Mayur FF : The perfect couple lastpart pg29 edited - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
OH GOD - dont know whats happening
kya mayur ek dusre kliye kuch nehi feel karti??
aram se rv+ ia se shaadi kar rahe hai??
huh- i dont want to see nups with RV and Mayank with ria
lekin mujhe laagta hai- next update main mayur ki shaadi hojayegi...LOL
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62

wait and watch kahaani abhi baaki hain

Pyar ka sacha matlab jaanna hain toh next update ka wait karna padega...


are ye to tumne dhoka kiya hamare saath😭...

i was reading it so keenly...i was thinking that it will end today only...but lagta hai I've to wait till next update...

but want to tell you what a lovely update...

i just loved it...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I hope mayur ki shaadi ho. mayur ko aalag mat karo
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Plz plz Mayur ki shadi karwa do
thanks for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice updt dear
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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dhruv and natasha😲
oye plz update karna soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi Guys atlast I am back with my updates lots of confusions were left in last updates I am sorry for late updates but I was busy in some important work but as i told I updated I hope ki isbaar atleast aapko mere updates pasand aaye

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Posted: 13 years ago
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part7

Main jaanthi hun aap mayur se kaafi naaraz hain aur mujhse bhi par aapko aaj ke baad bahut bada dhaka lagega so catch your hearts when you read and by the end of this aapko RV aur Ria par taras aayega

Rv ke parents ko ek letter milti hain usmein yeh likha hain ki mayur ke beech kuch chal raha hain agar aap apne bacho ki shaadhi unse karenge toh unki zindagi barbaad hojayegi

Shilpa-mujhe pehle bhi aise anjaan letter mila

They check both letters and t their shck both letters are of ame handwriting

Shilpa-koi hain jo yeh shaadhi thodna chahta hain par aisa kaun karega

Dhruv-aapki laadli beti nupur

Dhruv enters with natasha

Shilpa-tum ho kaun aur yeh kya bol rahe ho nupur aisa kyun karegi

Natasha-kyunki use yeh shaadhi karni hi nahin hain woh mayank se pyar karti hain

Dhruv-tum yeh kya keh rahi ho undono ko pyar naam ke shabd se allergy hain

Natasha-haan bhul gyi donosoulmates hain right

All were confused

Dhruv-shayad aapko hum kya keh rahe hain samaj nahin aarahaan jab hum graduation ke final year main the hum log ek vacation pe gaye the hum charo best friends the par main nupur se bahut pyar karta tha use maine propose kia usne manaa kiya kehne lagi pyar pe barosa nahin hain

Hum log wahaan trip pe full enjoy kar rahe the ek din achanak ek party main inke drink main kisine kuch milaaya tha jiski wajah e dono hosh ko baite aur hum hosh main aaye

Natasha-nupur you are not fine chalo yehaan se

She frees her hand

N-mujhe tumhare saath nahin mayank ke saath jaana hain

Natasha –uska bhi wohi haal hain woh tumhein lekar nahin jaa sakta

N-mujhe kuch nahin pata mujhe mayank ke aath jaongi warna warna (she sits on chair) main raat bar yehi rahooongi

With great difficulty they make mayur sit in back seat

N-mayank tum aagaye mujhe lagaa tum mujhe chod kar chale gaye

m-main meri nupur ko chod kar kaise jaa sakta hun

Natasha-meri nupur

Nupur hugs mayank and closes her eyes like a kid he hugs her back

After they reach the room

Dhruv lays mayank on bed

Mayank catches dhruvs hand

M-mujhe chod kar jaa rahi ho please mat jaona yehi raho na mere paas pleae nupur dont leave me

Natasha makes nupur sleep on bed

N-mayank mere paas raho na mujhe tumhare bina kuch acha nahin lagta

She catches natashas hand and sleeps

Next day morning natasha and dhruv take mayur to top of a hill

M-yehaan kyun laaye ho

N-kahin dhruv tum dono hamare rejection se up set hokar suicide attempt toh plan nahin kiya

Natasha-hum dono suicide nahin karenge tum dono ko neeche phekenge

N-natasha tum mazak acha karti ho

Dhruv –tum logo ke jitna nahin

M-humne kab mazaak kiya

Natasha-kab tum dono har pal wohi karte ho saaf saaf batao tum dono ke beech kya chal raha hain

Both-hawaa

Dhruv –mujhe gussa mat dilao seeda seeda batao itne din sabke saamne jaani dushman ki tarah kyun ladte the

