originally posted by: swetiepie_angel

lovely part!!!!

do update soon! n pm me tooo!!!!

Originally posted by: shehroon_riaz

Haha I know Sara. Chill. Lol
I just came back from Afshan's house, we were revising for the maths test. She was teaching me; Lol. She even marked my work.
Btw, yesterday I wrote most of the update, some parts are incomplete. So I'll complete them and then I'll update today. so basically I'm updating a week later instead of as I said in 2/3 days. But I promise the update after this won't be late:)

And I'll finish it all today, I'll pm you, don't worry :)

Originally posted by: -Saruu-

LOOLL did she use maanvi and viraat?

for me,for expanding brackets,she was like maan goes into geet 3 times and then 4 mini geets are produced LMAO:P

andd oohh okayy;)

Originally posted by: muktha_cute

loved it

Was This The Start Of Something New - Part 2

Hi everyone :)

This last week has motivated me so much to update the 2nd part of my SS... Everyone has been so nice and supportive 😊
Thanks, I know some of yous' are probably going to get mad at me as I've already said this loads of times but I can't thank you enough times for all the feedback 😳

Sorry for the 1 week late update but I was really busy and I know I said I'd update it on Tuesday/Wednesday but I couldn't get the time; instead I wrote a little bit at a time of this update.
Hope you guys like this. I tried to make this as good as I could get it to be but please if it isn't good you are free to criticize. Please give feed back so I can improve on that. Jootiyan and Chapals are all welcome 😆

Continuation of Manvi's POV

And then I heard that voice again,
"What are thinking Maanvi? Why are you feeling this way for him, that Chep? That person who always teases you? And do you want to be taunted by Beeji again? What are you waiting for? Get up and go. Go to place where Di won't even be able to find you. The more you stay here, the more people will talk about this and the more Beeji will be ashamed of you"

I don't know why but I had to go away from that, away from everyone and most importantly away from Viraat! After what had happened, I couldn't face him. I knew that this couldn't happen because he had only been the Chep that I knew; I was the Bandariya that he knew and teased non-stop. However, it didn't only matter about what we thought, who would shut the mouths of those who were sitting outside?

I already knew what Beeji would say and there she was standing behind me saying,
"Mein ne kaha tha na tumse ke mat aana, tum jab bhi aati ho to koi na koi bikhera zaroor khara kar deti hun. Shukar hai Bhagwan ka ke wahan Suwamini Ji nahin thi. Agar woh hoti to unko kehna bhi nahin parta aur humaari Jeevika ki poori zindagi bikhar jaati. Tumhe pata hai na ye kitna ahem waqt hai usske liye aur phir tum aayi? Mere kehne ke bawajood, tum aayi? Tumse mujhyy ye umeed nahin thi!"

"Laikin Beeji, mein nahin aana chahti thi; woh Viraat mujhe zabardasti le gaya tha"

"Haan, ab tum ronyy waali surat le ke khari thi wahan. Apne kamre mein nahin aa sakti thi kya? Seerioyn mein ussne tumhe dekh liya to phir kya karta woh? Le ke hi jaana tha na?"

Just then, Viraat appeared from the doorway. He was walking towards me; at first I thought he was going to say something to me but then he stopped to turn to Beeji and said,
"Beeji, Beeji jo kuch bhi neeche hua aaj usske liye aap Maanvi ko na daantiye. Iss mein usski koi galti nahin hai. Woh to balke mujhyy rok rahi thi aur keh rahi thi ke nahin jaana ussne sab ke paas. Laikin mein ne hi use majboor kar diya. Mein hi le ke aaya tha use. To agar aapne daantna hai, to mujhyy daantiye Maanvi ko nahin"

I know she was ashamed of me and at the same time didn't want to reveal anything in front of Viraat so she just left; leaving both of us behind. I wanted to cry my heart out. How could I tell her that I had always wanted to be with my Di? Only because of her, I agreed to not go to any of the rituals but wasn't I not even allowed to just look from far away and capture all those wonderful memories?

Viraat gave me one of his 'million dollar smiles', put my hand on her shoulder and said,
"I'm sorry. Please naraaz mat hona. Mera tumhe dukh pohnchaane ka koi maksad nahin tha"

I looked at his hand and then at him and then said,
"Its O.K. Chep hi raho ge, mein tumse kabhi naraaz ho sakti hun kya?"

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Virat's POV

Me, Ma and Chachi went to see Jeevika Bhabi's family to see how their preparations were going and to give them the 'Shagun Thaali', which had the Jeevika Bhabi's clothes that she was to wear on her wedding day, the ornaments and the mehndi. Ma had told me that they were going to be doing the 'Choori Ritual' today. I didn't know what it was at first but then Ma explained to me. I don't know why but when Ma told me about this ritual, Maanvi's picture snapped into my brain. For some time after that, I was wondering why this had happened but I couldn't come up with any answer.

