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Shehroon Riaz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: thesh
It was great shehroon! U should definitely carry on n pm me 😃

Thank you Thesh.
After all these positive comments, I think I am going to carry on. So happy :)
But just not yet, maybe in 2/3 days
Yes, I'll pm you when I do

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Shehroon Riaz

@shehroon_riaz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Brklyn_gal
Omg u r even a better writer thn I m nd I feel so loserish c u write even better thn me u made it beautiful nd reaallly extra ordinarily (if thts a word) special for me wen u mentioned my name I was bout to cry I swear to go m not even joking here bcoz I don't think I'm such a Gud writer as their r many ppl in this forum better thn me. U made me feel special and p.s it's ur fault tht m blabbering so much. So ppl if any1 has a prob with me writing a whole paragraph which I don't even write on exams wen they r nevessary well blame her cz wen m happy I blabber

By the wayy miss amazing writer thnx for the pm and also I'd like to tell everyone tht this is her first story ever written I think she mentioned it but she didn't mention hw his she wrote. First timers usually get confused in their writing even I did but the way she placed it it was gr8.

Keep writing!!

First of all, Thank You SO Much for this long comment :)

Stop Lying!
You are such a better writer than me. I think everyone on here will agree. This is also true because you have wrote so much till now and they are all great which adds up to more than my only one :)
No I don't have a problem with you blabbering on. You could blabber away if you like😛

Awwh. Thanks so much. I don't get what you mean by 'she didn't mention hw his she wrote'

Again. THANK YOU FOR THIS!!

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Shehroon Riaz

@shehroon_riaz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: luv.u.zindagi
heyy! i dont think you have anything to worry about missy bcuz this was AWESOME!😃
i loved it how everything just flowed so well and i especially LOVED the last part! how the choodi fell on both of them!😳
😳Please do continue and add me to your PM list! GOOD JOB! 👏

Thank You SO Much.
I loved that bit aswell while I was writing it. I first wrote that it only fell on her but then I thought that there should be a twist and Maanvi's feelings. How she got hppy but didn't know why... I want to write Viraat's side now but not yet in a few days
And, yes sure, I'll pm you when I do

And thanks again 😳

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Shehroon Riaz

@shehroon_riaz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: amee1
love ur work please PM me, i would love to read more

Thank You :)
Yeh I'll pm you as soon as I finish updating

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Shehroon Riaz

@shehroon_riaz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: --Preeti--
Omg that was just amazing 😃 Plz pm me and update soon 😊

Thank You :)
Yeh I'll pm you as soon as I update

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tina_1234

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

its really nyc...plz pm me whn ya updt...loved it

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Shehroon Riaz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: luvzindagi
It was really nice...Plz continue soon & PM me when u update😊

Aww. Thanks :)
Yeh, I'll pm you when I update 😊

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Shehroon Riaz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: AR_fan1
This is amazing sweety!!!! it doesn't even seem like it's your first time writing... It's really really good...keep writing :)

And plzz do add me to the PM list...Would love to read more or a continuation of this from you...

Ashna 😊

Really?
Seeing as I also wrote this at like 12:30am.

But Thanks anyway :)
Yes, I will add you to the pm list :)

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Shehroon Riaz

@shehroon_riaz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: shiningstarz
wowie!!! u write soo damn well mahn!!!
luvd the way u portrayd mannu's feelings!! nd the best part ws wen the'kaliren' fell on both of thm!!!!😆

do keep writing!!!

oh ya, nd just cuz u askd earliaer, those choori's which the bride drops on all the unmarried gals and guys are called KALIREN!! though evn i col it golden thingys onli😛 just said cuz u askd rite ki, wt are they colled!!

bt well written!!!

Yes. I also think that was the best bit.
Maybe in my next update, I will write what happened after this because I didn't really want to carry this on as I wanted to leave it at that like a cliffhanger maybe. Most updates which I have read have done that, so I just wanted this to be kind of like them.
I'll also write Viraat's side of this and his feelings. So it'll take a little bit longer and might be a late update.

Anyways thanks for telling me that, I'll use it in the next one even though it'll sound wierd. But I'll see.
Thanks anyway for the feedback and for what they are called :)

Edited by shehroon_riaz - 13 years ago