A Walk On The Beach..#5|AR|Link to New Thread :Pg1 - Page 138

Originally posted by: SurrealFantasy

😆Reserved! *Edited*

Heya!! I'm gonna take revenge now...you gave us the chapter in 6 installments, I'll give the comment in installments me. *puts on a revengeful,evil look on her face and then laughs her evil laugh..Muahahaha* (Jokes apart, have to do stuff for Ganpathi bapa!)

So here's Installment 1... *Shrutika goes and brings a bowl of popcorn to enjoy my comment*

Lo and behold...Armaan Peanuts Mallik returns!!😃...finally!😆

If I was lucky, I would even be fortunate enough to get his warm, dimpled smile when we would bump into each other at home.

*sigh* This is pure torture!! Living in the same house and still JUST getting a smile from him(read: the person with the most gorgeous smile in the world😳 ) is SHEER torture!! I feel damn pitiful for her plight!!

It was turning dark red, but I distinctly remembered the book saying red, not dark red.

This just makes the entire thing more real!! Why?? Well, coz my cooking sucks (big time) and so this scene is often seen in my kitchen. But unlike her the color doesn't have such a small difference! My cooking skills smell, taste and create disasters!!🤣

"About the way my son is behaving'" She said quietly. I looked at her shocked, and embarrassed, and guiltily. I couldn't believe I had just gotten my mother-in-law to-be to apologize to me. Screw you Armaan 'Peanut Case' Mallik.

For the former part of the phrase.. "Ha! Their relationship is so damn cute!! Ekta surely needs to take some tips for her "family (read: broken family) dramas!😆 And the latter part of the statement: Haha, probably that's what he wants too!! "Screw him"!!!🤣

In fact he's pretty normal with me if it comes to human civilized conversations."

This line made Riddhima so darn more adorable!! Yeah I felt sorry for her but somehow I just cracked up on this line!!!😆 I don't know why though!! Either coz it's funny in some way or coz I'm at my all time high right now!!😆

"And you know Ma, he tells me I'm the emotional fool and the impulsive one between us two, but he's no less' He is in fact, much more impulsive than I am'" I scowled.

Haila!Peeth peeche burai!!😲 I do that to my sister!! Riddhima is being understanding but she surely vents out her frustration like this!! *grins**winks* Lage raho !😆

I hated how elders could embarrass you to an extent you thought could never be possible.

Tell me about it!! They have no idea they do that to you. And ironically I feel like sinking into the ground whether they praise me or taunt me!! And each time they do it, they create new levels of embarrassments!😭😆

"Usko aur koi milta bhi nai'

*No comments*🤣

ok I know...How can I not comment on something!!Let's just say...agar bachi ko aisi khushfehmi hai toh...rehne do😆

Hence, I was putting an extra effort in making his stupid birthday special, when I actually wanted to squash his big, bloated, beautiful head into a pulp.

She is one VIOLENT woman. Outside toh she is Parvati/Tulsi or some other Savitri and inside she is the extreme version of Komolika!!!😆 But I don't blame her. Main hoti toh, I would have already done this!!😡

I had first mentally calculated the Pros of using up $449 off my $500 savings, all of which I had saved from my University Internship stipend - a huge smile on his face, yeah, that was definitely worth it

Awww.."Double Awww"! *puts on her thinking cap* Do you realise that for the first time I ACTUALLY side with her!!🤣 I failed to understand this girl in DMG for obvious reasons.but here..I REALLY do like her and for the first time utter a heartfelt "AWWW" for her!!😳😆BTW her way to repay his sacrifice was soo touching!!😳

Was he behaving this way because of what had happened that night?

Yes.When I read this sentence I was like "Eureka! She found out the reason"😊..but then "Return oF the Daffod"🤣(yeah! I read this on Aanya's comment and kind of got addicted to the word!!My sister lives miles away and I openly call her Daffod these days on Facebook. She isn't talking to me now) She thought it's the engagement.when it's what happened after that! Fast forward kar yaar Munchkins!

I wish I could read minds; just for once I wished Twilight was real, and I was a vampire. I would have definitely feasted on Mr. Peanuts Mallik then, I thought disdainfully.

This cracked me up😆...seriously it's as if you read my mind(pun intended)🤣. I wished the same when I had my crush..I even wanted to go and sit on his window-sill for that matter!!😳 But the second sentence just proved my words about her being Komolika!!😆

Right, ever since the ever-so-hot Mallik joined the league.

