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Posted: 13 years ago

Hope you read the note above this post. If not, please do.

Chapter 100

She had already changed into the lingerie that was arranged for her from before the wedding. There was nothing else to put on. When he came out of the bathroom, showered and changed into something more comfortable, he saw her sitting by the window looking out.

She felt his presence and turned to look at him. He walked towards her and on his way, dropped the towel in his hand on the chair. She shifted a little to make room for him next to her on the windowsill. As he sat there, he placed his hand on hers. They looked at each other for several moments without saying a word. Her eyes were heavy and red, her face pale and exhausted, and her tears had left a dry trail on her cheeks. The day had been long and unexpected...and certainly exhausting.

He figured she must be thinking about the day and their new relationship all the while they looked in each others eyes, because he noticed her eyes moisten now. He brought his hand to hold her face and her eyes closed automatically. His other hand came around the other side of her face as he leaned forward to kiss her. No sooner she felt his lips on hers, she felt an electric jolt through through her body suddenly. There was something about this kiss...something different than the other times. But she didn't know what.

He pulled back and looked at her again. When she opened her eyes, there were too many questions in them. But that was not the time to talk. Moreover, he didn't think she had the energy to put two coherent thoughts together...she looked emotionally beat-up. He got up from the windowsill and made her do the same...they walked to the bed...he made her lay down and slid next to her. She used his arm as her pillow and cuddled to him when he found a comfortable position. He kissed her on her forehead and stroked her back gently. Within no time, she had peacefully fallen asleep...engulfed by her husband's arms. He kept looking at her, her face showing emotions that she felt in her sleep. And just like that, he fell asleep too...

She opened her eyes the next morning and saw him looking down at her. She looked at him for a few moments before raising herself up a little to reach his lips and kissing him. For some reason, it brought a smile on both their faces. As he continued looking at her, he noticed there was an expression on her face that he couldn't place. Without any prodding, she started, "I don't know what to say. I mean, I wanted us to get married but I didn't know if you were ready to take on my responsibility."

She paused briefly and he took this time to interrupt her. "After all these years that we have been together, do you really think this is needed?"

"Maybe not for you, but I need to express myself. I need to thank you for what you've done for me. I need to know how and when you planned so much. Or was it on the spur of the moment? What made you agree to this marriage?"

"You!" he told her honestly when he heard her last question. He saw her open her mouth to say something, but she closed it again without saying it. He figured she needed to hear more than that, and so he continued, "You are the crux of my life. Every aspect of my life is related to you...is joined to you. We've been connected. There is no way I can be happy if you are not. There was no way I was going to leave you in distress after making you run away from home. I have been planning our marriage since the day that woman caught us in your bedroom. But it would have taken longer. It was my luck that Kanan proposed for our marriage, and I jumped for it. And things just kept working in that direction. All knots kept unraveling, all boulders kept moving out of our way. I've been counting days ever since to make you mine."

She kissed him again...this time longer. "But I'm already yours. I have been, since the very beginning."

He held her tighter around her waist to pull her even closer to him as he said with a smile, "I know, but this is different. I think there's great pleasure in taking advantage of a vulnerable run-away girl and getting married to her before she gets a chance to protest."

"Acha ji, toh yeh baat hai. Ptch. Now that we are married, I cannot do much. You have already taken advantage of me." She gasped suddenly and got up and sat on the bed. For a moment he felt nervous and got up to sit next to her, but relaxed as she turned and held him by the collar, "Aye ji, o ji, suniye ji. I'm not going to call you any of that, okay? I am a 21st century girl...understand? You better be clear about that, or else you know I am capable of running away." she started in an angry tone but ended with cheeky grin.

"Fine." he said holding her by the waist. "But you will have to pay for it."

Even though she knew what he meant, she tilted her head to look confused. He abruptly pinned her down on the bed and kissed her everywhere all at once, taking advantage of the beautiful lingerie she was wearing since the night before that he couldn't use, and making her pay with interest...for the delayed payback from the previous night...

