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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Pari-Gupta

awesome update
loved it
the twins are so cute and already found their soulmates
continue soon
thanks for the PM

thanks a lot...will update soon...
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Originally posted by: sweetgiggles

by the way it ws an awesome update


thanks a lot..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sivaranjani

Wonderful wonderful update Peehu!! thanks a lot

I loved it.. It was so intense and tensed update!! So perfect!! glad u liked it
Metz-Abhay fight and Jeh-Dipu fight was fantastic.. Hope same happens with show.. that is doubtful...😆

Kids.. Aww.. lovely.. especially the language.. Alina is such a sweet heart, went without anyone's help to break spell.. Aliya as usual the saviour!!

Thanks for such a nice update and the PM as well..
Hope everything goes well with superiors.. lets see...

Update soon!! i will

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Eowyn

Wow Peehu!

What a superb end to the two she devils.. thanks a lot
Both deserved the end I must say...
Ahaan and Palak are awesome...glad u liked it
And I think they have found their partners as well hope so...😆

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CHAPTER 28

24 hours were about to be over. piya would be up anytime. Abhay was still sitting near piya holding her hand and staring at her. Chand and haseena were out for hunting. Jeh had left as he had a meeting with his clan. Swati was was out to have some time alone.On the other hand, the little raichands had held whole raichand mansion on their head. But everyone were enjoying it. New room was being prepared for ahaan and palak. Sid, panchi, aliya and arjun were busy following orders of little raichands or actually giving them orders.

Ahaan and palak were looking at their family and laughing. Panchi and sid were bickering. Aliya and arjun were trying to calm them down.

Sid was shouting: panchi..they will have different rooms

Panchi was also screaming: they are too small to have different rooms

Sid rolled his eyes and replied: they are raichands, they should have their own privacy

Panchi mocked in anger: what is with u raichands? privacy..my foot. They will share room until they are big enough

Ahaan finally interrupted: we ale big enough

Sid and panchi both: no way!! U both stay out of this

Palak rolled her eyes and replied: but ashk ush alsho what we want

Aliya was tired of this. This was going on since one hour. Finally she interrupted: why don't u let abhay and piya decide

Panchi: I know piya very well, they will share room. I know her answer

Arjun: what if they want to keep both of them with them

Sid burst into laughter. Everyone seemed confused as if he has lost his brain suddenly. Aliya queried: why are you laughing? Did u lose mental balance while fighting with panchi.

Panchi gave aliya dagger looks and aliya just winked at her. Sid replied: do you really think they keep these brats with them at night? What about their privacy and their mak..

Before sid could complete everyone screamed together: sid..just shut up

Sid: what?

Aliya: mind your tongue before talking..some one else are also present here

They all looked at ahaan and palak who stared at each other. Palak was irritated finally. She spoke up: enoulf all..i and ahaan will shale room. U all ale wolst than kids.

Sid: speak for you lil one

Ahaan: sid ale you intelested in seeing our powers? We still can make you oul calliage

Sid: what powers?

Palak: we don't show off like panchi maashi...u will come to know shoon

Panchi frowned: what? I never show off

Ahaan and palak: whatevel

Panchi smiled and said: so..which colour for room

Arjun spoke up first: purple

Aliya looked at arjun with disgusting face and said: yuck arjun! These kids will run away

Sid: yellow

Panchi: that is horrible

Ahaan: do you all mind ashk us?

Aliya looked at ahaan and palak. she asked: what colour do you want?

Ahaan: blue

Palak: pink

Ahaan and palak both said at same time and then looked at each other while others burst into laughing. Aliya said: u both are so typical..blue and pink! You are sharing room

ahaan: palak wont mind..its blue

palak: who said I wont mind? no its pink

ahaan: you can only mind if you have blains

palak: look who is talking

ahaan: blue

palak: pink

ahaan: blue

palak: pink

ahaan: blue

palak: pink

everyone were witnessing this fight. Sid whispered to aliya: abhay and piya are really gonna have tough time. Their love sessions are surely going to came to halt for now

palak: we heard that sid

arjun finally spoke up: decide one colour

ahaan and palak looked at each other giving dagger looks. They both looked at others who were awaiting their answer. Finally ahaan and palak both spoke together: white

panchi sighed and said: fine then..its white

[abhiya's room]

24 hours were over. abhay was waiting for piya to open her eyes. Alina was anxious. She didn't knew what piya will feel and was she successful. Abhay felt that piya moved her palm. Piya was coming to her senses. Her body starting showing reflexes. She slowly opened her eyes. First thing she saw was abhay. She smiled at him. But piya was now feeling different. She was no longer in pain. She got a grip on herself and stood up. She looked around. Everything was visible more clearly. She could see dust particles. She was hearing sounds which she could have never heard.

