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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maneetlover1

awesome update di👏


asusual superb dialogues...and especially the following...


Geet:
Hai meri itni jurat k main aapko pagal kahu na baba na...maine toh aisa nahi kaha par aapne aisa samaj liya iska matlab hai k sach mein aap kisi mental hospital mein the

Maan: Geet dubara kabhi bhi ye mat sochna k tum mere liye ajnabee ho...mere liye meri zindagi ka sabse anmol hissa ho tum..

Maan: Nahi Geet aisi baat nahi hai aur khabardaar agar tumne dubara meri Geet par koi aisa waisa ilzaam lagaya toh...

Geet: Haan pehle mujse vaada kijiye k aap uss dusht danav ko humare iss trip se dur hi rakenge

sorry for the late reply di.actually iam busy with college and exams so could not able to come online..

song selection was awesome.it is my one of the fav songs.thanx di for selecting cute song.waiting for next part😍

Its Okay Mona and all the best for ur exams😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -knirwal-

of..finaally i read it and now doing comment..i know mujse late koi nahi kyuki apki thanks list bhi complete lag rahi hai...

update humesha ke jasi best...jisme koi fault nahi nikal sakta ...agr koi nikal na bi chahe tab bi use doondne pe bi nahi milega...
apki wriiting ki me to dewani ho...i m ur fan no.1...
geet maan ek dusre ko kitni ache tareke se samj te hai...aur ab to unki understanding aur bi bad gai hai...aur age bi aur majboot hogi...
geet maan pe kitni barosa karti hai...usse maan ko ek hi room lene ke lia kaha...love it alot...jab ap wo formalities ke bare me lik rahi tha...tab muje laga tha ke iske baad kuch hoga...and jab sign ki baat ai to muje paka yaken ho gaya...MR&Mrs.Khurana...ohh mar java
precap...kuch khas hai kuch pass hai kuch ajnabe ehsaas hai...ye duriya mejburia ...haiii i m going more eager for next update...is song se kuch to clear hai.😉
cont soon shona...
love u alot
muahhh
ur's khushi

Yes Khushi maaneet ka rishtha aur bhi mazboot hoga...regarding that song i always wanted to see this song picturized on maaneet par aisa abhi tak toh hua nahi aur shayad aage hoga bhi nahi issliye i am fulfilling my wish over here. love u my bachha
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Posted: 13 years ago
🤗 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thank you for your love and support

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Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 54

