#Devil's Den- Fans Suggestions to MP Bhaiyya#

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I thought that the Circus chapter had come to an end, but guess I was too wrong. MP needs a revisiting to the original Maaneet as he seems to deliver nonsense; senseless; story less episodes day after day.😔

So here I am penning down the Maaneet story!
Maaneet- A Wounded Fairytale!
*Maaneet are the blessed ones! Soul mates that were destined to meet! **
Maaneet story is about second chances; second love! A story so intriguing; so indefinable!
It is an indeed a heart warming fairytale though broken. It was a story that melted hearts; that made second love stories a reality! Maaneet is and shall be the most heart wrenching story ever told on the Indian television!
Geet and Maaneet both deserved a chance; a chance that would make them happy! They deserve it; they deserve a memorable life; a journey that can't be put into words! Maaneet are meant to be together.
Maan deserved his lost smile; Geet her love! They shall always remains special for all of us!
They were a couple who fought destiny and are settling in marital bliss. Maaneet showed us that we can hope. Hope for a better future; fall in love again. Dream; fly high. Enjoy life again.
They didn't belong to each other; but completed each other in every sense. They had the power to make the other happy. To take away their partners pain away. They were always soulmates and their relation was way beyond our understanding. Words fail me when I have to describe this couple. They are perfect in every sense.
Maaneet- a couple made by god himself; blessed by the Almighty! No force can neither break this marriage nor the bond and feelings they share for each other. It's a story about the seconds in life; be it the love or life; your dreams and your expectations from life after a fresh start to life after loosing a precious part of your life. In short after loosing your life you look at life with a new dimension but without any interest in it. You do it for the sake of the people whom you love. It's only a duty that you preach. You can't put your heart and soul to complete what you are supposed to do. But when a person enters your life that has gone through the same phase that you went it's easy for them to bond because they share the same agony and pain. Maaneet are one example of such a type of couple; their love story makes you believe in second chances towards love and life'this is Maaneet for all of us- a relationship so pure and serene and divine. It's perfect!
Maaneet mesmerized and enchanted me!
As the show got an extension of 3 months; it's a positive sign, and to top it all Endemol supporting is a wonderful symbol. Endemol is a reputed and respected PH and hence I hope that if its supporting a trendsetting show such as Geet; we need to support the show as Fans!
Some Ideas for MP to Progress the Story!😃
1. Its high time the mystery behind Sameera and Vicky is revealed. Show Sameera as Maan's ex wife; their divorce; reasons for that; and the eventual story why Maan hated women!
I write an OS on Sameera Back! Do check it out!
2. Get back Geet's family. Show Geet's sister as strong as her. Show her parents regretting their decision of throwing their daughter out of the house. Show their side of the story. Show Maan reuniting Geet with her family in Hoshiyaarpur.😃
3. Show Vicky as Maan's spoilt brat younger brother; who has an instant liking for Geet. Their cute Devar- Bhabhi scene will be worth a watch rather than watching a Rapist and his Victim scene in a Light moment!
4. Its high time Maan gets flashes about his pats! And I want that past to be revealed in the mixed up order; and then the eventual tension; insecurity and the jealousy factor rising.
5. I want Geet working as the CEO of KC as she own KC. Show her handling office work as well as house chores. Show Maan helping Geet in kitchen. Missing those scenes.😳
6. Being back in Khurana mansion; and in the bedroom; cute husband wife moments like; sleeping together; talking while one being inside the bathroom and the other outside; or Maan pulls Geet when he asks for his towel! Geet choosing Maan's clothes daily for office; she is making breakfast for him!šŸ˜šŸ˜
7. What is fun in a couple's life other than kitchen romance! Both romancing and caught and teased by Dadi! We want the Nakool and Maaneet scenes back; way to amazing!
8. Geet getting ready for an occasion and Maan doesn't turn up; their eventual patch up and then another date!
9. Maaneet's anniversary celebration; they recollect their story; make plans for future!
10. Geet and Maan are working on a construction project and their client is a sexy young girl who actually falls for Maan and tries to get up close with him; Geet left fuming inside the office and then Maaneet on a date; Maan's confession; his proposal for marriage again! More of Maahii Maahii; close and intimate scenes; and we keep drooling!
11. Maaneet of on a business tour; in Australia; Maaneet roaming around; loads of fun and masti; full on romance! Geet in zoo; shopping; sharing her first drink with him; other people praising Maaneet for the love they share and their immense understanding!
12. Its been a few months since their consummation and Geet knows she is pregnant! She doesn't know how to break the news so she fakes a temperature and when he is home; bam; she tells him the best news ever; Maaneet's long awaited kiss!
13. . Maan decides that its been many days that they haven't have time for each other; so decides to take her for a long drive and both end up in Hoshiyarpur! He takes her to the same place where they first met and spend the night recalling their moments of passion near the river bed! Maan making food for her; she sitting in his lap and both are lost in their moments of ecstasy!
Okay enough of dose to MP for today!
More coming up later!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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To All the Devils of the Devil's Den hereby declare the Den to be
a Bird & Dot free zone !!!



