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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 13 years ago

#751

Contd...

On the way to the water fall...😛

Daksh; tuhme na.bilkul ussi ki tarah pose karna padega photo ke liye..

Naina; Kis ki tarah??😲 daksh..tumhara tho koi fav heroine nahi haina ..

Daksh; kisne kaha... nahi hain.😆

Naina;(stops for one min) kya? lekin tumne mujhe kabhi bataya nahi

Daksh; tumne kabhi poocha nahi..anyways ab batata hoon(holds her and continues to walk)..ek hain..jo bahut khoobsurat hain.😛.uski aankhen.😍.uski baatein.😉.uski har ek ada..main kya kahu? aur uska smile us par tho main itna fida hoon ki...aur woh dance bhi bahut acha karti hain..aur...woh ..😉

Naina feeling jealous...

Naina;(cuts in between) bas bas..mujhe aur nahi jaan na hain uske baare main...

Daksh lekin kyu? abhi khatam nahi hua naina..tumhe pata hain woh..😆

Naina; daksh maine kahana mujhe nahi sunna hain ,..ek aur baat main uski tarah pose nahi karnewaali..bas..(takes off his hand and walks forward)

Daksh follows her and walking besides her; kya hua?..and not fair.maine tumhare liye itne saare poses diya aur tum...cheater...😆

Naina; stops; tumhe jo chaho samjho aur jo chaho bulavo..lekin main ..mujhe nahi cahaiye koi photos...after few seconds; waise kaun hain woh?😲

Daksh is about to say something..

Naina; hogi koi kareena.pyiyanka..katrina..mujhe kya? jo bhi hain bilkul achi nahi hain..mujhe pasand nahi hain..😡😡

Daksh; ( smiles within himself)but acts as if in(;lil gussa) dekho naina .us ke baare aise mat kaho..mujhe acha nahi lagta..😆

Naina;( gussa) acha..teek hain phir ..suno..woh bahut bhuri hain bikul achi nahi hain aur..aur..bahut bhuri hain bas...😡😡

Daksh; uska naam tho suno..😉

Naina closing her ears; nahi sun na hain mujhe..😡

Daksh; removes her hands and says;Teek hain mat suno..lekin uss ladki se milto lo..before she could react he holds her hands and takes her near to still water in lake..😛.

http://www.shutterstock.com/pic-5653786/stock-photo-young-happy-couple-on-coast-near-water.html

Daksh; tho milo mrs...

Naia; looking around; kaha hain? yaha tho koi nahi..😲😲

Daksh points towards her image in water and says; naina. patwardan...mere sabse fav...😛😛

Naina is like speechless for few min..uska poora gussa gayab ..looks at him..😊

Daksh; holds her hand and says; naina tum jaan ti hona meri zinadgi tumhare alava na kabhi koi ladki thi na rahegi..meri zindagi ki heroine tho tum ho..

Tears roll down naina's eyes...😭

Daksh; arey ..ek aur baat kehna bhool gaya.(wipes her tears).woh roti bhi bahut achi hain.😆.naina hits him aur maarti bhi hain😆.,.aur(.looks into her eyes)..🤗bahut pyar karti hain mujhse..kyu?

Naina hugs him; haan bahut pyar karti hain tumse..bhaut jyada..I love u daksh..❤️

http://veryjosie.blogspot.com/2010/05/to-hug-or-not-to-hug.html

Daksh; luv u too .(.come out of hug)...waise naina tum itni bhi bhuri nahi ho..jitna tum sochti ho.😆😆.😆( gives a smile looking at her)...

Naina; pata hain..(lil attitude)..😉

Both exchange few smiles and go near water fall

Contd...

Edited by lucky.m - 13 years ago

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DakshnaFan

@DakshnaFan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#752

Awesome just simply awesome 😊 Lucky ... Yaar loved it 👏 How cute is dakshu 😊 The water reflection idea loved it yaar 😉 thank u thank u dear 🤗 🤗 🤗 loved each and every dialogue 👏 👏 a chintu hug for this one dear...🤗 🤗 🤗

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#753

Originally posted by: DakshnaFan
Awesome just simply awesome 😊 Lucky ... Yaar loved it 👏 How cute is dakshu 😊 The water reflection idea loved it yaar 😉 thank u thank u dear 🤗 🤗 🤗 loved each and every dialogue 👏 👏 a chintu hug for this one dear...🤗 🤗 🤗

ditto ditto... cho cho chweet...dakshu ki heroine, Mrs.Naina Patwardhan😍... nd "tum utni bhi buri nahi ho jitna tumhe lagta hai"😆😆😆... lucky thnku darlin itne cutie cute scene ke liye🤗🤗🤗...chintu hugs frm me 2🤗🤗🤗

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#754

hey guys🤗🤗here's wat comes afte d Pasta deal😛...1st instalment, btw😉

After "the deep secret of pasta" 😉

Evening...

Ghar ka kam nipta liya dono ne, nd r locking up the place. Naina s all but bouncing in her place, kid-on-a-carnival mode, and Dakshu is enjoying it...

