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Rose

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Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

HEY ITS NICE:-) WAITING 4 ABHIYA TOGATHER:-) THANX 4 PM:-) WONDERFUL JOB KEEP IT UP:-)

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Resh

@SheDevil

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

wow beautiful description dear I loved it plzz continue😳

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Deepi20

@Deepi20

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Nice update! I liked Abhiya's first meeting! Looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊

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EVil mind

@preet111

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

PART 3

He did it anyway.. Looking at her now... moving his eyes from her eyes to her nose and lips' seeing her lips move and' but nothing came out 'he took the bag from her hand, moving his hand away from her hand.. Losing the warm electricity when he felt touching her... he saw her watching him intense... but still never saying anything... walking to place the bag at supposed place.. He walked back to her... still in daze he asked her '

Hello my name is Abhay Raichand... Are you ok? ' Abhay really wanted to say something to her...and that was the only thing he could think of saying to her...waiting for her voice again to hear...he saw her friend moving towards him ' Hello I am Misha, Piya's best friend, thanks for helping us.. We are new actually. Just had our flight today'

Abhay smiled at her but still looked back at the other girl... Piya was her name'. I like the sound of that... he thought... No worries Misha and Piya right..? .. She looked back at Piya...He saw her blushing a little... and that made Abhay more feeling a little dazed.. He was never like this...and he never actually saw a girl blushing... these days no one had shame...

He walked to Misha...forwarding his hand for a shake... Nice to meet you Misha'Misha smiled... Yes nice to meet you too Abhay... he walked towards Piya... Piya it was really nice to meet you, are you going to school tomorrow? Piya shake his hands and smiled... Thank you Abhay, for everything. Yes me and Misha are going to school tomorrow.

Abhay was getting more a weird feeling inside of him...all warm and fuzzy... he smiled to both of them and went to his room to get some rest for tomorrow... before this he had a totally hate to go school and now for the first time in a long time he was actually excited. He took his clothes off and put his sleep pants on and leaving his top bare. He walked to his bedroom...what was in a building next to the girl's hostel. He took his alarm and pressed the on button.

Just when the girls stepped into their room...Misha exploded of questions for Piya... "WHAT WAS THAT .. ''' Why were you standing there like someone who lost their tongue... you are so weird Piya. What was that...? OMG... I almost slapped you right there' beginning to laugh really hard... Piya hit her on the head.. I don't know.. I was like in a trance or something..I wanted to thank him or talk.. but there was no voice coming out of my mouth..seriously it was the weirdest thing ever' they both talked and took a shower and went into their bed..

next morning

piya(to herself) u r so late piya get ready soon after some time piya ready for collage and see misha 's sleeping. piya (to misha) mish wake up . we r late . then misha wake up with a jerk and went to bath room and take quick shower and both left the room.

In the collage

piya and misha at collage gate. misha," hey piya... mai room lock karna vool gayi tum andhar jaao mai aati hu ok

misha left... piya entered in collage...vansh was setting with his friends( vansh is abhay,s step brother.vansh is abhay's step father chand 's son . vansh dislikes abhay. he hates abhay and hates every one who loves abhay.)

angad "vansh look ...lagta hai new hai collage me.(to piya)

vansh ha par vo mere type ki nahi hai but i can try"

(vansh comes to piya)

vansh" hello beautiful".

piya:" hi"

(she trying to cross him but again vansh stoped her way)

vansh: " I'm vansh raichand the cool and hot guy in the collage & u ?

piya: piya

vansh: hmmm...pretty & old name . so do u have any b. friend ?

piya: what ??

vansh : "yes, agar hai to bata do...tumhari ankhey... uff... tumhare baal.

(he's just trying to touch piya's hair but suddenly abhay comes & hold his hand tightly.)

abhay:" meri dosst ko haath mat lagana(angry).

vansh " oh really? but why? tum kya yaha k king ho jo tum hara dosst ko haat nahi lagaya jaa sakta?

abhay:" king to nahi but tumse to better hu ... now move we r getting late or

piya se door rahena.

(piya & abhay start walking)then vansh put his leg front in piya . piya lost her balance feel on ground .suddenly abhay caught her on waist n there was long eye lock b/w them.after some time both realized that they staring each other for 15 min. then misha reached that place . mish & piya left the place and goes to clerk room for some paper work . In the evening they finish his paper work and submit his paper and left the collage.

in the night

Abhay was tossing and moving in his bed..there was something wrong..and he didn't know what.. he opened his eyes and started thinking of everything he did today.. it was a kind of way to fall in sleep.. he thought of the morning , the breakfast with his friend and at the gym with his friends, at the race and about her.. he wanted to think about her' what was wrong with him.. why did he wanted to think about her.. and why.. why couldn't he find the reason why he wanted to be with her right now.. why was she so special than other girls?

