Mayur FF : The perfect couple lastpart pg29 edited - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
Nice update
But whats up with Mayur?and why are they getting engaged to Ria and RV?😕
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wowow tht was nice precap what the hell mayur get different partner for engement tht may be getting intrestingg iun ki lari sab limit cross kar rahy hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
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so cute funny and interesting part
By God kitna larta ha
precape is so horrible i hope asa na ho
thanks for pm
cont soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey last mein ye kya kiya . please yar jaldi update kar thik karo
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Such a awesome update dear
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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hi friends happy diwali

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part 6

as days were passing RV and ria became very close to mayur. First Rv wanted to take revenge on nupur for her slap but soon he startd loving her like hell .Ria and RV nver expected that they can love somone so much they also left there attitude and all started liking them now the gang has become complete .

In the hospital

Shobha walk talking to patient mayank calls her she talks to him

Mrs.Gupta-aapki beti

Shobha-nahin mera beta

MrsGupta-maine toh suna hain aapki ladki hain

Shobha-haan mayank mere dost ka beta haain par usse apni beti se jyada pyar karti hun kaash woh mera khud ka beta hota

MrsGupta-aapki betiki shaadhi usse kijiye woh aapka official beta banega

Shobha-main bhiyehi chahti hun par undono ko dekhkar nahin lagta dono kabhisaath main rahenge kitna ladte hain dono

it was valentines daay last year for all everyone have there own plans for that day RV and Ria plan to propose mayur. All the girls were blindfolded and asked to pick their partners mayank and Rv were standing beside each other nupur comes to them and before she catches mayanks hand RV moves his hand forward touching nupur and ria catches mayanks hand . So mayur dance with RV and Ria.During the whole song they were busy staring at mayur and mayur in there own world.

After song RV sits on his knees takes a ring and propposes nupur

RV-I love you nupur

N-wat

RV-mujhe khud nahin pata kab se par jab maine pehli baar tumhein dekha hain I started falling for you aur dinba din woh badta hi jaa raha hain main tumhaare bina jee nahin sakta aur yeh main dil se keh raha hun meri life main maine agar seriously kisiko chaha hain toh woh tum ho

Mayank was having good fun watching all this

Nupur was like getting mad

N-tum paagal ho gaye ho main yeh pyar vyar pe barosa nahin kartimujhe allergy hain is pyar se mujhe lagaa tum atleast sab ki tarah nahin ho but you also oh God aapne ek ko bhi akal nahin diya kya sorry RV main tumse pyar nahin kar sakti

Mayank was laughing wholeheartedly but his laugh didnt long forever

M-yeh RV bhi na use aur koi ladki mili nahin kya jo nupur ke peeche pada chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye woh kisise pyar nahin karegi aur waise bhi yeh pyar vyar hota hi nahin

Ria-hota hain

M-dont say tum bhi kisise pyar karte ho

Ria-yes i love you mayank

M-wat

Nupur was enjoying now

Ria-haan mayank jo kuch RV nupur ke liye feel karta hain wohi main tumhare liye bhi feel karti hun

M-oh really jo nupur pyar ke liye feel karti hain meri bhi same feeling hain I am sorry i cant love you Actually meri hi galti hain jo is valentines ball pe aaya yeh jaante hue ki yehaan pe sab ko ek hi cheez nazar aata hain the most irritating thing called love

Mayur leave home

After they reach home shilpa asks them how was the party

M-bada mazaa aaya nupur ko naya boyfriend jo mila

N-tumhein itni jealousy kyun ho rahi hain tumhein bhi girlfriend mili na

M-haan woh toh hain kitni beautiful hain college ki sabse sundar ladki

N-mera boyfriend bhi college ka sabse handsome ladka

Shilpa-tum dono yeh kya baatein kar rahe ho eeda seeda batao baat kya hain t kisise pyar karti hain

M-maa main kabse yehi keh raha hun RV uska naya boyfrined hain jisne pure college ke saamne use propose kiya

N-Ria ne bhi toh tumhein pure college ke saamne propose kiya apni love story nahin bataoge

M-tum hona bataane ke liye

Mayurs words made there parents feel that these two are seriously in love with RV and Ria though they felt bad they need to accept the truth.

