Maneet FF- Pavithra vivah-pt-22 , pg-144 - Page 21

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Posted: 13 years ago

I was heart broken after reading about the painful things that Annie and Maan had to go through'''if Brij is behind all these troubles, then he should pay for it''.but here I totally disagree with the methods that Maan adopted to punish him'precap😔😔 so it's time for Maan and Geet to come face-to-face'''I am eagerly waiting to see Maan's reaction when he will come to know that Brij is not Geet's brother and the tremendous torture that Geet had to suffer in the hands of her own family''..waiting for your next update'..

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Posted: 13 years ago
Loooved it
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome update luvd it
cnt w8 4 maan n geet 2 cum fce 2 fce hpe he fynds owt da truth
h8 brij
cnt w8 2 read more plzz cont soon x
fanx 4 da pm x
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it, amazing. continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
when I requesting for likes and comments from readers some of my friends suggested me to add more romantic hot scenes in FF. but friends I believe that everything should be in limit. As per me story is stronger then hot scenes. At any cost I will not change idea in my FF. this is only my view. If my words hurt anybody pls forgive me

hats off 👏
i too belive in story
its moving very well...


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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update dear
that was an awesome part
do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update...
Poor Annie, felt bad for Annie
Brij should be punished severely for this

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome varsha
cant see their pain yaar
thanx for pm continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh no..poor annie...what they did to her...

geet meeting maan...nice...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART-8

Dadima disappointed. Geet is not visible "oh…where she went..maan I think that girl already she left.."

Maan is not much interested but dadima is not leaving him. she started to tell about geet" what a lovely girl she is…maan you know she help me..maine anni ke liye mathaji se mannat mangliya lekhin poora nahi karpaya lehkin is ladki poora kardiya…ajj kal mey ithani achchi ladaki kaha milegi. Muje iss tarah bahu chahiye." Maan turned back…dadima speaking panicky…

What happened to dadima…..after anni incident she completely stopped to speak, but today she is speaking about another girl. some how he thanked her in mind. Some how she given little happy to dadima. She made her to forget at least some movements about anni. He know very well dadima is suffering from high blood pressure .any thing can happen her in any time . she should be cool always but what is happening in KM its really stressing her.

At office geet rushing to elevator its already late bcoz of her new friend dadima. After meeting dadima again she went to home and changed her tarred dress. When she enter suddenly power offend and lift stopped with big jerk. She felled on him… directly on his hard chest. Just one second she felt some familiar touch in that movement. she corrected her self but she can feel her duppata stuck… she try to pull it but it is not easy. fully it is dark she couldn't find what is next to her, at end she pulled it forcefully there is a small tare sound she heard it……she just stood like a doll.

At out side securities rushed to open the door. luckily the door is not closed completely, it stuck in mid. finally when door is opened he went out side. Geet came in sense after he went out side. Bcoz of darkness she couldn't see his face but his touch…remembering him….. who balvanth…?

Now there is no time to think about all this issue…already dev informed her maan sir is arriving office today…before him I should be there…she rush to climb steps.

Maan entered his cabin…in his watch strap there is a piece of green cloth entangled mostly the girl who fell on him mey be her duppata …he pulled the cloth force fully and thrown on dustbin but it landed on his table.

Before he extend his hand to throw the cloth adi entered inside." Maan sir there is a emergency . there is a workers problem in shopping complex site. We have to go there…."

"adi dev told me he appointed new secretary where is she…"maan roared on him….

Adi gulped his saliva.. "sir wo…wo…"

Maan knotted his eyebrows" adi first try to answer properly. Ask her to bring shopping complex files to site.." he went out.

Adi thanked god . next movement geet is in front of him. "geet why you came so late today already boss is roaring on every one…do one thing take those shopping complex files and come with me….warna maan sir naraz ho jayegi…"

Geet run to her cabin to pick the files. She climbed till fourth floor with one jerk due to elevator is not working. Her breath is fastening. Immediately adi ask her to bring files. She don't know anything about maan sir. Don't know how he will be….she run back of adi hugging files to her chest.

When she came to corridor maan moved in his large black color Benz car. Adi and geet followed him with another car.