N: Daksh tumne bataya nahi kaun si lake...

D: (smiles) Lake hai utna tho pata hai na...

N: Daksh pl-(he puts up a hand, traffic-cop style, cutting her off)

D: Naina tum kuch bhi kaho, (pleads) pls tum pls mat kaho...

She starts laughing.

N: Acha, clues tho de sakte ho na...

He gives her a what-did-i-say-now look,brows raised, and she promptly shuts up.

N: Theek hai. (pouts) KP.

He opens the door for her; she gets in, full-pout mode. He leans down, smiling, hands on either side of the door. "Ek clue."

N: (face upturned, smiling) Kya hai?

D: Ham na, ek lambi si drive pe ja rahe hai Tongue (he gets a frown from for that, and he smiles again) Andheri tak.

She's still frowning, cos she doesn kno mumbai like d back of her hand yet. Andheri me wat lake🤔?

He closes the door softly, goes to his side and gets in.

"KP" she says, looking out the window when he starts the car.

He turns to look at her. "Hmm...?"

"KP ho tum," hits him playfully. "KP, KP, KP."

D: Arey...itna mat maro KP ko...

She stops, smiles,"Kyu? Mera KP hai. tumhe kya?"

D: Bas, itna mara tumne bechare ko, tho Tongue ...

N: KP ko lagi...?

He nods, smiling. "Par theek hai, itne pyaar se mara hai tho...ab tumhara KP hai, jo chahe kar lo..."

She releases her seat belt, takes his face in both her hands.

N: (softly) Utna bhi nahi marungi me... Pata hai kyu?

D: Kyu?

N: (touches her lips to his) Kyunki me apne KP se bahot pyaar karti hu...bahot, bahot (one on each cheek) bahot zyada...aur mera KP itna cute hai ki-(stops,cute-pinkish😳)

D: hmm...? age bolo...

N: (recovers, cheeky smile) nahi. tumne jo clue diya, uske liye itna kaafi hai Tongue ...

D: Not fair Naina...

N: Me bhi wahi keh rahi hu. Not fair😆.

D: (smiles) theek hai. acha tactic hai par me aur clues nahi dunga...ab chale...?

She nods, nd off they go...

... contd ...

Edited by sweetaish - 13 years ago

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 13 years ago

#755

@ aish..

Wah wah..kya scene hain.👏.Naina surely knows all the tricks..lekin hamara dakshu kuch kam hain kya?.😆..loved dakshna in this FF.🤗.lil more thaN usual...awesome FF once again.bud..thank u😛

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#756

lucky darlin🤗thnku thnku thnku🤗🤗🤗...nd dakshna tho r sooo made for each othr😍 ab wo melting tactics ho ya phir😆... rest comin up... dekhte hai kaun melt hota hai😛

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#757

hey guys🤗🤗... so dakshna wer on d road last time na😛... lo dey've finali reachd their destination😊...

❤️ trip to the lake ❤️

They reach the lake...there is a waterfront walkway on one side of the lake, a garden/park deal, and very few boats in the water...

They amble along the walkway some, hand in hand, talking bout everything and nothing, thoda sa leg pulling, and stealing little smiles...

http://ak.picdn.net/shutterstock/videos/910375/preview/stock-footage-couple-having-joined-hands-stands-on-ship-moving-in-sea-during-sunset.jpg

After sometime they sit down, gazing out at the water, Naina has her head on his shoulder.

He puts an arm around her, draws her closer.

Naina is looking wistfully at the boats out there, and turns to him. "Daksh..."

D: hmm...

N: wo...ham boating pe-

He turns to her suddenly. "Pata hai Naina, is lake pe fishing allowed hai, boating bhi, par swimming nai."

N: Kyu...?

D: Wo kya hai ki lake me na, magarmach hai kafi sare.

N: (mildly shocked) Kya?

D: ha. Aur iske ek side me, matlab wo wali side me(points to the far end) national park hai. Yaha neighborhood me cheethe bhi nikale hai ek/do bar...(smiles to himself, turns to her again). Acha tum...kya keh rahi thi...boating...?

She starts saying No,looks dwn @ their joined hands,den smils up @ him.."haan..."

d:tho...(Dubiously) chale...?

she smils some more and nods,absolut trust in her eys,nd not one ounce f fear or doubt...

he laces his fingers with hrs,lifts their joind hands to his lips..gets up,helps her up 2 and they start walkin 2 d dock..

but they don stop there..he takes a turn,leads her out f d park..

n:daksh...?

he just smiles,tucks her hand thru his and walks her out d park..

they get in the car,he goes for a u-turn..

dey stop @ d lights.

n:daksh...

d:bolo.

n:waha sach me crocodiles the..?

d:(Quick smil)haan,kuch 60/70...

n:really.

d:(laughs)mazaq nahi tha. seriously.

n:aur cheethe?

d:ha, rare cases the. roz thodi na nikalte hai national park se...

n:tho phir ham-

They get a green light, he turns the car.

d:ye batao lake kaisa tha...

n:bahot khoobsurat tha.

d:(flashes her another smile)Tho yaha tak tumhe le aya me, ek/do crocodiles ya cheetho ke liye tumhe itna acha nazara miss out karne deta?

n:(smiles)acha baba theek hai. age ka plan?

d:boating?

n:par lake tho...

d:wait karo meri jaan...

