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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: MR21

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Hey rimjhim🤗...loved it yaara...gullu ko kal ladke wale dhekhne aarahe hein😲..n mummy telling bhaajaao magar daddy ke laash ke gusar ke😕...ithna emosonal athyachar kyu😡...
Kesar comparing gullu with gullu😕...kya comparison hai😆...kesar full happy n gullu full sad...ohhh first meeting ho raha hai...yeh bandha toh gullu koh dekhthe hi 😍...ohhh she crying n explaning her problem😭...ohh i meam their problem...oye yeh kya huya..pehle mulaakaath mein hi hugwa hogaya😳😍...aage kya hoga...me waiting...i want next update jaldi se laana😊...

Thanks alot Ramya 😃.
ahahahaha there's problem's all around.😆. Yeah i try and update as soon as possible😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
Chapter six
She wept into his arm's like there was no tommorow and he just kept holding and comforting her.

After seveal moment's or maybe it was hour's, Gulaal realised what she was doing, yeh galat hai she thought to herself, main aisa kaise kar sakti hoon, mein maa aur paapa ka vishwaas nahi thor sakti. And she slowly withrew herself.

"ab theek hoh" he said looking concerned into her eyes. "haan haan, theek hoon, humein chalna chahiye".

"tum atleast try toh karna, baat karni ki", "main karoongi" she said not quite meeting his eyes.

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Gulaal sat on her bed, mein kya karoon, she thought to her self, ek taraf maa aur papa aur doosri taraf kesar.

"Gulaal, jaldi aa papa ke tabiyaat theek nahi hai". gulaal ran into her father's room to see him laying on the bed coughing and holding his chest. "paapa aap theek hoh" she said running to him.

"haan mein theek hoon beta, voh mujhe kal ki thodi chinta thi, gulaal tu khush toh hai na, mujhe pata hai ke sab thoda jaldi hoh raha hai lekin, beta abhi tumhe samajhna hoga, tumhari kaafi umar hogayi hai aur abhi shaadi ke baare mein sochne ka vakt aagaya hai".

Gulaal stared at he father "haan papa main khush hoon", how could she refuse him while he layed there looking so weak, "main bohot khush hoon.

"haan beta aur ladka bhi bohot accha hai, uska naam hai Vasant.

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kesar was troubled by thought's that flowed into him, she was so beautiful and innocent, five whole month's he had been talking to her but she felt like the most important part of his life, main kya karoon he thought, jab uske maa aur paapa ko pata chlega ke main usse chota hoon toh voh kya kahenge. Joh bhi hoh, he thought, Gulaal meri hai, sirf meri.

Just then his room door knocked and none other than his elder brother barged in, "ufff shaadi, ladki, yeh pehna hai, voh pehna hai, mere toh sar mein dard hogaya. And with that he tossed himself on kesar's bed, "vasant baa, aap kush nahi hai kya".

"khush, mujhe kya khushi milegi".

"yeh aap kya kaeh rahe hain". said kesar looking at his elder brother suprised

"aur nahi toh kya, ek baar ladki aajaye, toh phir mujhe kya lena dena, maa ko bahu chahiye, mil jayegi"

kesar started laughing as vasant got off the bed and started walking toward's the door, "accha mazak hai, waise bhabi ka naam kya hai?".

vasant turned back to look at him "Nirja" he said looking at the floor with hatred ,"aur haan kesar, main mazak nahi kar raha" and with that he walked out.

Kesar felt sorry for the poor girl that was going to come into his brother's life, he could not even dream of playing about with a girl's life. His thought's went back to Gulaal. He got up and logged onto the computer, he had one message in his inbox, as he opened it, he stared at the screen shocked.

"kesar mujhe maaf kar doh, main tumse aaj ke baad nahi mil sakti?", Tumhari Gulaal.

Yeh kya, i thought she was going to atleast try and talk to her parent''s. Main bhi aise nahi choronga and he picked his bike key's up and went out of the room

Edited by rimjhim1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
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Tu next chappie lekhe aagayee🤗...
me liked kesar's concern for gulaal😳...gullu ko toh kesar ke bhare mein baat karne ka option hi nahi mila...kya musibath hai yaar..dad ki health aisi time pe kyun bhigad jaathi hai...kesar thinking that gulaal sirf uski hai😳..tum aisi hi lage raho...gulaal ko kabhi kisi aur ke nahi hone dena...ohhh i dont like this vassy🤢...vassy ko gulaal se shaadi karni nahi chaahiye...idiot shaadi mom ke liye karraha hai..kitna selfish hai...kesar kitna cute hai😳...OMG what was that message from gulaal😡...good that kesar determined that he will never ever let it happen like that😳...

LOved the suspense yaar...waiting for the next chappie...update soon😍

Edited by MR21 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
wow nice FF full suspense ⭐️ 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice chappi yaar 👏 but icudnt get the title name if u dont mind can u tell me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Savz_uniqueblis

wow nice FF full suspense ⭐️ 👍🏼

Thanks alot dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: snehasri

nice chappi yaar 👏 but icudnt get the title name if u dont mind can u tell me

Thanks alot dear.
The name is basically they started talking on an online chatting system therefore the name 😃.
thodi si main pagal hoon😆.
Edited by rimjhim1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
superb chappi.👏..pls vassy ko dur bhagao..😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Not happy with you missy.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: manzilmukul

superb chappi.👏..pls vassy ko dur bhagao..😡

Thank you and haan vasant ka kuch karna parega😆

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