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Posted: 19 years ago
#41
jasmine two wonderful parts.. i liked reading it very much...... 😃 so finally sujal knows all the truth..yipee....... 👏 dear now i'll give u a small bit of idea let kashish not know the truth about sujal loving zara , in the mandap let the dulha be sujal & not akshat.. after the marriage let kashish's confusion get solved.. mazaa aa aayega.. 😆
dear please continue soon 😃 & i have one more small request please write a romantic part.. 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#42
Part-16....kashish:4 that whats there as so serious?
charu:is ur luv serious?then
its also serious. K:now
everything is over.i'm going 2
be sum1 else's & very
soon sujal will be with his
beloved. C:if sujal shud be
with his beloved,u hav 2
co-operate. K:i did so 4 his
luv. C:no,u'vent. bcoz only
if u agree 2 marry him,he'll
be with his beloved. K:what?
C:i no that u r shocked.but
the truth is that sujal's
beloved is none other than u.
K:charu,plz...C:kashish,i'm not
crack like u think.whati'm
saying is true.charu tells her
everything. k was
shocked.tears flow from her
eyes. K:oh god.now what will
i do? Every1 was tensed bcoz
the bride groom has'nt
reached yet. C 2 K:nice.so
the time'll go & the wedding
won't happen. but suddenly
they hear that the bride
groom has
reached.veena,aryaman,akshat get out of the
car. k's eyes search 4 S.
C notices that
A is not in the wedding
dress. C:where is sujal
akshat? A turns back.S cumes
out of the
car.he had worn the wedding
dress. k becomes
happy.k loses her control &
runs 2 S.Song:yeh
hum aa gaye hain
yahan...{veerzara}.both look at each
other's eyes.they hug each
other with happy
tears.veena,aryaman,A&
C smile.k's parents
were shocked. C tells them
everything. Sujal-kashish
get married. A:like Yash
chopra's Veer & Zara,our Veer &
Zara also united. C:yes,bcoz
like the filmi Veer &
zara,they r also strong
lovers. they all smile.it
rains.S-K become happy 2 see
that rain.they go
out & dance slowly with soft
romantic steps 2 the song:
tum paas aa rehe ho.. After
sum months. Kashish on the
stage. K:it was my gr8est wish
2 sing my fav poet's...my
luv's poem on stage after i'm
trained 4 a stage
performance.it was my luck &
destiny that he became my
loving husband.i'm so happy
that i'm going 2 fulfil my
wish 2day in this moment.i'm
going 2 sing my fav poem of
my .... k smiles.she looks
at sujal was sitting
among the audience.S's eyes
were romantic.he shows
hand action:all the best.
k's face expression shows
that its not enuff. K:i want
my hubby 2 be here near me
on this stage.S was excited.he
goes 2 the stage &
hugs K.they both sing
2gether:tere liye...Audience
clap their hands,bcoz it was
very romantic 2 see them
2gether on stage with their
magical voice. THE END
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Posted: 19 years ago
#43
jasmine a very very very very good end i really liked it alot.. 👏 it was cute , sweet , romantic.. 😳 hey par charu aur akshat ka kya hua ?? hmm i'am thinking un dono ne bhi shaddi kar hi li hogi ?? kyun ?? 😆 i'am sorry i'am commenting late actually i wasn't online.... 😭 i read ur new story & i have commented on it.. it is nice...... 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#44
Hey jasmine dear just came across ur story today & fnshd reading in one go... superb story yaar... 👏
this time u didn't informed me abt ur fan-fic... 😕
nywys very nice keep it up... 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#45
Gr8 story just superb fantastic excellent work 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#46
AWWWNNNNNNN...IT WAS SUCH A MAGICAL STORY....GUD JOB.... 👏

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