Piya came closer to abhay and hugged him tightly, the moment she hugged, she felt a jolt running through her spine. Abhay kissed her forehead and again hugged her. It was passionate that they didn't feel like leaving each other. They wanted to savour each and every moment of it.

Alina was smiling. She interrupted: piya..how are you feeling now? I mean are you fine?

Piya looked at alina. She looked so different through her vampire eyes. She replied: I am fine alina..i am feeling perfect

Suddenly she realized about her kids and asked: abhay, ahaan and palak? where are they?

Abhay smiled and said: they are fine..just messing around with sid

Piya: lets go..i want to meet them

Abhay: first you need to hunt. U must be thirsty. Ahaan and palak are not running anywhere.

Piya rolled her eyes and replied: I am not thirsty. i don't want to have anything.

Abhay and alina were shocked. They looked at each other. Alina asked: what do you mean not thirsty? you don't want to have blood?

Piya: no..I am not thirsty

Abhay: how is that possible? You are a new born? U must be longing for blood

Piya: how do I know?

Alina kept thinking for sometime. Suddenly she got struck with something. She said: I think I know the reason

Abhay looked at alina confused. He shrugged his shoulders. Alina said: you know I am a hybrid. But I never drink blood. I don't hunt. I don't feel thirsty. i think during all these while when I was helping piya, some of my powers got transferred to her. It was not purposely..but it happened. Why and how..i don't know

Abhay looked amazed and piya was still looking at both of them. Abhay spoke: still doesnt change anything. U are hunting piya..now

Abhay dragged piya out in the forest for hunting. Piya kept cursing abhay for not letting her meet her kids. Abhay was enjoying it

Piya was walking in forest with abhay. She said: not fair with what you did..i wanted to meet them

Abhay chuckled and replied: u will never change..always stubborn. So now I will be more stubborn. If you want to meet them..then hunt fast and go

Piya rolled her eyes and said: now what do we do? I don't know how to hunt

Abhay smiled: but I know

Abhay closed his eyes and concentrated. Piya was still sulking. He felt a deer near by. He told piya to do the same and told her that the scent she was smelling was of deer. Piya nodded.

Piya shouted: now what

Abhay: sshhh..u will make our food run away..just follow the trail..it will lead you to deer

Abhay and piya started running in their vampire speed. The deer was also running. Piya was enjoying her new powers. She never thought she would match up with abhay's speed. Abhay in no time jumped on deer and killed it. Piya was startled looking at abhay. Abhay made piya drink the blood. Piya drank quietly. Though she wasn't thirsty but the temptation was always there.

Abhay: now..its done..lets go home

Piya looked at abhay and said:no..we will wait..

Abhay: why?

Piya mischieviously smiled and replied: because I want some time alone with you

Abhay: but you were sulking and cursing me because I didn't let you meet ahaan and palak

Piya chuckled and replied: I didn't think of it before..this surely has its advantages

Piya started moving towards abhay. Abhay started walking backward. He knew what was piya upto. He decided to tease her more. He started running and piya was shocked. She was feeling like a villain here who is trying to steal someones virtue. Piya ran behind him. They both crossed the river jumping on the other side. Soon they reached near a hut. It was in the middle of the dense forest where no one dared to come.

Abhay stopped here. Piya also stopped and asked: what were you doing? Running like a manic

Abhay looked at her and pointed at hut: I thought to give you some advantage

Piya looked where abhay pointed. She started laughing. She started walking towards abhay and abhay backwards inside the hut: so where was I abhay?

Abhay chuckled: how do I know?

Abhay and piya were inside the hut now. the hut was small with hay spread all over. piya pushed abhay and fell on him. Piya was waiting for this since long time.

Abhay: piya? What are you upto?