I was standing there, looking at Jeevika Bhabi and for some reason; I couldn't see the usual smile on her face with which her face usually lighted up. I looked at for a few moments and then realised that Maanvi wasn't there.
"Oh God, where is this Bandariya now?" I thought to myself.
"Today is Bhabi's most important day, where she's bidding farewell to all her family members in a way and on this day, she isn't here? Where is she? Why does she always disappear when she is needed the most?"

I scanned through the crowd of people, thinking that der futiya might have got stuck somewhere with big platters of flowers but she was nowhere to be seen. Then just at the corner of my eye, I saw someone standing on the staircase. I thought it was Maanvi at first but then thought that what would she be doing there? She would never want to be away from her sister on such an important occasion.

"But she isn't here either, is she?" I questioned myself.

I suddenly turned around to find her standing there; looking all sad and gloomy. She looked at me as well but this wasn't the usual look on her face that she brought up on her face when she saw me. Usually she'd make a face and turn away. But she just stood there looking at me; I know I'm handsome and all the girls are mesmerised by me but she wasn't the type of girl who would fall for me.
Though I wished that this was true because somewhere deep inside me I'd started to build feelings for her. She was so different; so unique. I know she's childish but how can anyone not see her inner beauty.
"Viraat, what are you thinking?
You and Maanvi? This is impossible; you can never be together
You'll have to forget her", a voice called out within me.

I tried to convince myself that the voice that was repeating what it had said already was right. Me and Maanvi could never be together but how could I forget her? And today wouldn't be the best day either, she looked so beautiful. She's the one who awoke the 'lost Viraat', she's the one who made me break my promise that I would never sing again, she's the one who is always there for me when I need someone the most. On the whole, she completed me!

Stop Viraat! Control! She's 'Bhabi ki Behana' for god's sake and if Bhabi finds out then you're doomed for sure. I tried to walk in a really cool way to try to impress her even though I knew that she wouldn't fall for me.
"Hellooo, der futiya. Kahan kho gayi? Mujhyy pata hai larkiyan mujh par marti hain, laikin tum bhi Bandariya? Wah, lagta hai ke mera asr tum par bhi kaam kar gaya. Mein to hoon hi itna handsome, tum mujhyy aise na bhi dekhti, to bhi mujhyy pata chal jaata ke kuch to asr hua hai mera tum par" I said to her with a smirk on my face. 😉

I knew that she wasn't that type of girl but I wanted to make her spill everything out. Well, that was if there was anything that she felt for me.

She suddenly awoke or came out of her dream-world and started to question me,
"Tum par, mein latoo hoon gi? Aise hi Maanvi Chaudhary kissi par latoo nahin hoti? Tum to ho hi chep, Mein aise iss liye tumhe dekh rahi thi kyun ke tumhe signal deny ke koshish kar rahi thi ke yahan mat aana. Beeji aur tumaryy ghar waale dekh lein ge"

Tumhe kya lagta hai Maanvi Chaudhary? Jaise tum keh rahi ho, uss se mujhyy thori se bhi iss baat ki bhanak nahin ho gi ke tumhaari dil mein bhi meryy liye woh khaas jagha ban gayi hai. Baat sirf ye hai ke tumhe abhi tak pata nahin chala. (I thought to myself)

I didn't want to say anything after what she had said so I suddenly asked,
"Waisyy tum ro kyun rahi ho? Ji, pata hai ke Jeevika Bhabi jo ke aapki behan pehle hain, tumhe chor kar jaa rahi hai laikin abhi unki bidaai mein bohat waqt hai. Fikr na karo, baad mein ro lena."

I don't what it was, but there was something that she tried hide. But nothing can be kept away from Viraat Singh Vadhera!

"Mein ro nahin rahi. Ye khushi ke aansoon hain. Mein apni Di ko dekh ke bohat khush hoon ke unko Viren Jiju pati ke roop mein milein." she said at a fast pace.

"Khushi ke aansoon? My foot! Aur aik to ye bandariya pata nahin kahan kho jaati ho. Kahin tumhe iss baat ka dukh to nahin hai ke Jeevika Di ke saath saath mujhse bhi door chali jao gi? Waise mere saath zyaada der waqt bitaane se aksar larkiyon pe ye bhi side effect aa jaata hai", I said.

I kept changing the topic because I wanted her to get confused so that she could splatter everything out. I knew she was trying to hide something from me. There was something other than just the feelings that I wanted to find out.

She didn't exactly say what I expected, instead she said the opposite and at the same time she managed to hide her feelings for me.

