~*~PYAAR KA EK NAGHMA~*~ thrd2 smal prts pg 32

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savie_

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Posted: 13 years ago

well thanks to all for ur support ...
me very very glad dat i have started a new thread ...
me have really not thought in my dreamz dat my story will go so ahead ..
thanks to all for ur supprt and increasing my confidence ...

THREAD 1

~~~~~INDEX~~~~~

part 31 - pg 19

pg 21 - 2 small parts

pg 23 - 2 small parts

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savie_

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Posted: 13 years ago

part 28

sun rises the next day ..
it was an important day for arjun and arohi as it will change deir lifes ..
the preparation for the marraige started ..
deir was high security in and out of the mansion ...
deir were special security cameras around arohi's room to ensure dat she, geet and the baby is safe ...
only allowwed people can go in dat rooms .. others were stopped by the guards .. even is dey want to meet the bride ..
only famile members were aloowed to go inside .. plus the beauticians ..the best beautician of delhi was called for arohi and geet ..
geet and maan were busy wid the preparations of the ceremony .. maan used to keep an eye on geet to check about her ..
he started getting concerned about her after wat happened in the ring ceremony ...
geet used to be away from maan to stop the unknown feelings dat were growing in her ..
geet was standing near a lady carying flowers in a basket ... vicky nd dia came running from behind and mistakenly pushed geet ..
geet was about to fall ..
maan on the other side saw geet falling down ..
he ran and caught her from her waist . but he also lost his balance and felll down wid geet ..
to save geet from any injury .. he turned himself around and by now maan was on the floor wid geet over him ..
also the lady lost her balance and the flowers made deir way down on maaneet ..
( haye ..!!! such a romantic scene ... .. mai toh hui fida iss par )
maan helped geet in standing ...
den maan stood himself ..
geet started cleaning herself ... she started dirtying off the flower petals ..
maan got lost in her and forwarded his hand to remove the petals dat were strucked in her hair .. geet turned her face to look towards him .. maan hurriedly backed off his hand and turned his head away ..
geet said slowly - thanks ..
and went from dere ..
maan to went away from dere ..
maan was angry on vicky and dia for making geeet fall ... if she was hurt den he wont leave dem .. but he was also thank sul to dem .. to bring geet so close to him ..
well for the socres he forgot his anger and thanked dem in his mind ..
finally the evening arrived ..
guests started to enter ..
the place was decorated beautfully .

arohi's look.

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arjun's look .
maan's look .

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geet's look.

geet and maan came downstairs to attend the guests ...
maan's eyes got struck seeeing the beauty in front of her ... sameera was also standing close to maan ... she was geeeting jealous of geet .. every men around dere were dying to have a hand shake wid her ...sameera saw maan staring geet .. she was cursing geet in her mind ...she moved forward and hid behind a pillar ..
she took her leg forward .. due to which geet got entagled and was about to fall ...
every men dere gasped seeing the beauty falling down .
maan ran and hold her from her waist ...
every men dere werre jealous of maan . while every women in dere was jealous of geet ...
maan and geet got lost in her eyes ..
sameera was burning in jealousy ...
(hahahhahhaaa .. bechari .. uski chal ussi par bhari ..)
mr. khurana and mr. handa even saw dis ..
dey were happy dat deir relation was moving forward ..
mr. handa was satisfied wid maan .. he kind of liked him for his elder daughter ...
while mr. khurana was fullly impressed wid geet .. he knew about maan and sameera being in a relation .. he hated sameeera but luved geet and want her to be his badi bahu ..
mr. handa and mr. khurana wanted to woo the problems dat were dere in khurana and handa family ..
dey were frends in colledge but got seperated becoz of a lady .. and dat lady was mrs. vardhan .. she was sticked to dem becoz of deir money ..
but dey maried 2 best frends ...
mohinder and sanjay married ... rano and preety respectively ...