There is a big problem in work place. workers are making strike against the manager who is taking care of construction. At maan absence he didn't paid their daily wages from past one week. Workers are too tired asking him finally they decided to protest. Already dev trying to convince workers.

Maan thrown manager out from construction site. He is fuming with anger…how these people can cheat anybody…suddenly one of innocent face appeared in front of his eyes…maan even you cheated one girl…no I am not cheated her…I punished those bruits who destroyed my anni life….

He failed to observe what is happening on top of him…. He stood below the Crain which is holding heavy wait of commodities which is used to construct building. They are packed in gunny bags. May be their waits are in tons….Unfortunately the Crain chain is loosened and it felled on maan.

Geet rush with adi to submit the files but she saw from Crain the gunny bags are about falling on maan. she didn't think a second….she moved in lightening speed and she grabbed maan at one jerk to her. both fell on sand which is gathered next to maan. but they couldn't maintain the balance. Both rolled down holding each of them. But after three four rolling Maan stuck in mid and geet went little far and her head hit to stone forcefully.

Every body are in shock..if geet not save maan , maan will met an series accident. after few seconds Dev rushed to maan " bro aap teehk haina…" he helped maan to stand …maan just rubbing his elbow and arms. His dress become mud and his elbow slightly scratched…."accaha huwa apko geet ne bachaliya warna…"dev turn back.

"geet …"the word passed a current in him…he turned back forcefully.

The packed gunny bags are fell in maan place where he before standing. Maan frizzed realizing the accident. If its fall on him, he will not be here at any more.

Now everyone gaze moved to geet. still she is lying silently on corner..dev and maan both went to close her. dev turned geet body…yes she is fainted. Another shock to maan she is geet…..dev pattering her cheeks and trying to wake her but she is fainted.

Dev didn't think much …he lifted geet in his arms and made his way to car. "bro geet hosh mey nahi hain..we should go for hospital…."maan without his effort he followed dev.

how dev knows about geet…what she is doing here…why she saved me…did she recognized me….there hundred's of questions in his mind. he thought after he left her she may went her hosaipur and brij will be ashamed what happened to his own sister. And the status of handa family will be buried in mud….but how come now she is in delhi that to in my site construction. Maan confused…

maan immediately called his detectives to know about the situation in hosaipur. He confirmed " yes sir …she didn't back to hosaipur..don't know where she is now.." maan cut the call…did again the hole family playing dirty game with us. First they ruined anni and now they are trying to trap dev…no I wont let them to do any thing this time.

at hospital geet still in nursing room. Now maan dare to speak with dev" dev how you know about that girl."

dev now understood. He didn't introduce geet to him" wo sorry bro…I forget to tell you. She is your new secretary.. In your absence I appointed her …very good girl..i think she will match you…"maan knotted his eyebrows…

dev corrected him self" …I mean she is very polite girl. she won't leave office in mid scaring to your anger like other girls. " maan tightened his fist. No dev is not right how come this bi**ch is joining my company. no it is preplanned. Some how she recognized me ….some how she want to take revenge on me….he buried his fingers in hairs.

doctor called dev inside. Even maan followed. "dev first tell me , whether before she hurt in same place…"

dev didn't understand" you mean…."

Doctor corrected his throat" I think she hurt on her skull few days back..there is blood clot inside her skull…still it is not cured..now again in same place it injured. Now its going to be serious condition."

..still he is looking doctor face "I explain you ..when we hurt any where in our body blood will clot in same place for a while and it will melt after one or two days. But in geet case it is hurt on her skull. It may cause series action on her. may be she can suffer vomiting sensation, she can suffer from Sevier headache or sometimes it can take her life also…"

"..no…"dev screamed. Doctor words he can not digest so easily. Is it geet life is in danger….

"mr. dev calm pls…I am not telling you it can be happen now it self but in future it can be effect her..right now she is ok. But be careful if she got any symptoms like vomiting or giddiness immediately she has to contact doctor.." dev still not believing what he is hearing from doctor.

maan frozen… is it really true….i think god is punishing the victims…

PRECAP: GEET SAVE ANNI…DEV FALL FOR GEET…..

hi buddies thanks for all your support .special thanks for who respected my view in my FF what I shared in lost part. Really thank you….thank you for giving such a good response to me by PMS , like and comments. Still I need all your support. Pls don't forget to press like button and leave comment.

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