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Posted: 13 years ago
awww simi the suspense is killing me!!!!!

i just luv maan!!!! he didn't take advantage of her...and their is pain hidden behind his cold and cruel exterior...their is a sweet and down to earth guy somewhere in there...somewhere deep inside him.

i feel like it is trapped somewhere in him...but slowly it is trying to escape. Geet is slipping through his cold exterior and is unknowingly helping that part of him which he trapped to escape.

i can't wait for the next update simi...i just can't wait. i am falling for this shetain.😍
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: zeynab111

awww simi the suspense is killing me!!!!!


i just luv maan!!!! he didn't take advantage of her...and their is pain hidden behind his cold and cruel exterior...their is a sweet and down to earth guy somewhere in there...somewhere deep inside him.

i feel like it is trapped somewhere in him...but slowly it is trying to escape. Geet is slipping through his cold exterior and is unknowingly helping that part of him which he trapped to escape.

i can't wait for the next update simi...i just can't wait. i am falling for this shetain.😍


hey zee how r u dear hopping that u r rocking in ur Xams
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: zeynab111

awww simi the suspense is killing me!!!!!


i just luv maan!!!! he didn't take advantage of her...and their is pain hidden behind his cold and cruel exterior...their is a sweet and down to earth guy somewhere in there...somewhere deep inside him.

i feel like it is trapped somewhere in him...but slowly it is trying to escape. Geet is slipping through his cold exterior and is unknowingly helping that part of him which he trapped to escape.

i can't wait for the next update simi...i just can't wait. i am falling for this shetain.😍


Thanks Zee..
I know...I know I am moving slow with this whole suspense thing but can't help it I love to torture you guys lol...

I will update soon...and slowly Maan's past will be revealed and when I saw slowly I mean it lol...you know it from my other fan fic as well...😆😆

Hows everything with you?

Simi😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Almost done with the update😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updates really love emmm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb!! I love the way u've weaved the whole story 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey guys,

I have some bad news!

I will be going on a one week vacation during this weekend and during that time it would be impossible for me to update. I will return on October 10th and will take me another day or two to write another part for all of my current stories. BUT I will be logging on once a while to reply back to any PM's and/or comments, if time permits.

P.S. I will TRY to update BM and HAHK by tomorrow and send out the PM's as well!

Thanks hope you guys understand!

😈 SHETAN KA GHAR😈
Chapter 12

Geet moves out of the study room..scared as she heads toward the noise. She stops outside of the door and opens it. She saw Maan working out in anger. She had to hold on to the door for support seeing that much blood. She was never a big fan of blood...She opens the door more wanting to stop him but didn't know how. Maan looked toward the door when he heard a noise..Geet quickly hid behind the door...Maan took the towel and started wiping his sweat...he didn't care about the blood..as if he didn't feel anything...Geet puts her hand on her heart trying to control her racing heart...she started moving back when she saw Maan's shadow coming closer and closer toward the door. She hides behind the pillar as Maan peeks out of the door. He looks here and there and finally closes the door again. Geet sighs in relief...she sneaks out from behind the pillar to look and saw Maan standing there with his arms crosses. He comes closer to her and puts his hands on both side of the pillar. Geet looks at his blood dripping rather then him.

Maan (follows her eyes): Does it bother you? (She looks at him) My blood...does it bother you...

Geet: Why are you doing this to yourself?

Maan: Because I can do whatever I want

Geet: Why are you hurting yourself? (Maan turns around...Geet walks closer to him) Who am I? Why did you bring me here?

Maan: Go to your room Geet before...

Geet; Before what?

Maan (turns around with danger in his eyes...) Before I make you

Geet (Backs up against the wall holding on to the pillar as Maan leans closer and closer toward her) You already have done everything so why not finish what you had started? I have already lost what I had to loose.

Maan: Is that what you really want? Believe me Geet...I won't stop...you wouldn't be able to handle it

Geet: Handle what your pain? The same pain that you are trying to hide behind your anger? Your rude words? Your actions?

