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mchopra thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Koi gaana vishwaas pe suggest karo..i cant write the story but gaana not clicking..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

hey sims..

grt part!
finally maan knows the truth!
and vicky😡😡😡
so next it shreya??? then nazmaa???
i will go next...
NAZMAAA>...pm me hun..so i can be reday..
@bindu..take care dear...

Will do hun!! =]
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mchopra

Koi gaana vishwaas pe suggest karo..i cant write the story but gaana not clicking..

Am thinking sherya!😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
@kathie awesome part..@simi too good.. Loved vicky being shown as selfish here that explains or rather justifies meera ka decision nt to marry him but dev instead..maan realised the truth..hope he can save her b4 its too late..
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Posted: 13 years ago
@shreya all i can think is jab koi baat bigad jaye..aur kuch yaad nahi aa raha hai..sorry..
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Posted: 13 years ago
@simi
luvd d part..
finally maan came to noe d truth..but where s geet?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

@simi

luvd d part..
finally maan came to noe d truth..but where s geet?


Thank you!
Prob. Sherya can answer where is Geet question😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
great part Simi
Shreya - getting confused...vishwas pe song but what is the situation...complaining that you broke my trust, pleading trust me or guilty, why i didn't trust
for pleading guilty, i love a song by Bryan Adams -
Please forgive me
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Posted: 13 years ago
Even i was disgusted writing this part..but i had to.if u dont like it..let me know..i will edit it...

Part 15:

Arjun banged her against the wall. Blood shot out from her head but she turns around to see arjun and Vicky staring at her. She tries to get up but before she could arjun holds, she tries to push him away but couldn't. He holds her by her head and throws her across the room. She lands on the table and the things on way topple away. He tries to reach her but she moves on her back in fear and knocks down things that come on her way. She reaches the corner and is fixed. Arjun leers at her lecherously and pushes her again and she immediately faints. He lifted her up on her shoulder and carries her out.

Vicky is a silent spectator to all this.

Vicky: Tum iske saath..

Arjun moves his hand along her arm and smiles at him.

Vicky turns away.

Kahaan jaana hai..he asks since he was the one was driving. Mere ghar..tells arjun.

Vicky drives to his house and opens the door and walks into his room.

Come on Vicky lets him have some fun..

Vicky shakes his head and tells him that he will stay outside.

Arjun carries her into the room and lies her down on the bed.

He looks at her beautiful body lecherously and smirks. He then takes a rope and ties both her hands so that she cant do anything while he makes her pay for her slap.

He runs his finger down her body pausing at B****** and then at her feminine core.

He then goes and sits on the chair and asks Should I wait for her to wake up or… he looks at her and decided against it. He couldn't wait to take away her pride from her.

He walks towards her and looked at her before tearing of her kurta from her body and then throwing away her salwaar of her. He looks at the semi cad beauty in front of her.

He wanted to give her pain before he could take away everything from her. He dug his nails into her abdomen hard and enjoyed seeing her face furrow in pain.

He then pulled off her bra off her making sure that its hurts her when he pulls it out. She winces in pain. He smirks seeing it and bends towards her covers her body completely with his so that she would wince under his weight.

He then bit her at her collar bone, her neck, her earlobes harsh enough to make her writhe under him. He was completely enjoying the pain he was bestowing upon her and the pleasure he was getting from her virgin body.

He then moved to bite her breasts and make sure he would leave marks on her. He moved down and bit her swelled area hard enough to make it turn blue and even bleed when her body coudnt take his harsh demeanor. Where he couldn't bite her he scratched her such as to make her bleed and leave her marks on her.

On the other hand maan decided to find Geet. He knew that he wouldn't kill her but they wanted to avenge her but he couldn't let anyone even touch her, not that Ba***** arjun, he couldn't lay her filthy hands on her.

He called up dadi and asked if Vicky was home and dadi replied in negative. He took out his car and drove to the only other place he knew the two could be. His mind flashed with memories of geet, her smile, her way of fighting against him. His heart was bleeding thinking what he had done to the angel who brought light into his life and shedding silent tears.

Hum bewaafa hargiz na the,

Par hum wafaa kar na sake,

Humko mili usko sazaa hum jo katha kar na sake -2

Kitni akeli thi who rahein hum jin pe ab tak akele chale rahe,

Tujse bichid ke bhi who bekhabar tere he gum mein jalte rahe,

Tune kiya jo shkva hum who gila kar na sake

Hum bewaafa hargiz na the,

Par hum wafaa kar na sake,

Tumne jo dekha suna sach tha magar kitna tha yeh sach yeh kisko pata

Jaane tumhein maine koi dhoka diya jaane tumein koi dhoka hua

Is pyaar mein sach jhoot ka tum faisla kar na sake

Hum bewaafa hargiz na the,

Par hum wafaa kar na sake…

When he reached deekshit house his fears were confirmed seeing vicky's car parked in the drive way. He ran into the house and saw Vicky sitting in the room.

He reachd to him and Vicky seeing him got up and said maan bhai..

He slapped him hard and asked him geet. Vicky bend down his head. Maan held his collar and asked again.

He pointed to the room and maan ran towards his target.

Arjun was busy making geet wince in pain that he didn't notice when the door was opened.

Maan shouted ARJUNNN..which made him look towards him.

His hands froze in place seeing the anger in his eyes. Maan looked at him and then at geet was lying naked unconscious under him.

Maan..dekho geet..arjun started..

Maan walked towards him and punched him . he fell backward before he could gather he hit him again and again till he was lying unconscious on the floor.

He then turned to look at Geet, her body was full of scars and marks. Her white skin was red and blue. He looked away and removed his shirt and covered her.

He then scooped her in her arms and walked outside to take her to the hospital. It was only when he lifted her that he realized that her head was bleeding too.

He put her in the car and drove away..

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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh God Shreya...literally in tears reading this part...uski haalat soch kar hi kuch ho raha hai...it was very emotional and the way you described it
Uski galti kya thi...i don't know how Maan is going to heal this...he lost her faith already...he lost her love as well...ab who can bring her back to normal and how

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