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Posted: 13 years ago
Sweet, simple and cute hain yaar Lucky ๐Ÿ˜‰ Loved the way Daksh starts unbuttoning for sallu's pose... ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

..Naina stops him. (hiding her hubby's hotness woh bhi cute chehre ke peeche)..LOL..

Naina; very funny..bas bas...salman banne ki koi zaroorat nahi woh bhi yaha...ab tumhare aur photos nahi lungi..jaldi buttons rakho..koi dekh lega..aur sochenge ki..

Daksh; ki patni apni pati ki izzat loootne ki koshis kar rahi hain woh bhi public main..

Loved this part...๐Ÿ˜†
Each and every dialogue ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Superb ๐Ÿ‘ aab Daksh kaise pareshan karta hai naina ka something interesting coming up next... ๐Ÿค— thank u thank u lucky for making me smile ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: DakshnaFan

Sweet, simple and cute hain yaar Lucky ๐Ÿ˜‰ Loved the way Daksh starts unbuttoning for sallu's pose... ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

..Naina stops him. (hiding her hubby's hotness woh bhi cute chehre ke peeche)..LOL..

Naina; very funny..bas bas...salman banne ki koi zaroorat nahi woh bhi yaha...ab tumhare aur photos nahi lungi..jaldi buttons rakho..koi dekh lega..aur sochenge ki..

Daksh; ki patni apni pati ki izzat loootne ki koshis kar rahi hain woh bhi public main..

Loved this part...๐Ÿ˜†
Each and every dialogue ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Superb ๐Ÿ‘ aab Daksh kaise pareshan karta hai naina ka something interesting coming up next... ๐Ÿค— thank u thank u lucky for making me smile ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—

ditto ditto yar...loved the whole scn...
@ bold... lucky i simply loved dis part dear๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—... sooo sooo cute๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†... subhe subhe pada yar, u gav me enf smils 2 last d whol day๐Ÿ˜›... thnku thnku thnku sooo much๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—
Edited by sweetaish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
arre.. Lucky.. that was a super cool scene.. ag kya hai.. jaldi likho na..
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey guys๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—... here's d next one... part one ka 1st half hai ye,๐Ÿ˜† lamba ho gaya isliye...don mind๐Ÿ˜›...rest coming up๐Ÿ˜‰
โค๏ธ the deep secret of pasta (part 1)โค๏ธ
So Naina wakes up thoda late, opens her eyes to steal a look at her cutie hubby...but its not daksh in her arms...but his pillow๐Ÿ˜†! she frowns, intending to put him to rights for this- but then her lips curve up in an involuntary smile...for on the fluffy white pillow, a red heart s drawn with a marker, and inside it is written, "i love u" in bold caps...

she sits up straight, taking the pillo with her, wondering where he is, and sees a vase on the nighstand, with a single red rose in it, and a note propped up on it : "sambhal ke. kante hai...:)"

the smile widens, she takes the rose too, kisses it gentlyโค๏ธ; but then there s d clock on the wall again, and its showin 11.15...sets the pillo nd d rose aside, throws the covers hurriedly, scoops up a shirt from the floor; its his, she smiles and puts it on, heads for the washroom...

Naina (shower n al done, decent nowTongue) stops at the doorway, watches him for a moment,a soft smile on her lips.

Dakshu (shirtless๐Ÿ˜†) s cooking in the kitchen, stirring something in the pan.

She comes up behind him, hugs him.

N: I love you, i love you, i love you๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—...

D: turns to smile at her, goes back to stirring. "Pasta banaya isliye?"

N: (laughs) nahi, bas aise hi. Daksh muje uthaya kyu nahi... pata nahi tum kab uthe the, ab tak tho kuch khaya bhi nahi hoga.

D: (smiles, points to a mug) coffee bana li thi๐Ÿ˜›...

N: (disapproving)sirf coffee se thodi na kam chalta hai... sorry,(gives him a quick hug) next time tum nahi uthaoge tho bhi uth jaungi time par. alarm shayad nahi lagaya tha kal...

D: pls Naina...tumhari alarm... usi ne tho mujhe uthaya aaj... uff. ghanto se baj rahi thi, aur tum... (imitates her๐Ÿ˜›) "Daksh pls, off kar dona aaj mujse 5 ko uthna nahi hoga"...

N: (mildly shocked) 5...? tum... tum kab uthe the?
D: (laughs) tensn mat lo. alarm 8 ke liye reset kar di thi๐Ÿ˜† par 8 ko bhi kisi ko bahot neend aa rahi thi,pata nai kyu?๐Ÿ˜›
Kyu, indeed๐Ÿ˜†... Of course she remembers (guesses nyone๐Ÿ˜›)
N: (cute pink๐Ÿ˜ณ) bas karo na KP... aur ab sham ko kaise bahar jayenge...itna kam bhi pada hai ghar ka...aur me itni late ho gayi...

D: lo ab brkfast ban gaya, tumhara adha tensn khatmTongue. baki tumhare list me jo bhi hai, split kar denge kyu.

N: (kisses him) thank you. Vaise tum...itni der kya kar rahe the...

D: wo...Naina me bhi... phir se so gaya tha๐Ÿ˜†...

N: acha hai, tum bhi tho nahi soye the kal theek se๐Ÿ˜›...par tum muje waha chod ke gaye...(hits him) pillow ke sath.

D: nahi, wo mera dil tha (goes to drain the pasta)...

N: acha...? wahi bed pe pada hai...jake le aye?