Maan (smirks) Is that what you think? I have no pain...I am who I am...no one can change me..my rude words, actions everything defines me...defines my presence and my identity...I am MAAN SINGH KHURANA...No one can dare to mess with me...and I love it that way...and no one can change me...NOT EVEN YOU...(he pulls her closer by the waist..)

Geet: I don't need to change you...who am I to even to have that much right on you? I am just a trapped soul in this hell house...

Maan: And you will be trapped here forever...until I say so

Geet: What is my purpose here?

Maan: To be with me...(She tries to get out of his grip) What happened? I thought you want me to finish what I started? The night is still young...(he bends down kissing her neck...moving to her face...he kisses her gently on her eyes and her lips..he puts all his weight on her against the pillar as he probes into her mouth...kissing her senseless...Geet gasps for air as soon as Maan stops kissing her...he looks at her with a smirk) I told you..you won't be able to handle it...

Geet: Then let me go...let me leave...

Maan: After all the trouble I went through to get you here? Why would I? I am not a saint..NOR I want to be...I am the shetan...your shetan and you my princess...(he caresses her face) is forever doomed to live in this hell house...Now go back to the room...

Geet: No...(Maan looks at her...)

Maan: What?

Geet: NO...I will not do anything you say anymore...

Maan: Is that so...(he pulls her by her hand toward him...) So you want to play with fire now? Where is this courage coming from? (she struggles to free herself...)

Geet (looks at him): You can do whatever you want...I will not listen to you...

Maan: You will regret it by not listening to me...think about it again! (She turns her face away..) Alright don't say I didn't warn you. (he picks her up and throws her on the bed...he takes off his shirt and looks at Geet..she looks at him with worry..) Already scared? (he smirks at her...he leans closer to her...) You will know tonight the price of not listening to me...(he holds her hands and takes off her bangles...Geet saw anger and pain in his eyes..she didn't stop him...her mind wandered to the diary she saw earlier..she wondered what was inside the diary what is he hiding in there...she was curious to know about him and his past...she couldn't ask him and even if she did she wouldn't get any answer from him...she closes her eyes when she felt him take her sari pallu off...he had held both her hands above her head tightly now...he slightly kisses her on her belly making her moan..he squeezes her belly..making her gasp with pain...he almost digs his nails in...she opens her eyes and looks at her...) Do you feel the pain? This is only the beginning...

He bends her legs up...he puts his hand on her ankles...slowly moving upward...he stops at her knee...he lays on top of her while his hand is still on her knee moving up...Geet whimpers...Maan kisses her neck roughly...he moves her neck to the other side to give him more access...he removes her blouse down the shoulder a little..bitting her neck in anger...Geet kept her mouth closed...he lets go of her arms as his hand wonders behind her...he slightly picks her upper body so that his hand can rest on her back...near the hook of her blouse...she puts her head on the crook of his neck as she felt Maan sensually moving his hand all over her back...she hugs him tighter when she felt her blouse hook being opened...he lies her down again...he begins kissing her again while removing the blouse...although her eyes were closed she could feel his penetrating eyes all over her body...he puts both his hands under her curves...his thumb gently caresses her curves without removing his hands...she gasps..this is the first time anyone has ever touched her like this...his one hand goes down toward her stomach stopping where her sari was tucked...he grabs the sari material in his hand pulling the pleats one by one...she felt tickled as the material loosened from her waist...

Geet couldn't eat or move during the plane ride. She was scared seeing his possessiveness and of what he can do. What does he want? That same question kept haunting her...what does he want...why her? why not someone else?

Geet: How did you find me?

Maan (looks at her and caresses her face) its not that had hiring a detective money can make people do anything...so now the question remains what else would you do to get away from me?

Geet: I...

Maan: Don't talk...you lost that opportunity...

Geet: What are you going to do?

