Maneet FF- Pavithra vivah-pt-22 , pg-144 - Page 12

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Posted: 13 years ago
jst loving it. poor geet is suffering so much. so it is maan the balwanth. he is taking revange on brij through geet?? wow interesting. plz do continue n add me to ur PM list.
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Posted: 13 years ago
nyc story...plz add me in ur pm list...
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART- 5

….after two hour car stopped in front of big old building. Its too dark…actually she couldn't recognize where was she….how can she will know….till today she didn't step out at least once from her hosaipur.

She is blinking standing there…Balvanth parents also not visible. Only he is with her…she scared what he will going to do….balvanth get down from car and he dragged her to inside. Geet couldn't open her mouth…her mind blocked totally. Just she is walking how he is dragging her….

He thrown her in big room. It is old but it is well furnished room. He went out. Geet sat on bed .now she realized that she didn't brought her luggage with her. now she started to think…why balvanth behaving so strange…she sat on bed and trying to recollect what happened from morning to now… she is hungry from morning she didn't had anything. No one bother about her in myaka ..even her so called husband…she don't know what to do…just she is waiting her husband expecting some food from him.

Finally he came after half on hour..when he entered all the lights off…now he removed his sehara…but he is not visible to her …geet screamed with fear. Her surroundings fully covered by darkness… . Suddenly she felt some rough hand surrounded her waist. He pulled to close her…now geet lost her strength to scream also..she is shivering in his arms…her fingers clenched his sherwani collar ,only she can feel his half beard right side cheek . she scared in dark she hugged him tightly and placed her face on his hard chest.

His strong arms lifted at one jerk and went to bed. He thrown her on bed. Geet closed her mouth using her hands…she scared…till now he didn't speak single word with her..now he is attacking like a hungry animal on his prey. Her heart skipped…

She don't know what is happening on her….there is too dark…his hands moved on her roughly before she feel him, before understanding what is happening to her, he entered her..like a animal….geet shocked she don't know what happened to her…his sudden entry made her body to refuse him. but it is a too forceful attack….he pushed hardly…she felt like a fire in between her legs…..before understanding what is happening to her she fainted.

He abused her more then one hour…he didn't kiss her at least once…he didn't feel her once….he didn't caressed her body gently once….only his aim is breaking her virgin…that's all… in this process he didn't think about at least once. After reaching his goal he went out side wearing his dress.

After few minutes again he came to her room. Now the lights are on…he didn't mind to correct her cloths..just he pulled all her jewelry roughly from her body …when pulling her mangalsuthra the only one movement his hands shivered . again he corrected him self. he tarred her duppata into two and gathered all jewelers in her duppata and tied. Before leaving once again he turned back. He felt something odd in his mind. His monster mind also melted for few seconds. He went to near her …he covered her body with blanket and left.

Before leaving he put his hand in his pocket. Taken some bunch of five hundreds and handover to watchman ." bee care full…" this is the first sentence he spoke after his marriage. He left the place immediately.

It is midnight 2'o clock. geet came in sense. She couldn't move for inch . It is too paining between two legs. What happened to me she try to check her self….she scared there is too much of blood stains on her dress and bed spread. Her red bridal dress drenched, here and there with her blood. It is tarred in three, four places... finally she understood what happened to her..but where is he…single jewelry not left on her body…

Some how she manage to come out of from that room. No one are visible…where is balwanth …she couldn't walk properly. Between her legs its paining and burning. some how she corrected her dress. She came out…watchman is in half sleep…only he can help me " bhayya …bhayya…" watch man open his eyes. it is not new for him. many of rich peoples will come to here enjoy with their girl friends..after finishing their work they will move on…there are many stories behind of this form house.

"kya hain…" there is no respect in his voice. He thought even she came to give company …

Just she blubbered " wo..mera pathi…"

Watch man burst laugh…" don't try to be innocent…why he didn't give you enough money …"

Geet really didn't understand.." I didn't understand.."

