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Posted: 14 years ago

#491

Originally posted by: kuttu
Again secrets I thought now all is wel in paradise. But looks like more trouble. And Pia being jealous was really cute. Chand getting the ring was a nice jesture. So is it now someone will coem back for the ring.

the ring chapter is over.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#492

Originally posted by: missglam

Shalini! awesome update..

Loved Abhay's convo with the vampires... He can do anything 4 piya. . Cho chweet . . Waiting 4 deli's entry in dehradun. .how is piya going to react ?

When will abhay know abt his past wid piya ? Eagerly waiting 4 dat . .

thanx 4 d pm

continue soon

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Posted: 14 years ago

#493

Originally posted by: kuttu
Oh another secret now who is this new female that Abhay seems to be very close with. And Pia is surely innocent she seems very pure and nagleic in your fanfic. But she does have a jealous and possessive side I would say. She doesn't even tolerate the fact that Abhay can talk tosome one. But Abhay sure knows to get his way around her. Now the ring with Chand how many are going to be after it. And what is Pias name having a problem.

i'll unfold all secrets soon.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#494

Originally posted by: sparklystarstud
nice update...bt deli means problem right...i guess so...
and abhay called n talked to her...this means a definite sign for the next storm to hit abhiya in the form of deli...😔
hope all's well
continue soon ...😊

~sam

i'm yet shaping deli's character so cant say.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#495

Originally posted by: Deepi20
<font color="#3333cc">Nice update! Piya is so sweet to give the ring to Chand! And Piya was super cute when she got a bit upset when Abhay was on the phone, she's such an Abhay attention seeker! 😛 Looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

#496

Originally posted by: shivanipandit29
Fabolous update

so Naina is keeping some secret from abhay : same name same face?
he was warned not to call deli but he did Deli is his ex gf right?
so does it mean she is gonna pop up soon in abhiya's life. i hope no misunderstanding comes between abhiya. thanks for pm n update soon.

i hope same name same face secret u reveal soon.

keep reading to know more.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#497

Originally posted by: heena_mehta

lovely update shalini!!
</div>so lydia was abt to say something, does abhay ever come to knw abt his past memories??n wat abt delia n abhay, were they just frnds??<div>
hope nthing wl go wrong b/w abhay-pia, coz of her!!

one day abhay will know of his past.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#498

Sorry I couldn't reply to last updates as I was busy

Awesome updates

Loved them

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Posted: 14 years ago

#499

Originally posted by: Pari-Gupta
Sorry I couldn't reply to last updates as I was busy
Awesome updates

Loved them

its okay! Thanks for liking.

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*!40!* Sometime after midnight,Pia moved slightly and Abhay detached her from him. Pia:I'm feeling so cold Abhay. Abhay:You'll wear my shirt?It's long sleeved. Pia took his green shirt lying on the lower end of the grand white bedsheet and wore it. Abhay:You know I should buy some shirts for you,you're looking so unbelievably cute! Pia:Abhay shut up and go to sleep.Oh by the way I forgot to ask you about how you vampires are,I mean what do you do and you know everything about you,like for now do you sleep really? Abhay:I knew this would be coming!Yeah we 'can' sleep but it's not necessary. Pia:Wow!That's helpful!Umm now I see how you always saved me at nights for instance,the first time we met. Abhay: (kissing her forehead)Now sleep dear,tomorrow we have bio practicals. Pia:I've studied for that.Tell me more. Abhay:I'll tell you some other time.(suddenly remembering)You know the Cseryon siblings came to see you. Pia:Wait!Who came to see me?Abhay:(smiling a bit)They're like rulers to us,the ancients.They are five siblings-two sisters-Lydia and Portia and three brothers-Diotrephes,Festus and Felix who rarely speaks.They're very nice and kind.They allowed you to keep the ring and yes they didn't object to our relationship! Pia:(squeezing his finger)Our love has the power of goodness and peace,how can anyone ever come between us? Abhay:(stroking her arms)Fall asleep Pia,its too late to talk now. He securely tucked her in the blanket and closed his eyes also. Next morning they left early for college.Pia noticed that Abhay was frequently looking at the screen of his Android as if awaiting someone's call.College was very normal and boring 'cause they had to spend nearly the whole day in the bio lab.While coming back home,Abhay took Pia to a remote highland.They parked the car nearby and sat on the lush green grass.Abhay took out coke cans for Pia as they relaxed. Abhay:(taking her hands into his)Pia I want to tell you about somebody,somebody special to me. Pia:(rising her head from his chest)Whom are you talking about? Abhay:When I was in Canada,I met Delinsey.She was a very sweet lady with those lovely large anticipating eyes.We met in a night club and had a dance.Later when I asked her about her family,she sadly said that both her foster parents are alcoholics and they abuse her.Once she had a boyfriend who took advantage of her beauty and used her a bar girl.I felt bad for her.After like five months,I found her on the road nearly dying.She'd taken an overdose of some drug i think it was heroine.I took her to the hospital but no one could help.I turned her for I felt she deserved to live.And she did thank me for giving her a new chance.After that we became best of friends.It was impossible to seperate us.Then one day,I dont remember when and why,but she had to leave.Our rulers made her stay with another clan for some ten years.I don't know why she was punished but I missed her a lot.When I found you,I found my companion in you.And trust me,I totally forgot about Deli.But yesterday they told me that she's in Meghalaya.So I called her and she's arriving tonight to stay with us. Pia remained quiet for a long time and then asked him something closing her eyes. Pia:Did you did you like her? Abhay:Yeah why not?She understands me so well and Pia you won't believe she's so beautiful! Pia slided down her hand from the square blue buttons of his shirt and got up.She walked almost to the edge and sat down sadly. Abhay came beside her and lay down on her lap hugging her belly. Pia:(tears forming)You loved her didn't you? Abhay:(looking totally shocked)What are you saying Pia?I think I knew how much I love you and that my heart doesn't beat for anyone else. Pia:I dont know what to say Abhay. Abhay:Pia you are my love,the love of my life.The way you understand me and overwhelm me is something that no one can ever ever do.Delinsey is the bestest friend I ever had but you are my soulmate,my dream,my fantasay,my desire,my beloved,my heartbeat,my sweetheart,my one and only love.I love you very much Pia,you can't just doubt on me. He held her face in his cold but unusually comforting hands and kissed her lower lip gently.He took his face back. Pia:I'm really sorry. Abhay:It's completely okay Pia. Pia embraced him and hid her face in his broad arms as he kissed her hair. Later at late evening,a bell was heard. Abhay:There you are Delzi! He opened the door to find a young lady with blonde hair upto her shoulders.She was wearing a long black dress.She immediately hugged him. Deli:I missed you so much AR! Abhay:Me too Deli! Pia had come downstairs in a long blue night gown. Pia:Hello Delinsey. Deli turned her face to see the newcomer and got a huge shock.There was the lady wearing the same blue gown standing infront of her with a huge smile,whom she had murdered some decades ago in jealousy.And there she was.Alive. Deli:Who're you? Abhay:Meet my fiance Pia. Deli:Pia?(OMG!How can this be?)