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Posted: 13 years ago

PART-7

"Securities…" maan barked..hole khurana mansion was thundered…all the securities came and attention in front of maan. dev just trying to digest the news that anni missing. Maan fuming in anger. Again and again he is tightening his fist. If he could he can burn entire world from his gaze. He want to punish but …whom, don't know…how to throw his anger…. No… really don't know…he is angry him self bcoz of his helpless…being a big business man, having such a good status in society, having the capacity of making any impossible to possible..but he can not help his own sister…he can not with her when she is in trouble…when she need him more….his eye were burning like charcoals. Any movement he can loss his patience.

Securities are standing in front of maan…they all are shivering…such a tight security, 24hours cctv camera will be recording how come anni missed….

Maan turn to manish ,he is the security chief for KM. "manish , what is going here.."

Manish he is six feet ..well body builder .. he seems like a devil..but he is a very sincere security officer of KM..he is working here from past five years…but today what happened even he surprised .already he checked cctv cameras but no clue…morning the security guards changing the shift it mey happened and at same time hole KM is power offend…he had doubt on that time.

Maan really fuming in anger. he is going mad ..he taken all securities and roared on them to search hole delhi. Even maan and dev are trying to search anni but she is not available.

Dadima become very ill after anni missing. Always she is thinking about anni. She is just 18 years girl but she is not grown mentally so much…in her view everything is good…each and every human bee is good..Blindly she trust human bees without thinking much about them…

After investigation maan confirmed that anni kidnapped by somebody who well known about KM family and from inside the family. But who kidnapped her…day by day its becoming mystery for him. he didn't sleep at least one hour after missing her..he is worried about her mental situation already she is suffering from one accident still she didn't came out what happened in her past now again…he remembered one month back.

Dev is in noida…maan at office…he is working in UK project he got the call from hotel blue moon night at 12:30 am . he wondered who will be…hotel manger ask him to come hotel immediately. When maan enquired but he didn't give much information. Only he said that anni is lying in one room and she is in serious condition. maan rushed to hotel.

When he reached the hotel some how the issue leaked in media every one are there with their cameras. Securities are trying heir level best to avoid them. As soon as maan arrived there the manager take him to room. He allowed only maan to enter inside.

Maan really he didn't hurt in his life..he didn't face such situation in his life. it is horror…anni is lying on bed without single thread on her body. there is too much wounds o her body , still blood oozing from her body. maan shocked no one mind to cover her body from piece of cloth. Maan tarred himself a part. His heart skipped with pain. Actually he don't know whether it is a anger or it is a feel of sorrow…looking his own sister in such stage. Really don't know how many people attacked her at a time…how many are abused her …maan immediately covered her body from bedspread . there is too much of blood stains on bedspread. He scooped her in his arms. Already she is sinking. Her heart beat is going down. Without thinking anything he rushed to hospital. But media is not letting him to come out .blocking his way asking hundreds of questions. Maan barked at everybody at a time. Some how he manage to take her hospital.

At hospital when he come to know that gang rape attempted on anni , maan really shattered with pain. why …why its happened to her….doctors tried their level best to save her life. after three days anni open her eyes but she is not remained that old anni.

Mentally she is hurt…she is not recognizing properly any one…day by day she recovered by physically but mentally she sinking. She is not letting her own brothers to speak with her. always only fear is in her innocent eyes. her smile is totally vanished. She is not ready to come out from her room. Always she will be looking out of her room window. It seems always she is scaring to somebody.

Maan used all his money power to hide the issue from media but he failed…more then one week anni news published colorfully in medias . maan died each and everyday about the incident. Even police tried to catch the victims but totally they failed. Anni is not giving any clues . she is scared…she worried…just she hided her self in her room. No one can answer anybody. This accident damaged hole khurana family dignity in society. in family no one are bothering about the issue, only they need their anni back but anni day by day she is sinking. She closing all routes which they can reach her.

Maan try to find the victims who attacked on anni. According to his private detective agency he got the information about brij. Yes he confirmed that brij and his friends are the cause of anni situation.

Maan decided..he had the power to vanish at once all of them but he didn't get back his status and he didn't get back his old anni. Even he want to make damage same thing to his family. Brij family is very respectable family in hosaipur. Even he had a sister where he kept his sole on her..maan decided in same way to take revenge. He went to hosaipur ..he met geet..but her innocence and her culture made him to think for awhile. Even his culture not let him to take revenge in same way. Some how he want to damage his family…he used another way..in the name of marriage he married geet….he cheated her using one day…he left her in farmhouse taking all the jewels. He know when geet return to her village ,after knowing the truth in same way the hole handa family loss their status , respect in society how he lost in delhi. In same way even brij will realized the pain when his own sister abused by somebody what today he is suffering. maan is not happy doing all this but again and again anni is standing in front of his eyes. the situations made him monster.

As per plan everything is went fine but what now again anni missing…….maan closed his eyes. his eyes were burning. Its become blood red. In front of his eyes anni bare body is just hitting…as a brother he couldn't take any more…how to forget that incident. From the day one he is trying his best to forget the incident….but it is impossible. When he closed his eyes just anni bare body will come in front of him .he want to kill every body at a time . he want to smash everything. His anger is not cooling after taking revenge. He become mad. He pulled his hairs roughly…. now where is anni ….without any support how she will be …maan totally shattered. He banged on wall furisly.

Another one week passed no clue about anni. Maan and dev still searching her in every corner of delhi ..even pvt detectives and police were in same work .maan lost hope an anni. The pain is tarring him part by part. He didn't mind to enter KC at once. Don't know how to find out her…

It is Friday…dadima ask maan to take her to vaishno devi temple..but maan refused…dadima again and again she requested him. finally he agreed to take her on one condition that he will not enter temple. Dadima agreed. He lost all hopes on everything.

