Maneet FF- Pavithra vivah-pt-22 , pg-144 - Page 26

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When u going to update it?waiting..plz cont soon..
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nice update...maan is again misunderstanding geet
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AWSOME UPDATE PLS CONTINUE SOON
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Varsha please update soon
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PART- 9

Dev went inside..geet laying like lifeless in her bed….now she is in conscious but her face is too pale. her pain can be visible in her face. Dev sat next to her and he taken her palm with his. "geet …now how you feel…"

Geet smiled ..but in her smile is not natural. It seems She is smiing forcefully. Her headache is eating her from inside. She felt that somebody banging on her head. doctor already given pain killer but still the pain is uncontrollable" what happened to me dev sir…"

It means she don't know what happened to her…dev eyes were teary…no he can't tell her about the situation. He entangled her fingers to his. At the same time maan entered inside…the view what he saw just it burned from inside….he tightened his fist. Why dev is so concern with her..how can she deserve so much concern from khurana khandhan…I should cut this relation now it self. what is happening that is right. It is not so easy to spoil one innocent girl life. but how can stop this can I tell everything to dev….no..its not possible..dev still young and he don't how to face all these issue…if dev know about truth he will ever remain human bee. He will become another monster like me and he will kill everybody. then…nothing to do , he will go to jail…no I don't want this…there is no use…yes what I am doing is right. Day by day they should die. Each and every movement they should beg for their death. whole family deserve this punishment. His eyes turn to crimson red.

"kuch nahi geet…I think you felled on stones…is it paining?…." dev questioned her like small girl. she made baby face and nodded.

There conversion is irritating like any thing. No dev she won't deserve your sympathy she is a monster her whole family is monster….he rushed to them . dev immediately he left her hand and stood. Actually he embraced in front of maan. "bro, this is geet, geet he is your boss Maan singh khurana. " geet hurried to sit properly. Actually she embraced . she didn't expected him in hospital.

"geet , no..don't be hurry… you take rest…" dev hold her shoulder and made her to lay on bed.

maan eyes were spiting fire.

Before he open his mouth doctor ask dev to take geet to home but he didn't forget to warn once again. Dev hold her shoulder and he made his way to maan car. Maan gritted his teeth. Some where he don't want to see her with dev. But now he can not speak much just he open the car door. dev placed carefully her and try to sat next to her. its really too much. Maan stopped him in mid" dev I think I can't drive any more . today you drive it" he handover the keys. Some how he want to stop her.

Dev disappointed "par geet…" again geet.

Maan taken a deep breath…"ill take care.." he sat next to her.

dev sat in driving seat in half mind. Maan shown his angry on closing the door. Why he don't know he want to be with geet… what we can call…. is it jealous?…no…his entire body is burning with anger.

geet is dozing heavily due to already doctor given her heavy dosage of painkiller and sedative. Again and again she slipping to sleep. in this process she is about hit front seat. Dev observing her from mirror…"bro be careful…geet may hurt…"

maan really upset. He don't want to be with her…some how he is bearing her but again…roughly he pulled her back. Now she leaned on his shoulder. Her head is on his shoulder. Maan scanned her by eye corner. She is in deep sleep. how innocent she looks when she is sleeping . did really she involved in anni case…not believable. Suddenly dev stepped forcefully on accelerator due to avoid the heavy vehicle which is arriving in opposite side. Car stopped in big huge sound. Geet above to fall from the seat without his knowledge maan hand holed her protectively. After few seconds he came in sense. what I am doing with her..dam it.. "dev …concentrate on your driving" he barked from back seat. Dev simply nodded and he drive the car towards to her hostel.

After half an hour they are in front of hostel. Maan pattered her cheeks roughly. Geet waked and shied she is almost leaning on his chest. Suddenly she felt it is familiar to her…at the movement she forget her pain. once again she scanned him …no it is not possible..she get down from the car…now balwanth is rushing in her memory..again and she turned back and stared at maan…maan busy with his phone but he is observing her by his eye corner. Did she recognized me ..no way I am so careful that day how can she aware about me …no…her torn dupatta flying in air …the edge which is tore in elevator suddenly he remembered it means at morning she is with me in elevator…my god, why my faith is meeting her in my life again and again….first I should remove her from my company…strongly he decided.

After geet went inside dev drew his car to KM. on the way dev praising geet in front of maan. each and every sentence starting from geet and ending with geet. maan confirmed dev falling for geet.

Its night 1'o clock geet couldn't sleep due to pain. she came out side…her gaze moved to sky. Its very clean and clear. Countless stars were twinkling….."twinkle twinkle ..little star…how i…"the tiny voice echoed in her ears. She remembered her dharji…when she ask about her parents , her dharji show stars on sky and he will sing same rhymes to her…even she will join with dharji…remembering her parents her heart is pained for a while.

