princess163's world of poems on Maaneet...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello Maaneetians😊

I am Swati, a certified Maaneet Maniac😆
For those who haven't yet been tortured by my writings, its time to go through the drill now😛
Well, I am no writer, neither a poet, but Geet Forum, and its brilliant writers have lead to me writing so many peices, mainly tits and bits that rhyme😆
So, I got this idea of making a separate thread from Rachana(water) who is a brilliant poet, and has written beautiful pieces😳
And, today when Hasini(6th Element) asked me if I had a compilation of my works, I thought let me build one now! Enough of my chatter, back to business!
So, I will post here my so-called poems😛 that I have written for some of my favourite writers and friends...this list is by no mean indicative of my writer preferences, coz I am yet to write for some of my fav writers like Hasini and Jaz😛
I will try to post the links where it was posted originally too😊
Happy(sad) reading!
The ones for Kashish(by muskanp):

Original Link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/41210330

hum dono anjaan the, ek doosre se bekhabar,

phir kaise achaanak kismat ne jod diya hamen iss kadar...

aapne-apne sapnon ke peeche bhaagte hue,

shaadi ke pavitra rishte se me jude...

zindagi chalti rahi, hum door-door rahe,

par kismat ke haathon hamesha majboor rahe...

jab ham mile toh kaisi thi woh kashish,

ek baar ki mulaaqaat bani baar-baar milne ki khwahish...

ek doosre se bhaagte rahe, par uss ehsaas se kaise bhaage?

jo hamaare dilon ko jodne lagi, uss dor se kaise bhaage...

jo pyaar panapne lagaa tha dil mein, uss pyaar se kaise bhaage,

jo kashish basi thi zehen me, uss ehsaas se kaise bhaage...

tumne muh mod liya, mera dil chalni kiya,

maaana koi wada kabhi hamne nahin kiya...

par woh ankahi baaten, woh mulaquaten,

kya woh kisi waade se kam thi??

maine apne dil se ladna chod diya,

maan liya ki dil tumhe de diya...

par kya tum bhi kabhi ye maan paaoge?

dil de chuke ho mujhe, kabhi yeh jaan paaoge?

jab socha ki alag ho gayen hain raaste...

toh kismat ne phir bana diya hamsafar...

jab socha ki shayad dil door ho paye tumse,

toh khuda ne tumhe mere paas bhej diya!

muh se chaahe kitna hi mana kar lo,

pehle apne jasbaat to kaboo me kar lo...

dekh sakti hun, pyaar hai tumhe bhi mujhse,

phir bhi kinara kar rahi hoon tumse...

chaaha ki door chali jaun tumse..

phir kyun nai dekh payi kisis ke saath tumhe?

kyun aaye tum mere peeche, kyun diya pyaar ka woh dard mujhe?

haan, aaj maan liya tumne mohabbat hai tumhe bhi,

dekhna hai kismat kahan le jaati hai ab hamen...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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The final one for Kashsish:

They say...Love Happens...But, these two never believed...

They were made for each other, but they never cared...

Till, Destiny decided to play its game...

Bringing them closer and they came...

they were married but had their own lives,

A couple for the world, but for each other no husband /wife...

Stayed at a distance, till their first date,

But, after that nothing could keep them separate...

those unplanned yet planed calls...

Those expectationless passionate moments...

Though they refused to believe, their hearts were already woven...

The restlessness at being away, the joy on being together...

The Kashish that they shared, was pure, blissful pleasure!!

She finally accepted, yeah she had fallen for her Sexy devil...

while he continued to deny making situation terrible...

denying their feelings, they again went away,

But when God has some plans, who can get their way...

Destiny brought them together again, and this time he couldn't deny...

The feelings that he experienced for her, with her time seemed to fly...

the way she laughed, the way she loved,

the way she cared, the time they shared...

Those sweet little gestures had him flattered,

the thought of her being away had him shattered...

It was finally a blast from the past,

that made him realize that she was his Last!

Finally he confessed, Yes he loved her...

And finally they lived happily ever after!!!!

