Imaginary Scene: Sushaan leaving for Mumbai

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey SGP fans, I have had a few boring days at work so I have been daydreaming and since I am excited about this future Mumbai track, I was thinking of a funny/romantic scene between Sushaan about leaving for Mumbai. Now I'm not a CV so I'm not going to write the dialogue, just give an outline to what I think would be a cool scene, hope you think so as well.
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Ok, Ishaan and Suhana are in their room and Ishaan is all excited about going to Mumbai. He's all excitedly telling Suhana about how great it will be, a new flat, being on their own, etc and just bouncing around the room, while Suhana has her arms crossed and is just standing there. Finally, she yells out I'm not going! Ishaan stops abruptly, has a stunned/confused expression on his face.

Suhana says she is not going to Mumbai and if Ishaan wants to go so badly, he can go alone. Ishaan looks at her (he has that smile on his face when you know he's going to say something to bug her) and says ok, if thats how you feel and this will make you happy, i will go alone and he has this fake sad expression on his face. Suhana looks at him surprised and says" HOW DARE YOU"!! You think you can go to Mumbai and be a big shot and leave me here all alone. thats your plan all along isn't it. you want to go Mumbai and meet all these new women and forget about me, who do you think you are, Amitabh Bachan?!
She chases him around with pillow and hits him and Ishaan is trying o explain but she won't let him. Finally, she sits down on bed and becomes very sad, tears in her eyes all of a sudden and Ishaan says, Suhana, thumari ankai mai ahsoo (why are there tears in ur eyes). Suhana says I never thought you could leave me alone and be far away from me. Ishaan goes on his knees and holds Suhana's face in his hands and says, hey pagli, thumara screw suchi dheela hai.
He says, as soon as we got married, we have rarely been apart and when we have, neither of us can sleep, we are sad and lonely and irritable. I can't sleep without having you in my arms. I gave you a promise (early episodes) that I would do anything to make you happy, no matter how painful it is to me, your happiness is all that matters to me. So if you are happy staying here with my parivaar, i will go alone and my days will be lonely and sad but at least you'll be ok.
Suhana looks at him and holds his face in her hands says, tuum mujkho ithna pyar kurthai ho kai thum kahli jeelo gai, as long as i'm ok? Ishaan nods and Suhana's tears fall and says you know what, thumara bee screw dheela hai! Yes I love ur parivaar but ma hai thumari wife, officially and I love you more than anything else and my place is by your side. I also gave you a promise, ki mai thumari peecha khubani chodhu gi! I will always be with you so Mr. Ishaan kashyap, forget everything, we will always be together, never apart. She stands up and hugs him close.
Ishaan tells her that this is only temporary, 6 months and this will give them time alone. Ever since Suhana got sick and he lost his memory, they haven't had any time to themselves and even his birthday celebration was bad so its time they both were able to relax and enjoy life together without the parivaar. They never had a chance to date before they got married so this is perfect opportunity for us to do all sorts of things together, You can show me big city life and I will show you how to take care of household.
Suhana smiles, arms around his neck, tells Ishaan excitedly about all the stuff she can do in big city, then she has scowl on her face because she thinks of all the household chores and Ishaan looks concerned. Suhana looks at him and then throws him on the bed and kisses him on the neck and says, doesn't matter. as along as we are together, we will be ok.
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Now I have tried for the first time to type hindi words in english, i'm sorry if I made bad spelling mistakes because I have never tried it before since iIm born and raised In canada and I have just recently stumbled upon this great SGP series. I hope you can fill in the blanks and understand that the actual dialogue would be much better and sweet, I just wanted to throw in the familiar phrases us SGP fans love so I highlighted them in this "imaginary" scene.
Hope it made you smile, looking forward to the future track; I will post another topic about why I think this is great track in next day or two.
- Rinku
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sorry but I dont want to see this as at the moment Ishaan is shown too happy and enthusiastic about his job,s promotion and his career, he is not going to Mumbai because he wants to be alone with Suhana, Suhana knows that too , may be some people would like it , but unfortunately this is very filmy and I have a feling that its very cliched soapy kind of scene. I dont want to be rude, you did write it nicely but the scnee didnt go down very well with me. I appologise as for me this going to Mumbai is a chance for Ishaan to proof himslef as responsible person both at office and at home too after all its not entirely up to women to make a home, and its a time for Suhana to learn to be a life partner for Ishaan in every way, I want them to work as partners in building there life not just falling in bed and kissing on necks, sorry it may sound ROMANTIC but it is about time to have real romance with reality.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Aunty take urs as my words...Very well put as to what I want and what I don't.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi there sorry I don't know your name. 😊

Some parts were nicely written, so well done for that. Personally I think this would more suitable for other shows / couple but not for Ishaan/Suhana. Sorry I don't meant to hurt your feelings. As I said it's good for the young/hip type couples more than our adorable Sushaan. Anyways, lets just wait and see what they show us, I am praying that it is not filmy.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Just one Q. R U fan of 300? I liked it too
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: netri

Just one Q. R U fan of 300? I liked it too



Ab yeh 300 kiya hain?😕
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: mjtruelegend



<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Ab yeh 300 kiya hain?</font>😕



MOVIE 😉 gerald butler 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oh it's a movie? 😆I thought it was some other programme. Ok, nice!

Yes Gerald Butler not bad looking.😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks for the replies; 300 was indeed a great action movie & hard to believe the whole movie was shot on a green screen. As to the comments that say the scene is too filmy; don't know if you have seen all the episodes from the start because the type of "romantic" scene u r saying is unrealistic or too lovey dovey is exactly like their scenes during the time this series was at its most popular during november to march. You have to remember this series is based on light hearted humor and romance, not a reality based show where they go to Mumbai & become completely responsible. Thats changing their characters completely & then where does the series go for its humor, romance andits mistakes etc?

Of course Sushaan should grow more mature a little but remember what Ishaan aways tells Suhana, " tuum jaase be ho, vassai be raho" A lot of what I wrote was taken from previous episodes & just all put into one scene. This series will always need to maintain a balance of humor & romance, trying to make it more real & serious takes away from what made it originally be at its highest TRP ratings. If you read previous topics & posts you will see the fans asking for more of Sushaan & their interactions with each other like they did before. Anyways, thank you for the feedback, I just wanted to give an example of a romantic scene I'd like to see between Sushaan, its been a long time.

-Rinku
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Again thanks for all the feedback; Since i have watched all the episodes in the last 3 months, i think they are so fresh in my mind that i would love to see this series go back to what made it so popular. There is no denying the fact that when the focus was on Sushaan, the series was at its best so I just hope this Mumbai track gives us SGP fans the needed scenes we are always looking for. A decent track between the lead couple (Sushaan) and then fill out thet rest with family track. The chemistry between Jay/Ragini is very rare so they should realize it to its full potential; their romance and daiy life is a grerat example of what us fans want!

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