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Posted: 13 years ago

awsome post shirish!👏

loved it.❤️

great and superb work.👍🏼

fighting convo was awsome. flashback was so cute.😳

convo b/w abhi and pia was lovely. looking forward for pia's answer.😳

thanx for pm.

continue soon and do pm me when u update.😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

fabulous work shirish!👏

lovely update.❤️

love fighting part and flashback.😳

thanx for pm.

continue soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG wat an update shrishti ji !!!😆 Just loved it..Lovely update.the FB was dreamy n so was beautiful😍😍..n why r u saying bad upadte it's awesome dear. 👏now eagerly waiting to know pia's answer..😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
brilliant writing shrish yaar!!m soo sorry 4 the late comment..maaf kar do yaar..bt abhi proposed ..cool!!!waiting eagerly 4 pia's reaction!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Chap11

Abhi's heart was thumping lke fast train.He was eagerly waiting 4 Pia's ans.His ears were 2 listen those 3 magical world'I LUV U' frm Pia's sweet,angeletic voice.
On other hand Pia was totally confused,this proposal came 2 her lke a strom,she was not prepared 4 it atall.She was lost,lost in her's angel dream.Dream which was full Abhay.The moment she spent wid him.
FLASHBACK
(This is same flash back whn Abhay proposed Pia 4 marriage,I mentioned it in my previous update.Remember where he showed her all moments they spent 2gether though presentation)
Abhay was dancing wid his lady love in
I wanna grow old wid u
I wann die lie in ur arms
I wanna b there u...
Abhay:Pia this song symbolise my heartt,my love 4 u.I wnt 2 b wid u still my last breath.I wann take my last breath in ur arms..
Pia:Shh Abhay.V'll live wid each other.The moment I'll lose u I'll lose myself.Abhay u r the air I breath,the water I take.U r my moon who enlights my life in dark,my sun who sunshine my life,my sky where I can fly.U r everything 2 me.Everything.Without Abhay Pia is nothing jst a body without soul,heart without heartbeat,sun without sunshine.Jst promise me U'll never leave me never
Abhay:Pia I promise u I'll never leave.Evn if destiny will seperate us I'll fight wid it 2 b wid u.I'll comeback jst 4 u,4 our love,4 our life.Abhay will always b wid Pia.I'll reside in ur heart,in every breath u take.
Pia:And whn I'll become Vampire thn wht,thn I wont b able 2 breath Abhay
Abhay:Pia evn if u will turn vampire I'll beat in ur dead heart.In whtever direction u'll turn u'll find me.V r meant 2 b together.And know matter how many times I have 2 leave u I'll come back 4 u always evn If it means fighting wid my death.But do wait 4 me.
Pia:Abhay I'll wait 4 u till eternity.Pia was,is & will always b urs
FLASHBACK ENDS
Pia eyes were filled wid tears,tears of pain,tears of losing her life Abhay.She survived for 18 years without Abhay wid jst one hope tht he'll fulfill his promise & will come back jst 4 her.Jst 4 her.
Abhi:Pia where r u lost?I love u.Do u love me?
Pia(sobbing,stammering):Ab-h- Ahh.I-I-I dont know wh-t 2 say I jst..I m not prepared.I-I m s-oo-ry .I need time,I jst.I m not prepared.U dont know me well as of now.Plz I dont wnt 2 lose a frnd lke u.I m not gud 4 u.U deserve better.I m bad omen Abhi.I m bad omen.I ruined everybody's life who loved me.
Abhi(wid pain & tears):Plz dont call urself bad omen Pia.Its ok if u need time.I can understand.4 me u r lucky charm.See I met u on my b'day tht itself indicate tht u r an angel send 2 me by God.I'll wait 4 u till enternity.No matter wht happens I'll always b there 4 u.
Pia started crying loudly.Abhi console her'Pia no need 2 cry.Am I tht bad at proposing tht gal started crying.Oh god Abhi's charm is not working'.Pia smiled a little.
Abhi:Thnk God atleast u smiled.Waise was my food tht bad tht u were so eager 2 take it out hence went 2 loo😉
Pia:hahah Abhi no u r fab cook.U were right ur wife will b damm lucky
Abhi:Oh thn I would love 2 c u as tht lucky gal😉
