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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Viji79

I think Shilalipi deserves a wonderful round of applause from all the readers and the writers of this FF as this is her first attempt and that too in a relay writing and she has done a fabulous job and tried to unravel some mysteries and contributed to the progress of the storyline. Shilalipi, you should continue writing dear. Of course dont forget to put a song.


Yes I very mch agree with you!
she did a wodnerful job in writing 
I hope she will start writing serously for Maan and Get and do a fan fic of hr own 
would love to read it๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 12 years ago
OK simi after u me..if u finish jaldi..i have to go to coll kal...hehe
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mchopra

OK simi after u me..if u finish jaldi..i have to go to coll kal...hehe


well Kathie said that she is going to do part 13...after her I will go๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
tum jaao collage par...concentrate kar waha par๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 13:
"Daadimaa, i've got to tell you something." Vicky burst into the room and Daadimaa composed herself.

"Vicky, i dont want to listen to you. You seem to have forgotten that you are a part of this family. I have not seen you in this house evn one day since Dev's marriage with Meera. What is wrong with you? Dont you want to make friends with your Bhabhi? And now, since your elder brother Maan is getting married, you should be at home and helping in the preparations.  But you are least bothered. How can you be so irresponsible?" Daadi chided him.

Vicky felt like his heart was slashed when Daadi spoke about Dev and Meera. His Meera, his love did not even confront him once, before getting married to Dev. He had blamed Geet for framing him with pictures of him and those girls in compromisable positions. It was too late when he came to know that it was actually Arjun behind this. 

The pain was just too much to be forgotten. Anyways, that was not important now. What was important was that he save his family from the evil enemy's clutches.

"Daadimaa, you have got to hear me out. I wanted to talk to you about Geet. Actually..."Just then his cell phone beeped with a message and he saw Arjun's name flashing on his screen. He quickly opened and read the message and what he read made him break into a sweat.

'Vicky, i assume that you heard something that you were not supposed to hear. Do you think me a fool that i will not come to know about you visiting my house and eavesdropping on me? Anyways, now that You know the truth, i'm glad about it. You can help me out. Incase you decide to opt out just let me know. Within the next 5 minutes, your po*nographic pictures with the girls will be out on all the websites including youtube. And the prime time news will have you on its headlines. You would become famous and you would have only me to thank for that. If in any case you dont want to become famous, poison Daadi's mind about Geet and tell Daadi that Maan never had any feelings for Geet. I can trust you to cook up a nice story. After you are done, meet me outside Geet's house. She is alone at home and i want to pay her back for her slap.'

"What is it you had to tell me about Geet?" Daadi's voice broke into his thoughts.
Vicky did not want to chicken out but he had no option. He could not sacrifice his life for Geet and even that matter, his family. They could figure things out for themselves.

"Daadi, i just found out that Geet had herself caused the accident as a last attempt to gain the Khuranas sympathy. Even though you may think otherwise, Maan loves only Sameera and he never had feelings for Geet. Geet just wanted revenge for her aunt's misfortune and also has an eye on our property. 

When you see Maan bhai attracted towards her, it is not the truth. The shocking truth is that Geet does black magic. I know you wouldnt believe me but an employee found black magic stuff under her desk in office.I think it was to trap Maan bhai. I will show it to you later. Of course, i dont know if Meera is  involved or not. I dont think he herself does not know how evil Geet is. She can go upto any extent to achieve her means. It is good that we got rid of her before she could destroy us."

Vicky walked away from there, knowing that from now on he had no chance of salvation. He was doomed forever. His cell phone fell down from his pocket when he went down the stairs, which went totally unnoticed by him.

                                   **********************

Geet was staring blankly at the ceiling of the bed. Her mind was refusing to think anything. She was like in a state of shock since she was discharged from hospital. Maybe Maan was actually playing with her feelings while all the time he wanted to marry Sameera.  But Daadima was a shocker. The way she spoke to Geet made her want to run somewhere far from the place.
Just then the radio started playing a song which was apt to describe her feelings.

(Listen to the song suna suna from krishna cottage:www.youtube.com/watch?v=BRZqaS92luU)

suna suna lamha lamha meree raahe tanha tanha
aakar mujhe tum tham lo, manjil teree dekhe rasta
mud ke jara abb dekh lo, aisa milan phir ho na ho
sab kuchh meraa tum hee toh ho
bapanah pyar hai aaja, teraa intejar hai aaja
o bapanah pyar hai aaja, teraa intejar hai aaja
suna suna lamha lamha, meree raahe tanha tanha

bichhde bhee ham jo kabhee raasto me, toh sang sang rahungee sada
kadmo kee aawaj sun ke chalungee, tumhe dhund lungee sada
bhulee mohabbat kee yeh khushbuye hain, hawaon me phailee huyee
chhu kar mujhe aaj mahsus kar lo, woh yade meree unchhuyee
aisa milan phir ho na ho, sab kuchh meraa tum hee toh ho
bapanah pyar hai aaja, teraa intejar hai aaja
o bapanah pyar hai aaja, teraa intejar hai aaja
suna suna lamha lamha, meree raahe tanha tanha

aa.. aa...
vaado ke dhago me ham tum bandhe hain, jara dor tum tham lo
baaho mai aise pighal jane do mujhko, aise meraa nam lo
mai woh shama hu jo roshan tumhe karke, khud toh pighal jaungee
subah ka suraj tumhare liye hai, mai hu rat dhal jaungee
aisa milan phir ho na ho, sab kuchh meraa tum hee toh ho
bapanah pyar hai aaja, teraa intejar hai aaja
o bapanah pyar hai aaja, teraa intejar hai aaja
suna suna lamha lamha, meree raahe tanha tanha
mud ke jara abb dekh lo, aisa milan phir ho na ho
sab kuchh meraa tum hee toh ho
bapanah pyar hai aaja, teraa intejar hai aaja
o bapanah pyar hai aaja, teraa intejar hai aaja
suna suna lamha lamha, meree raahe tanha tanha

Her eyes were so moist that she did not notice the two men who entered her room. Vicky watched helpless as Geet screamed when Arjun pulled her by the hairs and banged her to the wall.

Author's note:lol...how was it? Sorry for being evil, but i love twists... Over to the next writer.
                                                                                                                      

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Posted: 12 years ago
ohhh...i so badly wanted Vicky to be trapped when i was writing the part abt him hearing the truth...so me is so glad u did that Kathie...awesommmeee..

but he dropped his phone...who will see the msg now ??? 
oh god simi...hurry up girl...me waiting...

Reya <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow u guys are twister queens
Writer cont soon
Luv
TC
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update Kathie and otherwriters...loved the twists and turns...
 
waiting Simi and Shreya for the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago

that was great kathie...so Vicky doesn't solve the matter...
who is next and how long??? shud i wait for the next one?? me having a bad cold and swallowed a tab...wonder how long i can stay awake๐Ÿ˜ญ...it was simi after kathie right?๐Ÿ˜ƒ  Edited by bangalores - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome KB loved it hope this time maan comes to save her
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Posted: 12 years ago
woha tht was awesome kathie..who is next..simi simi jaldi kar..