Edited by princess163 - 13 years ago
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Those for Ehtesaab(muskanp):

Original Link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1666108/ehtesaab-ss-maaneet-thread-1?pn=71

main kaun hoon...

When i was born, I was a pretty kid,
Who am I now?
Was named Geet handa,
But, don't know who am I now!

A smart, educated, sharp girl earlier,
who am I now?
the physical beauty remains,
But, its hard to find myself now!

Was the apple of several eyes,
till you beacme that of mine.
I knew myself all fine,
till you came and smiled...

Never knew love will find me,
Tiill you came in my life.
Never cared about 'I' anymore,
when you beacme my life...

My parents, my life, all I fought,
when you claimed me as yours,
Didn't care about anything anymore,
As i lost myself in you!

never complained to you oh love,
When you had no time,
Always trusted you more than myself,
Always thought of you as mine!

When you cheated me I was lost,
But, still went on with time
coz without you I couldn't exist,
I was no longer mine..

Kept waiting for you each day,
As you still had no time,
while I wanted some reassurance,
But, it wasn't important in your life...

Today as you've broken me,
Stopped me within time,
your betrayal has shattered me,
but, your indifference hurts several times..

Your words still have the power to melt me,
and this worries me all the time.
No longer want to be Dev's Geet,
I want to find me, ITS TIME!

Original Link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/42961117

Give me your pain.

Give me your pain, I wanna see you happy;

Those wounds are deep but my love is deeper,

I will do whatever it takes to make you happier,

Yes, it hurts, but the pain is sweet if it makes you better!

You loved him with your heart and soul,

Yet its you who makes me whole.

Deeper and deeper into my being,

Its just you who can be seen'.

Your pain stabs me deep in the heart;

It kills me to see your eyes still hurt.

However hard I try and wish that the pain dies,

It breaks me to see that it just intensifies''

He broke your faith, broke you within'.

Yes, I am there, was there even then'

The tears that never made their way down your eyes,

They scare me co in them within you the pain still thrives!

Today when I saw him, my heart just faltered;

Yet maybe for him your love never altered!

I will go away, clear your name through lies,

If its him with him your happiness lies!

Give me your pain, I wanna see you happy,

To do the same, I will cross every boundary'

I will love you till the end of my life'..

Will do whatever it takes to eliminate your strife!

The last one for ehtesaab:

Har pal jab maine tumse maanga pyaar,

Mere dil ne maanga tumse ehtesaab;

lekin hamaara pyaar to pehle hi kahin kho chuka tha,

Mera dil tab bhi tunhaare liye ro raha tha!

Hamare pyaar bhare aashiyane ko tumne bikher diya,

saat janmon ke saath ko tumne chand palon me chodd diya,

hamari yaadon ko tumne kaale rang me rang diya,

Mere sheeshe jaise dil ko tumne choor choor kar diya!

Kya tumhe nahin yaad aaye woh lamhe?

Kya pal me bhool gaye pyaar ke woh nagme?

Kyun chod diya ye haath jo umr bhar ke liye thama tha?

Kyun tod diya woh bandhan jo vishwas se humne baandha tha?

Tumhe kho kar, maine khud ko khoya tha,

Tunhare liye har pal yeh dil mera roya tha...

Kahan kam pad gayi main, har ghadi khud se poochti thi,

Tumhare kiye gunaah ke liye har din nai sazaa paati thi!

Tumhi to mere apne the, kisis aur ko maine kahan jaana...

Jab se pyaar ko jaana, iss dil ne tumhe hi to pehchaana,

tumse bewafaai paakar dil baawanra hua ghoomta tha,

Kitna rokne par bhi yeh sirf tunhi ko dhoondhta tha!

Par aaj jab khud ko dekhti hoon,

Apne ko main khushnaseeb samajhti hoon;

Jo hota hai acche ke liye hota hai,

kahawat ko apni zindagi mein charitaarth paati hoon!