If you dare to fly, be ready to fly all the way to heaven, because

we will shoot you. HAAN!


This is particularly in light of the moderator warning
(chk here.. https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1604969)
and henceforth every Devil (old & new) solemnly pledge to NOT indulge in crooning aka bird language
(except : ofc the pengu tribal linguistics)
and here is the dare..
one more croon frm a bird and u know what...!! HAAN!!




DISCLAIMER

The information here is Xclusive to de Den ONLY! Read n FORGET IT! Infringe our CopyRite and Anj will make u watch the "India Paints" Videos till u c the Light! Everyone Is Welcome, so Post Post! We are like Appy Fizz and Grappo Fizz...Cool to de Core!

- Devils of the Devil's Den-

EVIL RULES
1. If U don't like the Devil's Den residents then just fly away! We don't like to be mean hosts!

2. U can only jappoo Geet HSP ki Geet at Den - So, stay in your maryaada and don't jam about other shows!

3. The Den is not just about CONfakes, but reel takes so discuss dey story constructivelyin all its glory😃

4 Do dish about the Actors, but don't diss em or their frogs! Anj won't post ur IF bail!

5. This is not Dadimaa's Darbar, so don't spam about the best way to bake ham, etc.!

6. We r going to open new Den before airtime and shift there once the show finishes whether u ve reserved ya not! So, be PHAAST!

7. Don't QUOTE use "@" to reply varna you will get a Watt o Unwanted pics that will make ur eyes snap crackle n pop! Max of 1 quote is okkie if u really must - that's all.

8. Naya Den if we run outta the original 1 for the day can be opened by anyone, but only post these rules & the link to the old den in the 1st post. Don't forget to leave link of 2ndary dens in original one for the day.

9. There is Devilsden A/C. Its for emergencies & our awesome Kreations Corner
DEVIL'S PLEDGE
All the Devils raise hand and repeat after me
"I SOLEMNLY SWEAR THAT I AM UPTO NO GOOD"
"And hereby Pledge to diss All de Spoilers n Spoof de Pictures"

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Previous DENS with THEMES

Introduction on the SHOW's THEME

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1566472/devils-den-mr-seeeeeoo-becomes-tailormaan

Dadi
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1567872/devils-den-this-info-belongs-to-devils-den-only

Potential Plot lines (MB)
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1568732/devils-den-the-dance-of-pain

MSK
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1569633/devils-den-arjun-maryaada-purush-or-plain-purush

Dev
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1570540/devils-den-the-return-of-the-phamous-eggs

Aesthetics (make up etc)
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1571442/devils-den-maan-bna-daai-maan

Dialogues
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1572317/devils-den-maan-ban-gayaa-santa

Brij and Yash
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1573564/devils-den-confession-tera-delhi-ki-sardi

Sameera
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1574594/devils-den-msk-never-had-a-sister

Arjun
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1575672/devils-den-pyar-ka-izhaar-aur-takraar