Maan dropped dadima near temple and he sat in car. Dadima waited until maan went and sit in car. She is standing at the end of the steps. There is 101 steps to reach temple. Dadima kneel down on steps and started to climb by her knees but due to age and her illness she failed. She couldn't climb at least 3 or 4 steps just she felled down. Before falling down geet catch her and she protected her from falling from steps.

"aunti ji what are you doing…." Actually geet is staying near this temple and daily she had a habit to visit to temple. Unfortunately today she saw dadima from falling from steps she holed and protected .

Dadima eyes were filled with tears. "kya karu bti ..maine mathaji se manath mangliya …isko poora karne keliye hum ye sab karna padega…"

Geet wondered in this old age how can she complete her mannat. "aunti ji …I think it is too tough to do this… pls leave it…god needs only pure heart worship. Why you want to stress so much…."

Dadima smile d weekly" nahi bte…maine ye sab mere pothi keliye karna padega…"she couldn't speak much tears rolled on her cheeks. She know very well, about maan … if maan knows about dadima mannat he will never let her do such things.

Geet felt very bad looking her.. in this age why she is attempting such dangerous tasks…what made her to take such decision….don't know what is the relation between them but looking her pain her heart pleaded…."aunti ji if you don't mind, I will full fill your wish..i climb the steps…"

Dadima shocked" par beta ..yetho bahuth mushkil hain aur tum ajj kal ki ladki hain ..how can you do this…"

Geet smiled…she lost everything in her life…without any goal she is living here…if she can do something to somebody , it is really great. Her heart ached some time. In this age what made her to take this tough manat really don't know but I should help her " aunty ji .just think that I am like your daughter. I will do what you want to do ..pls …bura math maana…"

Dadima agreed. Some where she loved her attitude . today in this 21 century there are few can be so obedient to elders..but geet ..she seems..she grown in well cultured family and she looks that she came from good family.

Geet joining her hands together and started to climb the steps. Its really hard…step by step she is climbing. Its too sunny …she is sweating very badly but geet didn't bothered..just she climbed the steps by her knees. At the end her dress torn near knees blood started to ooze but she didn't stop her attempt until reach her goal. Dadima followed her….dadima melted in front of her….at the end when they reached the temple geet was too tired. Her knees were scratched and its drenched by blood .

Dadima heart was filled with kindness. Without any relation geet helped her…"tumari naam kya hain beti…"

"geet…" very short and sweet name. dadima murmured her self once again "geet.."

Why she don't know there is a magic in her smile and attitude. Dadima hugged her lovingly and ask her to call "dadima.." how her family people will call her….geet agreed. Very soon both become friends and geet promised her she will meet her every Friday at same time.

After pooja they came down and they made their ways , when geet turn to other side at the same time maan came close to dadima. Dadima very exited to introduce geet to maan…..dadima turn to geet to call her …….

PRECAP: MAAN MEET GEET……….

Hi friends…

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IMP NOTE: when I requesting for likes and comments from readers some of my friends suggested me to add more romantic hot scenes in FF. but friends I believe that everything should be in limit. As per me story is stronger then hot scenes. At any cost I will not change idea in my FF. this is only my view. If my words hurt anybody pls forgive me.

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Posted: 13 years ago
ossum part dear
no words to say
so maan is balwant dear
and when maan meets geet
hope he knows the truth dear
but i dont think u ll do it so soon
but pls dont make maan cause much problems in her life
pls dear
that we cant see
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Posted: 13 years ago
who is trying to blackmail annie.? i think sum1 come to her room in last update... nd i really want to see maan's reaction when he will come to knw tht geet didn't go back to her house aftr tht 9ght...
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Posted: 13 years ago
VARSHA
VERY NICE UPDATE
PLS WRITE THE STORY WHICHEVER YOU HAVE CONCEIVED IT
IT IS REALLY DIFFERENT
SO FINALLY GEET AND MAAAN WILL BE FACE TO FACE
HOW LONG HAS IT BEEN SINCE THEIR MARRIAGE AND IS GEET WORKING IN HIS OFFICE
NOT CLEAR ABOUT IT
IF SO THEN HOW COME MAAN HAS NOT ME T HER TILL NOW
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it loved it loved it...
its so painful.. for maan his family... but where is anni..
maan ko toh kuch bhi sach nahien pata geet ke baare main aur yeh sab hogaya ...
that B**** Brij ..giurrr... kutta!
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update...
maan has no idea about brij not real brother of geet ...
he doesn't have idea how geet is treated in home...
what will be maan's reaction after seeing geet...
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi there very well written
Nice concept and very sensibly u have presented so far
I am a regular reader of both of your FF and found u a very Good Writer so Keep Up the Good work

Best of Luck
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Posted: 13 years ago


awesome update...thanx for pm...

I was shattered to read what pain and shame Aniee and Maan went through...and if Brij is responsible then he should be punished very badly by Maan and law...but Maan's style of taking revenge is not agreeable...

Now Aniee is missing...where is she and who abducted her...

Geet is so helpful...she doesn't know Daadi but helped her in such a way...this is called true sanskaar...

I have read ur note after the update...I also think u r right this time hot scenes are not appropriate...story doesn't demand that now...there is no love in any character's life...later hot scenes can be included when love blossoms between Maan-Geet or they marry again...
Edited by tushti-kiran - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome!
poor annie!
so it's now confirmed that maan was balwant!
but maan targeted the wrong person!
geet was always a burden to her family!
maan will feel so guilty when he'll know the truth!
continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey read d ff in 1 go n jus lvd it ...lvd d way stry proceding, cncept is also new...cn u plz snd me d pm...plz :)...

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