Jo tum na milte to pyaar ko naa pehchaanti,

Aur agar tunhe nahin khoti toh khud ko nahin pehchanti!

jo tum na aate, to dard ko na pehchanti,

Aur tum na jaate to dard ke rishte ko naa maanti!

jo tumko na jaanti toh pyaar ke ghaavon ko naa jhelti,

Jo tum ajnabee na ho jaate to pyaar ke malham ki hasi chehre par na khelti!

Har pal tumhare baad apne aap ko na dhoondha hai,

Is sangharsh me mee saath, mere pyar ne mijhe puja hai!

Jab kabhi dard ke samandar me khud ko doobta paaya hai,

Mere dard se pyaar karne waale ne mujhe paar pahunchaya hai!

Jab-jab apne aatm-sammaan ko chootta hua paaya hai,

Tab mere Maan ne aake mera maan bachaya hai,

Jab kabhi apne aap ko akela khada paaya hai,

Har baar uske pyaar bana mera saaya hai!

jab kabhi pyaar ka zikr bhi gar aata hai,

Sirf ek hi naam dil me, ek hi chehra aankhon me samaata hai;

Aaj poore dil se main yeh izhaar karti hoon,

Haan sirf aur sirf Maan se hi pyaar main karti hoon!

Edited by princess163 - 13 years ago
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Truly Magical( by muskanp) -My first and most prized ff😳

Love their magical love...

Loved the way it all began...

she barged into his car and his heart sank...

she smiled and chatted all the while,

while he just stared and accepted it was MAGICAL...

cupid struck him, it was love at first sight,

dreaming about her through the day, and thinking sleeplessly through the night!

fate had conspired to get them together,

getting her to the party which was in his honour!!!

bacchan she called him, never bothered to know the real name,

he helped her sneak out, fate and its game...

a dress change in the car, and a surprised maan,

forgetting his watch with her, while she ran on...

the alarm at 5:30, and the first call,

loads of teasing, chatting...sighhh...the endless call!!!

talking at 5:30...talking through his exercise...sleeping, only to be woken up by his call...

going to college still on call...sitting through lectures/meetings and still on call

calls became a habit, the person an obssession...

in due course of time, love blossomed...

the karva chauth on the very 2nd meeting...

the beautiful night and the ring...

the coffee meets at taj, the golf sessions on the grass...

the roothna, the manaana...

going to mumbai making him her deewaana!!

the sports meet...Geet Impressed by MSK...

but,still maintaining her loyalty to her bachhan, the real MSK!!

the petty fight turning serious...

Maan leaving for camping very furious!!

her following him, lying to her parents...

and getting stuck in the jungle after fighting with the terrorists!!!

the sensous and akward moments and the gunshot,

Finding out finally that he is a BIGSHOT!!!

The unlimited support for the army interview...

the painful tiff n going out of each other's view!!!

the pain of seperation, n the joy of union...

all coz geet's dream was abandoned...

it was the love that mattered,it was the love that she cared for...

it was just his company, that she craved for!

The sudden wedding, the love behind rushing...

the non-acceptance...the fake denial...

the sweet and subconcious acceptance making his heart swell!!!

the big surprise...the great birthday,

the day and venice and geet getting tipsy...

the fight some time later...ahhh...the painful period...

don't even want to think about it as my heart just shattered!!

The closeness, the control...

the gestures...loved them all!

Coming back to india...the pain of being away,

the sleepless nights, the lonely days...!!!

The trip to London...the misunderstandings...

Geet understanding it all,

her love was unconditional!!!

the misunderstanding, which made them one

life becoming a blissful one...

the problems again...the hurtful words...

The realisation...but far she was...

SEVEN YEARS OF PAIN...SEVEN YEARS OF SEPERATION...

SEVEN YEARS OF HOPE...SEVEN YEARS OF LONGING...

SEVEN YEARS OF REGRET...SEVEN YEARS OF LOVE...

SEVEN YEARS OF HURT...SEVEN YEARS OF HARDENING...

SEVEN YEARS OF WAITING...SEVEN YEARS OF FAITH...