Pia:Abhi😡😆
Abhi:Oops sorry.Lets finish r work & thn I'll drop u
In morning
Pia's room
Sun was shining brightly.It was a blessing 4 all but since 18 years it was a curse on Pia's sensitive skin.She was jst resting remembering abt time she spent wid Abhi,amiling at herself.She was confused how can any1 else other thn Abhay can capture her mind & heart.She stood on her feet & closed the window as sun was piercing in her delicate skin.Suddenly her phone bell ring.She picked her phone & it was misha on other end
Mish:Hello Pia
Pia:Hello mish.Wass up.Kyun call kiya?
Mish:Bhool gayi
Pia:Wht?😕
Mish:Oh God Pia I know now u live wid Raichands but still how can u forget ur own mom-dad's anniversary
Pia:Oops I m so sorry mish
Mish:Sorry 4 wht?😡.Ok I'll forgive u only in one case
Pia:Wht?Anything 4 u.
Mish:U have 2 help me in party preparation 4 mom-dad's anniversary
Pia:Yeh bhi koi kehne ki baat hai.Done.
Near jungle
Abhi was in his car all set 2 go 2 college.Was bit upset wid Pia's refusal but was sure soon she'll accept him.He was driving in full speed tht suddenly it stops near jungle.He came out of his car.Checked it engine.There was wiring problem.He resolve the problem & was abt 2 leave in his care tht a strange voice attracted him.He follow the voice & reached in the middle of jungle
On other hand Pia sensed something dangerous.She knew there is something which is not right.Through her power she tried 2 locate Abhi & was shocked 2 c him in jungles surrounded by wolves.She ran in her roller coaster speed & reached there in no time.
As soon those wolves saw her,the vampire,their enemy they turned their back 2 attack her but Abhi hit thm.Pia thought tht now she have 2 transform into vampire.She had no option left.Soon she was ready 2 transform into vampire 2 Abhi but 2 her surprise wolves r not able 2 evn touch Abhi.As if any power was stopping thm 2 touch hi.Evn Abhi was confused wht was happening.As soon as wolves came near a thunder make them fall afar.They all ran in fear.Pia was so confused 2 c all this.Wht was happening?Is she dreaming?Were wolves really not able 2 touch Abhi?If yes thn Y?Wht was so special abt Abhi tht not allowed wolves 2 touch him?
Abhi ran 2 Pia:Pia r u ok.Wht r u doing here?
Pia: Hmm..Oh I was just passing & I heard ur voice so thought 2 check u
Abhi:U shuld not have come here in jungle lets leave
Pia:Waise wht were u doing here?And Y wolves were not able 2 touch u?
Abhi:I heard strange voice & followed it & reached here.As 4 wolves I have no clue.
All the way 2 college both were lost in thoughts.Thinking Y wolves were not able 2 touch Abhi?
In Raichand mansion
Pia was all lost.Haseena came
Haseena:Wht happened Pia?
Pia:Nothing
Haseena:Dont lie beta
Pia:Mom something strange happened 2day
Haseena:Wht Pia?
Pia:Mom Abhi was traped in jungle & wolves surrounded him.Warewolves
Haseena:Wht warewolves r back?😲wht u did thn?
Pia:I was abt 2 transform into vampire tht suddenly i noticed tht wolves were not able 2 touch Abhi.Even Abhi was confused.
Haseena:R u sure?Thts strange.How can tht b possible?
Pia:Evn I m wondering tht mom
Haseena:No need 2 worry.I 'll ask Chand wht tht means.U jst relax
Pia:Yes
In evening
Dobriyal house
Everybody was getting ready 2 celebrate Mr & Mrs Dobriyal's anniversary.Pia was helping Misha in preparation as guest were abt 2 come.
Raichand came,Vermas,Sharmas & thn Khanna made their entry.
Raichand eyes were on Abhi as both Chandeena were keen 2 know Y warewolves were not able 2 touch Abhi.Haseena reached Abhi
Haseena:Abhi how r u?
Abhi:I m alright aunty
Haseena:Thts gud.Enjoying party.
Abhi:Ya ofcourse.
While chand was staring at Abhi wid his X-rayed eyes.
Party was in full swing.Pia was asked 2 sing a song
Pia played Piano & sang
Sau baras guzre raat hue
Sau baras guzre din hue
Sau baras guzre chaand dikhe
Sau baras guzre bin jiye
Kyun pal theharta hai yeh
Kyun waqt badalta nahin hai
Yeh raah sooni hai kyun
Kyun koi nikalta nahin hai
Sau baras guzre saans liye
Sau baras guzre bin jiye

