Fanfic: Pyaar Hogaya..Pg 10 updated

The date of the event is closing in…A lot is left to be done and Mukti has so much more on her mind other than to think about him..Yet she couldn't help it…unknowingly her eyes searched for him time to time…She sighed with frustration and tries blocking it out..She tried hard to focus on that one piece of paper with the costume design that was there before her…As soon as she is really into observing the cuts and colours that were suggested…She smells a familiar scent. It was him. Oh god not again she said to herself. However she did not move a slight bit or showed that she had noticed him standing behind her observing her carefully. She squinted at the paper as if really into deciding what other changes need to be made. Suddenly she felt his ear right next to her and his fragrance grew stronger. To her it seemed like her heart just skipped a beat. He put his hand right next to hers on the table on which the designs were laid. She immediately turned around and said 'Excuse me Mr UD what do you think you are doing?".

Prem: "I'm doing what I'm supposed to do…observing those designs..What were you thinking Basanti? Anyway it seems like at this rate you won't be able to complete anything by the time of the event. What is this you still pondering on costume designs? Mrs Mukherjee please come here."

Mrs Mukherjee: "What happened Mr Prem?"

Prem: "I thought you said Ms Deshmukh is the best it seems like she is best at wasting time. She is still deciding on the costumes and the event is a couple of days away. Are you sure inhonei hee who event organize kiya tha kisi aur ne nahin?What will happen about the rehearsals, decorations, music..

Mukt interrupts him..

Mukti" "Ma'am mei Mr Prem ko yehi batana chaah rahi thi that I have talked to the organziers around here. None of the locations are big enough for the scale of this event. Therefore mainei Mr Kapoor se baat ki hai he is incharge of the Grand Complex which should be around 3 hours from here and I have already arranged a meeting with him tomorrow ".

Mrs Mukherjee looks very pleased.

Mukti: "The meeting is at 5:00 pm tomorrow so perhaps you and Mr Prem should decide what time you are meeting"

Prem looks surprised.

Prem: "Excuse me Ms Deshmukh kaam aapka hai…Mrs Mukherjee kyun milnei jaayein unlogonse..you should go right Mrs Mukherjee?"

Mrs Mukherjee: Yeah am sorry Mukti anyway I wouldn't be able to go as my daughter isn't well please do go along with Mr Prem to finalise things afterall I know I can rely on you right?

Mukti nods and gives faint smile.

Mrs Mukherjee:All the best! Well done!

She goes back into her office

Mukti looks confused and Prem gives a satisfied grin.

Prem: So when are we leaving tomorrow Basanti?

Mukti: Look Mr Prem aap yaahan humari company ke saath kaam kar rahe hain its better if you call me Ms Deshmukh or Ms Mukti this whole Basanti thing is very childless and too informal

Prem brings his face close to hers and says

Prem: Mei toh tumhei Basanti hee kahoonga rokh sakti ho toh rok lo.

Mukti just looks away and rolls her eyes. He keeps staring and puts his arm infront of her. She waits for him to move so she can leave but he keeps staring..He looks at the way she is fighting the urge to look back into his eyes and to him this proximity seems so right.

Mukti: "Excuse me SIR! I have to go now"

Prem realises what he was doing and removes his arm.

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Mukti gives him an angry look and walks off.

Ok Basanti wil see you at 2 tomorrow! He shouts

She keeps walking..Feeling both frustrated yet satisfied.Angry yet happy. Nervous yet excited. She realises how hard it is still for her to put on a strong angry face when his gaze locks on her. Ok what am I thinking she says to herself and tries to gather her thoughts thinking back to the things that need to be done.

She is in her room praying in front of the Lord Ganesh's statue lying on her table before leaving. Prem outside keeps honking the horn. With her eyes closed she tries so hard to just concentrate on praying but the loud honking really gets to her. She finally finishes and walks out.

Mukti: What the hell do you think you are doing?

Prem: Honking the horn what did you think? You take ages not like it makes a difference but still I mean…oh forget it!

Mukti just gives him "God-you-are-so-pathetic" look and sits in.

Prem puts on his ever loud music and starts dancing. Mukti doesn't react as she is too busy looking out the window staring into space. Prem realises how lost she is in her thoughts and get annoyed.

Prem thinks damn it why isn't she saying anything!

Prem increases the volume and starts singing

Mukti: Stop the car

Prem: What?