"Kitni baar kahun mein? Mujhyy ye naam bilkul nahin pasand. Chep ho kya? Aur waise bhi tumse door hone se mujhyy khushi zyaada ho rahi hai. Tumhaare saath aur rahi to mein bhi pagal ho jaoon gi", she said.

Maanvi said what she wanted to and managed to hide everything from me. But who would tell her that her eyes told me everything. Both of us knew that we didn't want to go away from each other. We wanted us to be together for eternity. I wanted the world to stop so we could just stand there staring at each other. The sparkle in her dark brown eyes was amazing.

She was thinking about something. She was so tangled in her thoughts that when I told her to come with me, she didn't reply. I said it again and nudged her at the same time and this time she jumped a little. At first I thought that something had happened to her and that was going to faint anytime soon but then I realised that she was shocked at what I said and didn't want to go.

All I said to her was,
"Chalo, Saari rasmein khatam ho jaein gi aur tumhaare chakar mein, mujhyy bhi dekhne ko nahin mile ga ke kiss ke sar pe choori girti hai. Waise ye batao, tum wahan kyun nahin bethi? Tumne shaadi nahin karni kya? Aakhir iss bandariya ki bhi shaadi hoye aur phir mein bhi iss ke 'hone waale' ko bataoon ke ye kya cheez hai. Kitni mastiyan karti hai. Aur sab se pehle to mein ye bataoon ga ke tumhaara naam bandariya hai, Maanvi nahin 😛"

She was about to say something but stopped and then said something completely different,
"Mein nahin aa sakti kyun ke mein..."
"Kuch nahin, mera dil nahin kar raha aane ke liye. Mein yahin theek hun apne khyaalon mein gum"
I knew that she didn't want to come with me but still I said,
"Theek hai zyaada der tak nahin. Sirf is 'Choori girne' ki rasm mein aa jao. Phir waapis aa jaana."
"Nahin Viraat! Mein ne keh diya na ke nahin aana to nahin aana mein ne", she said in a loud voice.
"Acha? To agar tum ziddi ho to mein tumse double ziddi hun. Tum chalo gi. Issi waqt chalo gi"

I forced her to come down with me. The hesitancy of her steps were telling me that she wasn't supposed to come down but it was too late and I had already brought her in front of everyone. Both of us stood there for a few moments staring at everyone until I saw Beeji glaring at Maanvi. I looked at Maanvi and saw the pain in her eyes; she was trying to tell Beeji something but Beeji didn't notice and instead tried to hide what actually happened and instead said,
"Maanvi beta, tum aa gayi. Hum sab tumhe hi dhoondh rahe the. Chalo jaldi se beth jao yahan"

At that point, I thought what I did was right but there was something inside me; a sudden build up of guilt. There was something telling me that I should have brought Maanvi. Anyways, nothing could be done now and I told Maanvi to sit down with all the other girls. To cheer her up a bit, I said;
"Jeevika Bhabi yahan aane lagi hain aur agar unke choori hilaane se tum par koi choori giri to phir tumhaari shaadi bohat jald ho gi. Wah ji Wah, bandariya ki bhi shaadi ho gi."

I hadn't even finished speaking, when I heard Beeji saying,
"Jeevika beti, ruk jao! Viraat peeche hoye ga to phir chooriyan hilaana!"

But it was too late!

Jeevika Bhabi wasn't looking and had already shaken the chooriyan. At first, I thought that nothing happened. But then I heard something fall, something that had a sound to it; kind of like the sound that the chimes in my room made when it was really windy. I looked at Maanvi and saw the 'chooris' that had fallen from Bhabi's wrists.
I felt a lump in my throat; I realised why I was feeling that guilt of brining Maanvi down. I realised why I felt as if something bad/wrong was going to happen but why did I deny that?
I just stared into her eyes, the lights were reflecting off her eyes and I could see my reflection in them. I could see her worried; I wanted to hug her in front of everyone. I wanted to tell her that everything that had happened wasn't wrong; I wanted to accept my love for her. I thought this was the best time to do so because all this had happened and this was the only way to stop all the aunties gossiping amongst themselves but before I could do so, she pushed me a little back and went away crying. I didn't understand why she was crying. At first I wanted to go after her but then everyone would gossip even more. So I decided not to.

There was a few minutes silence and then Beeji got up and went after Maanvi. I just kept my position from when Maanvi pushed me back a little. I couldn't believe that so much had happened just because of my one mistake. I couldn't see Maanvi in tears so I got up and went. Ma had even asked me where I was going but I didn't have the time to answer anyone's questions; I just had to see Maanvi. It wasn't her fault, it was mine; I had forced her to come down.