Marketing
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1576750/devils-den-hum-tum-bathroom-mein-bandh-ho

Geet
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1577842/devils-den-the-war-aint-over

Symbolism
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1578747/devils-den-boss-se-big-boss

Naintara
Anwesha

Vicky

Music

Dance
Wedding Symbolism
Foreplay
Parallel Tracks

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Edited by -Mayu- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Today's Episode was another bad filler as usual but I did like the pace of the madness here as it all went very fast to b honest šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜ƒ

I liked how presentation and dinner were not dragged but were finished in few minutes time without any dragging drama 😊
After that the next round of fight among the circus party seems to b the only way Mahesh could drag this track in GC-DD's absense since he is out of creativity completely 😔..Instead if Mahesh and CVs wanted then they could hv shown many other serious tracks in GC-DD's absense like mayb Dev telling his past truth to Nano or mayb bringing NT in the picture to spice up things or mayb introducing some new business client who decides to make some business deal with Khuranas ..at least an introduction of a new character could hv been shown in GC-DD's absense this week who could hv later spiced up things in Maaneet ka life once GC-DD were back for shoot na šŸ¤”..But knowing Mahesh and his creativity ,he selected the worst possible option of doing second round of Devini-LucTo fight here 😔😔
Anyways on a positive note ,I loved MSK in vest after so long ...he looked yummy and hot 😳😳 ;Also liked the fact that finally Geet's night suit is back 😃 ;About her new look in precap ,I liked her original hair and new suit but I wish she keeps her hair open as that will make her look more beautiful 😳...Also I hope this Union Leader slaps this Nano in return and gives her some reality check now šŸ˜”šŸ˜›
Today the terrace looked beautifully decorated which could mean two things ..Either tomorrow we might get some Maaneet terrace romance which might hv been banked in advance 😳 or mayb the decoration is been done for the next week Diwali celebration which as per Sundeep::the director will b grand as both GC-DD will b back by then 😃
So well today's episode was not completely a disappointment as I saw few sparks of positivity here and there with Geet's new look ,some drama in precap and the terrace decoration which looked classy šŸ‘šŸ¼
Will not rate the episodes unless this Circus track is completely over 😊


Edited by jyoti06 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its extremely painful to see what Mahesh Pandey has done to this show. Since his entry about 5 months back the show has been on a downward spiral. There was some hope when he had left at the beginning of the memory loss track...it seemed things were getting back on track after the Amritsar debacle but he was back to destroy it more...


He has completely destroyed the very foundation of this show. A story based on Geet & Maan's life has been sidelined to show a useless comedy circus...šŸ‘ŽšŸ¼šŸ‘ŽšŸ¼ The characters of Maan & Geet have been butchered beyond recognition. The viewers cannot identify with them and i'm sure the actor's can't either...


I agree parallel stories are needed in a daily show but they should make sense. These tracks should have a connection with the main track. The stories of the side characters should be interwoven with that of the leads. This is the basics of storytelling. Even an amateur like me can understand this then why can't Mahesh Pandey. What's the use of 11 years of experience he keeps harping about...šŸ¤”


He is incapable of coming up with anything creative. A man who makes a mockery of serious issues like obesity and alcohol addiction does not deserve to be writing for a show.


The way he has been systematically destroying this show is shocking. What's even more shocking is that the rest of the CVs are allowing him to do so...😲😲😲 This definitely raises the question if all this is being done on purpose... Because its blatantly obvious that Mahesh Pandey is getting the show down and its just not possible that the PH is not aware of this!!!


This show has one of the biggest online fan following and its only because of your lead actors...GC & DD. You are doing a grave injustice to their talent by reducing their characters to mere spectators in the comedy circus that's happening around them...



4 Lions, Star One...there's still time. Your reputation and goodwill is at stake here. People will judge you according to how you treat your creations. GHSP is your baby...give it the respect it deserves. I do not know how long this show is going to remain on air but till that time do not neglect it any more. After it ends the viewers should be able to remember it fondly. You should be able to proudly say that you made a show like GHSP.