Mukti: I said stop the car

Prem: Why?What?Are you in your senses Basanti?

Mukti: Mainei kaha gaadi roko NOW!

Prem stops the car. Mukti gets out and starts walking. Prem gets really confused and gets out of the car too

Prem: Hey where do you think you are going?

Mukti: There is no way I'm going to sit in that car for 3 hours..with your music and you singing. Having you around in itself is a pain! I'd rather get a cab or a lift from someone or even not go and lose my job!

Prem: Ok ok!Geez! Basanti! Get in the car! I will switch off the music and I won't sing ok?? He glares at her angrily.

She gives him a satisfied smile and sits back in.

Prem sticks by his word and just drives with a bored look on his face. Mukti continues to look outside. Prem gets flashbacks from the time when they were first driving back together after he had torn the contract. How she fell on him and her hand was on his. He smiles at this. He keeps glancing at her from time to time. He sees her asleep. He just cant take his eyes off her. To him it seems like an angel sound asleep. Even without any make up she looks gorgeous wrapped up with her hands under her head. She shifts in her sleep and pulls her legs up and closer, hugging herself. Prem forgets everything..He forgets he is driving and gets lost in the moment. He observes the angelic glow on her face and the way her strands fall on her eyes protecting them from the sunlight. Suddenly he hears a horn honking and snaps back to reality!A truck coming from the front keeps honking its horn! He quickly turns the steering around and stops the car! Mukti jolts up!

Mukti: Oh my god what happened?What was that?

She looks petrified.

Prem: Sorry was a truck. I didn't..

Mukti: You didn't see a TRUCK coming? I think you are the one who needs glasses now!!! What were you thinking?Are you blind? Argh!

Prem: I'm sorry. I just got lost somewhere.

"Just saw something too beautiful to take my eyes off" he said in a hushed tone.

Mukti: What?????

Prem: Never mind nothing. . Sorry to wake you up though. Go back to sleep don't worry. Mukti just goes back to slee. He just scolds himself for even thinking something so stupid and pathetic.

He thinks to himself I'm finding looking at HER and finding her pretty gosh I must be bored!

Mukti and Prem arrive to meet Mr Kapoor. Mr Kapoor shakes their hands and starts talking immediately going on and on about how wonderful Mukti's last event was. Prem just looks around in boredom. He keeps shaking her hand and doesn't leave it continuously for three minutes. Mukti just smiles reluctantly and continues nodding her head. Prem gets pist looking at this and quickly interrupts

Prem:Mr Kapoor? Enough of hand shaking for today ab kaam ki baat karein?

Mr Kapoor: Sure kyun nahin!

Mukti: We have already discussed quite a few things I'm just going to look around here for a bit perhaps you should go over the details again with Mr Prem.

Mr Kapoor: Great idea!Yeah so Mr Prem…

Mr Kapoor starts blabbering about the history and prestige of the grand complex. He turns around and starts pointing to the different places within the complex as he speaks. Prem could barely keep track of the boring details. Mr Kapoor talks about how many successful events have been carried out there. The capacity…

Prem sees Mukti in the distance and completely loses track. He thinks to himself how can she looks so gorgeous suddenly? How can anyone look this good even with such simplicity. The way she carries herself is just unbelievable. He thinks to himself did she look better in those kurtis or these skirts or even in that shalwaar kameez what ever you call it..Part of him says skirts and the other part says shalwaar kameez..It doesn't matter what she wears she looks stunning regardless..Mr Kapoor's voice interrupts his thoughts.

Mr Kapoor: Sir, sir!You are smiling this means the deal is done?You are fine with the price and other terms?

Prem: Huh?What? Uh…yeah yeah..ok..

Both of them join Mukti who is carefully observing the lighting and the outlook of the stage. Mr Kapoor blabbers on and on and Prem doesn't hear a word. Mukti seems to make him feel so different. He wouldn't mind staring at her for days he gets this feeling his eyes wont grow tired even if her face grew wrinkled the pure beauty would still be preserved as it is. The way she talks and walks..Its everything. He suddenly stops and thinks to himself

Prem, what is UP with you all of a sudden? You wanted to bug her and irritate her thats all right? You are here to seek revenge for the way she insulted you!Then what the hell is all this nonsense? What is this! This restlessness, they way you keep staring at her and finding ways to come close to her. When you are close why does your heart beat faster? Why are you being so IRRATIONAL?

