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Surya.Ravi thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#21
& jasmine me posted the next part of my story padke comment karna... 😃
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#22
Part-7....Sujal smiles:yes,what u think is true.i'm in
luv. Akshat:wow.who is that
lucky girl? S takes sum
magazines & take su pages 2
show 2 A.A looks
at it:these r all poems. S:
luv the author of these
beautiful touching poems. A
reads the author's
name:ZARA.nice name.ur fav luv
story's heroine.how does
she look like? S:i dunno.
A:what? S:i'vent seen her
yet.but 1 day i'll see her.
A:unusual luv.but r u sure
that she'll luv u? S:yes.bcoz
she cannot reject my true
luv. A smiles:all the
best bhayya. suddenly Kashish
enters.she was happy 2 see
akshat. A:kashish,2morrow is
my b'day.will u cum 4 the
party? K was
thrilled:yes,sure. A
smiles. K goes 4
A's b'day party. she was
pretty in her glittering
white frock. she goes 2
A:wish u a happy
b'day..A recieves the
boquet given by her:thanku.
he goes.S cumes near
K:whats ur aim of
bringing a boquet of red roses
4 akshat? K:2day is his
b'day no.so i brought it.
S:thats all? K:then what?
S:u no that red rose is the
symbol if luv? K:what?no i
did'nt no that. S:u no that.ur
eyes tell that red rose
is 2 show ur luv. K
becomes shy. S smiles. he
calls A.he cumes. S:2day
is a nice day & u
must enjoy it. A:i'm
enjoying my b'day bhayya. S:r u
sure? A:yes. S:but i don't
think so.2 enjoy completely u
must dance. A:thats a gud
idea.cum we'll dance 2gether.
S:with me?u can dance with me
anytime.so 2day u dance
with sum1 with whom u'vent
danced till now.kashish

K -A smile. A:ok
kashish,lets dance. S whispers 2
K:all the best. K
whispers:thanks. kash-akshat
dance 2gether.song:kuch kuch
hota hai....S smiles
looking at them. he thinks:whn
will this situation cum 2
me?when will i be able 2 enjoy
with my sweetheart Zara?
DO U THINK THAT SITUATION WILL
CUM 2 SUJAL?
Surya.Ravi thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#23

jasmine dear yeh kya is part mein confusion durr hone ke bajay aur bad gayi.. me tho will cry woh bhi phoot phoot ke....... 😭
kashish giving akshat red roses...yuck.. 🤢 & yeh kya sujal is encoraging kashish to go near akshat.. aisa koi kartha hain bhala... 🤢 & ab yeh akshat aur kashish dance karthe hain.. bechara sujal... 😭 u know what i think akshat charu ko chahne lagega... phir tho saari tension hi durr ho jayegi..akshat charu ek saath khush honge aur dusari taraf sujal aur kashish i mean veer aur zaraa......problem solved.. 😛
plz continue soon.... 😃

aur haan please sujal kashish ko jaldi se milwao me waiting for them to be together.... 😃 😃

Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#24
Part-8....Sujal-kashish in the music class. S:2day i'll
teach u a luv song. kashish
smiles. S:i wanted 2 see ur
reaction when i tell
that.thats why i told like this.
K was embarassed. S:this
shows that u r in luv.
k becomes excited.
S:atleast now u admit that u r in
luv. kbecomes shy. S:i no
that person is akshat.
ksmiles. S:don't u luv
him. K keeps smiling.
S:u r not talking,but ur smile
has a meaning of luv.
k smiles. S:why r u
delaying...?tell ur luv 2
akshat or else i'll tell.
K:plz don't tell this 2 him.
S:ok.. K:no idea whther he
loves me or not. S:how can he
reject a sweet girl like u.
k has hopes now. They
all go 4 a party. k shows
akshat 2 charu:that is
Veer. C:wow.he is so
cool.let me talk 2 him. K:ok,but on
1 condition.u shud'nt call him
Veer.only akshat ka:now
also u want 2 keep that
suspense?why can't u tell that u
r the person who writes 2
him?let me no that u found
that he is Veer. K:let the
time cum.i'll tell him.
Akshat cumes 2 them:hi.
C:hi!i'm kashish's cusin
sister;charu A:nice 2 meet
u. they shake hands. A
asks kashish:kashish,will u dance
with me? Charu-sujal
smile. C:eventho i'm here u
want only 2 dance with
kashish? A:sorry,don't feel
bad.i'm very comfortable with
her while dancing.she has
become my fav dance partner.
k smiles.they both dance.
song:dil to paagal
hai...Charu:sujal,u r free
.rite?u've escaped from ur crazy
female fans.i'm getting
bored.why don't we dance
2gether? S:why not? they
dance. C looking at
aks-kash:what a nice pair they
r? S:u r rite
C:kashish loves him very
much.finally she found her luv.she
is like him only.she writes
beautiful poems. S:really?
K:her poems hav cum in
magazines.she is very famous.
S:really?tho i read
poems,i'vent seen it.. C:u might hav
read ur poems.but u may not
hav able 2 no that its
kashish's.bcoz she does'nt giv
her real name.she has a pen
name. S:whats her pen name?
C:Zara. S:Zara? r u joking?
C:no.kashish is a famous poetess
named Zara. S was
shocked.his heart was deeply
torn. he thinks:so the
person whom i was in luv with
is kashish?oh god.then i
cud'nt recognise her.now its
too late.kashish loves my
brother.i e gave her full
support. S was going
crazy. WHAT WILL FATE DO 2
THEM?
Surya.Ravi thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#25
jasmine dear really a very very sweet part.. 👏 hmm tho does akshat like kashish or something nahi tho woh uske saath dance kyun kartha.. 🤢 akshat can dance with charu na kashish ke saath kyun.......... 😭 chalo charu ne yeh kaam tho achcha kiya ki usne sujal ko bata diya ki kashish hi zara hain.. 👏 issi bahane ek taraf ki tho confusion durr hui ab sujal ghalthi se bhi charu ko apni zaraa nahi samjhega....... 😆 ab in sabke beech bechara sujal phas gaya.. 😭 par koi baat nahi kyunke kashish is going close to akshat because she thinks akshat is veer par jab kashish ko patah chalega ki veer sujal hain tho kashish will love sujal.. tab akshat ko kandha degi charu...... 😆
plz continue soon...... 😃
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#26
Part-9.....Sujal sits inside his room & weeps.Then kashish
cumes:hi sujal. he wipes his
tears. S:2day i'm not
feeling well.so i'm sorry that
i can't take class. K:its
ok.did u go 2 a Dr? Sujal
lies:yes.i'm taking medicine.
K:it'll go soon.S:i hope so.
Veena sees kashish-akshat
talking 2 each other with fun.
she tells aryaman:i think
akshat & kashish like each
other.so why don't we conduct
this wedding? A:but 1st u
wanted sujal 2 marry her.
V:ya,but the luv is between
Akshat & kashish.anyways
she'll cum 2 our house
itself.so i don't mind this.
A:ok. when Akshat cumes veena:
u & kashish luv each
other? A:no mom,we r gud
friends,thats all. V:ok,but
don't u like marrying her?
A was shocked:marrying
kashish? S:why?u don't want 2
marry a gud girl like her?
A:i don't mind.its the
decision of my parents & big
brother. Ary:sujal,what do u say
about akshat marrying
kashish? Sujal's lips
shiver:gud.kashish is a nice girl.she
suits akshat. S becomes
sad. S:so every1 wants
akshat 2 marry kashish.so now u
r ok with this proposal?
A:yes mom. A gets
inside S's room.
A:bhayya,2day our parents r
going 2 kashish's house with
the proposal.why don't u go
with them? S:sorry bhai.i'm
not feeling well. A:ok then u
take rest.but shall i tell
u a truth? tho i was having a
gud opinion about kashish,i
never thot of luving her or
marrying her.but i wanted a
nice girl like her 2 hav as my
bhabi.2 b frank i always
felt that u both make a
perfect jodi. S was
shocked:what nonsense! A:then
only i came 2 no that u
luv sum1.anyway ,leave it.