Palkein hai khwaabon se khaali
Dil hai ke bandh koi ghar
Kabhi rang thay nainon mein
Kabhi dil ko lagte thay par
Woh raat saheli meri
Sab taare chura le gayi hai
Woh dil jo tha mera
Ab woh bhi mera nahin hai
Hai khafa mujhse yaar mere
Kya pataa kab yeh phir mile

Hum toh charaghon se jalke
Baithe hain umeed mein
Kya jaane yeh kis ka
Rahe intezaar hume
Koi chu le mujhe
Kyun aakhir yeh lagta hai dil ko
Saansein bandh hai toh kya
Ab bhi dhadakta hai dil toh
Yeh tadap koi naa sune
Naa samaj yunhi dil hai yeh
Sau baras guzre raat hue
Sau baras guzre din hue
While singing this song she had tears in her eyes.This song perfectly suited her current sitaution.She was actually waiting 2 live agn.Abhi noticed tht pain in her eyes & was not able 2 control himself.He sang
Khuda ko dikh raha hoga, na dil tujhse judaa hoga
Teri taqdeer mein mujhko, woh ab toh likh raha hoga

Khuda ko dikh raha hoga, na dil tujhse judaa hoga
Teri taqdeer mein mujhko, woh ab toh likh raha hoga
Tera hi bas hona chaahoon
Tere dard mein rona chaahoon
Tere dil ke inn zakhmo pe, marham main hona chaahoon
Tera hi bas hona chaahoon
Tere dard mein rona chaahoon
Tere dil ke inn zakhmo pe, marham main hona chaahoon

(kar le kabool khudaya mere sajde
ab toh naseeb mein mere usse likh de
ho kar le kabool khudaya mere sajde
ab toh naseeb mein mere usse likh de)

Tu phir na soya hoga, shayad phir roya hoga
Tu phir na soya hoga, shayad phir roya hoga
Aasu meri palkon pe, yun hi na aaya hoga
Dena mujhko aawazein
Ya sunn meri fariaadein
Ghere hain mujhko yaadein, bin tere
Tujhe hi bas paana chaahoon
Khud ko main khona chaahoon
Tere dil ke inn zakhmo pe, marham main hona chaahoon
Tera hi bas hona chaahoon
Tere dard mein rona chaahoon
Tere dil ke inn zakhmo pe, marham main hona chaahoon

(khuda ko dikh raha hoga, na dil tujhse judaa hoga
teri taqdeer mein mujhko, woh ab toh likh raha hoga)

