Chronicles of an Escapist! #1(MN) ||Completed|| - Page 12

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: richiii

well it was short...

but then it summed up everything well...
hope you update soon...



Hey somethings if short convey a lot don't they ?? And I'm glad you understood that well :)
Glad you liked it dear...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: serenelove

A.o.A Fatima,

Though I love long updates but the way u summed up all in few lines so no complaints there. Totally loved it.

Waiting for last part now.

Take Care,

Saba.



Walekum asalam Saba,

Glad you liked it dear...though you like long updates...
Thanks a lot :)

Take Care

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Posted: 13 years ago


Thank you :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: gopi06

awesome one
cont soon
thanks for the pm



Thanks a lot dear... :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
This is the Finale of the series that I wrote...I'm thankful to all those people who read though silently, liked and even commented...some left me mid way and some were there till the very end, but yet I thank you all for being there with me in this journey! :)

It really means a lot to a writer when people value their work!
With this I come to an end of this series...I hope that you enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it! I sign off this series on this note, "Every ending is a new Beginning !"

Post #8


It was a cold rainy night with the rustling of leaves and sweet murmurs of the nearby stream, sitting beside each other they tried to put an end to the intense longing that quelled their heart and soul but words faltered and sentences broke even before escaping the confines of their heart. It seemed like an eternity had elapsed as none spoke and silence lingered with a melody of its own. Turning towards her with a gleam in his eyes entwining her fingers with his own he took her lips in his for a searing kiss as ecstasy filled the air and all faded in the desolate hour of night.

-Fatima

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Posted: 13 years ago
Fatima, I must say
You are just brilliant!
Love the way you ending it
Note's pretty good.

Desc is just awesome!!
Yea, I did read from the starting.
have no words to say how it was <3
Take care :D
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Posted: 13 years ago

A.o.A Fatima,

It was lovely end of beautiful story. Thank you for nifty reading.

Keep writing. 😊

Take Care,

Saba.

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome one
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fatima!

I hadn't read post seven, you were right. Well, okay - maybe figuring that out through your massive number of Likes would have been difficult. Seriously lady, you are better off in blogger. I think people have the wit and passion for reading quality there more, naturally. :)

The last two chapters are lyrical. Besides, I think I have read these two more like a story themselves, dissociated from the rest of the posts. Now then, it is like poetry, okay post seven is poetry but so is post eight. The flow of the former made me envious, I haven't in the whole of I-F read from a better poet, honestly and the latter was exquisite, absolutely eloquent a sentiment masqueraded by yours words. Or were they the words and the detailing you managing even in this teensy paragraph? I dunno, really.


Wondrous read!


-Savage



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Princess_Khushi

Fatima, I must say

You are just brilliant!
Love the way you ending it
Note's pretty good.

Desc is just awesome!!
Yea, I did read from the starting.
have no words to say how it was <3
Take care :D



Khushi,

Thanks a lot dear !
Glad you liked this series...from the start to the very end...
Though you were not there when it began but glad that you were till the very end :)

Cheers,
Fatima

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