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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Guys,
I just love PKYEK .. i love the chemstry between these two,
I just wrote something.. please read it and tell me if this is good or not..shall i just discont.. or shall i make it a short fluffy but cute FF?
Please answer me!
and thanks guys!

THODA SA PYAR HUA HAI
Abhay raichand
A young handsome and lovable boy .
he love a girl but that girl ditched him and break his heart. but after sometime he find true love.
piya jaiswal
piya has lived a life of loneliness. she is an orphan and just got into a prestigious university with a scholarship. everything changed for her when piya met the love of his life.
misha is a fun loving girl. she is also orphan and piya is best friend.
kabir is rich fun loving guy and he is best friend misha and piya.
Tina is rich spoilt girl .she runs after only money ,power and fashion.
chap 1
There was a girl called Piya. She lived in a small town in a orphanage, she lived there with the people who also lived in her orphanage she was like the most liked girl and child.. but every time when someone wanted to adopt her ..the head sister always found something against the parents or the person who wanted to adopt her.. first time she got a visit from a few people..the deal was almost done when she saw them hurting a girl , when those people thought nobody was here she saw them hurting her best friend. It was good she could scream like no one else..and after that when those people got taken away with the police.. She and Misha never wanted to have any visitors after all..
They promised each other to grow up here and leave this orphanage as a grown up and make money to help everyone with no parents or family. It was like that when people and kids came and went away.. she saw a lot of people come but all of them also got adopted.. Like that years went by.
10 year later
we saw a girl walking up rubbing her eyes going to her colset and changing in her jogging clothes.she started to run off toward the park.
while looking at her watch she stops running and takes a shortcut to her called place '' home'No one will understand that a 17 year girl still lives in the orphanage.. She only has to wait and fight one more year with and school..then she is done and she can get a full soclarship in dehrahadun for her school of her dreams. having the same dreams and wanting to follow the same steps.. she sees Misha waiting at the door shooting some balls in a basket.
"Mish , hurry up we only have yet 45 minutes to go.. before the school starts.. "..and like that the two girls went inside..getting ready for school.


1 year later..

" Misha we made it! Oh my god I can't believe it .. ".. Misha nodded and hugged her tight.. " please give a hard applause for class of 2011 Mountain Collage''' and like that everyone shouted and jumped of happiness.. later that night..there was a party.. but she could not find some nice clothes.. going to the shower and bonking at the door.. '' Mish I need to take a shower too..hurry Monkey.. '' ..she called her best friend.. "yeah yeah.. '' .. she heard her shouting back.. after the changed into some clothes.. both wearing some cute going out clothes..

Misha was wearing a simple knee length dress with a beige colored bolero and some black high heels. Pya was wearing a strapless dark blue dress with a little bow on the waist.. with a dark blue bolero with some white pearls around the neck. Both doing their hair in a messy bun and Pya taking her black heels. Putting some light make up and a little lip-gloss both took their purses and walked out to wait for their supposed to be date.

Just when Pya stopped laughing about a joke Misha was telling they both heard a black car stopping in front of them and Kabir stepped out. "There are my buddies, you both look gorgeous.. please step in . " they both gave Kabir a hug and stepped in his car. Kabir was one of her and misha's best friend.

He was like a big brother to them and also very rich. After arriving they danced some times and chatted around.. everyone knew Pya at school.. she was like the smart, pretty but yet simple girl who never got asked because all guys know what happened to you when you touched Pya and you got a angry Kabir behind you or because they were properly afraid of reject. Anyway.. the both ended a little tired and asked Kabir take them home.. "Sure everything for my ladies.. "Kabir answered them..Kabir was like a angel to these girl.
He was first in love with Pya .. how could he not..she was pretty smart and not used by every boy at school..and he also loved Misha.. she was like a little sister to him..and they had a lot of fun at school.. he knew Pya never felt something for him but he rather liked her friendship than nothing.. after stepping out of the car and walking with the girls to their door he kissed each girl in the cheek and gave them a soft hug.. '' Sweet dreams. '' ' Misha smiled.. "Bye Kabir.. ".. Just when Kabir left.. Misha stared longer than normal after his car..
Piya took Misha's hand and dragged her inside.. "Lets sleep man.. I am seriously so tired.. "'. Pya smiled and hugged Misha.. "me too Mish.. sweet dreams.. " both leaving to their room and falling in their bed..

END OF CHAPTER ONE!


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Posted: 14 years ago
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thank you so much for this ,that you makes the post on piya and not forget her
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey its superb yaar and gud star for yur ff keep it up:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nice start
continue and do add me to ur pm list

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awesome update...nice concept...plz do cont soon...n plz pm me nxt time...hav a nice day...luv u...sunita
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nice start...loved it...pm me when u update
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Hey its NICE AND INTERESTING DEAR:-)PLEASE PM ME WHEN YOU UPDATE NEXT PARTS:-) THAnx:-)
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Nice start! Looking forward to the next chapter! Continue soon 😊 And please PM me whenever you update next. Thanks! 😊
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Nice plot! All the best...
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the plot looks interesting. do continue

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