N-ek wajah ho to batao ise mujhe tang karne ke alawa koi kaam nahin

Natasha-toh tum dono ek dusre ko hate karte ho

M-ladne ka matlab hate karna nahin hota

Natasha-so you love nupur

m-pyar mujhe us word pe hi barosa nahin hain sab log apne faide ke liye pyar naam ke word use karte hain

Natasha-par nupsi tumse pyar karti hain

N-tumse kisne kahaan ki main mayank se pyar karti hun

Natasha-nahin karti toh kal raat overaction kyun kar rahi thi bhul gayi

N-overaction woh yaad aaya mujhe lagaa ki tum mayank ho isiliye aise kahaan

Natasha-tu jaanti hain tune kya kahaan

N-haan jaanthi hun

Natasha-phir tune pehle kyun nahin bataya

N-tumne poocha nahin toh main kyun bolun

M-koi mujhe batayegaa ki tum dono kya discuss kar rahi ho

N-woh mayank kal raat drunken stage main maine tumhara haath samaj kar natasha ke haath ko pakad ke sogayi

M-itni si baat ke liye itna overaction kar rahi thi

Natasha-itni si baat tumhein pata hain nupur ke dil main tumhare liye kya feelings hain

M-mujhe nahin pata hoga toh aur kise hoga

Dhruv-tumhein pata toh itne din chup kyun ho

M-toh kya karoon mike pe announcement karoon

Dhruv - guys saaf saaf batao ki tum dono ke beech main kya hain tumlog itne bevakuf nahin ho ki tum dono ko yeh bhi samaj nahin aaye ki main kya keh rahina hun

N-acha teek hain bolte hain itna serious kyun hote ho

Mayur sit cooly on wall nearby and dhruv and natasha sit on car

N-we are not lovers we are solumateshamaara relationship ussi din shuru hua jis din hum paida hue the hum dono bina kahe hi ek dusre ki dil ki baat samaj sakte hain hamaara relation sab ki tarah nahin hain unique hain hum ladte ek dusre ke liye hain tum jaanthi hamesha main mayank se kyun competition kyun lagati hun kyunki mayank haarega toh sirf mere haato main aur jeetega toh mere haato main meri har jeet mayank ke liye hain aur mayank ki ha jeet mere liye hain hum dono kabhi alag hue toh usi pal hamaari saas rukh jaayegi tumhein ek aur baat batao mere room ki har ek cheez mere saath sab kuch mayank ke taste ke hisaab se hain aur uske room ke saare cheezein mere taste ke hisaab se hain yehaan tak uske room ka colour bhi meri favourite colour hain maine mayank ki har cheez ko apne cheezo se jyada sambhala aur uske parents ko bhi khud ke parents se jyada pyar kiya hum dono ki jaan ek dusre main basi hain main mayank kesaath rehne ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hun main jab paanch saal ki thi tab dadi ne kahaan tha karvachauth ka vrat rakhne se hum jise sabse jyada chahte haiin woh hamaare saath rehta hain aur main tabse lekar aaj tak every year karva chauth ki vrat rakti hun mayank ke bina main kuch bhi nahin hun main jeeti hun uske liye aur chahe toh uske liye meri jaan bhi dedoongi

He keeps finger on her lips

Natasha-agar tum dono itna pyar ok sorry ek dusre ko chahte ho toh ladte kyun ho

N-timepass ke liye ek dusre ki attentioon paane ke liye

Dhruv-agar tum dono ke beech itna kuch hain toh kabhi humein kuch kahaan kyun nahin

M-kyunki tumne kabhi poocha nahin aaj poocha isiliye kahaan

Both look at each other in confusion

M- i think tum dono ke saare doubts clear ho gaye hain ab chale

Dhruv-yehain aapke bacho ki kahaani

All were confused

Rv-agar dono ek dusre ke liye itna paagal hain toh dono ne shaadhi ke liye haan kyun ki

Natasha-iska jawaab nupurhi de sakti hain

Nupur was listening everything from back

N-thankyou bhagwanji is dhruv aur natasha ne meri bahut badi problem solve kardi ab mujhe aur mayank ko koi alag nahin kar sakta

She remembers past

On engagement day she only wrote letter against RV and sent it to shilpa thinking shilpa will stop the engament

One day before marriage nupur gets call from natasha

Natasha-yeh kya mazak hain tu kisi aur se shaadhi kar rahi hain

N-shaadhi toh meri mayank se hi hogi uske liye kya karna hain mujhe pata hain

She writes letter about her and mayank to stop marriage but something else happens solving her problem