Edited by swan20 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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If at all we cant escape Devini.. May be CV's can give some meaty track to them than a sitcom 3 Stooges type scenes..šŸ¤”
Samir is simply awful in comedy scenes..He seems out of his element...Why not get his casanova past back? ...and see Nano get exposed to his unsavory past...Dev Geet past can bring a serious element...Anything than Tu TU Mein Mein idiocy 😳

When Gurti are back to work full time give them a seperate track..a third party ( Sameera or some new biz client) trying to separate them...some spice in their story...Food for thought MP


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Re posting from a previous thread.

A person's work reflects his mind.


This one is for you Mr. Pandey.


# A hard working dedicated man leaves his empire made out of sweat and blood in the hands of an imbecile just to support a silly challenge?



# An idiotic, insensitive teenager to run a multi-million dollar company of her brother-in-law? (its not a property of her beeji remember? Even Geet calls Maan Sir when in office.)



# Alcoholism and obesity is joke?(People themselves and family members commit suicide as they cannot deal with these issues.) You need proof...just Google.



# Memory loss track and Maaneet relationship compromised for the sake of this mockery of marriage and relationships?



# Less said the better about the newly discovered Devar-Bhabhi camaraderie.



In short, kindly leave our show (as you yourself claimed a few days back) and if possible take away your muse for company.

Thank you.

Now a few things about tonight's episode:

# A point of reference...



This WAS The Maan Singh Khurana...



If you have an ounce of shame and creativity left in you...you will recognise what disaster you have been doing recently with the best male character created ever on Indian Television.



Swati Pandey would never forgive you for doing this to our Maan.



If not for us (who count nothing as far as you are concerned), do it for her who is a fellow colleague.



Respect her creation.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_9wrvI7hLYI[/YOUTUBE]

# now Donkey will be all angry and yell in attitude and Maan Singh Khurana will play hide and seek with a drunkard in his own house to meet his own wife?

# instead of appreciating each other's concern the foolish foursome fought even more?

# couldn't it be ONLY geet who did the presentation?

# Who the h*** are Nandini and Dev that Maan and Geet should be scared of them and stay away from each other to boost their egos?

# Most importantly, what happened to the much hyped ML track?

# According to precap: Nano slaps the Union Leader which only means a problem and again the trigger and point of focus is her?

Some Suggestions considering the absence of the male lead.

# Sameera can make an entry when Maan is away on a trip and Geet-Sam interaction without being aware of each others' identity, once GC/Maan is back, then a Maha twist can be brought which will finally reveal Maan's long forgotten attic secrets.

# On a lighter note, a new client (a dashing young man) can visit KC in absence of Maan and fall for Geet, and Maan loses his temple once he is back.

# If you want to continue the Union leader track, let it be Geet and only Geet (she is the owner of the company remember?) who handles it tactfully and Maan gains more respect for her as a professional, it will make up for the harsh words he hurled at her during the initial days of ML. (Our show believed in closing loops)


[IT SHOULD NOT TURN INTO ANOTHER ANNIE-SANGRAM-ARJUN TRACK]

MOST IMPORTANTLY

Give us back our Maan/Geet/Maaneet.

Is it too much to ask for.

My respect for GC/DD has reached new heights recently. Hats off to these two just for being part of this non sense without throwing any tantrums. I hope for once they keep aside their usual humble self and behave as "stars", you deserve nothing less.

God Bless.

Edited by -Manashi- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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We need Maaneet centric story...can Mr Pandey for once pay heed to the audience demand and come up with some interesting Maaneet track????? Audience ki dua milegi MP ko if he does that...

Can he understand the Ms MP is intolerable to us!!!! C Company comdey circus is totally annoying...TRPs are further down
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Return of Geet's night dress and Maan in black vest. Something to be happy about.
Edited by Viji79 - 13 years ago
-Mayu- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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No one liked my suggestions😭😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Geet should give Nandini two tight slaps. The girl is insolent beyond limit...😔 And its about time MSK shows his asli roop. He should not tolerate this nonsense anymore...😳

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