SEVEN YEARS OF LOVE...SEVEN YEARS OF JR. MK...

meeting after seven years, with pain in eyes...

seven years of hope...seven years of lies...

a wish to apologise...

a wish to be loved, to be safe in his eyes...

misunderstanding...love for mk...

love in her heart...geet becoming gk...

MONTHS OF LOVING THIS JOURNEY...

PAIN TO SEE THEM AWAY...

WAITING FOR MSK AND GK TO BECOME MAANEET...

THIS IS WHAT WE ALL PRAY!!!

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1633809/truly-magical-maaneet-ff-thread-16?pn=72

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/41126612

Remorse...that is what is killikg him now...

how much she loves him and how...

she hurt her, she waited for him...

he made her suffer, she cared for him...

she wound her by his words, shestill protected him...

He was so full of himself, she was living only for him...

He was in pain FOR HIMSELF, she was dying every moment--JUST FOR HIM...

even when she comes back, does he deserve her?

can the pain of all those years really be blurred?

Can the damage done, ever be repaired?

Can the stabbed heart, ever be revived?

can he ever love her as she loved him?

Love can't be measured, neither can pain...

Can she be saved from drowning in her endless pain,

even as she makes him drown in the bottonless ea of her love...

Oh God! he wants to die, but can't even say he deserves to die...

His life is no longer his...it only belongs to Geet and their princess!!!

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/41219369

It kills me to see you this way,

Where are those old days???

where there way joy and festivity around,

No place for cries or any such sound...

all i knew was your sweet voice,...the musical laughter...

All around happiness and love after...

But, today as i stand here asking where...

its my guilt which gives me the answer...

Its burnt in the fire of my anger...

Drowned in the pain i made you suffer...

Oh dear God,with all my heart and soul I pray...

Burn me to death but take her pain away...

This is not what she had wishes for...

All the happiness is what she is made for...

Give me pain, burn me in hell...

All I ask is make her well!!!

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/41542137

I am left wondering,
is our relatnshp just a dream in making?
Sometimes sweet, sometimes salty...
Makes me think,who is faulty?
Is it me..is it him...
Is it time or situation?
There is a limit to bear...
But,crossing limits is a norm here...
Is it something that i said?
Or smthng that i did?
But,then i realise its all pointless!!
Pointless to think...pointless to wonder,
pointless to care...ptless to surrender...
Coz relatnshps dnt run on a single wheel,
they require two people's zeal!
I try to reasn with myself,nt to thnk,
bt the resolve fades away in a blink.,...
So,all i cn do is wait...
Wait till my life changes state!

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/41676983

Come,Fetch me- Take me Home...

I've been waiting n craving for u since long...
Come fetch me take me home!
The distance is turning me to stone,
come fetch me take me home...

The words that u spoke today,have scarred me deep within...
Never ever did i doubt your love,but your faith went thin.
My heart is still sobbing...trying to take in the pain,
but i am still helpless,for it only takes your name...

Like sand on the shore i am bobbling...
Worrying for u n u alone..
Its been long i have been craving,
come fetch me take me home...

Yes,i feel clueless...betrayed by your feelings,
my mind screams PUNISHMENT!!
But,this heart-you have made it YOUR OWN...
however hard i may try,its you,just you want...
Its been long i've been hurting..come fetch me take me home.

The princess i bore for you,how could u doubt her not being your own?
My body,my soul,my whole being, long back you made it your own!

The pain you have caused is excrutiating...
Yet you being away is worse!
But,i HAD to go far today,
my tears n sobs i had to purse...

Have not known what love is,nor want anyone to define,
all i have know is you and that YOU ARE MINE!
Maan...maan...my heart bleeds,
our princess wants to go home,
ITS REALLY REALLY HURTING,look in your heart n you'll find me home!

7years i waited,yet i know it now for sure...
You will find me sooner,YOU WILL FETCH ME SOON!
But..this distance is still cursing,
please come my love come soon!
Before this heart goes bursting,
COME FETCH ME,LETS GO HOME!

TIME TO GET THE QUEEN HOME!