She was smiling hiding backside shilpa catches her ear and brings her out

Shilpa-yeh kya hain nupur jo yeh keh rahe hain sach hain

She nods saying yes

All were shocked with her answer noone ever expected even in there dream that they love each other somuch

Shilpa-maine tujhe mayank se shaadhi karne ke liye mana kiya tha kya jo tune itna bada naatak kiya

N-aapne kahaan bhi toh nahin ki main aapki beti banu kisi aur ko meri jagah dediya gussa toh aayega na

Shilpa-tum dono ne hi toh kahaan tha ria mayank ki girlfriend hain

N-woh hum mazak kar rahe the

Shilpa-ab mujhe kaise pata chalega tum dono serious kab ho aur kab mazak kar rahe ho aur woh shaadhi ka faisla bhi tumse pooch kar hi kiya tha na

N-mujhse pooch kar , saari arrangements karke last main mujhe bataya aap toh kehti hain mujhe bahut ache se samajthi hain itni si baat nahin samja paaye

Shila-sorry

She smiles and hugs her

Rv-tumne apne mom ko sataane ke liye mera use kiya

N-tumne bhi toh apna badla lene keliye pyar ka naatak kiya

Rv-baad main I was serious

N-main bhi serious thi maine pehle din bataya yeh shaadhi main apne mom ke liye kar rahi hun aur tum bina kuch pooche haan keh diya itne dino main maine ek baar bhi tumse yeh kahaan ki main tumse pyar karti hun usdin mere mana karne ke bavajud tum apne parents ke saath rishta lekar aagaye agar tum nahin samje toh galti tumhari hain meri nahin

RV-tumne teek kahaan main bhi kitna badha bevakuf hun yeh jaante hue tum paagal ho tumse pyar kiya

N-dont worry kabhi kabhi galti ho jaati hain

Shobha-shilpa tune hi ise sar pe chadaaya hain ab dekho isne kya kiya bachpana ki bhi had hoti hain

Shilpa-galti sirf meri beti ki nahin tumhare bete ki bhi hain agar yeh chup hain toh woh bata sakta tha na

N-love you mom

She sends someone to call mayank

Shobha-mayu yeh sab kya hain main jaanti hun iska dimaag kharaab hain par tu bhi iske saath tu mujhe bata sakta tha na

M-main aapko kyun bolun aap mujhe apna beta hi nahin samajti isiliye toh ghar aane se restrict kiya

Shobha-woh maine gusse main kahaan tha

M-gussa kis baat ki

Shobha-tu kisi aur se shaadhi kar raha tha isliye

M-shaadhi ka decision aapne liya tha maine nahin

Shobha-par maine tujhse poocha tha

M-kab decision lene ke baad mujhe aapse baat hi nahin karni ek toh meri place kisi aur dene ki koshish ki upar se mujh par hi gussa kiya actually meri h igalti hain main hamesha aapki baat chup chap sunta hun na isiliye meri koi value hi nahin hain

Ria-mayank tum apne mom se baad main ladna pehle mujhe yeh batao tumne apna gussa nikalne ke liye mera faida utaya

M-tumhein brain nahin hain toh main kya karun

Ria-what

M-haan tumne ek baar bhi mujhse yeh poocha usdin reject karke achanak shaadhi ke liye kaise maan gaya uske baad bhi kabhi main tumhare saath baahar gaya ya kabhi tumhare saath flirt kiya yehaan tak ki class main bhi ek baar bhi tumhare saath baita ya fir tumhari taraf dekha tumhein tabhi mujhse poochna tha toh tumhein tumhara jawaab milta tha

Ria-class main shukla sir ne tumhein aage baitne ke liye kahaan tha aur ek baat tum hamesha mujhe library ka bahaana dete the mujhe laga tum studious ho

M-main jaan buz kar aise jagah baita aur jaanbuz kar shukla sir ko sataya ki woh khud mujhse kahe ki main apne place main waapas jaake baitoon aur us din bhi tum dono ne jabardasti hamaare baaju baitna chaha woh hamari marzi nahin thi

Ria-humein lagaa ki ab jab hamariengagement ho chuki hain toh woh mera right hain

M-isiliye kehtaa hun tum dono main thoda sa bhi dimaak nahin hain kyunki itne din hamaare aas paas gum rahe the ek baar bhi tum dono main se ek ne bhi hamaare fingers notice kiye hain nahin agar notice karte toh tumhein itna dur aana hi nahin padta

