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maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#301

Originally posted by: bangalores

that was great kathie...so Vicky doesn't solve the matter...
who is next and how long??? shud i wait for the next one?? me having a bad cold and swallowed a tab...wonder how long i can stay awake😭...it was simi after kathie right?😃

awww...go to sleep bindu honey...and u can catch up tom...feel better 🤗

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#302

@karthie..

u potrayed vicky's selfish nature very welll..

thanx for the new twist...

@bindu chechi..

pls take care of urself...

and cum bak with a bang..

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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#303

Kathie nice job!

Bindu get well soon!

Sherya take over and i don't know how you and the rest will react to this update!

I tried😭

Part 14

Her eyes were so moist that she did not notice the two men who entered her room. Vicky watched helpless as Geet screamed when Arjun pulled her by the hairs and banged her to the wall.

Maan was in his study room..trying to block out the truth about Geet. Meera's words rang in his head..he wanted to believe that Geet, his Geet, couldn't do anything like that..he wanted to beileive her but the proof was all there in front of his eyes that spoke betrayal.

He looked through the files again and again of the proof against Geet hoping to find some kind of loophole some kind of consolidation that maybe Meera was right but all his efforts were in vain. Nothing came up! He throws the files on the floor along with everything on top of the desk...He sits on the floor crying thinking about Geet..."Why Geet...why...did you do this to me? Why? I loved you but you played with my feelings...why?" Dadima comes and sits next to him...Maan looks up and cries...

Dadima: Maan beta what is the point in crying and thinking of your past? What happened has happened? Now you have to lead a better life with Sameera. Don't forget she is carrying your baby.

Maan: Its hard...she has broken everything inside me. Its hard to mend it...

Dadima: I know it will take time but you have to try...please say it for me...you will try

Maan: I will...excuse me...(he gets up to leave...he wipes his tears...) "I won't let you or anyone play with me like this again." As he was leaving he saw Vicky's phone on the floor. He picks it up...he decides to go to Vicky's room to return the phone. It was almost dying. As soon as he plugs the phone into charger..something flashes...a message...he drops the phone after reading the message...he backs up..."no..." He kept shaking his head...he runs out of the house...

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hhCafFsghso[/YOUTUBE]

He drives the car..speeding...his life with Geet..her innocent smile, her face...everything flashed before him. Her pain in her eyes seeing him getting engaged to Sameera, her hurtful voice when he told her he didn't love her...her body lying on the grass...he grips the steering wheel so hard it was turning white..."Vicky...he is behind this...he is the one that placed something in Geet's drink...he is..." Meera's words..everything was making him feel guilty. Why didn't he believe her? Why didn't he believe Geet's innocence? Why? Does he even deserve her? He raced through the road to get to Geet.

He stops the car in front of her house..he runs inside...everything stopped. His life came to a halt. There was blood on the wall, everything was scattered all over the room. He barged into every room to find her but no Geet..."GEET..." He drops on his knee...

Edited by mrs.msk - 13 years ago

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Nazma 'Imran Khan' Majeed

@Nazmaa

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#304

Originally posted by: mchopra
nazma me after simi..uske baad u take up..

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Cool.. Pm Me What Your Updates Going to Be about... That way i can update quicker lol :)

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#305

Originally posted by: mrs.msk
Omg I just caught up with all the parts
Kathie and Ashu wonderful idea once again..especially with the songs...the songs bring whole new light and emotions in you while reading the updates...

At all the writers...wonderful job...really!

So many twists and turns have been introduced into this and I love it...and the best part is that the story is very unpredictable 😆😆😆

Fab job guys!!!!!!!

hey SIMI..

kithi thi yaar..

btw the isea was BINDUs😆😆😆😆