Before those words left me,i knew you would be hurt...
Yet i knew it was time...time for me to blurt...
I knew it would be pahnful,no doubt that it was...
But when i saw your eyes full of pain,it just ripped me apart!

The love in your eyes was screaming...
I wanted to shout in pain,
yet all i could do was to hold you close,
cudn't let you go away again!

Each day away from you was torture,
Hell would be sweeter for sure,
yet it was all my own fault...
How could i go that far!

The 7 years were my punishment,
my personal hell away from you...
Yet today the pain i saw you in,
just sliced my heart into two!

You wanted me to fetch u,u have asked for the same now!
But,i am scared,scared of losing u now!
The pain it will cause me is nothing...i deserve more than that...
But what makes me restless is the pain it will cause u n how!

Yet,there is no time to cry...
No time to scream...
No time to repent anything,
nor anytime to dream!

I will come n fetch you,i will bring u home...
You will be MY QUEEN,ON MY HEART'S THRONE!
My princess will get her father,she will be back home,
won't let you go any farther,VERY SOON THAT HOUSE WILL BECOME HOME!

Edited by princess163 - 13 years ago
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Part 178: https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1660403&PID=41816746&#41816746

OUR happy memories and dreams for the future''

The day I met you, I felt alive,
There was just happiness in my life.
You filled my life with colours plenty,
Being with you made me fell happy.

Your smile was infectious, it was beautiful,
My life was perfect, it was joyful'.
Your innocence, your care, made my heart beat,
With you around I felt complete'..

The day began with your voice,
It ended a similar way'
You are a drug to me'
How could I stay away??

I know I have a terrible temper'
But, you always managed to have your way.
Hours of restlessness, a day full of anger,
A moment with you washed it all away!

Never ever your trust wavered,
But, your possessiveness could get anyone slaughtered!
Sherni for the world, a delicate princess within..
The depth of your love, could make oceans seem grim'..

Maan Singh khurana was bachhan for you,
You loved your bachhan, never put any questions too'
Impressed by MSK, but still loyal your Bachhan'
Each moment you made me fall for you all over again!!!

These memories are my life,
Won't think of the pain'
The past tense I have used,
Will make it present again!!

You know I love you, as you do to me'
The love that we share can never lose its sheen..
That Bachhan was your slave, MSK is a biggder one..
With my cute, innocent sherni I want my life to be fun!!!

I say MY LIFE'coz I want you happy'
MY LIFE is yours'so I will make you happy!!!

Part 179: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1669274/truly-magical-maaneet-thread-22?pn=6

Main mehfooz hoon''.

Oh my beloved, don't cry'.
I am right there by your side'..

On that road where we first met,
When I shocked you and just barged in..
When I requested you to help me,
You'll find me there in that lane'.

In that party where I saw you next,
Took you as Bachhan and cursed you well.
Still you gladly helped me out'
In that Care, you'll find me there'.

The watch the bound us together'.
The 5.30am calls that became a pleasure,
The sleeping-waking-talking-waking sessions'
In those calls you'll find me there'.

In the golf club where I created a mess,
Shouted at the receptionist and the rest!
Where I appeased your anger for the first time'
My feel on that grass will still be sublime'.

The coffee DATES at the Taj,
And me with my awesome shake!
The proximity there that we shared,
In that coffee lounge I will always be there'..

The London home that we shared,
Oh those days were so blessed!
Though the love was always there,
But, as a family we begun to care'..
The cosy moments, the love, the care'.
The several meals that we shared'
The beautiful moments spent there'.
The intense moments that make me shy,
There a part of me will always lie'.

In your room, yes right there'
Where all our inhibitions were no longer there'
Where we became one, one soul, a pair'
Yes, my heart still lies there'..

The office about which I least cared,
Several times I barged in there'
That place has seen our anger, love and despair,
My soul breathed its last there'

Don't go looking for me in the Church,
Nor in that room my heart will lurch'
Don't look for me in my temporary shelters,
Coz you will never find GEET there'.