He wanted to forget Piya . it wasn't really healthy thinking about someone' he has a experience with this kind of feeling..and it ended very bad.. it had hurt him.. thinking about someone so long or so many times..can hurt..and he didn't wanted to get hurt anymore.. He totally doesn't want to think about that other girl.. the flashbacks are hurting. The way he loved her' he knew he could never love someone more than her.. the way he did everything to her' the way she used him..and then the very last part of their story.. when she found her kissing his brother vansh from the party.. he hated it..he hates the moment..how could someone remember such a thing after 2 years .. he hated it

Now he can't sleep.. he knows.. after thinking of her..he can't sleep..he walked of his bedroom and took his phone and started to walk outside his building.. it was really great weather outside.. the soft blow outside was cooling down the overheated temperature.. it was refreshing to him.. the blow was hitting against his chest and it felt good..he walked to a bench and sat dawn. And closed his eyes..

Sensing some movements behind him and a tree he opened his eyes.. ready to defend himself if it's something dangerous.. he turned his head and then he saw..

Piya's Point of view.

Piya was awake laying in her bed.. thinking why she could not sleep.. she decided to write something in her diary outside. Looking at her alarm it was almost 3 o'clock. She took her slippers and wore her jacket over her night gown .. . took her pen and diary and walked outside her room and building..she saw a bench a little far and wanted to walk there.. just when she saw a shadow .. she was thinking of going back.. because this figure could be dangerous..she walked slowly further when she saw who it was..

Abhay's Point of view

Abhay saw her.. the girl where he was thinking about.. is she real or is this some kind of imagination of him.. "Piya ".. he called out.. and then he saw her coming closes. "Abhay is that you? ".. Abhay heard her asking..Abhay walked towards her..coming out of the shadow he walked towards her. .and when he finally was close to her they both stopped walking and stared into each other.." you know Piya its not quit safe outside in this time of the night to walk.. why aren't you sleeping.. ".. Piya blushed.. and that made Abhay wanting to stare at her more.. He didn't know how she could became more gorgeous than normal by just blushing.. he loved it.. even more now he knew it was because of him she was blushing.. and why did she look down all the time.

"I couldn't sleep so I though making a walk would help..and having some fresh air was good I thought.. ".. Abhay smiled.. they had the same kind of thought by coming here..

She looked up to him.. and he saw her eyes again..and without controlling himself.. he said what he thought.. ' Your eyes so beautiful Piya.. they are so black.. but so clear... And just when he wanted to say something more he realized that he was not really helping her into feeling comfortable with him..Thanks.. she answered him ..while looking down' He didn't know why but he felt so close with her now.. he felt so alive with her.. like it was only him and Piya in this world nothing else.. he didn't knew where this feeling came from .. just once'and so soon' he didn't like it.. but how could you not like this feeling..and ignore it.. he wants to feel it again'.. he placed his fingers under her chin and lifted her face up to him.. "look at me Piya.. don't be shy.. how about we met all over again..

" Hi , I am Abhay Raichand, son of the headmaster of mount collage.. I am 19 years old, I live in the building next to the girls hostel and I study psychology , I love playing the piano' my favourite colour is green.. now your turn.."..

Piya smiled and took his hand for shaking,"Hi, I am Piya jaiswal , I am 18 years old and I would love to get my master degree for English, I love literature and writing. I love to sing and my favourite colour is brown, Nice to meet you Abhay, And wow I totally didn't know you where the son of ' "..

Abhay smiled.. " You are not the first one that gets shocked.. don't worry.. my mom is the nicest headmaster I have known. But if you get her angry.. then you should run for your life.. Piya laughed ..Abhay felt that she was more open now, and more comfortable.. he was glad that she did trust him..

And like that they talked and talked about everything while sitting at the bench .. he sometimes saw her smile and it didn't take long to make him smile too.. they both sat dawn after a few minutes talking it went to quit, not a awkward quietness.. but more a comfortable one. He turned his head towards her again..Piya, do you have the same feeling as if we know each other so long.. yet I feel like I missed you my whole life.Piya smiled.. he loved her smile..he didn't know why' but he did'She nodded.I do actually.. it's like missing a person without knowing till you find the person..then you know how empty his or her place was' he smiled at her..