This is just an attempt to write something!Please leave your comments hopefully didn't bore you too much😕Nothing compared to the other fanfics out here😛

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Very nice Annu!
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Anjali

how can u even say that was BORING????? it was absolutely MAREVELLOUSSSSSSSSS!!!!! i love all the descriptions and all the dialogues.....u captured prem's feelings and mukti's inner conflict soooooooooooooo perfectly and beautifully!!!!! plz plz plz plz do continue annu!!! i think i'd rather read urs over and over again than get mine updated! 👏 this one is just tooooooooo fabulous! 👏

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Yaar annu I am becoming a faithful fan of yours too... keep on continuing with the rocking fanfics!

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Prem just decides to ignore all this 'crap'. Oh damn He is so lost in his thoughts he doesn't see how Mr Kapoor is completely sticking onto Mukti telling her stories about how he has worked for numerous well known companies and blah blah. Mukti just keeps trying to smile and nods her head continuously. Prem thinks to himself Oh my god kitna bolta hai yeh bilkul iss basanti ki tarhaan!argh! Suddenly Mr Kapoor puts a hand on Mukti's shoulder in a friendly manner..For some reason this really gets to Prem and he quickly catches up to them. He then rudely interrupts

Prem: Excuse Me!Ab agar aap ki baatein khatam hogayee hon could we please proceed?

Mukti whispers to him Mr UD what are you doing why you being so rude?

Mr Kapoor: Oh I'm very sorry completely lost track of time! Its been truly a pleasure meeting both of you please do join me at our restaurant near by its only 10 minutes away.

Prem: Um..No thank you soo much Mr Kapoor we should be heading back

Mukti looks at Prem angrily for the clear saracasm that is reflected in his tone.

Mukti: Nahin thank you Mr Kapoor phir kabhi?

Mr Kapoor: Oh come on Muktiji aap itni door se aayee hain I can't let you just go like this . I've already made preparations for some nice snacks aur abhi toh humara milna julna shuru hua hai.

Mukti just smiles. She notices how Prem raises his eyebrows in surprise and frustration. She quickly says

Mukti: Ab aap itna insist kar rahe hain toh aana hee padeiga

Prem just looks at her saying what the hell! Mr Kapoor is delighted and leads the way. Prem whispers to Mukti

Prem: Badda milna julna shuru hua hai? Haan karne ki kya zaroorat thi?

Mukti: Kyun? Any problem sir? Aap kyun jal rahe hain?

Prem: Jealous and me? Of that loser? Puhleez!Infact tum dono ki jodi bahut achi laggei gi atleast someone can out do you in talking!All the very best to you two!

He forces a smile and waves his hands showing her thumbs up to hide his anger

Mukti: Um..Thank you?! She gives him a great big smile and follows Mr Kapoor

Prem just watches in disbelief and has no other choice but to follow them both as they continue to chatter. He curses under his breadth and just rolls his eyes. He realises he doesn't really want to meet this irritating Mr Kapoor again…..

Prem doesn't enjoy the snacks as he is unbelievably bored with that weird looking fellow and his lame stores and he keeps checking his watch.

Mukti and Prem leave around 6:30. Prem is more than just relieved to leave and is glad he wouldn't have to hear that hysterical laughter, those pathetic stories of that old man! Mr Kapoor opens the car door for Mukti and happily keeps waving while Mukti just smiles and waves back.

Prem: Thank GOD finally got rid of that weirdo
Mukti turns around and looks at him
Mukti: Weirdo? Mr Kapoor? Oh come on he is such a sweet, decent and sincere..
Prem: Wait wait! Sweet??sincere?Decent?? Prem starts laughing really hard!
Mukti: Well atleast he is better than you, he shows some respect to others!
Prem: Hey Basanti uss mottei ke saath mujhe compare mat karo ok? Gosh you have bad taste!
Mukti: Yeah I completely and totally agree with that!!

She turns around in her seat and starts looking outside at the long shadows being cast by the trees as the sun sets. She then slowly closes her eye lids to try and relax...

Prem realises what he just said and gets really frustrated. Instead of starting another argument he just decides to keep quiet for the rest of the ride as he himself surprisingly has no good comeback.

Around an hour later the car comes to a halt. Mukti opens her eyes at once and Prem hits the steering wheel!