but dis lady mrs. vardhan created rifts between dem ..
but when the sky was clear and the truth came out .. both were kiiling demselves inside for not trusting deir best frend ... dey were not having courage to go and say srry to each other ...
finnaly mr. handa went to mr. khuarana ...
both of dem stood against each other and suddenly dey hugged each other ..
tears of joy were coming from both of deir eyes ..
mrs. khuaran came from behind and kept her hand on both of deir shoulders ..
and said - kab se toh yehi chahti thi .. jo chahti thi voh aaj ho hi gaya akhir ...
dey both pullled demselves out of the hug ..
and said together - welcome back veeru ..
and laughed together ..
both of dem wiped deir tears ..
mr. khurana - dekh rha hai .. hum dono ke baache ek dusre ko pasand karne lage hain ..
mr handa laughed and said - hahaha ... mujhe toh maan pasand hai ..
mr. khurana - aur mujhe geet ..
mrs. vardhan came from behind and said - finally finallly tum dono mai dubara dosti ho hi gayi ...
iss dosti ko mai dubara tod dalungi ... aesa todungi ki dubara kabhi nhi judegi ..
mr. khurana and mr. handa holded each others hand tightly and said - iss dosti ko ab tum kya koi bhi nhi tod payega ...
mrs. vardhan got angry seeing dis and cursing dem went from dere ..
( dono maa- beti planning me no. 1 ... abhi ek ne maar khayi ..dusri bhi jaldi se maar khayegi )
maan helped geet in standing back ..
she stood up .. adjusted her pallu .. and slowly said - thank u ..
she again went from dere hurriedly ..
while maan was still lost in his world ..
he was lost in her eyes ..
but sameera came from behimd and started dusting off his kurta ..
and says - yeh geet bhi na .. sabka dhyan khheenchne ke liye girne ki acting karti hai .. iss chakar mai tumhari sarrii dress bhi kharab kar di ... yeh ladki apni chaloon se shudhregi nhi ..
maan gets angry on listening dis and snaps away her hand ...
maan - geet e liye ek bara lavz bhi mat nikalna apne muh se ..
sameera - maan tum usse giri hui ladki ke liye mujhse lad rhe ho ...
maan - shut up sameera .. voh jaan poochkar toh giregi nhi .. galti se gir gayi thi .. so jst leave dis now ..
sameera in an angry mood - okk...
maan leaves from dere ..
geet runs from dere .. and goes towards the balcony .. she looks above in the sky .. and closes her eyes and lets the cool wind touches her face ..
she closes her eyes and starts speaking - yeh kya ho rha hai mujhe ... kyun mai maan ki ankhon mai jaise gum si ho gayi thi .. etena secure feel kar rhi thi uske saath .. aesa lag rha tha jaise duniya ki koi bhi shaqti mera kuch nhi bigad sakti ...
geet tighly closes her eyes .. and opens it rapidly ..and whispers to herself - yeh khayal apne dimag se nikal de geeet ... yeh jo kuch bhi tujhe lag rha hai voh sabh aese hi hai .. koi matlab nhi hai in baaton ka ... tu bas maan se duur rehna .. tu usse duur rahegi toh ye batein tere dimag se apne aap chali jayegi ...
phew..!!! she takes a deep breath and leaves from dere and goes towards the hall ..
while on the other side maan comes running trying to find geet ...
he sees geeet standing in the balcony talking to herself ..
he moves closer and hids behind a pillar ..
and listens to everything she says .. he was sure dat she had started developing a kind of feeling in her heart .. dat feeling is unknown for her but for he knew it is love ...

so i hope u all will luv dis part ...
do comment gyz ..
me waiting for dem ..
luv u all ..
~~ savie ..

my new SS - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1931736/love-story-1850-mg-ss

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Smily

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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome update

luvd it

thanks for the pm

continue soon

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Remya

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Posted: 13 years ago

wow!finally maan heard her dil ki baat..
so nw he cant make her ignore..
Happy diwali and congrats for the new thread..

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Zohamaaneet

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Posted: 13 years ago

awesoem yaar
we loved maaneet moments were too good
and happy to hear that handa and khurana misunderstanding gone and that mess was created by our none other then sameera mom
same character even her daughter had cool negative ppl of the world
thanx for update and pm
continue soon