SS: Dear Diary... Part 14 Upd 11/30 Pg 66

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Posted: 13 years ago

#431

awesome updt
just luvd it
omg gurvinder ditched channi
gud slap channi! he deserved dat
so geet truthfully played d role of a daughter sister & maan too as BIL & SonIL
just they r hesitant in parts of husband wife & soulmate lovers
omg geet denied to cum wid maan while maan just bowed down his anger
cont soon
so its ending omg!
but thoroughly enjoyed it till now & must say i just luv d way u xplain abt d characters & their inner feelings & their dilemmas
simply marvellous!

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krati

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Posted: 13 years ago

#432

nw y did she deny him?

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Posted: 13 years ago

#433

Call me strange, but I was mad at Maan after reading this update. How could he leave her and be so aloof?

You can't force feelings and actions on people and being angry only makes a confused person even more wary of you. This sort of reminded me of the serial when Geet and Maan went on their first date and she said that she does not know whether she has a right to so much happiness. Wish our lawyer friend would have shown a little more patience. I know he has been patient for weeks now but some things can't be hurried and this is not some project deadline it is their whole life.

Thanks for the update Hasini. On the previous part, I loved that he got her the jeans. So sweet.

Edited by ucompleteme - 13 years ago

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Hima

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Posted: 13 years ago

#434

Superb part Hasini.
Maan did everything as a dutiful damad.
Poor Geet was so desperate and restless.
Maan gave her a taste of her own medicine avoiding her at all times and staying dumb.
Looks like Geet realized her priorities now that she has seen him drifting away.
Maan's one last attempt to reach out to Geet was beautiful.
He wanted her as desperately as she wanted him .
Wonder what that words of Geet meant.
Hope she is already home.
Waiting for the next part.

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Hima

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Posted: 13 years ago

#435

Originally posted by: 6thElement

'Dear Diary...' is coming to an end with just the last update, remaining in the series. And so now is the time, to voice your concerns and let me know your feedback for the next one (I'm pulling back on Paheli for now as my mind isn't connecting well to the story line. Noli Me Tangere will be next...whenever that is) I'm all ears.

Only one more part
But i am happy that you are starting another one 😃
Noli Me Tangere sounds very interesting
Your version of M and G however they are are always adorable.
Hope you start it as soon as dear dairy is done.

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rsingh0103

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Posted: 13 years ago

#436

Nice part but did she say no!

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LuvScooby

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Posted: 13 years ago

#437

Why does she had to say no to him, can't wait to find out...I loved how Maan's conscious avoidance of Geet gave her glimpse of what he would have felt like in the initial days of their marriage.

I'm sure you have reasons for ending this, but I wish that you can give few more parts b/c distance b/w Maaneet can't be over this fast.

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Antares

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Posted: 13 years ago

#438

Great update! I'm glad the family welcomed the girls with open arms. Geet realized what Maan means to her. She declined going home with him... I feel her refusal is not what it seems. Hoping to read the last part real soon.

Noli Me Tangere... is it a new SS/FF you gonna write once this is complete? Hope to know more about it and read it soon.

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