Even when she is angry with Peanuts...she can't stop adoring him!! Damn hormones!!😆

*whispers* Even I would do the same! Hayye! Mera Armaan!😳😆

*That's it for now...will write the second part later!! Have to do some work(read very little work and lots of blabbering).

*Edited*

I had been working on the menu for 5 whole hours, and I felt like I was in MasterChef Australia's Pressure Test, as I worked against the clock to make everything I had planned

Haha..Masterchef Australia turns out to be everywhere!! I <3 the show too!😊😳

Bruschettas, Lasagna, and Chocolate & Walnut Brownies.

The fictional Armaan got to eat all of that??😲 Man, he is surely gonna have a stomach-ache now..coz my mouth's watering.😕 And though I am a REALLY bad cook...I make nice Lasagnas!! Uhmm yeah, I leave out the vegetable part while I eat it though...sabji and Neha don't string along even in a sentence!!!🤣

I needed my Armaan back. It was time.

Me too!!! In fact Shrutika:it was way above time!!!If everything would not have turned out good now na, toh I would have gotten into my lappy and tried to fix it.

'Army'? Nicknames really had lost their charm these days!

I completely agree!! Who calls someone "Army"?? Instead of a human's name, it seems like the National Security Army!!😆 Even my nickname sucks😭...(I am not revealing what it is,like I said earlier!)

And when he didn't come in the end on time, I so wanted to go and give him a piece of my mind.😡 And I was SO happy how Riddhima tried to ignore and act cold!! I know I sound insane but hey, after his cold-shoulder for days, itna toh banta hai boss!! (I know I'm saying this but dil hi dil mein, I forgave him even before he apologized!!😳🤣 )

"Riddhima we need to talk, please, just open the door! I'm sorry, I know I've behaved like a complete jerk, just let me talk to you, please!"

When I read this in the installment I was like.."Yay they're gonna talk and sab bhala-changa ho jaayega", but then Riddhima turned back into a Daffod 😆(Addicted!! Yup,I'm an Iglesias fan😳)and the bhains(what's the English for that? Buffalo?) goes into the water!!🤣

"Well then shut your eyes and talk to me. Or I'll cover my face. Whatever! But please open the darn door!" he retorted back annoyed.

Haha..I don't have any special comments for this one. I just loved the sentence. I mean we usually use it in our daily life but in writing, this is the first time I read it.😊Kudos on that!

"Not when it comes to leaving you' You know that's never going to happen!"

Did I say earlier that I hated Armaan?? Well then, if I ever hated Armaan(that's a joke in itslef😆)...hearing this, all of it all went away...main Riddhima hoti toh, I would have just kissed him for being so adorable!!☺️

But I knew I had to hate on him for some while, that was the only way I would be able to feel better.

After reading the update till now, I loved the mature Riddhima. But the moment she said this sentence, all of it came thudding down onto the ground!!😆 Proof: Even I do this "act" when I'm pissed, and I'm the most immature being on earth!!(Nope, I don't think so...unfortunately my mom does😳)!

I knew he would follow me somehow, and so I didn't care much about moving out into the night although I was afraid.

Sometimes I wonder...is this gal for real?? (I know she isn't) She is angry, thoughtful, revengeful and adorable at the same time. That's what makes the story <3able.

"If you can save up, so can I.. And dare you compete with me on who's the more romantic one, now.. I win heads down!

I Love You, Peanuts..

Your Munchkin :) x"

Aww...nothing more than Awww!! 😳And when she placed that kiss on his face, I soo wished he was awake or pretending to be asleep or something like that! Why? I seriously have no idea. I've just grown too filmy all of a sudden.

And her trick of adding details so that a lie isn't caught made me go..."Aye! I'm gonna use it in future!" And it even proved that some things or people like Riddhima can never let go off their goofiness!!🤣

And when you began talking about Mrs.Chaddha, I was like, "Uhmm, what is she doing here again??"😕 And nosey neighbors toh are an Indian speciality!! 😆But then suddenly *Boom,thrash,thud" an accident...and this was what Mrs Chaddha was doing!! I mean seriously agar nosey hone ki jagah childcare kar liya hota, toh you would have saved us some trouble!!😡😉😆

tiny piece of a person

That is one awesome way to describe a child...LMFAO!!😆

And when she sweared in front of her mother-in-law I remembered the expression my mother has when I swear...saari izzat ki dhatjiyaan udd jaati hain!!!😆

She held my arms, and for a split second thought she was going to carry me. I laughed at myself when I saw she was just helping me up, and I was careful not to put any more weight on my apparently wounded leg, lest it brought on more tears and spread more joy!

