MN - Magical Realism. - Page 22

lovely updt kinza
thanks for the pm

just read up all the parts together...updates 4, 5, 6...were all brilliant...and very sorry for the late reply...

i just loved this line...

I am really sorry Angel for irregular comments..busy with stuffs...Anyways loving it...loving it even more coz of your writing style...A new aspect altogether...Do cont soon..🤗...Though I dont comment regularly, I read the updates as excitedly as ever!

awesome update

so sorry 4 being so late in replying kinzu... sometimes work really gets to us...!! :(

Coming to the chapter...its beautiful! V beautiful :) somehow i hv a strong feeling dat mayank is the only man who can handle her outta all and bring her out of her not so pleasant shell !! :) its getting damn exiting...can i get an update by tonite plz :p

awesum update kinzu...
aww... dat ws really sweet of mayu...
dey had deir 1st kiss!!!😳
luvd it!
cont soon!
luv ya!🤗

thank u so much people!! 🤗
i am back on time .. 😳 .. okay now i think the story is moving on a snail's pace, but .. i don't know .. i want to write like this for this story 😕 .. kindly bear with me .. 😳

"I am not used to all of this protectiveness mayank, I just .. I just couldn't absorb, I am sorry."

Nupur stepped down the car as soon as she mouthed those words. Mayank blinked his eyes after the soft closure of the door. This time she didn't wait to see if her apology was accepted or not. She went away as she was sure he had forgiven, and well he had.

He had actually forgiven her the moment he saw that regret in her eyes when he had pinned her against the bed rest, and after that was just playing on her, trying to find out why actually she behaved in that way, and most of all why did she compare him with any other ordinary male.

"not used to protectiveness", he said these words under his breath, driving through the busy lanes. It was the rush hour, he was getting late for his meeting with his clients, but all that hovered on his mind was her words, "I am not used to this protectiveness .. I just couldn't absorb".

She didn't reject his protectiveness; she just needed time to let it sink in her.

**

It was a hectic day for mayank, a meeting with a rather physco business tycoon, who had filed a case against his children for attempt to murder. Mayank was shocked out of his wits, seeing his case file, and thus had outrageously refused to fight his case ' all he sensed was a fabrication of lies, and he never risked himself on lies. He knew they were meant to make u fall.

**

"mayank can u pick me up in 20 minutes?", nupur's voice seemed preoccupied.

"alright", he said simply and disconnected the phone. He was already waiting for her outside the Ahluwalia office, and when he had called to inform her, she bluntly asked him to pick her in 20 minutes, without even giving him a chance to speak.

He sighed and closed his eyes against the seat back. Where actually was he heading?. Falling in love with a woman who didn't give this emotion any importance. SIGH. Bad luck Mayank Sharma. Bad luck.

2o minutes passed with mayank cursing himself, when he saw nupur emerging out of the thick glass doors of the Ahluwalia Office.

Darkness had spread over, and with it, her silhouette, gleaming in moonlight, looked beautiful. At the moment,. his mind could just think of this only adjective, because, it was the best what described her. Beautiful.

Dressed in an off white, knee length skirt, with sleeves till her elbows, her jet black hair tied in a lose side pony, she looked beautiful, and the grace and dignity she carried with her, was much more appealing then her beautiful and sensual revealing legs.

Mayank smiled and adjusted himself in a driving posture, as she walked to the car with a rather startled expression.

"you are already here!", she said the moment she sat in, Her voice was surprised, pleasantly surprised.

"I am always here", he said with a soft smile and clearly saw what effect this sudden statement made on her. She just stared with blank eyes and then blinked them and turned away.

"I am sorry mayank, from tomorrow there will be no need for you to be here, my car will reach the building tomorrow,", she said it with courtesy and formality, and it pricked mayank's heart. What hurt him was the blunt way she had told him to maintain distance and not to get involved with her emotionally. His harmless flirting was okay, but serious affection wasn't accepted to her, but again mayank never gave up.