After dharji death Nothing is remained in her life..she trusted each and every person in her life but they cheated. Balvanth her nights will never end without remembering him…why he cheated me she questioned her self many times but no answer. Is I am so bad….

Her eyes were widen ,her gaze stuck near the gate .…somebody is laying inside the compound. It seems she can't walk…couldn't find her face properly in moon light, but she can hear her subbing…geet rush to main gate..even the watchman is not found near gate.

Geet lean on that girl…yes she is hurt badly. Blood is oozing from her wounds. Her dress was tare and its very dirty. Her stomach stickled to her back it seems she didn't had her food from lost one week. Geet extended her hand to help her…the girl just thrown her….but geet didn't leave her….some where she remembered the day balwanth left her..if dev not helped her that day ,today she will not be here…

Again she tried to lift her from the place of where she is laying but she didn't co-operated. She is becoming wild.

Geet again went to her room and brought some fruits. When she saw fruits in her hand the girl grabbed from her hand started to ate. Its looking very agley to see the way she is eating. Her hands were too dirty…it shown how hungry she is..geet eyes were teary …this hungriness can make any thing in this world. After eating all the fruits again she looked to geet hands. Geet understood still her hunger is not full filled she need some more…now again she try to lift her…this time she co-operated…she followed geet without protesting. First geet given her food to eat . now geet dare to question her" tumara nam kya hain.."

The girl lifted her face…only innocence is placed in her face. Her mouth filled with food. While chewing she said " my name is anni…." Again she didn't mind to answer any of her question.

"mere naam geet.." she try to introduce her self but anni is in her own world.

after her tummy filled she slept like a child on floor.

Now geet clearly observed her…her dresses were costliest but its tarred…her face sign proving that she is belongs to royal and well cultured family. Her diamond earrings and diamond finger ring showing her status. Geet didn't understand why she is in so bad condition. thinking about that mystery girl even geet slipped to sleep.

At morning when geet awake from her sleep still the girl is laying like small child. Now geet scared ,if warden noticed her definitely there will be a problem. How to hide her from warden. at the same time anni open her eyes. the sun raise is directly hitting her eyes. she rubbed her eyes.

"how are you anni..tum theek hu…" geet asked her in worried voice. Anni nodded. Now she is not behaving like wild as yesterday. She is just looking here and there and trying to understand where she is…she started to rub her skin…"I want to go for wash…"

geet smiled…yes she need it…she showed her washroom and she helped to bath her. she shampooed her hairs and cleaned her body using fresh sandal soap. after the bath with help of geet she wearied geet pink dress. Now she is looking like a small baby. now she is looking very clean and clear. Her sanskar is visible in her face.

Her wounds were drying geet again washed from dettol and applied ointment on wounds.

Again she fingered her finger on fruits. Geet given her fruits and some food. Geet observed that Anni is not behaving like normal girl…some times like small baby, some times she behaving wild…some thing is wrong. Geet trying to found her address but she is not co-operating with her…only she said her name…at evening she try to take her out but she didn't agreed…she is scaring her self.

When she force to take her out she hides her self below the cot. Again geet some how convinced her to come out. Now other problem in front of her..how to hide her from warden luckily today Saturday and tomorrow Sunday. But after two days where to hide her…she seems that she is mentally upset..what will happen when warden knows about anni….what I should answer to her….why anni so upset mentally?

Shit only questions ..there is no answer….already I am living under other's shelter…how can I take anni with me…once she saw anni face….she is busy in watching TV. She is enjoying her cartoon show. No ..I can not leave her in mid. Some how I should find her address . but how…can I take police help ..no she is a young girl ….they can misuse…dev already I am burden to him again anni….no…

PRECAP: DID GEET FIND A SHELTER FOR ANNI.

Friends I know all are upset bcoz I didn't update pavithra vivah on time. I concentrated much on TMKH to finish the FF. really I am not happy to write last part of TMKH bcoz it is my first FF. but nothing to do. When we started to write (story) FF there should be a end for every story. After posting epilog I am too upset. Nowadays I become too busy bcoz I got my final year engineering result . Basing on it I got the promotion in my company at the same time my responsibilities also increased. I couldn't maintain at a time every thing. Pls friends forgive me when I updated lately.

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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful dear but
after long time
give us quick update pz next part soon yaar
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Maan don't know that Geet is also tortured by that same family...but somewhere he can't bear Dev's closeness with Geet although he hates her...now Geet saved Annie also...

awesome update...please update soon...thanx for pm

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