They called RV and Ria's parents as there final year is getting over in two months mayur parents wanted this marriage to happen as soon as posssible o that it can relieve there pain a little.

One day mayurcome home asusual fighting they see RV and Ria with there parents they look at each other.in confusion

N-mom yehsab kya hain

Shilpa-woh log tum donoke rishtey ki baat karne aaye hain humein pata hain tum dono kya chahte ho aur ismein koi galat baat nahin hain humein tum dono ki khushi se jyada kuch nahin chahiye isiliye humne tum dono ka rishta tay kiya hain

Mayur look at each other and smile

N-mom aapna world ki best mom ho bina bole hi meri dil ki baat jaanli

Shilpa-tujhe is shaadhi se koi aitraaz nahin hain

N-hogi kyun aakhir ladka hain hi itna handsome aur uske parents bhi achehi lag rahe hain thanks mom mere liye itna acha rishta set karne ke liye(sh hugs shilpa and smiles shilpa feels sad)

Shobha-mayu tu kya kehta hain

M-aapko kehne ki kya zaroorat hain aap toh bina kahe hi aapne mere liye yeh sab kiya hain you are just the best

He hugs her smiling she was sad

Onthe other side rv and ria were completely confused. But in heart Ria was happy she tought may be mayank wanted to to give her suprise

Rv 'mujhe tumse private main baat karni hain

N-ya sure

They go out

RV-nupur tumhein pehle pyar pe barosa nahin tha na achank kaise maan gayi

N-(in full nautanki)meri mom ki khushi ke liye meri mom jo chahegi main wohi karoongi

RV-par pyar

N-tumhein shaadhi chahiye ya pyar

Rv-matlab

N-tumhein shaadhi chahiye toh stupid questions poochna band karo aur pyar chahiye toh tum apne ghar jao main apni ghar jaa rahi hun bye

Rv wanted nupur at any cost so he silently accepts for marriage par ria oncloud nine thinking mayank loves her.

Engagement was fixed one month later

During this whole month mayur were still the same always together and they used to make stpid reasons when RV or Ria asked them for anything they were completely confused with mayur behaviour they still used to sit together. Actually whole college was confused with mayur acceptance for marriae what were they doing actually

Suddenly one day RV meets with accident and mayur see him on the road. They take him to hospital Ria and gang come there nupur was panicked seeing rv like that she was unable to speakshe was crying non stop mayank takes her from there seeing her situtation

In the car

M-tu rona band kar tension kyun leti hain main hoon na tere saath

N-mayank mujhe bahut darr lag raha hain

He catches her hand she laces head on his shoulder

M-dont worry woh teek hain use kuch nahin hua paanipuri khane chale

N-haan zaroor tu paaniuri khilayega boleto shocking

M-mazak kar raha tha tujhe normal karne ke liye

N-matlab tu leke nahin jayega

M-nahin

N-sadu stupid idiot monkey

She starts beating him

Rv requests not to inform his parents about accident otherwise it will become a big problem Rv recover by the time of engagement

On the engagement nupur weres marun colour lehenga looking mindblowing RV was busy staring at her and ria wears green colour lehanga looking beautiful

Ria-kaise hun

M-bahut sundar

Rv-tum bahut sundar lag rahi ho

N-thanks

Shilpa calls Rv to talk to him

N-mom se kya baat ki

Rv-secret hain

engament ceremony happens

Rvand nupur exchange rings and ria and mayank exchange rings

After engagement

N-mom

Shilpa turns nupur gooes to RVs mom

Shilpa feels bad same was with shobha. They were showing as they were happy but internally they were unhappy

After the engagement mayank goes to meet nupur

Shobha-tu yehaan iswaqt kya kar raha hain

M-mujhe nupur se kuch kaam tha

Shobha-tere liye yehi teek hain ki tu ab nupur se aur humse dur rahe

M-kyun mom

Shobha 'tum dono ki shaadhi hone waali hain tum dono ko ab ek saath ghumna tik nahin sab tum dono ke baare main galat samjenge