Piya: as if you don't know

Saying this piya pinned him on the floor. She was now strong enough to match up with abhay's powers. She kissed his forehead, eyelids cheeks and then moved towards his lips. She slowly started kissing his lips. First it was gentle but later it became passionate. They kept kissing that way for long time,their hands entwined with each other. Piya slowly unbuttoned few buttons of his shirt and kissed him there. Abhay now rolled such that he was on top of her. Abhay kissed her cheeks and started brushing his lips on her neck. He kept rubbing his nose on her shoulders leaving trail of kisses. Piya felt divine. She was craving for abhay since long time. Piya slowly removed his shirt and abhay helped in removing hers. They kept on rolling and kissing there for long time. They were not tired. With every touch, they craved for more. They were happy with their moment of love.

the hay which was spread all around. Their clothes were on floor and they were under the hay of grass. Suddenly abhay parted away and asked: piya! We should leave. Otherwise this will continue forever.

Piya put her arms around abhay and replied: I don't want to..i love it here

Abhay: then what about ahaan and palak

Piya got up with a jerk and looked at abhay. He was laughing. Piya said: all because of you..i always lose control over myself..lets go

Abhay: piya..you are stealing my lines

Piya: whatever

[raichand house]

Everyone were waiting for abhay and piya. Ahaan and palak were the ones who were most eager. Abhay and piya finally came to the house. The first thing piya did was look for her kids. Her eyes slowly drifted towards two small babies. They were beautiful. She just kept staring at them.

Piya moved towards them and picked up palak first. Abhay who was behind piya picked up ahaan in his arms. Piya cradled palak in her arms and kissed her cheeks: you are beautiful..

Palak: momma..I was waiting fol you sinch long

Piya smiled at her words. This was the first time she had word the word momma: me too princess..

Ahaan: momma..i am elder to hel..u should have taken me

Abhay looked at his son and asked: why? U don't want to be with me

Ahaan rolled his eyes and replied: you ale sho dlamatic dadda'momma ish anytime better than you

Everyone started laughing. Abhay took palak and piya took ahaan. Piya asked: are you happy now? U are so handsome..you look so similar to ur father

Ahaan: I know momma..but palak thinks that I just do show off (too palak) see palak..momma says I am handshome

Palak: don't fly in the sky..i am beautiful..momma said that earlier

Ahaan: obvioushly..to make you happy

Palak: I can shay the same thing to you

Ahaan: u ale leally shtupid..you pinky head girl

Palak: don't folce me..otherwise

Ahaan: what will you do?

Palak stared at ahaan. She closed her eyes and suddenly opened it to look at ahaan. Ahaan felt a jolt of current. He started crying. Everyone were shocked. Piya didn't knew how to react. Piya cradled ahaan in her arms and sang him lullaby. He went off to sleep.

On the other hand, abhay and piya looked at palak. palak was also crying now. Palak said: solly momma..i didn't want to hult him. it just happened

Piya felt sorry. She smiled and said: palak..u are too small. Its ok..

Abhay: palak..u should not use your powers like this until you are in danger or it is needed and you used it on ahaan?

Palak still weeping: solly dadda..I plomish..i will control myself. I didn't mean too. I love him dadda..i didn't want to halm him

Abhay and piya smiled and they together said: good..

Piya: now stop crying..i don't want my princess crying.

Piya cradled palak in her arms and made her sleep peacefully. Everyone came near abhay and piya. Aliya spoke first: its ok bhai..she is small..she doesn't have control over her powers

Abhay: that is what I am worried about the most

Sid: cmon abhay..she is ur daughter..she will learn it soon..by the way..what took you so long? What were you two doing in jungle?

Abhay: hunting

Sid came near him and picked up some hay from his shirt. Aliya picked it from piya's hair. Abhay and piya looked at each other.

Arjun: we can see that

Everyone started laughing. The mood was lightened but still abhay and piya were worried about about their kids.

Edited by peehu24 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely.abhiya romance ws cute.da kids r freaking awesome.guess palak is quite risky.update da nxt part soon.
Edited by TISA07 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely...awesum...amazing...fantastic...fab...superb...totally luved it...great job peehu...i luved d lill kids convo...n d fight b/w sid, palak n ahaan...its so lovely n cute😛...n abhiya r totally romantic...i m blushing while reading that part😳...the convo b/w abhiya n d kids was also very touchy n cute😉...hey wat was that ...wat did palak did...n why ahaan felt a jolt...eagerly waiting to know about palak powers...do continue soon...n thanx 4r d pm...take care😊
Edited by piyali.1228 - 13 years ago
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awww the kids r sho shweet and abhay pia jungle romance was hot and romantic.
Edited by abhayfan_dishu - 13 years ago

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