Maneet FF- Pavithra vivah-pt-22 , pg-144 - Page 29

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Posted: 13 years ago
part 9 ...

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awesome update
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GEET HAS MET THE WHOLE FAMILY AND ALL IN DIFFERENT CIRCUMSTANCES
FABULOUSLY DONE
WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART
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awesome..very interesting ff..😊
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awesome update dear
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PART- 10

At KM…..

Maan working in his work place…again and again the view hitting him hardly what he saw in hospital. Some where his mind is not accepting the closeness of dev and geet. he banged his fist forcefully on sand bag. Again and again he is hitting it until the bag broke. Its tarred and sand spread entire room.

After breaking sand bag he came to reality….why I am so angry …why I should worry….dev is my brother. He won't cross his limit…if I opposed their friendship , definitely dev agree. Yes I should talk with dev. He grabbed the towel and went to meet dev.

Dev still sleeping on bed. There is cute smile on his lips. may be he is dreaming. Maan came to here to talk to him, but after finding him in that position maan don't want to disturb him. just he kissed on his fore head. yes he is his loving brother. When he lost his parents dev and anni were still young. From the day one he loved them like a father. He love very much his family. That's the reason he played a dirty game with geet breaking all his culture (sanskar).

He is about return to his room…but he stopped.. "geet…"a name slipped from dev mouth. Maan frizzed ...what is happening. He turn back…dev hugged his pillow tightly in his sleep.

Maan decided to fire geet from her job. he lost his mind. He become mad. When he turn force fully his hand touched to flower vase and its braked in huge sound. Dev suddenly waked from his sleep. maan palms were bleeding. Dev ran to him "bhai aap theek haina…" he grabbed his hand to him. now dev worried much about maan…"bro , always you hurt yourself.."

Maan deeply scanned him. his wound is not paining him. but there is a too much of pain in his heart. He don't want to loose dev like anni.

"bro…" again dev called.

Maan smiled weekly. "nothing wo dev I want to speak to you.."

Dev surprised. After anni missing they are not spoken much. Silently they gulped their pains. They didn't share it..after a long time again maan wants to speak with him…"yes tell me.."

"wo dev I want to remove geet from her job…"

Dev really amused..why what's wrong. "no bro..why you want to remove her…"

No reason but he should give some reason" dev …I think she cannot able to work under me. due to her health problem. If she can stress more.. "he know he is answering stupidly but still he want to remove her from job without hurting dev.

"bro…when you started to think in this way. You don't know any thing about her..no bro she is a very poor girl…I met or when she commit suicide…"

"What.." almost maan barked…he felt that there is a pain in his heart.

"yes bro…you may noticed that I am too concern with geet. why you know bro?….when I saw first time …she is running to save her self. I really don't know anything about her ….when the goons were trying to abuse her, she drowned into water . while drowning she hurt her head. again second time she hurt when she is saved you from accident. Tell me bro what the victim she done. When I saw first time I remember anni…even anni also met like same accident. Pls bro don't take such decision."

Maan mind stop to think. Did geet really decide to end her life after I left her…is this true goons attacked geet…oh god ..what happened next…in the corner of his heart some where it is hurt him. "now tell me bro ,did I done wrong…giving her job..pls bro don't remove her…"it means dev had only mercy on her…he is not loving her…he reified him self.

"no dev I had a confident on you. You will never go in wrong way..you never break my trust.." maan murmured him self and went out.

Dev taken a deep breath. Some how he succeed hiding the truth from maan .even he felt bad that at one part he is not accepted that he is loving geet in front of maan, but this is not a right time to tell him. first I should know the opinion about me with geet. then I should go forward. He had confidence that maan won't discourage him .

maan got a call from detective agency stating that when the accident happened with anni geet with her…again his eyes turn to red. No..the little mercy which is created in his heart few minutes back vanished. No …geet I won't leave you. You see the real monster Maan singh khurana in your life. be ready geet …. he gritted his teeth's fur sly. Its better to keep enemy in front of eyes. So that I can observe each and every step of enemy…she has to be punish step by step. Some how dev agreed that he had mercy on geet. Now he drop the idea to remove geet from job.

At KC geet working ..serially but her mind is with anni. Don't know what she will do..maan sir still didn't come to office. Before leaving hostel she is given necessary instruction to anni. She told her not to come out from room. She kept fruits and food stuff to anni, but still she worried.

Her phone started to ring." Hello Khurana constructions"

"geet come soon..what you have done .without my permission you let another girl to stay with you. that to she is mad. She is going violent come soon.." warden barking on phone. Oh god finally anni caught by warden. anni crying loudly geet can here her voice by phone.