M-isse pehle bhi hum ek saath the tab kisine galat nahin samja ab kyun

Shobha-tabki baat alag hain aur ab ki baat alag hain

M-par mom

Shobha-ab yeh mom kehna band karde teri mom ab koi aur hain

M-tik hain nahin bulaonga naahin yehaan aane waala apna book leke jaa raha hun

(he goes to nupurs room takeshis book and leaves in anger)

Shashi-kya zaroorat thi usse ase baat karne ki undono ka rishta bahut gehra hain undono ko alag karna itna aasaan nahin hain

Shobha-dono alag ho gaye hain ab kuch bacha nahin hain aur ab main nahin chahti meri beti par koi ungli utaye kisi paraaye ki wajah se

Shashi-mayu kabse paraaya hogaya woh toh tera laadla beta tha na

Shobha-woh ek jooth hain jise main sach samaj kar jee rahi thi mujhe laga yeh jooth ek din sach banega par ab yeh jooth kabhi sach main nahin badlega mujhe yakeen hogya hain

He puts hands on her sholder

Shobha-main teek hun

Shashi-(to himself )mujhe pata hain tum teek nahin ho par main chah kar bhi kush nahin kar sakta yeh decison undono ka hain jise humein maanne ke alawa aur koi chara nahin hain

in night in shilpas room

Sanjay-tumne Rv sekya baat ki bahut pareshan lag rahi thi

Shilpa-mujhe ek letter mila tha usmein likha tha RV bahut bura ladka hain woh nupur ke laayak nahin hain woh nupur se badla lene ke liye shaadhi kar raha hain isi sisiley main maine RV se baat ki usne kahaan ki haan yeh sach hain par ab woh sach main nupur se pyar karta hain usne ani mom ki kasam bhi di

Sanjay-phir kya problem hain aise letters bekaar log likte hain humein inpar jyada dhyan nahin dena chahiye

Shilpa-pata nahin kyun mujhe bahut darr lag raha hain meri bachi ke saath kuch galat na ho

Sanjay 'tumhara darr RV pe nahin nupur ko kone ka hain maine jab se yeh shaadhi tay hui tabse aaj tak ek pal ke liye bhi tumhare chehre pe hasi nahin dekhi hain

Shilpa-kaise has sakti hun yeh jaante hue meri bachi ab meri nahin rahegi maine mayank sebhi jyada nupur se pyar kiya hamesha yehi socti thi ladki shaadhi ke baad ghar chod ke jaati hain par meri shaadhi ke baad hamesha hamesha ke liye mere ghar aayegi inki shaadhi mere liye sapna thi parsabki tarah mujhe bhi shaadhi ke baad apni beti ko hamesha hamesha ke liye bidaa karoongi uske baaduse main yaad rahoongi ya nahin bhi nahin pata uski mom main nahin koi aur banegi

Sanjay-undono ke naseeb main ek saath rehna nahin likha hain hum kya kar sakte hain tumhein jitna takleef hain utna hi mujhe bhi hain par main tumhari tarah jata nahin sakta shayad hamaari khushi yehi tak hain par hm sah se muh nahin mod sakte tumhein nupur ko khushi khushi bidaa karna hoga taaki hamari bachi ki muskaan uske chehre par hamesha bani rahe aur Ria ke liye bi toh hamara farz banta hain woh hamaari pasand ho ya na ho hamaare bete ke liye apna sab kuch chod kar hamare saath rehne aayi hain humein bhi uski aadat dal deni chahiye

She hugs him and crys

Dadi listens to them and leaves with tears

Mayank was bus reading book

Dadi-kya kar raha hain

M-exams ki tayyari kar raha hun ab shaadhi ki date exams se pehle aayi tab main pad nahin paonga isiliye abhi prepare ho raha hun

Dadi-tu is shaadhi se khush hain na beta

He smiles

Dadi -tujhe ria kyunpasand aayi

M-yeh sawaal aap ab pooch rahi hain

Dadi-aise hi

M-mom ko pasand hain isiliye mujhe pasand hain

Dadi-agar tumhari mom ko yeh pasand nahin hain toh

M-main apni mom ko ache se jaanta hun mujhe pata hain unhein kya chahiye aur wohi ho raha hain

Dadi 'lekin mayu

M-dadi mujhe bahut neend aarahi hain kal sbah baat karenge good night

Next day mayu doesnt go to bhushan house for breakfast and shobha stops nupur going to sharma house later she only drops nupur at college mayank doesnt react nor nupur says anything she silently goes to class.

