IRREVERSIBLE DESTINY(MG)PART 21 UPDATED - Page 14

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Posted: 13 years ago
yes yes yess... this is seriously needed nowww...šŸ˜†
šŸ˜†dont let the reality hit them soo sooonnn...
dont u dare break the trance b4 some 'ahem ahem' šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰
Edited by disha_Maan.GC - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesomeee
continue soonnn
read it frm d start n nvr wanted it 2 stop
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Posted: 13 years ago

IRREVERSIBLE DESTINY

CHAPTER-8

There was something at that moment'that ceased both of their actions'ceased the time'they couldn't'they just couldn't detach themselves from one another'.they stood together'.forgetting the world'forgetting the situations''forgetting that they were''''enemies'''''''!

"Geet'..!"it came out just like a whisper from Maan's mouth'..he couldn't remove his eyes off her'for a moment'.fearing she might disappear'..fearing the moment might just be an illusion''

She didn't respond to his call'but it well registered in her mind when she heard him call her name'.for the first time''.what was there in his eyes'that she froze her steps'..her heart was elated''she felt good,satisfied'.in his embrace''

Maan Singh Khurana'.was always alone in this cruel world'..inspite of having a family '.. he was alone'.all alone''.life was always the same for him'.duties'.crimes and hurdles'..hardships at every corner'love or care was something which he never got''never'.and when she stepped in his life in a rush'.it evoked such blizzard of emotions'.at every single moment when he saw her'.that he could never potray''but having her so near'.in his arms'..gave him a sense of completeness''

Tring'..tring'rang Maan's phone''.and the call ended'.as Adi signaled him that he escaped well''.

That broke the trance for both of them'.and they abrubtly'left each other'''''.

After straightening themselves''

"So,nice to meet you Officer Geet Handa'..!!"

"Geet'.nice name'.well I never thought of a second encounter with you'after the little romantic moment we shared that evening'.."he said and winked her'

Geet kept silent'listening to him'planning her next move'..as she was without a single weapon then'.

"Well enough of staring at my perfect face'.common girly'take a break'.you are making me fly too much'you know that..!!!!"

"Stop your nonsense words.."

"Awww'..I almost forgot that you have a tongue'."

"I don't use my tongue'.unnecessarily for criminals like you'."

Criminals like you'criminals like you the phrase pinched him hard'.when she said it ' well it was not the perfect time to get emotional'..

"Yeah'.you are absolutely right miss'..that's why may be'you got speechless when a CRIMINAL like me kissed you that day'."he hissed stressing the criminal word'.

"STOP'just stop your filthy words'"Geet shouted and he knew that he had hit the right chord'.well for a respected officer'or for any girl'.self dignity is more worthy than her life'.

"Why'.do you regret it?!'.I thought you enjoyed'your first bit of romance with a criminal'."

"Stop before you regret your words.."

"If you want I can fulfill your earnest hidden desire now also'.you know private moment'.none will discover'.!!"

As he kept on injuring her self pride'she finally lost control and raised her hand to slap him''but the very next moment her hand was twisted back and she was pressed hard on his chest''

"Don't you dare do this mistake again'..I repeat it for the second time Geet"

Geet kept struggling in his hold'.it was getting more strong each second'she couldn't apply more force as she was already injured in her left arm'..due to the rod hit by Maan''

"Leaaavee me'"she struggled

"Never'.it was you,who messed with me'.so don't blame me for the consequences'"Maan spoke

"I should have guessed you that day itself'to be the master of these crimes.."Geet spat harshly

"Well that's completely your fault if your brain is this slow'"Maan reasoned her

"I never thought it could be y''."she stopped

Maan looked surprised''

"Did you trust me'?"he asked displaying a sense of amusement'

"Never'.Officer Geet Handa'.can never trust a criminal'"

"That's better''don't forget this decision'in your lifetime'..rest you will regret severely'"Maan said deeply'.

"Let go off me'.."Geet tried to push him'.."

"Not so soon sweetheart'.."

"And'.for your shoulder pain"'he said while placing his right hand and slightly massaging her shoulders''

"apply some ointment and take a pain killer'.I really care you know'"he said with a glint of mischief in his eyes''

"Do hell with your care'"saying this Geet pushed him ever so strongly which caused him to back a bit'.as he lost his grip on her'.she kicked him hard on his leg'.so hard that he sat on his knees'..and his hold on his gun loosened'..seeing this'.Geet tried to kick his hand to get rid of the gun and make him armless but as she raised her leg,'' Maan hold it and pushed it back which made her head hit on the ground'..

"You really thought you can fight me'..?"he asked her still smiling'

"I am not a coward'.."Geet managed to speak'her forehead was bleeding by then'.

She rose and gave a tight slap on his face'.

Maan was enraged beyond limits'.he pushed her to the wall nearby'and with one hand pressed her neck strongly'.as if to stop her breath'..and with the other he gripped her hair behind as he tilted her face up to meet his red eyes spitting immense anger'..

"Leaaavee mmee'..."

"Listen up very seriously girl'.nobody has dared to cross this limits with me'.don't unleash the demon in me Geet'..you will regret it'"he threatened her''.

She was turning pale by his strong hold'..her eyes were drooping'..due to the immense pain'.

"Maam are you here?"she heard Karan call her name'..as Maan heard his voice'he looked at Geet pale face and for the last time threatened'.

"Never mingle your path with Maan Singh Khurana" saying this he vanished as swift as air'..leaving Geet alone'.

PRECAP: You're right Adi'.Officer Geet has deciphered about us much more than her requirements'.we need to shut her mouth'.as soon as possible'

plzzz press the like button if you have enjoyed this part...and keep commenting... 😃

Edited by shrutizlyf - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update...
the luv and care dat dey had in deir eyes has been vanished in a split second??
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Posted: 13 years ago
hah!!!!
as if he will allow any one to shut her mouth...
nice update dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update like it cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Brilliant update...
waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
great update dear
loved it
cont oon
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Posted: 13 years ago
hiii
awesome update
loved it
loved maaneet
maan has sooo much anger
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
hhmmm so maan is an criminal????? different story,, wud be intresting !!!!
awsum part !!!

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