"I am was certainly not talking about being outside your office building!, grow up woman", he chuckled and ignited the engine, and nupur, who very well understood what he meant, pretended she didn't.

**

They reached home pretty late, and after a quiet dinner session, mayank went to change and on his return, he was surprised to see, nupur already cuddled up in the bed, apparently reading a boring film magazine, something on which he wouldn't even lay his hands.

Sighing and deciding not to bring the sleeping issue again, he quietly climbed up to his side of the bed.

"I thought u'll sleep out today", he glanced at him smiling and mayank knitted his brows, "mind elaborating?'

"nothing special, I just thought maybe you'll teach me a lesson after all what I said", she bit her lip and mayank smiled, "maybe u forgot, you have apologized and also stated the reason for your behavior, which seems pretty logical and acceptable to me"

"do u understand what I meant?", she closed the magazine and turned towards him completely. Her hair tied in a loose bun and fringes flowing here and there, her sleeveless night dress was revealing much of her milky smooth shoulder and arm skin, but diverting his attention from all of them, he answered, "I wonder what was difficult in to understand".

"hmm, so u claim to understand my reasoning why I almost alleged you as a molester?",

"I do!, now can we sleep please, I have had a tiring day", he yawned and lied down and nupur followed his gesture.

"mayank", she said softly.

"yes",

"I don't remember you being this kind", she asked, with uncertainty and curiosity and mayank opened his eyes.

"and I don't remember you being ever claiming to know me completely", he replied and she smiled, "come on mayank!, talk straight, why are u being generous?"

"I don't remember you being so skeptical about the favors showered on you, you just grab them without thinking", he moved to the edge of his pillow, and feeling a sudden pulse of emotions, nupur lowered her eyes.

"yes I do, but from people I choose, I have not chosen you for showering favors upon me", she replied blunt, looking back in eyes.

"u married me nupur, what else do u think you'll have to do to prove that you chose me", he winked and glaring, nupur hit him with a cushion she was hugging close to her body.

"stop it, and go to sleep", she closed her eyes and turned to opposite side.

"yesterday was a different posture", he said, and nupur, who was thinking the exact thing, blushed deeply, "good night mayank".

"don't u think it is better to move in arms in your senses, rather than in sleep, trust me it'll be a better experience", he sighed and nupur who closed her eyes, suddenly felt his hard hand crawling around her waist and she clenched the pillow in her fists.

She could feel heat flowing through and was afraid it could even burn the silk over which his hand was brushing. Once he totally wrapped his arm around her waist, he dipped in his fingers and very softly, nupur felt herself being pulled, until she came in contact with his hard muscular body.

His breath on her cheek was hot like a desert wind, and the feeling of his nearness was a drug in total. His dip of fingers increased, but what came as a total surprise was when she felt his fingers on her neck. A sharp intake of breath hurt her lungs, but soon she realized he was just removing strands of hair.

"good night nupur", he whispered, and smiling, nupur closed her eyes. It was heaven. Her back pressed to his chest and his fingers dipping in her waist, his breath on her neck and .. her heart on the verge of surrender.

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why is the lost fear again coming bk 4m ur hints, as if nupur's past has to b somehow related to molestation n u knw wht i mean :((...it better not b anything related to herself directly :((...otherwise all those tormented feelings wil overpower the reader n her enthusiasm all over again just like ur latest few ventures did...!! :((

nyways coming to the chapter, this is just so aweworthy kinzu...!! entangled emotions and convoluted allure r making it helluva difficult 4 them to restrain themselves nymore , specially 4 nupur...all their self control is going haywire due to the magnetism towards each other..!! this is interesting... v interesting <3

ps- can we hv a slow revelation of nupur's past starting 4m the very next chapter plzzz ??. neither its atall a bit slow,nor boring 4m any angle...it itself has such an aura which can overlap nything n everything...!! just kindly consider the request i mentioned above...!! plz dont insert ny traumatic past related to nupur herself...!! aftr such havoc,we can atleast hv a single story without hving ny painful fragment in it...cant we?? :)

Nazar utarofies of ur writings now Fantu😆