I reached the room in which Maanvi and Jeevika Bhabi were staying for the past week and was about to enter when I heard Beeji shouting. I would have gone in but I didn't want Beeji to think that there was something going on between us and what had happened was true. And plus, I didn't even know if Maanvi felt the same way for me. I was lost in my own thoughts but suddenly came out of my imagination when I heard Beeji saying;
"Mein ne kaha than a tumse ke mat aana, tum jab bhi aati ho to koi na koi bikhera zaroor khara kar deti hun. Shukar hai Bhagwan ka ke wahan Suwamini Ji nahin thi. Agar woh hoti to unko kehna bhi nahin parta aur humaari Jeevika ki poori zindagi bikhar jaati. Tumhe pata hai na ye kitna ahem waqt hai usske liye aur phir tum aayi? Mere kehne ke bawajood, tum aayi? Tumse mujhyy ye umeed nahin thi!"

"Laikin Beeji, mein nahin aana chahti thi; woh Viraat mujhe zabardasti le gaya tha"

Maanvi tried to defend herself but Beeji didn't listen to her.
"Haan, ab tum ronyy waali surat le ke khari thi wahan. Apne kamre mein nahin aa sakti thi kya? Seerioyn mein ussne tumhe dekh liya to phir kya karta woh? Le ke hi jaana tha na?"

What the hell? What was Beeji saying? How could... Gosh. Because of Suwamini Bua? The person who always has a reason to ruin someone's life just because she doesn't like them!
I wanted to go in straightaway to ask Beeji as to why she had made such a decision and that only because of 'SUWAMINI BUA'?
I would have gone in but then I also remembered that this was what Maanvi tried to hide from me so I hesitated a little and went in after a few minutes. I didn't want Maanvi to find out that I knew everything.
I could help resist the amount of pain in her eyes. The angel, who always brought happiness in everyone else's eyes, had tears in hers today.
'Sorry Maanvi but I can't keep my lips sealed today; not at the point where you're getting scolded because of me.' I thought to myself.

"Beeji, Beeji jo kuch bhi neeche hua aaj usske liye aap Maanvi ko na daantiye. Iss mein usski koi galti nahin hai. Woh to balke mujhyy rok rahi thi aur keh rahi thi ke nahin jaana ussne sab ke paas. Laikin mein ne hi use majboor kar diya. Mein hi le ke aaya tha use. To agar aapne daantna hai, to mujhyy daantiye Maanvi ko nahin" I said. I said this in such a fast pace that I didn't even know what I had said.

Beeji didn't say anything, instead she just went.
And even after Beeji had gone, Maanvi didn't stop crying. She cried even more than before. I couldn't see her like this. I tried comforting her but nothing worked. I just gave her one of my smiles, put my hand on her shoulder and said,
"I'm sorry. Please naraaz mat hona. Mera tumhe dukh pohnchaane ka koi maksad nahin tha"

She looked at my hand and then at me. After a few moments she said,
"Its O.K. Chep hi raho ge, mein tumse kabhi naraaz ho sakti hun kya?"

Even after she showed me that she was O.K, I knew that deep down inside her, she was cursing the moment in which she went with me. I wanted to tell her that I could understand her pain because this was the exact way Dada Ji reacted whenever I had disappointed him. However at the same time, I didn't want her to know that I know what has happened and that she wasn't allowed to attend any of the rituals.
I think we were having one of those moments, where we could only see each other and no-one else. We wouldn't even be bothered if it was the end of the world; we'd still be there lost into each other's eyes. Maybe, she started to feel something for me aswell; those feelings were probably building up inside her. Her eyes told me everything. While the moon was glistening and reflecting her inner beauty, it was also the witness of the love we had started to build up for each other.

An old saying; A girl and boy can never only be friends because the feeling of 'love' will always replace something, which was once called friendship.
Did this mean that this 'Was The Start Of Something New?'

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I don't know if this is a short update but when I was typing this up on 'Microsoft Word', believe it or not it was 6 pages; not including any change in size (text size - 11), any text formatting, the introduction or this end part.

I was pretty shocked when I was highlighting it to copy and paste it onto here to edit the text. Oh Well, I'm proud; hope you like this part but you can always give feed back if you want me to improve on anything.

Plus, I'm going to be updating a teaser for the next update in a few days; I'm not promising this time when I'll update the teaser for the next update but might be tomorrow; might not. Anyway, I'll pm you when I do.

Another thing, if you're reading both my updates for the first time, then the first part is on page 1 and if you want to be pm' for future updates, then please hit the 'like' button on this post. Not any others as I'll get confused and may not pm you. Also, if I have forgotten to pm you, then please like this as I have so many and had do check lots of times to see if I was pm' ing the right people

Thanks 😉

Originally posted by: -Talli-

Brillant Update.. I Am So Glad To Know That Viraat Likes Her As Well.. Continue Soon.. And Thank You For The PM..

Originally posted by: muktha_cute

virat pov was very nice
cant c manvi crying
would love 2 c their nok-jhok