Mukti: What happened NOW?
Prem: Um..woh actually…Petrol khatam hogaya hai
Mukti hears this and becomes wide awake. She sits up in her seat in shock and just stares at Prem with her mouth wide open.
Mukti: WHAT? PETROL KHATAM HOGAYA? How on earth did that happen? How the hell do you drive? Did you not realise? She shouts at Prem!
PRem: OMG could you shut up!Chill out!Let me think of something!
Mukti: Think of something? Think of What Mr UD? We are like in the middle of no where do you even SEE any one else around? Forget any person do you even spot a single vehicle?!!! What are we going to do now! God I'm so stupid I agreed to come with you tum se toh kuch nahin hota!

PRem: Basanti. seriously enough!Would you stop blaming me and let me think for heavens sake!
He quickly reaches his jacket pocket and fiddles with it to pull his phone out just to realise it has no network. Mukti follows him and looks in her purse just to see a black "Searching" written on the screen of her mobile phone.

Mukti: Great. Fantastic. Well done Mr UD!Hum raath bhar yaheen saddeingei all thanks to you!

Prem just rolls his eyes and gets out of the car. He looks around in the dark. The only source of light comes from the moon hanging like a bright pearl in the dark night sky. Fresh breeze blows his face helping to relieve the built up anger within him. He tries to look around for the sign of any other car coming but sees nothing at all. Nothing but tall trees on either side of the long winding road. Mukti opens her door and joins him.

Prem: The main highway would be around an hour or an hour and a half away from here if we take this road. But if decide to take the short cut we might just see someplace where we can find help or we could even make it to the highway in less than an hour.

Mukti: Ek minute. Short cut? What short cut?
Prem points to the trees on their left hand side.
Prem: Through those trees. I think it would take much less time seeing as we don't have to keep walking straight.. ..
Mukti cuts him off
Mukti: Wait. What? Those trees? Are you seriously insane? Why cant we just wait for some other car and we could take a lift
Prem: Listen. You were sleeping all along. I barely saw another vehicle on our way here. The highway is far. There are very few chances we will get a lift from someone while we sit here and wait. There isn't much around here except woods people don't come here that often …dekho yahan road bhi bilkul pakki nahin hai. Look just follow me ok? Lets not waste time and get going.
Prem heads towards the trees. Mukti just sulks and follows.
Both ends of the road are sloping down making it difficult for a person to make his/her way safely through the thick, sharp branches. Mukti just stands there with a worried look on her face. The unsteadiness of the soil beneath increases her apprehension and she wipes the heavy beads of sweat formed unknowingly on her forehead. Prem heads first holding the nearest tree trunk and stops shortly looking back at Mukti. Even in the dark he senses her discomfort. He extends her hand towards her
Prem: Here, let me help you. Don't worry I won't let you fall..
She looks at him with uncertainty. "I won't let you fall?" she thinks to herself. As if you already haven't done that Prem. Tum nei hee mujhei duniya ki nazar mei giraaya tha…What makes you think I will trust you again?
PRem: Hello? Basanti? Today?Give me your hand hurry up now!
Mukti: No thanks. I don't need your help. I'll be fine
Prem: Kya? Basanti quit the stupidity! Apna haath do
Mukti puts her right foot in..
Prem: Look am telling you stop being so stubborn you will hurt yourself!
Mukti ignores him. While trying to put her other foot in too she mistakenly takes tries grabbing what seems to her like a nearby trunk. However she becomes very unsteady and loses her balance! She falls and her right foot bends inwards!
Mukti: Aaaaah!Baba!
Prem grabs her in time and she holds on to him. He pushes her upwards while she holds on to her ankle wailing in pain. He makes her sit on the roadside
Mukti: OOOOuuchhh!!!!
Prem is furious but his anger subsides as soon as he sees the pain on her face and tears that roll down her eyes.
Prem: What happened? Bahut dard ho raha hai?
He tries to reach out and touch her ankle hoping to ease the pain but she screams even louder!
Mukti: I think I've twisted my ankle. Ab kya hoga? She bursts into tears
Prem: Hey hey stop crying! Please! please! He takes out his handkerchief and gives it to her as she wipes her tears with it…He just realises how much he hates to see her cry for some very strange reason. The pain in her ankle seems to stab at him from within..He gets an idea in my mind which he isn't sure she will be up for but decides to suggest it anyway…

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