P.S. - Now now how can I leave you naughty folks hanging? I don't have it just yet, but I'll be writing a more detailed version of the end of this chapter, which I cannot post here from fear of being banned. Those who followed me on the blog will know I haven't updated that in months, so cannot post it there either. So I'll just have to PM you. If you want to read something explicit and extremely graphic, just let me know and I'll PM it to you when it's ready.
Edited by --dolphin-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
mere toh aansu hi nhi ruk rahe ... *sniff sniff*
senti kar ditta tussi😆
But the pleasure is ours to be a part of TGND!!!
Lots of Love🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Congrats on 100 pages ndd chapterss!!!!
awww that was well sweett!!! i love the understanding between both of them,,and the way he always knows what n when to say the right things 😊
bak to ur notee,,it was relii sweet,,i knw i dont comment much but i honestly appreciate this nd ur ff is simply amazingg (ndd addictive),,and i hope u write more for us in the future 😊
thanks dol 😃 xx
Edited by Cutiee_Ashh - 13 years ago
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awww such an emotional note on d occasion of hitting century...i know i have been lazy at times and may b didnt support u and our ff wid comments on regular basis but trust me its d best work i have ever read and i can connect so well wid all d characters dat i can clearly feel and visualise d things as i read dem...

i can bet dat its d only ff where u find all characters so practical and adorable...d flow of things is just too perfect..i love dis ff like anything even if i dont comment at times...
and all d credit goes to u dear for being such a fabulous and flawless writer who just keeps us longing 4 more and more...👏
luv u dol...🤗







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sweet update...
sims undergoing an emotional phase...and ADI wants her to payback..cool...i just wanna read more soon...
and why r rookie out of pic for so long? u know how much i miss ROHAN...😍

Edited by _Invincible_ - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Commented on pg 102.
Edited by armaania13 - 13 years ago
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Ab toh Party de hi daliye! Bataiye, where's the party?
Edited by -Apeksha- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Firstly sorry for not being able to comment for the latest chapters.. I wanted to, but some things came up... I just lost the intrest to comment...
But they were amazing... especially the wedding chapter... the one with Keerti's father and Simran... it brought tears to my eyes... She lost her mom to god, and she couldn't do much about it... but she lost her father also, along with her mother... even if he is there.. he isn't. It was a beautiful chapter(s). And I must say I loved the ff all along all your characater are adorable...and so is the story... As much as I love your romantics updates... I simply LOVED those previous chapters... And I must admit, it was your best written chapters till now. I literally had tears reading it... Amazing chapter... :)

Now coming to the 100th one... Wonderful update... Simaran & Aditya just completes each other in every way... the perfect couple...I'm glad she married him, now the emptiness in her life will fade... :) Lovely chapter...
(Do pm me... I tried searching for your blog but failed miserably )

-& at last congrats for completing 100 fabulous chapters... I can truly say, it was an amazing experience reading all of them... I do re-read at times... and its pure joy every time... This ff is definitely one of my favourite... And the only ff I have read with 100 chapters...and that too something that is not written on a couple... 😳 feels nice.

Okay I think the comment got too long... Really hope it compensates for not commenting in the last two updates... 😊 Sorry! 🤗
& Continue soon & PM me... 😳
I'll end my speech here... :)

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Edited by .SilentPrincess - 13 years ago
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dol i agree wid apeksha...we all want a rocking party...





Edited by _Invincible_ - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
congrats for completing both 100's Dol...!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww! Tumhari iss note ne mujhe senti kar liya! 🤗
No need for the thank you's or anything Dol! It's been a pleasure being a part of the journey of TGND with you! (hm that doesn't sound right? lol!) I should thank you for letting me a part of your journey!

And what an amazinggg update for chapter 100! I think it was perfect how Simran fell asleep in Aditya's arms! and hell yh she's a 21st century girl, there will be no suniye ji etc! haha!

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