Now even watchman confused once again he saw her…her new bridal dress, she seems like she come from good family. Did any one cheated her…"where are you from…" he remember the guy who gave handful tips to him…

Geet told everything to him…now he confirmed .she cheated by him…but some where he felt sorry for her but he couldn't help her much. Even he had his own family…

"madam ji…really I am very sorry ..here only rich peoples come to enjoy with their girl friends and prostitutes. I don't know who come with you..pls have it.." he given her hundred rupees note and ask her to leave immediately.

Geet shocked. The man whom she trusted and married he cheated her…he is taken all her jewelry and left her…once again she checked her self. not only jewelry he is taken everything…he broken her virgin.. "bhabhaji …how did you do this to me…why ,… what mistake I have done…" her tears flowing on her cheeks…

Now watch man tensed he can not allow her to be there .."madam ji…pls yaha se jhayiye..warna bhahuth problem hogi .."

Geet not in sense. Her mind blocked…her little heart is not trusting what happend to her…watch man now he is above to push her from the form house…

Once geet look at him..her eyes were teary..i think watchman is better then balvanth ….at least he told her truth and given hundred rupees to move from there..but balvanth …

She came out…it is midnight …don't know where to go….she don't want to go her hosaipur…the only reason her dhadaji..if villagers come to know how she cheated what will happen to her dhadhaji image…

Everything is over just in one day. She started her new life at morning and almost its ended at night. How can be the faith will cruel with somebody. She is trying to recollect what promise they both taken in front of fire. Marriage means what…. only cheating…only using to full fill their physical desires and just for money…

She is walking like dead body…who will help her…suddenly one jeep stop next to her. all are drunkard…she can smell alcohol which is surrounded her…they get down from the jeep and started to circle around her..now what to do…she gathered all her stamina she started to run..the guys followed her..

While running she is thinking ..why when she trust somebody why always they will cheat her..now where to go….her mama papa, dhadaji no one her here …chachi and chacha they are become monster in her life..where to go….

Just 18 years girl….don't know nothing about this bad world that when she know she cheated from her own husband…what she will do….backside still the guys are following her …now she is tired she cannot move a inch but she know if she stop she will be a prey for those guys…but no strength to rum…her heart beat is going high…no she cannot run any more…

Now she is on dam…she dozing…she couldn't run any more…she holed edge of the dam…under water is running forcefully she can here water sound. Yes …better live in this world I can end my self. " papa ,mama sorry I know you will hurt but no other way…pls I don't want to be alone..i want to be with you..bhabhaji pls maff karo….i am ending my life…." the guys were came close.

At lost time gathering all her strength she climbed on dam and fell down. The guys were shocked..they didn't expected this. they come to sense. Again they ran back.

A big Mercedes bench black car stopped for a while. the man get down from the car…he is almost six feet. Good personality and well trained body. he had a doubt and came and lean from the top of the dam. Nothing is visible only geet red duppata can visible in moon light. Water waves are moving forcefully. He returned back to his car.

PRE CAP: GEET JOIN K.M………..ANNI MISSING….

Hi friends ,

Again your varsha back. I updated next part of Pavithra vivah.

Imp: if you are not reader of my FF pls ignore it.

Yours,

Varsha.

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Posted: 13 years ago
me first
awesome dear
geet in kc big nooo
plz pehle usse dev se milva do plzzz
maan ko jealous bi dekhna
story line to aap ko hi pata hoga per kash aisa hota ke dev hi geet ko milvata maan se aur kehta bro she is ur bhabi to maja aa jata
lovely update dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww
is he maan
waise i m sure
about it
just want to conform
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Posted: 13 years ago
god wat a painful update. poor geet i really felt sorry for her. hw could maan do this ??? waiting for the nxt one
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome upd...
fellin bad 4 geet
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Posted: 13 years ago
so sad
balwant is an animal to treat his wife like this hate him
how does she survive

poor geet
everybody mistreats her

pls update this soon
Edited by punam2712 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh no !!!!!too much painful update.😭😭.. to take revenge from brij maan ruined geet's life..😡.. how can he be so cruel.???...😡 poor geet feeling very sad for her...please continue soon...eagerly waiting to know the next...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful update dear...i luvd it...pls continue soon

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