Maaneet enter their room
Geet: Maan room kitna achha haina?
Maan: Haan Geet room wakai mein achha hai
Maan removes a file and starts going through it
Geet: (thinking) Ye lo aaye nahi k kaam shuru ek baar bhi nahi socha ek kuch der Geet se baat karu...sochenge bhi kaise inhe inke kaam se fursat mile toh sochengena
Geet: Kabhi nahi sudrenge
Maan: Tumne kuch kaha Geet...
Geet: Nahi main toh bus yahi keh rahi thi k aap aate hi kaam par lag gaye ye toh aap baadmein bhi kar sakthe ho na filhaal aapko rest kar lena chahiye
Maan: Geet rest karne ka time nahi hai abhi kuch kaam karlu toh kal ki meeting mein koi problem nahi hogi
Geet: (thinking) Inhe toh meri bilkul bhi parwah nahi chadu inse umeed bhi kya ki jaa sakthi hai
Geet: Maan main fresh hokar aathi hoon
Maan: Thik hai Geet
Geet takes her night suit and goes to the washroom
Maan: Geet ko kuch waqt toh lagega bahar aane mein tab tak main kapde change kar letha hoon
Saying so he takes out one of his shirt and starts changing in the room itself
Suddenly Geet starts screaming
Maan gets worried and starts moving towards the washroom
By that time Geet also comes out screaming
Geet: Cockroach...cockroach
Maan: Geet kya hua?
But before both of them could understand anything they collided and landed on the bed
PLS LISTEN TO THIS SONG:
Music
Geet was on top of Maan...Maan had not buttoned his shirt...There was a sudden tension inbetween the two
Kuch khaas hai kuch paas hai kuch ajnabee ehsaas hai
water droplets that were falling from Geet's hair on Maan's chest were adding fuel to the fire ... their desire to feel each other was increasing with every passing second
Kuch duriyaan nazdikiyaan kuch haspadi tanhaiyaan
In normal circumstances Geet would have moved away immediately but today she wanted to live this moment with Maan
Kya ye khumaar hai kya aitbaar hai
Maan could not control his urge to feel her creamy soft skin any further. He was getting jealous of those water droplets which were kissing her shamelessly
shayad ye pyar hai haan hai shayad
He slowly started caressing her face and his fingers started removing all the water droplets one by one
Kya ye bahar hai kya intezaar hai shayad ye pyar hai pyar hai shayad
His touch was sending shivers throughout her body...her lips started trembling and slowly started reducing the distance
Kuch khaas hai kuch paas hai kuch ajnabee ehsaas hai
She gently rubbed her lips with his but then immediately backed away...Maan did not like this he turned her in one swift movement and now he was lying on top of her
Kuch duriyaan nazdikiyaan kuch haspadi tanhaiyaan
Geet closed her eyes as she could see an increasing burning desire in Maan's eyes
Kya ye khumaar hai kya aitbaar hai
Maan started approaching her lips but then he saw some water droplets on her face. He started kissing those areas whereever he could see any water drop
shayad ye pyar hai haan hai shayad
Geet was melting due to his touch...
Kya ye bahar hai kya intezaar hai shayad ye pyar hai pyar hai shayad
Maan continued placing kisses as he did not like anyone else's touch on his Geet even if it was drops of water
Music
Finally he was satisfied as he could no longer see any drops. He stopped for a while. Geet opened her eyes as she suddenly felt incomplete
Kuch saaz hai jaage se jo the soye
Maan could see the same emotions in her eyes...as if they were questioning him...why did u stop?
Alfaaz hai chupse nashe mein khoye
He kissed those magical eyes of hers to give her an answer
Nazare hi samjhe ye guftugu saari
He then kissed her forehead. Geet encircled her arms around his neck and pulled him closer
Koi aarzoo ne hai angadaai li pyaari
Nothing mattered to both of them at this particular time they wanted each other badly...very badly
Kya ye khumaar hai kya aitbaar hai
She gently placed her hand on his face but then for a moment she hesitated and started removing her hand but maan stopped her and started kissing her palm
shayad ye pyar hai haan hai shayad
The passion that he was generating was taking Geet to a new world. She could not take it any further and turned around. Now her back was facing maan
Naa inkaar hai naa iqraar hai
shayad ye pyar hai pyar hai shayad
Her sexy back further increased maan's desire. He started trailing his fingers on her back. He hugged her from behind and moved her hair slightly to the other side and started kissing her bare parts
Music
His one hand started undoing the knot of her night suit. Geet's heartbeat was increasing she did not feel the need to stop him...somewhere or the other she was realizing her true emotions for maan today. Maan continued placing wet kisses
Kehna hi kya mera dakhal na koi
He turned her around so that he could see her. He had already removed the knot of her night suit and was now moving towards the strap of her dress.
Dil ko mila dil ki shakal ka koi
He looked into her eyes for a second he did not find any fear in those eyes of hers hence he went ahead and slowly removed one strap of her dress
Dil se thi meri ek sharth ye kaisi Lage jeet si mujhko ye haar hai kaisi
Without a second thought Maan started kissing her and with the other hand he started removing the other strap as well as if he did not want any obstruction in his path to claim her
Kyun ye bukhaar hai kyun bekaraar hai shayad ye pyar hai pyar hai shayad
He bit her just above her cleavage due to the sudden pain Geet moaned his name. Maan immediately licked and kissed that part inorder to sooth her pain
Jadu sawar hai na iktiyaar hai shayad ye pyar hai pyar hai shayad
He was taking Geet to a Magical journey. Geet placed her hand on his neck and pulled him closer
Ooo... kuch khaas hai kuch paas hai kuch ajnabee ehsaas hai
Haii...Ra ra re..na na na...ra ra ra..na re na
Pyar hai shayad pyar hai shayad
Yahi hai...
Maan brushed his lips with hers and then licked it slightly.They were just about to kiss each other
When there was a knock on the door
Both of them suddenly realized what they were going to do
Maan got up immediately. Geet fixed her dress
Maan went and opened the door
A person from the room service department had brought their dinner
He placed the food and left from the room
Maan did not have the courage to face Geet he went to the washroom to have a shower without looking at geet
Geet sat on the bed and started thinking of all the events that had just occured
Geet: (thinking) Ye jo kuch bhi hua kya ye galat tha aur agar galat tha toh ye mujhe itna sahi kyun laga...kahi mujhe maan sir se Pyar toh nahi ho gaya
She started smiling
PRECAP: Maan: "Geet...uttho hosh mein aau Geet...ye tumhe achanak se kya ho gaya...hosh mein aau pls"
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PART 55 (Thread 6)
Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update every emotions were perfect to the situation
itna romantic tha ki kya bataun
cockroach ji ko thank u apki wajah se we got passionate maaneet😉😳
finally geet ko apni feelings realise ho gayi
next par ka intezar nahi ho raha hun
give us the update quickly😊😊<3<3<3
Edited by abinash079 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
EuHEy ur here...me waiting too...