. Yes that's what I mean'. You must know..that I never had any girl as a friend'.Piya smiled at him.. Me neither.. I mean I never had a boy as a friend either.. but I like our friendship..it's really trustable to me in a kind of way.. something is telling me that I can tell you my deepest secrets and still trust that you won't tell them.. how I don't know.. but I do trust you Abhay and I am glad I met you .. now I finally met a friend , and the school isn't even starting.. she laughed at the last part..

For Abhay this was everything he wanted to hear.. he wanted to became her friends ..

He took her hand and gently placed his hand on her hand and smiled to her.

"I want to be your friend Piya, I don't think I could stay away from you anymore after this .. "

.. she blushed and he smiled bigger..

END of Chapter 3

This was it Friends!

I hope you enjoyed it! Thanks again! :) xx

Edited by preet111 - 14 years ago

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shivanirajput

@shivanirajput

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

lovely update
so finally abhiya have become friends
love to see how will they fall in love with each other
abhay's past was relly heartbreaking
thanks for pm and update soon

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

nice to see the budding friendship between Abhiya

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Peehu24

@Peehu24

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

lovely update...abhiya are getting closer..it was a treat to read..update soon..thanks for pm...

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EVil mind

@preet111

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#28

thanks yaar next part confession their love updated soon

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Deepi20

@Deepi20

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#29

Fantastic update! Abhay is like totally in love with Piya! I'm glad that Piya feels a connection with Abhay and she feels like she can trust him with all her heart! I really liked how Abhay protected Piya from Vansh! Looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊

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EVil mind

@preet111

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#30

PART 4

" It feels so good . this wind blow and this night and the moon shining and showing off his beauty.. ".. she said to him..while looking at the moon. I totally don't agree.. he said.. Piya looked at him in a confused way.. he smiled while saying.. because how could such a moon so far be more pretty than the girl next to me sitting.. ".. and winked at her.. she laughed..

you know that was quite cheesy .. "' He laughed.. and smiled at her..

"it must feel good to sleep her outside.. ".. he said thinking of how warm his room was..and how refreshing it was outside.

Both sitting at the bench.. she smiled .. "you can.. come lay your head ".. he looked at her totally confused and shocked.."' where? ' on my lap of course.. come on..I don't sleep anyway..I can't sleep anymore..if I sleep I won't wake up before 1 pm' she laughed..

He gently placed his head on her lap and shoved his legs on the other side of the bench.. placing the end at the ground.. he looked up at her.. feeling his heart beat harder than ever..seeing her and feeling her warmth was nothing he ever experienced.. and he never wanted to go away from this place anymore.. he was still staring at her from her lap.. seeing more details of her face..and getting amazed at how nature beauty she was.. her eyes where reflecting the light of the moon and showing her long lashes.., her lips..and god he wanted to feel if they were as soft as they looked..pink reddish'. And one thing he also loved was her fragrance.. the smell.. he didn't know if it was her shampoo or her perfume, but it smelled so good, like strawberries and vanilla in one but still different.. he wanted to stay here..

Slowly closing his eyes .. he felt her hands' those soft hands were placed at his shoulder..and the other one was laying near his hair..he could feel it..

"Piya.. "' he said her name.

"hmm' "' he smiled.. how late is it? He asked her..

"ow let me take a look ' Oh I don't have my phone with me.. ".. before she could finish her sentence.. he took his phone from his pocket and gave it to her . still eyes closed.. he didn't want to end this moment.. Abhay felt her open the phone and gasp' " how late is it? Everything ok Piya? ".. he asked her..

"Oh yea' I was only surprised by the time.. it's so late.. almost 5 o'clock.. I am supposed to wake up over a hour and half. ".. Abhay opened his eyes and looked right in her eye.. and was again amazed by her beauty..

"You are so beautiful Piya.. ".. he couldn't hold it anymore.. and wanted to let her know what he felt..

Piya looked at him down at him..

"Those eyes Piya.. your eyes.. when I look in them ..it's like my mind goes empty.. I won't even remember my name.. and your sweet smile..and the sound of your laugh, ..god every time I hear the sound of your laugh' it makes me laugh..and that makes me happy' you make me happy Piya.. I know.. it's too soon to tell you this..but why waiting..there is no lifetime enough to care about someone so much' I can't even think about being away from you from now..