I swear..Riddhima is such a crack-pot!!😆 She's dying with pain, she knows it could be serious...then too she is busy cracking jokes with her senseless humor inside her own mind!!🤣 She is one ANTIQUE piece!!!...ROFLMAO!!

*Edited*...AGAIN!!

"That's because you had morphine injected you idiot!" Rhea exclaimed

"What, bro, are you crazy you're listening to her? What does she know?" Rhea exclaimed

And you showed Rhea in this part... I kinda miss the bitchy sis.😳 And even here, in the hospital, she was fighting with Armaan. Such typical sisterhood I tell you! 😆

And Dr.Williams... by God, Riddhima and William seem to have taken Harry Potter and Voldemort clash really seriously. "Bloody Firangi!!", Did I tell you Riddhima is a crack pot? Yes, I did but for this exclamation, she gets another vote for being that!!

I hated it when his blue eyes fell on me like red laser beams, it made me feel exposed.

After reading the entire part and then commenting, I kinda started laughing when I read this again. "Exposed", emm...he already saw you exposed...literally!!!🤣 Ahahaha...bad joke, I know!!😆

And for the first time someone was rude and I was unfazed, in fact I didn't even feel bad. Okay yeah, partly because he's THE Armaan, no one can hate him😳 and partly because, yay! He's the old Armaan again...Way to go Peanuts!! I loved how he was all possessive and lovingly angry!! Hayye!😳

And then the entire "Take me from the hospital" talk! Loved how Armaan understood what she was feeling😳... The song running in my head was, "Aankhon hi Aankhon mein ishaara ho gaya"...LOL😆!

And like Armaan sounding typically inhumane yet cute (have no idea how he does that😕😳), I loved that. He was so cute, trying to sound angry yet caring and not caring a damn about what one would think. He is luuurve !! Truly Madly Deeply...uhmm yeah, I listen to Savage Garden! Have you heard Crash and Burn ?? I love its lyrics. Okay I'm going off- topic again!😆

"Is that what I am to you? A mere responsibility?

😲I was shocked when I heard this statement. How could she even think like that!! Moron!😡 But at the same time, I was sooo sad for her! Bechari bachchi!

"Please..Talk to me!" I sobbed. "If you have a problem, then talk to me Armaan! Please! I need you around me, I hate living without you, I feel like I'm living with a stranger in my own house, with someone I call my own! If I've done something wrong Armaan, then tell me what, I swear I'll make it up to you, but don't shut me out! Just give me a chance, I swear I'll set it right! If it's the job, then I'll quit, I swear I will!" I wept. "But don't shun me out this way, Armaan, I miss you!" I shut my eyes and covering my face with my hands, I cried. "If this entire engagement thing is seeming too quick, then you're free to object, the way I did, but I thought you would be okay since you were the one who wanted it in the first place... or if you've stopped loving me, then I swear, give me a chance, I'll try and make a place for myself, but ple-"

This part, was my favorite!! It's so darn sad and just tells us how vulnerable she was! I was soo much in tears when I read this.😭 I was like, "Goddamn Armaan say something..make it alright! And he kinda did...by kissing her!!!😳😆

And the bipolar twin and evil twin theory was so cool. Science would be pleased to have made this discovery!!🤣

I hit him hard on his chest, not caring to be soft. He didn't complain.

You know, I don't know how many people noticed this line but it made me go awww. I mean @Bold just shows how guilty Armaan was... I would have kissed his chest after hitting him if I was Munchkins though!!...Just sayin!☺️😆

"You idiot, I wanted to screw you, does that clear your doubt a little?"