D: tumhe aaj bahar nahi jana hai kya...(sets the dish down)

N: (leans back against the counter) maine aisa kab kaha...

D: vapis tum muje waha le jaogi to na ghar ka kam hoga na hum bahar jayenge aaj...

N: (blushesEmbarrassed) acha theek hai...jao nahake aao, me khana laga dungi tab tak...(checks the jug) coffee khatm...?

D: (smiles) ha. banado thoda aur.

She turns to the stove.

Yep, he hugs her from the back, dusts sml kisses up her shoulder, neck and below the ear...

N: daksh...tumne hi tho kaha tha-

D: (sighs) pata hai. ja raha hu.. (toys with a strand of her damp hair) Par tum kabhi itni pyari lagti ho ki...(drops one more on her cheek)

N: (meltingEmbarrassed) daksh...

Lets her go with another long sigh. "ha baba. ja raha hu."

She turns, he's still at the door, mixed feelings. Another blush creeps up her cheeks...she turns back to the stove and starts making coffee, strawberry red now but smiling...

... contd ...

Edited by sweetaish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
halo again๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—... pasta ka baki wala part๐Ÿ˜‰ :
โค๏ธ the deep secret of Pasta (2) โค๏ธ

Dining room...

Dakshu aa gaya afte shwr, Naina s setting the tabl for brkfast,..mera matlab hai lunch๐Ÿ˜›...nahi, brunch๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...

D: tum baitho, baki me lata hu...

N: nahi. (makes him sit down) khana to tum ne banaya, itna to me kar sakti hu. coffee le ati hu me...(goes inside)

He lifts the lid of the dish, and is surprised. "Naina...?" he calls out.

N: Aa rahi hu Daksh...

(sets coffee mugs on the table,smiles) " Kya hua?"

D: Ye...(points to pasta, dubious) tumne...?

N: (shakes her head) ap hi ki banayi hui hai vakil saheb...(serves him, comes to stand behind him) Hamne kuch nahi kiya aaj...

D: Par ye...(baby face) meri dish nahi lag rahi hai...

N: (hands on his shoulders, leans in to kiss him on the cheek) Nahi, hamari dish hai. tumne banayi, mene garnish kar di. Thoda sa sauce bhi...Ban gayi dish...(takes up a spoon, feeds him some)

He takes her hand, makes her sit next to him and feeds her a spoonful himself.

D: (thoughtful) pata hai Naina...

N: (smiles) nahi๐Ÿ˜†...

D: (smiles back) Meri life na, ye pasta jaisi hai...

N: (feeds him another spoon) oh. vakil saheb, pasta me bhi philosophy...

D: (swallows) Nahi, dekho mene pasta tho banaya tha, par wo plain tha...

She nods, feeds him again. He takes the spoon back from her.

D: Phir tum ayi...(feeds her) Aur tumne pata nahi kya jadu kiya, ki sab badal gaya. Color, flavor, sab...

Naina is dumbstruck for a moment, realises its her turn, takes the spoon from him.

N: (softly) PAr texture nahi badla... Daksh...me hamesha tumse bina pooche sab-

He force-feeds her a big mouthful. "chup. Bahot bolti ho tum kabhi kabhi..." smiles tenderly at her. "kitni bar samjhau tumhe..."

N: (takes the spoon back, smiles slowly) Ek bar aur...?

D: (smiles back)Tho ham pasta ki bat kar rahe the right๐Ÿ˜›. Tumne garnish nahi kiya hota, tho wo bas wahi plain pasta rehta. tumhare bina adhoora rehta. (takes her free hand, kisses it, smiles into her eyes ) You complete meโค๏ธ...

Now she is undone, and there are tears in her eyes...

D: (worried) Naina...tum...maine aisa kya keh diya ki-

She gets up, he gets up too.

she takes his face in her hands,presses her lips to his once. "I love you, daksh..."

D: (hugs her back) I love you too...

(pulls back afte some time) "Acha brkfast, lunch ho gaya, kaho tumhare list me age kya hai...? Jaldi kaho, sham ko meri date hai meri pyari biwi ke sath..."

She smiles too, and starts giving him the list...

... contd ...
Edited by sweetaish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Tho ham pasta ki bat kar rahe the right๐Ÿ˜›. Tumne garnish nahi kiya hota, tho wo bas wahi plain pasta rehta. tumhare bina adhoora rehta. (takes her free hand, kisses it, smiles into her eyes ) You complete meโค๏ธ


@ bold Awww.I love this line...๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

Wow.. deep secret pf pasta hmm..yummy FF..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...Loved it each and every small gesture and every dialogue of dakshna...๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค— and dakshu cokking pasta for naina..oh...so sweet of him...๐Ÿ˜ณ

Gr8 job and as usual u rocked๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ bud..thanks for this pasta treat๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh.. sweetaish.. umha.. it was super.. !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
lucky...thnku darlin๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—... *low bow*๐Ÿ˜›...
ps : bold wala, mera bhi fav part hai๐Ÿ˜ณ
Edited by sweetaish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
neetu di...thnku thnku thnku๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 13 years ago
Cute Cute Cute Super cute Aish ๐Ÿ˜‰ Daksh and his pasta philosophy ๐Ÿ˜Š Loved it till infinity ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Loved each and dialogue of Dakshna each and every ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค— expressions, gestures too sweet๐Ÿ˜›... Chalo Daksh ka world map roti bhi hua in Lucky ke FF main aur pasta bhi in ur FF ๐Ÿ˜Š... how sweet of him ๐Ÿ˜‰ Thank u Thank u ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—

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