They turn to another road, he parks the car."Ab chalo."

They've reached andr park...natural lake nahi, lekin landscaped park...

http://www.flickr.com/photos/dinesh_valke/357133040/

They head straight for the boating deck...

So they are somewer in the park now, boat still, watching the orange hued sky...

n: daksh...

d:(he's watching her 2, beech me😛) bolo...

n: me iss dhalte hue suraj ki bahot badi fan hu...

d:(looks at the sky now)mm-hmm.

n: kitni khoobsurat hai na shyaam... aur asmaan me itne sare hues aur colors... momma ke palette jaise. me jab choti thi tho dekhti rehti thi momma ko paint karte hue... ye bhi aise hi lagta hai... man karta hai yu hi baithi rahu...dekhte rahu...

d:(sounding half-lost)ha, mera bhi man karta hai dekhte rehne ko...

n:(she turns to him, takes his hand) tum kiski bat kar rahe ho...(but the answr s der in his eyes, nd she starts to go cute-pink under his stare😳)

d:meri Naina ke naina😍... bahot khoobsurat hai(smiles)...

Someone gets their boat near Dakshna's, and they have to move it from there...(kebab me haddi, i kno😆)... They look around, and suddenly there seem to be too many peopl, too many boats around...as if the park suddenly filled up while they wer in their own private little bubble...

... contd ...

Edited by sweetaish - 13 years ago

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Neethu

@ntsindia

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#758

here is an FF for next day. simple one.. hey this is not going to happen for sure, but just for a think...

in the precap Rohini is taunting Naina and naina tries to show a bold face rite? So FF goes like this..

Dakshna reach in room.. they tak a sigh.. Daksh is happy that he touched his nephew... kissed.. Naina is also happy... then they heare Rohini shouts "Naina..!". Naina feels something wrong and she suggest Daksh not to come down... she also does not like he lies rite? ;) she tells she will manage and goes down. In the hall, Rohini tellls as shown in the precap.. she shows the earing and Naina tells it was lost and she was looking for that. otherwise, as i lost its pair, i threw it away... y you search for this type of things in this mid night.. Ayi is in disgust. Nowadays Ayi talks rudly/insults naina rite? Here she tells... "Rohini... aise logo se bat karna accha nahi hai.. " somethig like that and then tells something rude pointing naina. Naina feels hurt but she shows bold face. She goes up.. when she reach out of the sight who r standinf in the hall, she weeps bitterly... tears come out with deep pain... Daksh was standing and witnessifg all these... he sees Naina weeps also.. Naina wipes her tears and set up her face with wide smile. and ready to go to the room. seeing that Daksh goes to room. Reaching room, Daksh is sitting on the bed. Naina tells. "bapre... i thought we are caught... vahini ko meri earing mili hai.. somehow i managed it.." telling this she goes to her sofa... Daksh notices Naina hides the eyes.. he understood she is hiding the pain.. naina lies on the sofa.. Daksh gets up from bed and some near Naina. and sits beside her and places his hand on her shoulder. Naina surprisingly looks at Daksh.. Daksh with soft voice: "Ayi ki batom se bura laga hai na.." Naina gets shocked.. oh Daksh heard everything. Naina gets up without telling.. Daksh continues.. "Khushiyam hote to sabse bandthi ho... par ghum nahi?!!! apne pati se bhi..??" Naina looses control and falls on Daksh's chest... weeps.. Daksh painfully... hugs her tightly.. they stay in each others arms... Daksh strokes her hair gently.. Naina asks: "mere sath hamesha aise kyu hota hai...? kya main itni buri hoo?"

D: nahi naina... tum bilkul bhi buri nahi ho..

N with a childish .. : tum masaq karte hai kya..?

D: nahi naina... sach kahoo to tumse achi ladki ko mein kabhi nahi dekha.. thats y, i am in love with you?!!!

naina smiles.. looks at Daksh's eyes.. intense eye lock,, both start to lost in the world of love.. Daksh gently takes her face in hands and places a warm kiss on her forehead... then on eys.. Naina closes her eyes.. Daksh looks at her lips.. suddently remembers the promise.. he withdraws..

D: Ab tum so javo..

naina lies on the sofa.. Daksh gets up and go to his bed.. but... both cannot sleep.. Daksh looks at naina... she is also not not slept.. he calls

D: Naina, tum idhar avo.. mere sath bed pe so javona..

Naina looks at Daksh.. then she gets up and goes to the bed.. she gets in th blanket and truns towards Daksh and sleeps.. Daksh lies straightly looking at the roof.. after sometimes he turns towards naina and looks lovingly.. tells "meri pagal biwi.. " then he pats her face and corrcts the blankets... in sleep, Naina holds his hand and place her face on it (reme kajrat hospita scene). daksh smiles... slips to sleep