Veena,aryaman go 2 kashish's
house.k was excited 2 see
them. V:we r sujal'
parents. k's mom
Khusum:ya,kashishtold me. V:we
came here with a propasal.can
u giv kashish was our bahu?
they were surprised. k
thinks:4 whom veena aunty
brought this propsal?4 sujal or
4 akshat? k gets
tensed. A:as our youngest son
akshat's wife. k
becomes happy. but she gets
tensed again:WHAT'LL BE MY
PARENTS' REACTION?
Surya.Ravi thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#27
jasmine me seriously want to cry and that too phoot phoot ke.... 😭 yeh kya jasmine confusion pe confusion bade jaa rahe hain... 😭 sujal weeping GOD my heart is crying.. 😭 u know i seriously want ko kill kashish who is root cause for all the confusions... 😡 see akshat is soo sweet he wants kashish as his bhabhi he feels sujal & kashish make the perfect jodi he is so intelligent... 😆 ab akshat aur kashish ki baat rishthe thak bhi pohanch gayi... 🤢 ab please kashish ko jaldi se patah chal jaye ki sujal veer hain akshat nahi.. 😃 i hope kashish's parents shaddi se mana karde..mazaa aayega.. 😉
plz continue soon...... 😃
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#28
Part-10.....Kashish's parents smile.k was relieved
that they agreed 4 the
wedding.the wedding arrangements
start. k is in a thrill.
K:charu,i can't still
believe that Veer is going 2
be mine.2day i'll tell
akshat everything. k with
akshat. K:will u sing
the poem pehla nasha.. A:me?i
dunno 2 sing. K:u r
lying.a gud poet like u can't
sing?i won't believe this.
A:i'm a poet?what r u
telling? K:don't try 2 fool me.u r
the poet Veer.i used 2 luv u
as veer.i was so happy when
i found u.i'm the 1 who used 2
write u letters without
keeping name. A was
shocked:so u were luving the
poet Veer? K:ya,i was so happy
when i came 2 no that u r
veer. A becomes sad:i'm not
veer. K:stop joking.i
saw my letter inside ur
magazine that day.A:it was my
brother's magazine.Veer is
none other than sujal. K:what?
A:yes.he wrote pehla nasha
4 his beloved. k was
shocked & starts crying. A:u
agreed 2 marry me thinking
that i'm veer.but veer is
another person.i can
understand ur pain.i'll tell
sujal bhayya everything.2
tell u the truth i always
wanted u 2 be bhayya's
wife.only bcoz he told,i
decided 2 marry u.so don't hav
sympathy 2wards me. K:no
akshat. sujal is in luv with
sumother girl. A:thats
true.but still i believe that u r
better 4 him. K:akshat plz
don't tell sujal A:but
kashish...K:plz..don't make him
upset. A:ok.
Surya.Ravi thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#29
jasmine wah dear tere is part ne tho mere dil ko bohatttttt khushhhhhhhh kar diya.. really very very gooddddddddd........... 👏 now me will not cry phoot phoot ke.. ab tho me will smile woh bhi bhathisi dikha ke... 😆 chalo ab ek kaam karo let akshat & kashish call off their marriage & let akshat & charu unite... 😃 phir ab yeh confusion kyun hain ki sujal loves somebody else.. 😭 chal par koi baat nahi almost 99% ki confusion tho durr hui na... 😃 ab baki hain tho sirf ek confusion ki sujal kashish ko patah chale ki woh ek dusare se pyaar karthe hain aur apne pyaar ka ikraar kare... 😉
anyway thanks for continuing aur agar ho sake tho agli part bhi post kar dena me waiting..... 😃
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#30
Part-11....Kashish was really sad.her eyes were full of
tears.she walks on the road
like a lost woman.her mind
was full of her moments with
sujal.she regrets that she
did'nt recognise him.it was
raining heavily.since she
was careless her leg slips &
she falls down. sujal who
was walking on the rod
thinking sadly about kashish sees
it & runs 2 her.k was
surprised 2 see him.he extends
his arms,so that she can catch
his arms & get up.k
catches his arms.but she
cud'nt walk properly as her leg
was hurt. when she begins 2
fall,Scatches her. S:u
r not able 2 walk? k was
speechless. S:if u don't
mind,i'll help u. k did'nt
answer.S takes her in
his arms.she was
surprised .both of them look at each
other. Song:Do pal....{VZ}.
Akshat passes that way by
car.he sees it & stops the
car.seeing Aks,,S
feels embarassed. he
thinks:what'll akshat think seeing
me like this with his fiancee.
Akshat opens the door.
S:akshat..kashish's leg was
hurt.thats why...A:i'll drop
her. A helps her 2 get
inside the car. then he
starts the car. A:did u tell
bhayya the truth? K:no.
A:why? K:i told u no,i don't
want 2 hurt him.he loves
sum1 else. Athinks:i'm
helpless.i've 2 tell sujal
bhayya. A goes 2 S's
room.he stares at
S.S gets tensed.
S:akshat...A:enuf. S
becomes upset.

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