SS: Dear Diary... Part 14 Upd 11/30 Pg 66

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pushpi

@pushpi

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#411

Really feel like reading an update of yours right now

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anushka01

@anushka01

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#412

Still breathing high and low ... i am sure she wont give in so easily ...she will try walking away from him ... she is not there yet ...geet needs more of such moments :) ...to finally fall for her desire for him ...

wow !!! once again ...its so dreamy to read ur stories ...one can shift to another world :) ...

keep writing :)

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

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Posted: 13 years ago

#413

now its Geet turn to make a move

but i liked the fact he declared his love for her

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febinyusuff

@febinyusuff

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Posted: 13 years ago

#414

Read all the 12 parts in one go.. Amazing updates...

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568124

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Posted: 13 years ago

#415

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568124

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Posted: 13 years ago

#416

I owe responses back to everyone, but I have read every one of them and I THANK each of you who have taken up their valuable time, to let me know your thoughts on the update(s).

Some have stuck around passionately and dispassionately...and you folks know who you are.
THANK YOU for that.

'Dear Diary...' is coming to an end with just the last update, remaining in the series. And so now is the time, to voice your concerns and let me know your feedback for the next one (I'm pulling back on Paheli for now as my mind isn't connecting well to the story line. Noli Me Tangere will be next...whenever that is) I'm all ears.

@ Escapist (Fatima) and Onir: Yes you make sense (Responding as you had a question).

@ Nirvana: I will get to your question tomorrow morning. Gotta crash now.

Hasini

Note on Noli Me Tangere: Please don't expect me to conform to the trademarks of Maan and Geet's characters as portrayed everywhere else :)

Edited by 6thElement - 13 years ago

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Escapist

@Escapist

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#417

I have a good feeling about it...you know why ?? Home is where the heart is!

And she is already in his heart...where more to go :)

Loved the way you described Maan's restlessness and also Geet's stubbornness in this one...and after all its "he" whose her whole world and no one else..not even her Dear Diary !

Waiting for the last part patiently !!!

Cheers,

Fatima

Edited by Escapist - 13 years ago

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#418

what make her say those words to him?

everything fine back at HP?

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Nishttha Nath

@EimenEnchanted

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#419

you always surprise me ..

and that's what i love about your writing 😳

will be waiting for the last update 😭

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Soapoperasrfun

@Soapoperasrfun

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#420

Well, I feel like the next part will continue with her telling him that she cannot go home with him because she is already home, waiting for him. *Fingers Crossed*

She has realized now that she too likes him, and with your confession that the next part will be the last one, I almost feel certain that she has done something already to prove her love for him and her acceptance of their relationship. I so hope to be correct.

Since you have left us hanging literally with a sword on our heads, I hope you finish the last update really soon. 😳