He shows his and nupurs hand there rings were already changed

Engagement day night mayank goes to her room and finds her sleeping he removes ring from her hand

M-mere nupur ke haato main kisi aur ka ring kabhi nahin

He putsher favourite pearls ring in her hand and he even removes his ring and makes nupur wear him ring

M-ab teek hain

He kisses her cheek and leaves she smiles

Ria-tumne ring kab badla

M-usi din raat ko humne tum dono kobahut saare hints diye the par tum dono ne ek hint bhi nahin liya toh hum kya kare yeh sab chodo main jab dekho nupur ke saath rehta hun tumhein ek baar bhi doubt nahin aaya hum dono par normally toh ek ladka ladki ko ek gante saath dekh kar ek hazaar rumours create karte hain hum toh har pal saath rehte hain kabhi tum main se kisi ko bhi shak nahin hua

N-yeh sab chodo we are sorry ki humne tum dono ka use kiya

Rias and rv parents doesnt listen but ria and rv convince them because they themselves have played with many peoples lifes and they felt they deserve the punishment

Shilpa-tum dono se main seedha seedha pooch rahi hoon tum dono kya chahte ho

N-mom aapko abhi bhi koi doubt hain kya itna clearly sab dekhne ke baad

Shilpa-doubt inpar nahin tum dono par hain pata nahin kab sach bolte ho aur kab mazak karte ho tum dono ko tum dono ke alawa koi bare nahin kar sakta hum bhi nahin

M-thanks for compliment maa

Shobha-mayu tu meri har baat maanta hain na main kehh rahi hoon tu nupur se shaadhi mat kar

M-tik hain jaise aapki marzi mujhe koi problem nahin hain

Dhruv-aunty please inki shaadhi karwaa dijiye warna pata nahin inke list main kitne logo ki life barbaad hogi pehle humein phir indono ko bevakuf banaya agar aise hi chod diya toh paata nahin aur kitne logo ka dil thodenge

Natasha-aur inki sabse badi khasiyat yeh hain ki itna kuch karne ke baad bhi inko itna sa bhi faraq nahin padta ulta humse poochte hain tum logo ne poocha nahin humne bataya nahin aaj tak aise love story nahin dekhi hain naahi suni dono ke dono unique hain

Both were having fun. Mayur ke famly ke paas inke shaadi karwaane ke alawa koi option nahin tha actually unsab ki bhi yehi marzi thi isiliye mayur itne realaxed the.

Yeh hain mere sweet se couple jo itna ladte hain par phir bhi dono ki jaan ek dusre main basi hain unki apni hi duniya hain woh dusro ko nahin apne duniya main aane dete hain naahin unki care karte hain. Woh apni relation ko pyar ka naam isiliye nahin dete kyunki unhein lagta hain pyar naam ka word kaafi polluted hain aur inki lovestory hain full pure jis tarah woh badte gaye waise hi undono ka rishta badta gaya bachpan se hi ek dusre ke saath rehna dono ko pasand tha wajah dono ko nahin pata agar nupur ko koi kuch bhi kehta toh mayank use nahin chodta uski smile ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hain aur nupur mayank ke saath rehne ke liye kisise bhi lad sakti hain. Aur haan meri couple hain unique inki sabse badi khasiyat yeh hain ki yeh apne relation ki bahut respect karte hain they have never done anything wrong till today mayanks first kiss to nupur was when he kept ring on her finger on engagement that too on her cheek they always maintained the space they have a lot of respect for there relation they dont like to showoff that was the main reason noone was able to guess what was going between them and two couples broke their heart and became a couple RV married Ria and Dhruv married Natasha long ago.one more great thing is they never say how much they love to each other because they can understand each other without speaking a word.Shayad ise hi sacha pyar kehta hain ya phir unconditional love. Suhaani who wanted to take revenge on mayur now feels her love is nothing infront of them because love is not liking just living for each other and living with with each other it doesnt mean a sacrifice but a promise of staying together even after lot of odds in life. No one can never ever seperate them because seperation comes where misunderstandings are there but these two talk to each other through hearts so point of misunderstanding never arises heart always says the truth

Atlast marriage was performed with all rituals and mayur were very happy atlast there biggest problem is solved

After marriage in their room mayank enters

N-agar tum yeh sochte ho ki main typical indian wife ki tarah tumhare pair chuongi toh tum galat sochte ho