ROFLMFAO!! 🤣

I was shocked when I read this sentence. I was like.. "Is this Armaan speaking?" But then again Riddhima, the tube light needs this kind of language to understand stuff so not his fault. But then she when she says, "If you ever use that phrase again, I swear I'll never let you do it!", I just fell down my chair. Their fights are so darn funny they make me go..🤣

And he saw her naked..umm..no comments. *Censored*😳😆

But you know, now I can relate to him. He is such an adorable bit of a person and like the ideal fiancee materia😳l. Ironical how he wanted to save Munchkins, look out for her, by staying away from her. I don't even have enough words to describe how highly I feel of him now. He's just so perfect and compassionate, that coming to think of it, I can never hate him.😆 I can't even remember I was ever angry with him!! 🤣

And then when Riddhima began throwing everything near her on him, I was glad she had broken her leg. Warna toh, T.V. ke remote ki jagah T.V bhi de maarti MERE Armaan par. 😆

And his expression when he realized she wasn't angry because he saw her naked..I <3 him. He is such a gentleman. And cute. And caring. And funny. And ...the list is never-ending. But I think you get what I mean.😳😆

"WHAT, 10 years?" He jumped, horrified at the idea, while I laughed.

Armaan is such a GUY!! Typical guy behavior. 😉But he's adorable at the same time. No idea how he manages that!!😳😆

"Its not worth staying away from you.. I've stayed away from you long enough, and its not a very good experience.. I don't want to add to the torture by being mad at you and keep you away from me again.. It hurts way too much.." I sighed, mumbling tiredly.

Awww.. I thought Riddhima was gonna behave like the last time. You know last time she took revenge by making him wear gay clothes publically, this time toh she could have gone to extremes.😆 But she didn't do that! That shows how much she's matured. But I ain't saying Armaan's not gonna make up. That too with Munchkins having broken her leg!! Romance ahead!! I'm lovin it!😳😆

And well, I loved this track. For the first time Riddhima acted like an adult without Peanut- supervision.🤣 And now, their relationship has moved forward from emotional to physical levels! And now it's the turn of the job issue.😍

You know I told you I try to make up stories before sleeping, I kinda imagined what would happen next. So according to that, they don't talk about it and then M is all fit and fine. She starts going on her job, and Armaan (he's a photographer) gets an assignment at the magazine. He decides to surprise her but finds out how she's being boycotted by her colleagues. So he decides to make it alright and then you know...*ahem ahem* office romance!!😉😆🤣

So well...that's about how much I'm gonna write for this part. And it is soo damn long that you're gonna take ages to read it! Read it and weep!!(That's my punch line for the time being)😆

Love ya🤗

Bisous,

Neha!!

Originally posted by: daydreamer21

I am so Happy that u updated 2 installments!! Yayy!! I feel like singing and dancing..!!

Nice update..But I'll comment in detail either tonight or tomorrow..! And since u r running out of pages on this thread (thanks to all the chatting) I'll edit this post itself when i give a longer comment...😆

Till then,
C ya.. Oh and just read the note! Yayyy!! Another update tonight!! Looks like ur readers r really lucky today!! 😃 M waiting..Now I'll comment tomorrow only...After u update late at night.. 😊

Luv,

Mugdha

-EDITED-

I finally found this post! I had been searching for this for past half an hour! 😕 So here I am with the comment! 😃 I know you must be shocked to see that I've started commenting very regularly here.. 😆 The reason is that I'm jobless these days... 😆 Finally u completed the part...Yayy!!

U know there was a whirl wind of emotions inside me when read the whole part today...I don't know how to express it in words...

Ridhima's leg fractured! Poor girl! A row of bad events in her life..! First Armaan's drama then she became the official S**t in the office...Then her plans of surprise were spoiled and now she fractured her leg!

Aww she saved up and gifted the SLR camera he wanted! That's so sweet...She really has matured...

I really loved the whole AR convo...😳

And that jerk Armaan..!! 😡 He gave her a cold shoulder for a month because of the whole intimacy thing??!!! 😲 But he's still cute..! 😳 I love him...No one can hate Armaan for a long time...

"WHAT, 10 years?" He jumped, horrified at the idea, while I laughed.

This had me in splits..! ROFL And the bipolar one..! I was laughing like an idiot after reading it Aanya's comment and when I read it in the part i was like 🤣 OMG!

I soo loved this part! The ending was veryy cute..! In fact the whole FF is cute! 😃

And u r the most amazing, great, nice, awesome, mind blowing writer ever!