In class RV sits in mayanks place mayank silently goes and sits back. Ria comes and sits beside him

Shukla sir enters and gives file to RV thinking mayank

Shukla-aap yehaan kyun baite hain mahoday maank sarma aa apni jagah pe baitiye warna mujhe mushkil hogaMayank comes and sits beside nupur

In lnch ria asks mayank to take her out

M-sorrry mujhe library main work hain

R-kya tum mere liye itna nahin kar sakte

M-nahin(he leaves)

R-ise samajna mushkil hi nahin naamumkin hain

Nupur was sitting and chatting with uday

Rv comes there catches her hand she takesit back

Rv-kahin baahar chale

N-nahin mujhe adna hain exams paas main hai upar se yeh shadhi agar neglect kiya toh mayank ka bacha first aayega jo main nahin chahti

Rv-tumhein jab dekho mayank ke alawa kuch nahin sujta ab hamaari shaadhi hone waali hain usse dur raho

N-main kya karun yeh decide karne waale tum hote kaun ho

Rv-tumhara hone waala pati

N-jo hua hain uski aaj tak nahin suni tumhari kya khaas sunungi

Rv-hua hain matlab

N-main apni ma a ki baat kar rahi hun unhone bhi mujhe control karne ki bahut koshish ki par maine wohi kiya jo mujhe pasand hain

She then recieves a call

N-hello mom

Rv-mom ka phone

N-tumhari mom nahin meri mom ka phone hain

(she goes from there)

Rv-ise samajna impossible hain

U-meri sweet sis hain hi aisi kaafi complicated

Shilpa-t aaj ghar pe kyun nahin aayi

N-maa ne mana kiya tha aapko pata hain na kitna sar kaati hain

She smiles for nupurs childishness

Shilpa-shbha tikhi keh rahi thitujhe ab yehaan nahin aana chahiye

N-mujhe lagaa aap mere team main ho aapne bhi unki team join kar liya waisemaa keh rahi thi main aappko mom bolna band kardoon mainaapko kya bulaomeri mom tohkoi aur hain aur Ria aapko mom bulayegi

Shilpa-tum mujhe jaise bhi bulao mujhe koi faraq nahin padega tu meri beti hain aur hamesha meri beti hi rahogi

N-main jaanti hun acha main koshish karooongi maa ke aane se pehle ghar aake aapse milne ki shut main toh bhul gayi mujhe pick karne maa aarahi hain ye maa bhi na meri bodyguard ban gayi jab dekho meere peeche hi rehti hain yeh mat karo woh mat karo bolke sar khati rehti hain

Shilpa-woh jo bhi kar rahi hain teri balai ke liye kar rahi hain

N-kya balaai aap bhi mom ki tarah baat kar rahi hain mujhe aapse baat nahin karni

(she cuts phone and smiles a tear drops from shilpas eye)

As days were passing there pain was increasing shilpa was missing nupur badly and shobha wanted to talk to mayank bt controlled herself alast maariage day has come whole house was decorated with lights.

Marriage was in bhushan house Ria and Rv have already started mayur were sitting in thier room with broad smile they were very happy

Dhruv and Natasha were also coming to marriage Dhruv is nupurs lover and Nataasha is mayanks lover.

Rv mom shows shobha a letter shobha a letter all were shocked

Precap-wait and watch kahaani abhi baaki hain

Pyar ka sacha matlab jaanna hain toh next update ka wait karna padega

Bye

Take care

Miss you all

Next update on 16th

Edited by --unknown-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful update dear fond it the pm
Edited by SamiraARTiMAYUR - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update.
waitign for next update
cotinue soon
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely update...

i just hope ki mayur ki shaadi ek dusre se ho... kisi aur se nahi...

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