I just can't.. and then Abhay stared at her.. he saw slowly .. her eyes got wet and then he saw a drop of tear almost falling down.. Just when he wanted to say something.. he felt her finger against his lips..

"Abhay.. "'.

Piya's Point of view

Piya couldn't believe her eyes.. this whole night has been one of the best moments in her life.. she was just realizing that this is actually real.. and not any dreams or anything.. before he could say anything more..she pressed her finger against his lips.. it was not her purpose to touch his lips..but now she was doing it.. It felt weird..it felt good..and' before he could say anything more.. she closed the distance of their faces..she came close to his ear..

"I feel the same Abhay.. but I want you to know that this is the first time I feel like this, the first time I am sitting and being so close to a boy..and it happened to be you' and I am glad it happened to be you.. you are nice and sweet..and I like you.. a lot ".. she closed her eyes and placed a soft gentle kiss on his temple.. lingering a little longer with her lips against his temple than normal..she blushed ..looking down at him..she saw the cutest expression ever.. it was like he was dreaming or smiling so big..either one of them and his eyes were showing happiness and disbelief.. she almost laughed at loud.. and then his eyes met her'

She almost forgot to breath.. Her heart reacted more frenzy that other times.. slowly looking down..feeling a little weird' "stop staring..it's not nice.. ".. she said while avoiding his eyes' she then felt his hand gently cupping her face..making her look at him.. " how could I not stare.. you are beautiful.. and please don't move your face away.. I had not the chance to look at you in my 19 years.. and now I can..I want to stare 24 / 7. .. ".. she had to smile to that one.. he was so cheesy..

"you watch to many movies Abhay.. or are those dialogues yours? ".. he laughed.. "no they came right from my heart..especially made for you.."'again a cheesy line..Piya thought.. still smiling and secretly liking it more than she should..

Abhay slowly removed his head from her lap and sat dawn close to her..stretching a little with his hands'

"you know.. we still have one hour to sleep.. do you want to go back to your room and sleep a hour?"

Abhay asked her.. Piya smiled..as if she could sleep now..

"no I won't be able anyway.. you can go if you want' I am perfectly fine here in this beautiful night and fresh wind.. "' she said smiling a little.. wishing that he totally would ignore her comment about him leaving if he wanted to.. Before saying something else.. Abhay took her hand..both of her hands in his hands.. "Piya look at me.. "' Piya turned her face towards him.. "you don't get it.. I was serious..more than 100% serious about telling you that I can't leave you anymore.. please understand.. I can't.. it's like giving up everything in my life.. ..I will show you Piya' how much I care..and how much I L- ''".. he just once stopped talking and didn't continue his say.. Piya was already getting emotional what he said..but then just she also realized..what he wanted to say.

She looked at him and saw him looking dawn.. " I am sorry Piya, I wasn't controlling what I was saying.. "..before he could finish.. "Say it again.. "' Abhay looked up..in disbelief' what Piya? ..

Say again what you wanted to say'. And he did ..looking right in her eye.. "I care a lot about you..and I 'L'. Love you Piya' ".. he said looking almost sad.. as if he done something wrong..(then background music play).

Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki
Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki
Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki
Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki
Hum To Dil De Hi Chuke
Hum To Dil De Hi Chuke Bas Teri Haan Hai Baki
Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki
Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki

Kaun Sa Mod Aaya Zindagi Ke Safar Mein
Bas Gaya Tu Hi Tu Ab To Meri Nazar Mein
Dil Ki Har Ek Dhadkan Tujhko Pehchaanti Hai
Meri Chaahat Hai Ab Kya Tu Nahin Jaanti Hai
Main Tuhje Jaan Gayi Tujhko Pehchaan Gayi
Phir Bhi Teri Haan Hai Baki
Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki
Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki

Aaj Yeh Kya Hua Hai Dil Nahin Mera Bas Mein
Is Liye Sochti Hoon Tod Doon Sari Rasme
Umr Bhar Ke Liye Tu Aa Mera Saath De De
Tera Ho Jaaonga Main Haathon Mein Haath De De
Haathon Mein Haath Sahi Tu Mere Saath Hi Sahi
Phir Bhi Teri Haan Hai Baki
Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki
Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki
Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki

Piya surprised him by getting close and hugging him ..Abhay was in shock.. but he gladly accepted it..and hugged her back.

"I Love you too Abhay .. "' she told him..and Pya was glad.. finally .. the thing that was torturing her mind and heart was finally out.. she told him..

Abhay froze ' and hugged her more tight ' resting her head on his shoulders..

END of Chapter 4

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