M-main bhi tumhein confirm kardoon ki main bhi ache huusband ki tarah tumhar haan main haan nahin milaane waala

N-kaash meri shaadhi us Rv se hoti toh kitna acha hota

M-kaash main bhi ria se shaadhi karta

Both burst out laughing sitting beside each other giving a hifi indono ko sudharna impossible hain

She just placed head on his shoulder catching his arm

N-kitna drama hua tha na bilkul filmy story ki tarah chal raha tha thankgod end main Dhruv aur Natasha aagaye warna mujhe aur plans banane padte

M-sab kuch tumhari mom ki wajah se

She leaves him

N-galti tumhari mom ki bhi thi

M-meri mom galat nahin the sab kuch tumne aur tumhare mom ne kiya

N-meri mom ko kuch kahaana toh dekho kya karti hoon

M-kya karogi

She takes pillow slowly

Both start pillow fight full cotton falls on them both slip and mayank falls over nupur

Both smile he kisses her cheek and lies beside her

M-waise nupur tumne letter kyun likha

She gets up removing cotton on her hair

N-maine filmo main dekha hain letter ki wajah se shaadhi toot jaati hain isiliye woh idea use kiya

M-woh galat hain na sab hamaare baarein main hamaare parents ke baarein main kya sochenge

N-maine itna bhi kuch galat nahin likha jo sach hain wohi likha hain jab woh khud samaj nahin paarahe toh maine letter ka use kiya

M-phir bhi

N-mujhe tumse koi baat nahin karni tum sab logone apni man maani ki aur itna bada problem create kiya maine badi mushkil se ise solve kiya toh mujh par baras rahe ho tum akele raho main jaa rahi hun bye

She gets up and goes

M-yeh toh bataake kahaan jaa rahi ho subah subah tumhari mom aake sabse pehle yehi poochegi ki meri beti kahaan hain kya kiya tune uske saath

N-jahannum main jaa rahi hun chaloge

M-ab mujhe bahut neend aarahi hain phir kabhi chaloonga(smiling nauthily)

She goes inside washroom and removes her jewellry

N-pata nahin kaise musibat hain har kisiko main hi milti hun gussa karne ke liye upar se yeh shadhi ka jodha ur jewellry aise lag raha hain koi sa ukilo ka wajan uta rahi hun hamesha saare problems girls ko hi hote hain aur yeh ladke aam kaate baitte hain monkey kahika

He listens and smiles he changes his dress and goes to bed

She comes out and finds him sleeping she goes and sleeps keeping head over him

He kisses her forehead then lays her on bed kisses her eyes than lips

In the midnight

She was sleeping cooly placing head on him and hugging him tightly

M-meri neend udake madam aaraam se sorahi hain chal beta kaam pe lag ja

He takes one flower and moves it on her face which irritates her she sleepily

N-mayank kya kar rahe ho sone dena bahut mushkil se so rahi hun teen din se shaadhi ke chakkar main neend udgayi

He again moves flower

In anger she pinches his hand

M-auch kamini ab dekho main kya karta hun

He holds her wrist from back

She gets up shouting

N-auch chodo

M-nahin pehle sorry bol uske baad chodunga

N-nahin bolungi

M-main bhi nahin chodne waala tujhe aaj mujhse koi nahin bachane waala

Sh has tears in eyes he leaves her

M-tum ladkiyon ko na rona ache se aata hain

She makes a dull face

M-acha baba sorry

(she smiles and pinches his cheeks)

N-tune life main second time mujhe sorry kahaan so sweet acha ab mujhe sone de aur khud sojaa gudnight (she kisses his cheek)

She hugs him tighter and sleeps he kisses her cheek and hugs her more tight and sleeps

Both have a beautiful smile on their face as they have achieved what they want

Atlast aaj ka yudh samaapth hua pata nahin aage aage indono ka kya hoga

Edited by --unknown-- - 13 years ago
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Mayank gets mad with nupurs changed behaviour

He shouts

M-maa

Shilpa-pata nahin kansa earthquake aaya jo yeh itna pyar se bula raha hain

Shilpa and sanjay run to their room

Shilpa-kya hua

M-tumhari laadli beti paagal hogayi hain

Nupur behaving as adarsh wife stands silently

daal main kuch toh kaala hain

mayank hugs nupur suddenly she smiles and hugs him back both stay like that forgetiing everything

Edited by --unknown-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely updt
thanks for the pm

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