Dakshna FF(Fan fiction) - Page 39 | Sapnon Se Bhare Naina

lucky.m

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Posted: 12 years ago

#381

Ek khoobsurat shyam, dakshna ke naam❤️

Contd...Part 3

Naina; daksh..lagta hain current chala gaya.😲.aur,,she turns towards daksh..daksh waha nahi hein..😲

Naina; lil worried; daksh..abhi tak yahi tha,, kaha chala gaya''hmm.shayad wash room gaya hoga.and she sits down..

Suddenly she hears voice of daksh...saying naina..( in mike)😛

Lights on...

Naina turns towards that direction and is surprised to see daksh with a guitar in his hand.standing along with muisc band...😍

Daksh; ladies and gentlemen..ye gaana meri jaan aur meri pyari biwi❤️..naina ke liye..he looks at naina and says; I love u naina.❤️.this is for u😍

Every body in restaurant look towards naina and clap..naina is lil embarssed but lots more excited..

Daksh starts singing the song, playing guitar( I am putting one of my fav..u can add ur fav)...

Song; Dil ko tumse pyar hua ) from rehna hain tere dil mein)....😉

After singing few lines..he keeps guitar aside comes and asks naina for dance( kneeling down before her with his hand).😍..naina apna haath deti hain..and both start couple dance, joined later by other couples..

https://favim.com/image/24038/

Both lost in each other.😳..daksh pyar se naina ke fore head ko kiss karta hain aur naina daksh ki dil par apna sar rakthi hain..😳.iss tarah kush dher dance karne ke

baad..

Naina; not bad vakeel saab.😛.kaafi acha dance kar lete hai aap aur guitar pe gaana..tho..kya kahu?Itna acha surprise..😊.bahut mazaa aaya😊

Daksh;tumhe acha laga! tho hamara mission tho poora hogaya mere pyare biwi ko khush karne ki.😃.rahi baat dance ki tum ne hi tho sikhaya shaadi se pehle ,yaad hein(FF of naina teaches dance to daksh)...tum kuch sikhavo aur mein naa sikhoo aisa ho sakta hain kya? 😆..plants one more kiss on fore head.😳.continue to dance...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1750810?pn=8( My ff where naina tecahes daksh dancing)

Dance khatam ho gaya...dono apna room pahuch gaye.😛..Wha kya hua? pata chal jayega..wait karo😉

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Edited by lucky.m - 12 years ago

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#382

aww yar...absolutly luvd d guitar wala surpris...itnaaa romantic😍...

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lucky.m

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Posted: 12 years ago

#383

Originally posted by: sweetaish
aww yar...absolutly luvd d guitar wala surpris...itnaaa romantic😍...

Thanks bud..romantic hum daksh ko aur bhi banadenge..😉

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#384

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Thanks bud..romantic hum daksh ko aur bhi banadenge..😉

bana dena...who's complaining😆😆😆...

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DakshnaFan

@DakshnaFan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#385

@ Neetu too good yaar, after a long time ur FF, really loved it... 😛 They haven't shown in SSBN any fall once also where naina is on top of Daksh...

@lucky... Kya romantic dinner plan hai dakshu dear ka... Loved the guitar idea, song totally matching the suitation and dance... Very well planned hmmm 😉
Lagta hai next scene will be with lots of love potion 😳 😉 Can't wait... 😍

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LadyMystique

@LadyMystique

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Posted: 12 years ago

#386

@ neetu,

great comeback yaar!!!! 👏well done!! simple and romantic! love u for that and keep writing🤗

@ lucky,

i wish i were Naina in ur FF😍 and daksh singing!!! wow! wow!! wow!!!☺️😆 great job!!!!

these CVs better get their act right! otherwise they are gonna lose their jobs to lucky, aish and neetu!

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LadyMystique

@LadyMystique

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Posted: 12 years ago

#387

lucky pls dont keep us waiting🤗

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

Goldie

Posted: 12 years ago

#388

Originally posted by: LadyMystique
@ neetu,
great comeback yaar!!!! 👏well done!! simple and romantic! love u for that and keep writing🤗

@ lucky,

i wish i were Naina in ur FF😍 and daksh singing!!! wow! wow!! wow!!!☺️😆 great job!!!!

these CVs better get their act right! otherwise they are gonna lose their jobs to lucky, aish and neetu!

mysti...itna bada compliment...thnx jaan🤗...am humbled *sweeping low bow*...

bt i hav 2 say, neethu di nd lucky outdo demselvs everytim😊😊😊...nd guitar nd d song thing😍...i'm tho totali fida yar...

