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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awsome n cute update
luvd day way geets mum wa teasin dem
plzz cont soon x
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update piya...
savitri's teasings were funny and cute...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thnx 4 pm


Fab as ever ...

Precap is so interesting me looking forward 2 it ...


continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow awesme part love it gud to see geet mom back and i eagrly waiting for da saza
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Posted: 13 years ago
1st of all Sorry for being sooo late...
Now it was such a sweet update dear... Maaneet are so cute and Geet's mom is so so sweet...
She understands what's going in young hearts and just wants Geet to be happy...
And she knows Maan will always kep her happy...
Waise why so small update that to after so long...
Aur mere humsafar kab aa raha hai...
Luv
--Anu
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome upd dear
thanx for d pm

Love
Deepa
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was sooo cute, lovely and beautiful update continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Short n sweet,waiting 4 next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thank you for ur love and support. Here is the next part I hope each one of u will like it.

I dedicate this update to my dear friend Anu. Anu you were complaining na that I don't update DMG frequently look this time I updated it .

Love-Piya

PART 40

Khurana Mansion

Maan: Ab so jaata hoon

Maan: Par neend nahi aa rahi kya karu?

Maan: Geet ko call karta hoon

He picks up his mobile

Maan: Nahi wo bhi toh so gayi hogina haan ab aisa ho bhi saktha hai aur nahi bhi ek kaam karta hoon usse message kardetha hoon agar wo jag rahi hogi toh uska reply zarur karegi

Meanwhile,

Geet: Kya Geet tubhi na ekdum pagli ho gayi hai abhi kuch der pehle toh wo yahi the na tere paas tab bhi tuje unki yaad aa rahi hai

Geet: Haan yaad aa rahi hai aur ismein galat bhi kya hai ab unhe yaad nahi karungi toh kise karungi

Geet: Kya karu haan unhe phone kardethi hoon par kahi wo so toh nahi gaye haan shayad, chod Geet khamkha unki neend kharab mat kar

Geet: Chalab tubhi so jaa

Just then she receives a message

Geet: Maan ka message

Message: " Mera chand so toh nahi gaya"

Geet: Iska matlab janab jag rahe hai

She replies him back

" Jabse iss chand ko uska aasman mil gaya hai aakhon mein neend k liye koi jagah hi nahi rahi"

Maan reply: "Zara main bhi toh jaanu k inn khoobsurat aakhon se neend churane ki gusthaki kisne ki"

Geet's reply: " Wahi jisne meri takdeer ko apni takdeer k saath humesha k liye jodh liya' wahi jiski tasveer mere dil k aaine mein humesha humesha k liye kaid ho chuki hai'ek wahi toh hai jo ye gustakhi kar saktha hai"

Maan's reply: " Gustakhi ki koi saza bhi hogina"

Geeet's reply: " Gustakhi jitni meethi hothi hai usse bhi kayi zyaada meethi unki saza hai"

Maan's reply: " Kya usse ye haqh hai?"

Geet's reply: "Unhe meri har ek cheez par haq hai'mera wajood unke bagair adhura hai'wo hai toh sabkuch hai warna meri zindagi mein koi mayine nahi"

Maan's reply: " Tumare aasman ki zindagi ka har ek pal uske chand ka mautaz hai' apne chand k bagair ye aasman ek pal bhi jee nahi saktha"

Geet's reply: " Aasman aur chand ka rishta toh kayi sadiyon se chala aa raha hai"

Maan's reply: "Aur ye rishta humesha uhi barkaraar rahega"

Geet's reply: " Iss rishthe ko khud uss rab ne tarasha hai"

Maan's reply: " Aur sirf tarasha nahi balki apne dua se isse ek paak aur pavitra dor se baandha hai jiska tutna naamumkin hai"

Geet's reply: "Haan ye rishtha aatuth hai"

Maan's reply: " Aur ye aasman apne chaand ko umr bhar apne palko mein bhitakar rakhega aaj se uske chand ki khushi se badkar iss asmaan k liye aur kuch nahi"

Geet's reply: " Chand ne toh kabka apni zindagi ki har ek saas apne aasman k naam kar di hai"

Maan's reply: " Aaj se zindagi ki har ek subah tumse shuru aur har ek shaam tumpar khatm"

Geet's reply: " Aaj se zindagi ki har ek subah aap se shuru aur har ek raat aap par khatm"

Maan's reply: "Vaada"

Geet's reply: "Vaada"