You Geet was always there with you,
When I went away, it stayed for you'
What went ahead was just a dead body..
A soul less, lifeless, painful body!

The only thing that kept it going,
Was the part of you that it was carrying'..
When your angel brought it under her care,
The mother came alive, but Geet was still not there'..

Oh my beloved, don't you still realize?
Its in your heart that I reside!
Instead of being clueless, trying to decide'.
Just close your eyes and I will be by your side.
Just ask your heart, be sincere'
It will answer I will be where'..

Part 182: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/42064245

When I found me''..

You are me and I am you,
Yes, this is the truth, known to you'.
So, when I finally found you,
I knew I found me'.

Seven years, you lived in hell,
These two months have shown me.
When I should have kept you in my shell,
What you faced has blown me''

I knew you faced a lot,
The first time I saw you.
The forlorn face, the pain in the heart,
Your eyes let me through you!

Yet when I went to the church,
My heart wanted to burst,
I now know your longing,
But, I left you hanging'

You kept your faith in me,
Each day you waited for me..
But I couldn't find you,
The king wasn't thorough enough, its true'

The training academy screamed,
I had killed you within,
While giving me all your happiness,
You couldn't help but associate me with pain'.

Where else I went,
My heart only got dents'
Yes, you were the best,
But, your heart never gor rest!!

Hearing your praise I glide,
My heart swells with pride..
But, knowing your pain I feel hollow,
All that happiness feels shallow!!

Today when I reached you,
Didn't have it in me to call out to you,
But you know me inside out..
Feeling my presence, beyond doubt!

I wanted to cry in apology,
But like always you didn't let me'
Bestowing me with another happy news,
Yes, today, IN YOU I FOUND ME''''..

Last part...waiting for it...:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1682781/truly-magical-maaneet-ff-last-pt-pg111-11june

How i wish i could say i am NOT waiting...

how I wish i could stop myself from anticipating...

Since, its the final one, i don't want to wait...

Since its the last time, i want it late...

though i know, forever i can't procrastinate!

Yet, how i wish, forever, for in this journey i could participate...

yes, you knew and said i would cry!

I am trying hard for the tears to Not come by...

The heart is filled with a sense of loss!

yet, tears would mean a loss!

This journey has given me a lot in life...

A membership at IF, and friends for life...

i have smiled, i have cried, with your Maaneet,

So, as they reach their destination, the dam tears can't breach!

The journey was heavenly, it only deserves applause..

So, i will try to mask this sense of loss!

I will see the end with a smile,

this story will always help me when i walk that extra mile!

And the final goodbye:

The journey began with a hard and stern businessman,

who had forgotten how to smile;

and with a lively, sweet and cute college girl,

Who was by no means docile...

The mask of ruthlessness had cracked,

In just the first meeting the angel had sneaked!

those light coloured eyes made him drown,

While she was busy in admiring the guy with a frown!

Fascinated she was, bowled over he was;

sfter they met, life didn't pause...

Meetings continued, yet she didn't know his name,

Coz she was genuine,unaffected by his fame!

Her naive nature, her innocence floored him;

His care for her and dominace blowed her!

they moved together in the different shades of life,

together they experienced their changing feelings that grew ripe!

He was crazy, yet his ego stopped held him back,

She was obsessed, nothing could stop her!

their days were spent on phone together,

till they met in flesh and person...

together they enjoyed the moods of weather,

With each passing moment the relation grew deeper!

They didn't realise when their lives got entangled,

a day away from the other none could handle!

Still not accepting in words what they felt,

Yet for the other willing to be killed!

Breathing, eating all were secondary!

Even a li'l distance left them in a quandry!

for him it was her all along,

Yet her love took a different form;

Never used the four letter word,

yet to be with him, left her dream in lurch!

Away from all, a world they made,

The six months together had ever shade...

they truly, deeply understood each other;

the depth of their love got even clearer!

different moods an situations they sailed through;

Closer and closer with time they grew!

Faith was something they never had to strive for,

each trusted the other more than their life...