Maan (smiles at her) Let me worry about that sweetheart...(Geet stared at the window for the rest of the ride..she wondered what he meant..what is he planning? The plane landed an hour later...both got off the plane but Geet made sure there were at least two people behind Maan to give them a little distance. She had to go to another plane to connect. Maan comes and stands in front of her.

Maan: you are not going in that plane

Geet: Why not?

Maan; Because you are coming with me. (He holds her hand and some guy comes to push the cart)

Geet: Let go of me..I am not going anywhere with you. Let go...(She slaps his hand and tried to loosen his grip but it only got tighter and tighter)

Maan (looks at her shooting daggers) BE QUIET AND COME OR ELSE I KNOW HOW TO MAKE YOU SHUT UP!

Geet; I am not going..I am missing my flight...let...(Before she could complete her sentence Maan kisses her..Geet looks at him with open eyes...everyone started staring at them..before she knew it she was in his arm being carried away...) I have to go to go...(she starts crying)

Maan: you are going with me...and not to your destination

Geet: Then to where?

Maan: For now my private jet...(Geet saw big jet outside of the airport waiting..he carried her up the stairs of the jet. She was amazed to see the inside of the plane. It was so beautiful and everything spoke money and class. He puts her down on the chair and fastens her seat belt...while Maan does the same opposite of her...) The plane will take off any minute now.

Geet (was scared): Where are you taking me?

Maan (gets mad) Questions after questions after questions...(he opens his seat belt and goes near Geet..which scared her) if you must know then I will tell you...pretty soon (he looks at his watch) umm lets say in about two hours you and I will be married...(She looks at him shocked and moves her head side to side saying no) Doing that won't make it true any less...(Maan sits on his chair and closes his eyes...Geet comes out of her shock and quickly opens her seat belt. She saw Maan with eyes closed. She quickly got off the chair and ran toward the door. She was thankful that the door was still opened..she was about to step down the stairs when someone puts a handkerchief on her nose causing her to faint...Maan picks her body up and brings her back on the chair...)
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Geet opens her eyes as she looks at Maan who was looking at her. Studying her face. She was still lying on the bed with her bra on. Her sari was no longer on her...it was just the sari skirt...his hand rested lazily on top of her skirt...

Maan: You still won't listen to me?

Geet: I will...

Maan (bites her stomach really hard making her scream in pain) You will WHAT?

Geet (with tears) I will listen to you...(Maan pulls her up and holds her hair...)

Maan: Don't you EVER go against me again...(he lies next to her and pulls her over him..so that now she is lying on top of him...he covers them with the blanket...Maan nuzzles on her neck and lips all night...)
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Geet wakes up the next day to find no Maan. She looks at herself in the mirror...she had a bruised like thing on her neck and her lips were swollen...she covers herself with the blanket as she goes to the bathroom. She comes downstairs to find no Maan waiting at the table. She went in the kitchen to find Nakul there.

Geet: Nakul where is Maan sir?

Nakul: He went to work Ma'am and he left this note for you. (He hands her the note and leaves)

Geet,

I will be out all day today to see construction work outside of the office. Will be home late...

P.S. Nakul will leave after he is done making breakfast. I don't need someone to keep an eye on you...I know you won't try to escape again.

Maan

Geet puts the letter on the table. Geet was home alone after Nakul leaves..she hated being alone..it scared her...she looked at the door..she wanted to see her parents..she missed them..just the thought of them not knowing where exactly she is worried her. She didn't even know what Maan told them aside from the fact that she is hanging out with friends. Her college dream...is gone...she couldn't dream of anything anymore. She went upstairs and into his study room. The mess was still there. She slowly went in tucking her sari on her waist, she started picking up the mess. She looked at his desk and remembered his diary. She drops everything from her hands, going behind the desk. She opened the door, happy that it wasn't locked, and picked up the diary.

NOTE: Will update once I return!
Edited by mrs.msk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
enjoy your vacation
Thanks for updates.
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Posted: 13 years ago
ossum dear
so we may read his past more
relaly exited to see about his past
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
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