Geet forget everything. She rushed to her hostel. At reception she found dev. She intimated him that there is some emergency and made her way out. Dev is too busy with his busy schedule he didn't concentrate much on her…

Geet almost running on road…it is morning 11. vehicles were rushing on delhi roads. Geet didn't bother much..suddenly a large black bench car stopped in huge sound. Its about hit her…At same time a strong arm pulled her a side. Geet dozed some movements..the person who grabbed her looked strangely." Geet tum….."there is sudden happiness in his face.

Geet recognized him" arjun tum…."she hugged him …she couldn't control her happiness after looking her childhood friend. He full filled all her wishes like her brother in her childhood. Not only he …even his parents helped her lot when she suffered from her chichi. Every year she tie rakhi him in rakhi festival. After he and his family left hosaipur for his higher studies , both were not in touch for three years.

Geet remembered anni at the same time she can not chat with arjun right now. "arjun bhai , I have to go ….there is emergency.." she above to move.

arjun hold her hand…"geet at least get me your contact no…"

"no I am not having mobile…you give me your no…" arjun saw her face. She is too hurry. She is sweating. She is breathing heavily. Now he is not ready to leave her. he love her like his own sister. When he come to know that she married some un known person, he worried about her…he try to trace her but he failed all these days. Now she is running in centre of the road like a mad ….Something is fishy…she is hiding with me …he decided.." geet tell me where you want to go ..ill drop you…"

Geet reliefed .. immediately she agreed. She know she won't get any vehicle to reach her hostel. She worried about anni. She climbed his bike .

Arjun drive as she directed. Geet didn't noticed the car, the car which is about to hit her bcoz she is too busy with arjun. maan singh khurana silently observing geet and arjun from his car. He felt so odd when geet hugged arjun on road . How shame less girl she is…is the way to cross the limit on road. His face turn red how characterless girl she is…he barked on driver" challo…"without his knowledge his fingers squeezed important papers which is filed in file.

When geet reach hostel there is a big scene created. Anni crying loudly. Watchman guarding around anni holding lathi in hand. As soon as anni saw geet she ran and hugged tightly. "geet hummm..save me…"she is trembling. Her whole body is shivering. There are lathi marks on her hands.

"geet , he is very bad…he hit me here…here.." she shown all over her body. geet hugged her in protectively.

"anni don't cry …I am there for you…"she try to convince but anni just trembling in fear. Geet turned security with angry.

"how dare to hit her so badly. She is like child …." She barked on him.

"geet don't dare to question him. without our permission how can you let her to stay with you and she behaved like an animal with us. I think she gone mad. One day she will hurt you also…"warden replied in same anger. She shown teeth marks on her hand.

Geet eyes were turned red. "that's not mean to hit her and don't dare to call her mad. I agree I have done mistake. But you can not punish her…what ever it is, you can solve the problem with me…"geet tried to control her anger. Actually geet is very soft and smoth girl but she didn't like the way how they treated anni. Within two days she had the strong attachment with anni.

Arjun silently observing everything. It seems strange. "..whatever geet , we are not allowing her to stay here…"

Now geet worried where shall she go" madam..pls just give me one week time .ill arrange something to her…"now warden come to compromise.

"sorry ,geet …." Warden told without any mercy.

Anni tightened her grip on geet." geet pls don't leave me…I didn't do anything…she is lying.." she scared. Her tears started flow again. Geet once again she saw her face. Anni is in trance..she feared..in this condition she can not leave her alone. She holed her protectively "no anni , be brave I am with you.." she turned back" theeke madam….even I don't want to be here. She went inside .she packed all her stuffs within a few minutes and came out with anni.

Geet totally forget about arjun. She made her way to gate. now arjun joined her" geet where are you going.."

Geet smiled with pale" patha nahi.."

"why don't you stay with me.." without thinking he offered. He understood geet is in some problem. He want to help her… as a psychiatrist he found the problem in geet. in this stage geet can not solve the problems and another question raised if she married why she is staying here. Who is this anni. There is something fishy.

"how can I stay with you…what about your family.." she is half mind.

"family …no geet still I am unmarried..and mummy papa again they settled in hosaipur .."

"oh.." but still geet thinking.

"geet ,don't try to hide your problems with you. I am your brother…you had a right to take help from me..don't think much come with me…"he forced her….geet finally nodded.

Pre cap: first day working with maan.

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Yours varsha.

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum..luvd it..
geet working with maan...wow!
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