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lucky.m

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Posted: 12 years ago

#389

❤️Ek khoobsurat shyam dakshna ke naam❤️

PART 4..CONTD...

Both sit on bed..naina lovingly looks at daksh;😊 tumhara ye surprise mujhe bahut acha laga

Daksh (lovingly looks at her)😍 ;Anything for u meri jaan, waise tumne bataya nahi.mera surprise kitna acha laga?

Naina streches her arms wide open hugs daksh and says; itna...

😛

Daksh; bas itna!.😆.and laughs..;puts hand on naina's cheek; naina tumhari chehre pe muskurahat laane ke liye main kuch bhi kar sakta hoon..kuch bhi..ye tho bahut chota hain...( how sweet dakshu),😍.bahut thak gayi hogi..so javo..saying this he gets up.

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Naina; kya kaha tumne ?😲. so javoo? sojavoo? 😕lagta tumhe meri promise yaad nahi...

Daksh; (turns back )bilkul yaad hein..lekin..dinner ,dance..thoda thakaan hoga na iss liye...aisa kaha.😊,waise promise aaj nahi tho kal bhi poora ho sakta hain...saying this he goes to cupboard to take his night dress

.Naina comes and hugs him from back..😳naina; daksh I love u.Daksh turns towards her..luv u too

Naina apni aankhen neeche karke;😳 kya tum sach mein bahut thak gaye ho..iss liye.(playing with shirt buttons)😳

daksh; mein apni nahi, tumhara baat kar raha tha..😊

Naina ; acha...tho iss ka matlab hein ki tum tired nahi.ho.saying this she slowly starts unbuttoning daksh's shirt...😳

Daksh ( bechara).😆.gaya kaam se..😆;looks at naina with all his pyar in eyes+ romantic look..;😍❤️( naina tere tere..song in background)

Naina; lifts her head; kya hua? aisa kyu dekh rahe ho?😆..no answer from daksh( kahega bhi kya)..naina understands look in his eyes😳 and starts going from him.daksh holds naina's hand..😍

Naina; daksh mera haath chodo...😳☺️

Daksh pulls her towards him..puts his arms around her waist.😳.;looking into eyes; sach mein choddu..??😆 Naina nods her head like saying no and hugs him❤️

Daksh; jaante ho ki tumhare boori aadat kya hein?

Naina; still in hug; kya❓😳

Daksh slowly lifts up her face..; yahi ki tum kuch kaam adhoore chodthe ho😉..jihne bilkul adhoora chodna nahi chahiye..jaise ki..looks at his shirt buttons😉

Naina shramake..kaam poora karti hein...and says' hogaya(..Daksh ka night dress gaya baad mein)😆

.Daksh picks up naina into his arms and says(ek dum romantic voice mein)❤️; abhi bahut kuch baaki hain...😳

Slowly moves towards bed...puts her on bed.takes off his shirt, naina ne already buttons jo nikal diya,😉..slips besides naina...☺️..daksh ka shirt neeche aur daksh ,naina ke upar😉😳

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Lights off..naina lag gayi apni promise nibhane mein aur daksh uska help kar raha hai( lol)😆😉

Unki tho good night hogayi...tho aap ki? good mrng..jaago re jaago😆...kahtam hogaya.😉.FF ek khoobsurat shyam dakshna ke naam😛

Hope u enjoyed redaing this FF...Keep smiling😉

Edited by lucky.m - 12 years ago

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DakshnaFan

@DakshnaFan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#390

Wow 😃 A very good morning hogayi Lucky 😛 u made my day 😃

Thanks Bud itna cute cute sa FF subh subh post karne ke liye 😉

Like ki Naina taking initiative y always Dakshu has to take first step 😳😆

itna pyaara pyaara scene☺️😳 thanks yaar 🤗

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