-Dhundlae aks- Maaneet FF THREAD 2 - Page 72

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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting for talli maaneet😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
OHh cool...but Di...Maan aur Geet ki hide and seek kab khatam hogi??...phir toh aur bhi maza aiga... 😍 interesting precap... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part.
but not liking prachi and maan pairing and also everyone misunderstanding geet.
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aiiila... updating... me flying and waiting!
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update

loved it :)

cont soon
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Waiting...Waiting Waiting...:)


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Posted: 13 years ago

Dhundlae aks

part 27

yash ' u r more capable than that.
U r coming first since the time u joined school. Achieve something beyond ur capabilities then u could hear from me. I know students who top while they r working. Tum tho sirf padayi karten ho. But yes I am glad ur still topping.
Maan mubbled wat more does he expect me to do,.. itne mushkil se tho top kiya
aur kya karoon.. seriously dad ko na meri koi kadar hi nahi hain

Maan was really really upset his dad could never be happy with him. He could never make him proud. He just got pissed off went to his fav disco.

Geet was in a major celebration mood. Her hard work for 6months have been fruitful. She dragged Armaan landed up in the same disc as Maan. Geet had not been to the disc for so many days. She finally manage to save up enough to be here. She ordered her fav cocktail. Armaan ordered his. They hit the dance floor & jumped around crazily.
Armaan by mistake stamped a girl who was almost fainting.. eventually she fainted in his arms. He nervously looked around. No one cared.. every one was busy dancing & drinking.
Geet ' wat r u doing
armaan ' I stamped her & she fainted
Geet shook her head to make sure wat she heard was right.. ek min.. how can that be
armaan ' I don't know
Geet helped him to take this girl to the sofa they lied her down. She cutely rested her head on armaans lap. Armaan immediately got up. Geet laughed loud. She was already drunk & all this she was only behaving crazy. She ordered one more drink.
Armaan ' Geet aur nahi
ur already drunk
Geet ' ek aur.. she made cute face & pointing her finger forefinger. Only one more
armaan shouted .. no.. kaha na..aur nahi.
She made a cute face mumbling.. cribbing & complaining to babaji
armaan looked at both the girls.. one unconscious & the other abt to...
just then the other girl.. began to throw up.. armaan jumped away.. well not that prompt .. he made all kind of faces & took her to the wash room.. he cursed himself to have been stuck with this girl.. he helped her clean ..up.. she threw up again..
mean while.. Geet quietly sat in the sofa & continued make cute faces.. she saw some one walk pass..
just one more drink.. paka this will be last
Maan ' paka.. he asked all drunk
paka.. she said hazily
he gave his drink to her. She drank it & then looked at him curiously.. tum tho armaan nahi ho
Maan ' nahi
Geet ' phir tumne mujhe aapni drink kyun di
Maan ' tumne manga isse liyen di
he said that & tried to get a clear picture of her ' tum kaun ho
Geet ' proudly said main Ms Stranger
aur tum
Maan promptly extended his hand hellow Ms Stranger..
wat a coincidence.. I am Mr. Stranger
I know u
she said looking at him confusedly
he smirked knowing his effect on girls ' most of the girl say that to me
Geet ' nahi nahi us matlab se nahi
I mean in real sense
he made a cute sad face pouting ' uss matlab se nahi
Geet immediately patted his cheek.. & smiled naughtily actually uss matlab se bhi
he had that big flushing smile on his face now.
She pulled his cheek.. u r blushing. He was so embarrassed.
she smiled.. he smiled again..
both laughed..
Wat r u celebrating
he proudly held his collar I topped & fell back in the sofa next to her
really.. I also topped, wat a coincidence she giggled
chal joti.. he pushed her arm
aacha tum top karo tho sach aur main karoon tho joot
she made a cute complaining face pouting.. looking away from him
he fluttered his eyes & looked at her.. he could hardly focus.. but could make out she was pouting
he made those innocent cute little face.. I didn't mean to hurt u
she twisted her lips & turned away crossing her arms
he held his ears.. I am sorry
uff ho...ms.. mrs..
wats ur name
stranger
she offered angrily
yah Mrs stranger
she narrowed her bows..I am not ur wife
his eyes popped out..wife??.. meri wife yeh kab huwa
she looked at him angrily u said Mrs stranger
& u r Mr Stranger
tho..
he said oblivious to wat ever was happening & talking
I am not Mrs Stranger
tho ban javo Mrs stranger
she blushed
Maan smiled hasin tho fasin
she instantly frowned aap mujhe fasa rahen the...
she angrily walked out after waking him & pushing him off the sofa
Maan immediately chased her ..nahi Mrs .. kya tha iska naam..
suno tho ms..mrs.. stra.. strangler.. rectangular.. kya hain
oye.. wife.. sun
javo main nahi bolti tum se.. aap mujhe fasa rahen the
nahi baba
sachi
he pinched his throat kasam se
teehk hain she smiled cutely
yeh tho maan gayen he wondered

they walked to the car park drunken.. stumbling ..leaning on each other... catching each other
I can't go home like this he said fishing his pocket
phir main ghar kaisen javongi
he tried to make sense.. nothing was making sense any way
just then his phone rang.. he saw it was prachi's call.. he shook his head & looked at the screen. He answered it very sincerely..
hello
prachi ' Maan
where r u?

Main kabse phone try kar rahi hoon
umm
prachi ' r u alright?
Umm
prachi ' r u sleeping
umm
prachi ' ok.. good night
umm
he cut the call & kept the phone inside
Geet teased umm.. GF ka call hain
he smiled feeling shy
aapke toten udd gayen the uski awaz sun ke
aisen nahi hain .. I am not scared of any one samjhi
u r
she teased pointing finger at him
he held her finger I am not
she laughed.. I heard ur..umm..umm
she pointed the finger u were scared..
he held her arms.. I am not
she muffled.. shaking
he narrowed his brows.. she continued to muffle
he cupped her face & raised to meet his eyes.. I am not
she looked into his eyes.. their diluted eyes froze. It seemed like freezing gaze without smile & silence for a few seconds.. first time they stared into each others eyes.. lost, drunk..


precap
raat baaki taliness baaki
-PREV PART 26 NEXT PART 28-
plz check for the updates on the Maaneet FF thread
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful update.. I am not liking Prachi's nature.. I am sure she will accuse Geet when Maan and Geet start loving each other..

Saw the updating status.. waiting 😊
Edited by febinyusuff - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome!!
did he not see her face this time...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome muskaan , loved it!

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