Maan's reply: "I love u Mishty meri zindagi mein khushiyon ki chandani bhekerne k liye shukriyaan"

Geet's reply: " I love u too Maan mere zindagi ko sapno ki sunehri duniya banana k liye shukriyaan"

Maan"s reply : "Good night Mishty apne sapno ka darwaza khokar rakh dena main aa raha hoon tumse milne"

Geet's reply: " aap hi toh mere sapno k shehzade ho aur mere sapno mein aaphi ki hukumat chalti hai jaldi aayiye main aapka intezaar kar rahi hoon'Goodnight Maan"

Both of them go to sleep and got lost in a world which belonged solely to them. No one had the authority to enter this world as it was meant only for them, their dreams and their love

Next Day

Geet gets up and finds another message from Maan

Message: "Good Morning Jaan I hope kal achhi neend aayi hogi. Mishty bhoolna mat aaj Meera aur Yash ki meeting karwani hai muje thoda kaam hai main wo jald hi liptakar tumhe radio station mein miltha hoon. Love u Jaan 'Tumhara aur sirf tumhara Maan"

Geet : love u too Maan main aapka intezaar karungi

Savitri: Bete zara ek baat bataiye k sirf Maan k ek message se aap itna sharmajaathi hai tho jab maan aapke paas hothe honge tab aapka kya haal hotha hoga?

Geet: Ma aap?

Savitri: Haan hum waise sach kahu tum dono ko iss tarah dekhkar jo khushi mujhe mil rahi haina wo main lafzo mein bayan nahi kar sakthi

Geet: Thanks Ma aap jaanti ho aap meri sabse achhi dost ho ek aisi dost jisse main sab kuch share kar sakthi hoon

Savitri: Main toh bus yahi chahthi hoon k aap dono yuhi khush rahe

Geet :Maan mera bahut khayal rakthe hai ma

Savitri: Ye toh aapke chehre ki muskurahat hi batadethi hai Geet jabse aapko apne pyar ka ehsaas hua hai tabse aapke chehre mein ek ruhani raunak hai jo har pal ye Maan k pyar ki gehrai ki jhalak batathi hai

Geet hugged her Mom

Savitri: Bete aap keh rahi thin a k aap radio station jaa rahi hai chaliye taiyaar ho jaayiye warna Maan k sapne dekthe dekthe aap kahi kho na jaaye

Geet was blushing

Geet: Ji ma

After some time

Radio Station

Geet: Meera nervous hone ki koi zarurat nahi hai main hoon na main sab samal lungi

Meera: Jaanti hoon Geet

Geet goes and introduces Meera to her boss and he agrees to keep her in place of Geet

Meanwhile Yash arrives

Lucky: Yash tujhe pata hai na ab tujhe ek nayi partner mil rahi hai Geet k bajaye

Yash: Nayi partner magar kyun Geet ne job chod diya aur mujhe bataya tak nahi

Lucky: Nahi Yash aisa nahi hai Geet k exams haina toh ussi kuch dino k liye Geet ka kaam koi aur samhalegi koi Geet ki friend hai

Geet enters

Geet: Hey Yash kaise ho yaar?

Yash: Me fine tum batau maine suna hai mere liye ek nayi partner laayi ho?

Geet: Thik suna hai trust me Yash usse zyaada perfect tumhare liye aur koi nahi ho sakthi

Yash: Tumne mujhe apni iss friend k baare mein pehle kabhi bataya nahi

Geet: Pehle nahi bataya ab milwa dethi hoon lo wo aa gayi

Yash was shocked to see Meera

Yash: Tum

Geet: Dekha maine kaha thana Meera se zyada perfect tumhare liye koi nahi ho saktha aur waise bhi tum dono tho ek dusare ko jaanthe ho na wo blind date Meera ne hi toh jeethi thi

Yash: Main iske saath kaam nahi karnewala

Geet: Tumhari permission kisiko nahi chahiye boss ne Meera ko meri jagah rakh liya hai samjhe tum

Geet: Meera tu tension mat le yaar koi bhi problem ho toh mujhe bata dena ok

Lucky: Hey Geet ye le tujhe uss event k 2 passes chahiye the na

Geet: O wow passes mil gaye thanks yaar

Geet: (thinking) ab pata chalega k kya MSK mein itni himmat hai k wo saari duniya k saamne muje propose kar sake

PRECAP: GIRL U R MY CHAMAK CHALO😉😳😉😳😉😳😳😳

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Love-Piya

Edited by piya- - 13 years ago

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