Dil ne ibaadat ki hai, teri bas chaahat ki hai
Dil ne ibaadat ki hai, teri bas chaahat ki hai
Likaaya arziyon mein, tujh bin jeena nahin hai
Mujh mein ab main kahan hoon
Tujh mein rehne laga hoon
Main toh bas jee raha hoon, bin mere
Tujhe khwaab mein dikhna chaahoon
Teri saans mein khona chaahoon
Tere dil ke inn zakhmo pe, marham main hona chaahoon
Tera hi bas hona chaahoon
Tere dard mein rona chaahoon
Tere dil ke inn zakhmo pe, marham main hona chaahoon
Abhi sang this song only 4 her.His eyes were filled wid pain.He so wnted 2 bring smile on Pia;s face.He wnted 2 bring Pia back into life wht an irony he wnted 2 bring life 2 tht gal who was not evn alive who was mere walking dead.Both Abhi & Pia eyes were gazing at each other.The pain was unbearable 4 Pia.She ran,she ran as fast as she could & reach in jungle.Abhi followed her.He knew how dangerous tht jungle is but still 4 him Pia was 1st priority.
Both were standing in the middle of jungle.Pia was crying her heart out while Abhi was feeling guilty 2 make her cry.
Abhi:I m sorry pia.I never mean 2 hurt u
Pia:Abhi Y u came here?Plz leave this place is not safe
Abhi:Thts wht I m saying this place is not safe.
Suddenly clouds collided creating thunderstrom
Abhi:I guess v need 2 leave.The weather is not gud
Pia:Ya
Abhi:But how will v go.Its not gud 2 roam in jungle at night tht too whn there is thunderstrom.V need 2 find shelter soon
Pia(Thinking):How shuld I tell u tht I can go frm here without any harm but I guess I shuld beahve lke normal human.
Both Abhi & Pia were drenched in rain.Water was dripping frm Abhi's perfect jawline.Pia was straing at his angeletic face jst as she used 2 stare at Abhay.Abhi was watching Pia's wet rosy lips.It was sensous.He was unable 2 control his urge 2 touch her,2 kiss her.
After few hrs they found one cottage.They knocked at the door.An old man welcomed thm.Abhi asked 4 help & man happily obliged.Old man provided thm a small room.Both Abhi-Pia were feeling uncomfortable as they had 2 stay in same room whole night + both were not sure abt their urge 2 b wid each other.
Old man gave Abhi his son's shirt & white sheet 2 Pia.Abhi hesitately took out his shirt showing his perfect muscles 2 Pia.He had six packs.Pia was not able 2 stop herself 2 admire his sexy bodyy.Water was dripping frm his body making him luk more sexy.Abhi was enjoying Pia's gaze at him.He turned his back 2 Pia & Pia was shocked 2 c his back
Why pia was shocked 2 c Abhi's back?Why wolves were not able 2 harm Abhi?Jst wait a bit😉😆
Sorry 4 not able 2 rply all😳.And ya I know I updated very late but plz baksh meEmbarrassed


Edited by cuteshrishti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update😊
superb👍🏼
loved it
the flashback scenes were soo sweet
n piya nei toh bichare abhay ko cook banna diya😉
pyaar logo sei kya kya nahi karata 😉
n thanx 4r the pm
continue soon
tc😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
y ? y ? y? shrishti ? kyun kia tune aisa ? i planned the same 2 songs for my ff also . but koi baat nahi . u finally updated that was a great thing itself 😆. faboulous update . itna wait karvaya jata hai kya ? but thanks a lot that u at least updated .
abhi is so cute . n i knew what would be pia 's ans . she used the same ans for jeh also . but after some time when she accepted him i was a bit angry but if u make her say yes to abhi then no one would be angry. thanks for the pm dear n update soon . hope i did not hurt u by my comments if yes then m really sorry 😳.
take care
n
update soon 😉
Edited by cuteteddy - 13 years ago
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Superb update Shrish... you are even late then me in updating 😆 Now i update like once after 8-10 days...you have crossed me 😛 chalo pehle dekho, im a dazzler 😆
Now it was fantabulous... you described Piya's pain and dilemma with Abhay's memory and Abhi is awesome.. great job 👏 👏
I never expected Piya would say yes so soon but offcourse she is attracted towards him. and Abhi he has fallen so hard...
I'm not sure about the song Piya sang but the 2nd one Abhai sang for Piya is beautiful that i know. Let me guess, it must be the bat tattoo on green that we see on Abhay's back. im expecting some hot romantic scenes in the cottage... 😛
continue soon...luv u🤗
Edited by princess_xeelan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

fantabulous update shrish!!

ok firstly i would like to tel u, d two songs which u used reli very beautiful n i just love them n they appeared so perfect wid d suitation!!!
loved d way u wrote abt pia's turmoil,her confusion n best part d way abhi took d whole suitation, dat was reli very nice!!!
so finally few secrets r coming out frm ur pocket!!!
nw wat pia saw at his back!!! dying to read nxt part😳😳😳😳, i m dead sure khuch khaas hi dekha hoga😉😉😉😉 hehehehe!!!
awesome update shrish, plss yaar continue soon!!!
luv u loads🤗
Edited by heena_mehta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
fab update shrish. so abhi is quite mysterious.hmmm...interesting
Edited by abhayfan_dishu - 13 years ago

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