Love,

Mugdha

Originally posted by: * Unnati *

Goodness me ! 😳 Is it just me or did everyone feel great after reading the latest installment , despite voicing out a soft " Damn ! " with the way it ended ? Lol You always , always leave us with intrigued with your cliffhangers , Which I guess is one of the major reasons that have us craving for ur updates. It's like a dose of drug or something that I need to have everyday now . I just love your FF & just can't say how adorable M & P are ! The best part about them is , they're very realistic characters . Realistic the core ! Characters one could easily relate to. And finally , some romance ! Iam happy for Riddhima ! Lol Waiting to hear Armaan out though . His reasons better be strong ! He gave the poor girl a really hard time ! 😆

Originally posted by: kinshuklover95

YAYAYAYAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ARMAAN IS BACK!!!!!!!!!

I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THAT PART!!!!!!!!

AHHH IM STILL SOOO HYPER OVER IT!!!!!!!!! 😆

okay so to get back to the part...

i loved how Riddhima was complaining like a baby all through the hospital trip. and ARMAANN!!!! hahaha when i read that part where you described his appearance when he came to the hospital,I was kinda happy. I know i am being mean and stuff but I was extremely happy because i thought that he deserved it after what he did. I cant believe he actually did that.

WAIT!!! I CANT REMEMBER IF I COMMENTED ON THE FIRST 3 INSTALLS.

if not heere it goes: i couldnt believe that armaan actually didnt celebrate his birthday with Riddhima. That is sooo mean. I was nearly crying at the part. it was sooo sad. and then when Armaan came home. I loved that scene. I know that it was supposed to be a kinda sad scene and all but it was sooo good. i loved the fact that Riddhima made Armaan feel soo guilty. i still cant believe he did something like that. that is so mean and ughhh...

and he actually followed her? wow now that is love. he's so bipolar at times.

and the letter that she wrote him. I loved it. it described her emotions to the T. and he totally deserved it. He was being such an A** to Riddhima, 😡

and then her at Armaan's mom's house. now that was a scene. I can't believe Riddhima actually saved that little girl's life. That is soo sweet. and then her arguing about going to the hospital. I am glad that they took her there. Better to be safe than sorry.

Her tantrums at the hospital were incredibe. I know why she did that but stilll. they were something. and she was like cursing here and there. it was nice. and then armaan. I can't believe he said that to Mrs. Chaddha. that is sooo cold. I loved how his own mom was being mean to him because of what he did to Riddhima. HE TOTALLY DESERVED IT!

thank god Armaan took her home because that was the best way for them to resolve their problems.

and when Armaan was telling Riddhima off for putting her life in danger i was kinda pissed at him saying all that but i could totally see where it came from. and I am glad that he did that. at first i was like "says Armaan, who hurt Riddhima more than this little accident could have" but then when i realized his concern I was really happy to see him back.

thank god Riddhima spoke up in the end because if she hadn't everything would have been ruined.

I love their make up scene it was really cute. 😊 thank god he feels guilty for everything he did and i am soo glad he is back. I can't believe you stopped at such a suspenseful place. 😡

I totally understand that you had a lack of sleep and all but still... SOOO SUSPENSEUL!

pleasse try and update tonight or if not tonight then soon because I really need to read the confrontation. PLEASE 😭

WOWOW!!! this is biggest comment I have ever written on this FF. but this chapter was amzing.

please continue soon!!!!!!! 😊

***EDITTED ***

soo... Armaan's reason for staying away from Riddhima was completely absurd but whose to blame him. I loved this part. I can't believe he had such a lame excuse. and Riddhima? hahaha i could just imagine her being upset for being tortured for about a month for a stupid reason.

I can't believe Armaan did all that tho. Thank god they are back together now. I am really happy for them.

I was really shocked when Armaan said that they food Riddhima made for him was really good. I was trying to remember when he ate it but all I could remember was Riddhima putting the untouched food in the fridge and stuff. and then I read the next line and I was like wow, now thats what you call a lover. 😊

and then when he expressed his feelings when he got the phone call from his dad. I was literally on the verge of tearing up. I can't believe that actually happened. He is sooo sweet. I also love how he warned Riddhima not to do it ever again. I loved the lines when he said that Riddhima was his life and that if something happened to her then he would not have the will to live. That was a great line. and when riddhima said 10 years and Armaan was horrified. I was literally cracking up at that point. 😆

and the Riddhima and Armaan teasing is back!!!! YAY! i really missed all that. I am happy that he explained everything to her and cleared all the misunderstandings because that was really what Riddhima needed. and the way she told him to let her sleep in his arms. CHO CWEET! and the Armaan glares. those are hilarious. I fear for Riddhima at times. 😉

Can't wait for the happy moments now. please continue soon. ❤️