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hey am here...kal to there were much homeworks to do...issi liye...was quite busy...hihi...n then i wanted to take all my time to read this update...and i guess u do know why...right pihuuu?????...lol...😆😆😆


maaneet enter THEIR room...this sounded so good...i loved it...waise geet...room achha hi hoga because both of you are over there...haha...geet...bhool gayi kya...remeber u only had called him mad...so obvously u will have to to tell maan about everything...n that he should spend more time with u...


i love u mr cockroach...hihi...i mean u r the reason behind the dreamy song sequence which i have been thinking of since the last update...lol...


the entire song part was just dreamy n so so so so so so so romantic...mujhe to laga that k am gonna faint sooner or later...hihi...i really really really loved it pihu...u were mindblowing here...this was just awesome...i loved how u described their emotions n their feelings...it was just impeccable...


maan was being jealous of droplets of water...lol...i mean he couldnt bear to see them on her...n then geet was having no kind of hesitance n fear with maan...showing to which extent she trusts him...amazing...


but then ths damn room service...couldnt it come few minutes later...i mean he was going to kiss her...lol...it seems along with them we also gotta wait now...hihi...


btw geet...lemme clesr ur doubts...tumhe maan se definitely pyaar ho gaya hain...isme sochne wali baat to bilkul bhi nahi...of course u love him...


hey babaji...kaisa precap hain...i mean i hope nothing wrong has happened to geet...but then when maan is here we should have no fear...am sure he gonna take good care of her...


continue soon n thnxxx for the pm pihu...n btw thnxxx for such a mindblowing update n also for using kuch khaas...i loved it...


p.s last time ko u said that evryone was loving the manager...am sure this time sabko cockroach ji se pyaar hogaya hain...hihi...😆😆😆




Edited by zahra15 - 13 years ago
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di aj to apne kamal ki bi had hi kar di...i dont get words to express it..this is superb,fantastic,mindblowing,awesome,rocking,and romantic...this update have alot of romance and emotions of love...i dont know how to tell u that how much beautiful it is...pehle to muje ye song bahot pasand hai aur dosra apne ise narrate kia..double dammal...apki lines ki collection...pics ki collection[pics to jyada hi romantic thi]...everything is just perfect...agar perfect is acha shabad bana hota to vo bi kam tha...i love maaneet romance alot very very muchhh
muje samjnahi a raha me kya kaho...i dont get words for ur superb update...i m very lucky to get someone like u...kise bagwan ne mere lia banaya hai...taki apki sangat me mera kuch bala ho sake..😆 i m sending u a tighthug...
precap hm mmm no idea...pehli baar muje precap ka koi idea nahi😆...hm khane me to kuch nahi na...but i know geet ko kuch nahi hoga
chlo ab wait kate hai ab next update ka and apke reply ka...
cont soon...
but i m missing u alot se bhi jyada😭...plz mujse milia na..
waiting eagerly
ur's bacha
Edited by -knirwal- - 13 years ago

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