No misunderstandings, no ghosts from the past;

No tensions, no worries could do them apart!

yet a few hurtful words did the impossible,

They broke the pair that was so impeccable!

through the distances the love still thrived,

Waiting for each other apart they survived!

the bodies were apart, but the souls were together;

Years did pass, the longing ony grew stronger!

Yet when it came to the other's life,

Both of them were ready to part with their own life!

Though a barrier of assumptions existed,

The love they had could never be doubted!

separated by lack of words, they had a new bond,

To their little princess they both held on!

after th painful separation, when the truth arrived,

Brought relief to him, but it couldn't thrive!

For the first time, he failed to trust her...

their love he lost fait in, he felt disgusted,

as he burnt in the flames of remorse,

The distances in their closeness made her worse!

When the truth was revealed, she was shattered;

shocked to know that the trust had been battered!

As she told him to fetch her to himself,

During that search, her pain he felt!

Places after places as he swept,

In a sea of guilt, every time he dwelt!

Yet finally when the souls came alive,

In the love of his life he merrily dived...

Her happiness was his only aim,

in comparison to her, everything was tame...

Every dream that she ever had, he woved to fulfill,

A full time husband, a father so thrilled!

A wedding ceremony straight out from her dreams,

in happiness, in pleasure she wanted to scream!

all the pain is now finally over, only happy clouds will now ever hover!

in the rains of their love, both are now drenched;

Together with them, their princesses are now entrenched!

The blue baby is now on its way,

With all those who matter, in Happiness they sway!

As this journey comes to a close,

we all are overwhelmed by love's hearty dose!

The journey has been TRULY MAGICAL so far...

this is not the end a new beginning is on the cards!

a fairytale of the prince and the princess...

Is coming to close as they live HAPPILY EVER AFTER!

My most prized ff has come to an end today!

yet calling it the end is not what i would like to say...

Yes, the journey for us now seems over,

yet for the two love-bound travellers, its just not over!

their destination is one, and they have each other,

so, they need none of us as they go on together

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Posted: 13 years ago
#6

This one is for Reya's SS Blind Love, another brilliant story from her kitty!


I am a simple girl,
little joys make me twirl,
Yet the world i cannot see,
and hence, I had believed it was meant to be!
i was meant to be alone...meant to not find love,
meant to be bro' s li'l sister always,
meant to just dream, not to see them fulfilled!
Yet, you came and all changed,
you came and love came
You came and i was complete;
You came and my dreams were sweet!
I am happy, i am escatic;
Your love, and care seems majestic!
i am still my bro's li'l sis, i am still pari's best friend,
Yet, more than anything,I am Maan ki Geet now!
i am your Mishti now!
i am future Mrs. Maan now!
I am daadima's daughter now!
I am all yours now!
A million dreams adorn my thoughts,
A life so beautiful beckons me now!
With you by my side, there is nothing I need,
Without you now, this heart bleeds!
i don't need eyes to admire your love,
i am in love with our BLIND LOVE!



Original Link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1643568/m-g-ss-blind-love-last-ch-pg-69-july-12
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Posted: 13 years ago
#7
brilliant ... u r really very talented ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#8

...😛..😛...
4 pm me dear...😃..
i dear..ur updates...
really dear..
just ..😛😃
4 ur
dear...👏👏..
tons of 4 u dear...😳
once again dear..😃
lov,❤️
Tama
P.S.: plz donn't copy paste my comments...i only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but donn't coppied it whole as my post...😡
P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...😲😕
Note:
guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18..increased 30 now...😕
i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...
but i updated 4 whom woh waited...i knoe just few..but i updated for them surely...but that surely ime said..that me really hurt abut u guys...😭me uncontorled sob.sob..😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
#9
Brilliant work Swati
I love all your poems
They are very very beautiful.
Its good that you have all of them in one place.
How about adding your wish list too.
its very sweet.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#10
CONGRATS on opening a thread for ur lovely poems...🥳

all ur poems r indeed precious gems...

love each one...

hoping to read more of ur work...

thnx for PM...

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